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New Fic: Me and Emily

Postby cantbefredless » Tue Mar 28, 2006 10:14 pm

Again with naming a story after a song, but that’s what makes me write. So yeah sorry.

Title: Me and Emily.

Author: Stef..Alter ego is cantbefredless

Disclaimer: I own none of these characters. Joss Whedon owns them all.

Summary: Willow has a 4-year-old named Emily. Now running with her daughter, trying to escape away from her abuse husband, Riley Finn (I am sorry, read note2 to know why). While hiding willow gets help from a complete stranger who might become something more.

Feedback: Sure people always like feedback.

E-mail: Cantbefredless@yahoo.com

Spoilers: This is a complete AU no hell mouth vampires ect.

Distribution: Sure just don’t steal it and say your wrote it.

Rating: I’m going to go with R and Nc-17 (due to Abuse, Violence, Bad words, and sex which will be later).

Pairing: W/T later on.

Author's Note: If you seen the movie “Enough” with Jennifer Lopez and heard the song “Me and Emily” by Rachel Proctor then you have a good ideal of the story. There will be angst. Thoughts are in < >

Note2: I’m Sorry for any Riley fans, I liked Riley before he went out with Buffy. I didn’t plan putting Riley in this story but he has a cop like figure and when I watch “out of my mind” Riley seems kind of a abuse type. But sorry again for Riley Fans.
P.S. in the part where Emily says something to her dad it was taking from the song “I love you this much” by Jimmy Wayne.
*~*~*~*~*

Getting up out of bed, tying not to disturb her husband, willow walked into the bathroom. Once in the bathroom willow took a water bottle, she hide behind the toilet earlier that night, taking the lid off and lifting the lid of toilet, willow laid the bottle on under the seat and closed the lid. The bottle made the prefect noise to make her husband think she was using the bathroom. Walking toward the front door trying to be as quite as she possible can be. She knew her four-year-old daughter Emily was spending night at a friends house so thought her husband but the truth was Emily was at faith’s house. Looking out the window, she saw Faith truck parked across the street. Turning on the porch light to let faith know she was coming. Putting her hand on the door knob she felt someone grabbed her should painfully.

“Where do you think your going?” Riley asked but before willow could answer he threw her against the wall as hard as he could.

*~*~*~*~*~*
Meanwhile inside Faith’s truck, two figures sat watching the house.

“Come on where are you Wil’” a brown-haired woman whispered.

“Is mommy ok faithy?” A Little red hair girl asked in a sleepy voice.

Looking down at the little girl who was snuggled against faith side. “Yeah your mom is fun just a running a little late that’s all Emily”

Right then the porch light came on. Lifting Emily up so she can see out the window.

“Look she should be walking out that door any minute now, so nothing to worry about” Faith sad with a weak smile, But Faith was scared she would never admit it but she was. She remember all those times when Willow would be in so much pain to even hug her daughter and yet willow was so scared to leave him for he might do something to Emily if he ever found out. It wasn’t in till a couple of days ago when faith finally convinced willow to leave with Emily, So they made a plan for willow to leave but to where they had no clue. Just leaving was the best thing to do first.

After a couple of minutes passed Faith new, something was wrong.

“Hey kiddo I’m going to go and get your mom just stay right here and ill be back ok?” Getting out of the vehicle Faith took off across the street as fast as she could. Barging in the house Faith fell over something big. Looking at what she fell over, her heart dropped. Getting up on her knees Faith Moved over to Willow who wasn’t moving at all accept her chest barely rising and falling. < ok good she is still breathing, Now where is that asshole > Getting up, Faith walked carefully toward the living room. Once in the living room Faith felt someone hit her on the back of the shoulder sending her landing on the coffee table in the middle of the room.

“Oh nice for you to join us, now get the FUCK OUT” Riley yelling the last part.

Getting back on her feet faith turned toward Riley and kicked him straight in the gut sending him into the wall.

“How about I beat the shit out of you for a while instead.” Faith replied.

Getting back on his feet will lunged at faith, but faith moved out of the way sending him over the coffee table.

Unknown to the two fighting Emily was laying next willow. Gently stroking her moms face. “Mommy wake up” Emily cried.

Ripping the blood from his lip, Riley look over at Willow and Emily then back at Faith. “You know what, you can have those whores but if I see any of you again I will kill you!” His voice sending chills down faiths back. Never loosing eye contact with Riley, Faith walked over to willow side.

“Emily I thought I told you to stay in the truck? Faith said while gently picking up willow. “Come on lets go” Faith said to Emily who only just stood their staring at her father. “Emily come on” Faith said firmly. Instead Emily took a couple steps toward her father.

Looking down at his daughter. “What do you want” Riley said in a cold dark voice.


All she did was stretched her arms out as far as they could go, Whispering “Daddy, I want you to know I love you this much and I’m waiting on you to make up your mind, do you love me to? However long it takes. I’m never giving up, No matter what I love you this much” With tears in her eyes, she watches her father walk away as if he didn’t even know her. Walking toward faith, they both made their way to the truck.

Once everybody was in the truck safely, Emily asked, “Mommy is going to be alright faith?”

“Yeah she is going to be fine once we get out of this town” Faith said driving away. Gently Emily moved closer to faith and laid her head on faith side.

“Where are we going faithy” Emily spoke softly.

“To a friends of mine, she will take care of both of you”

“What about you, cant she take care of you too”

Smiling at Emily’s concerned for her, She looked down at the little girl and only smiled.

A few minutes later Emily was sound asleep against faith, Turning on to the freeway faith looked at the clock on the dashboard blinking. 1:27am < Damn b is going to be hating me for weeks > Faith thought, but with the smile on her faith.

*~*~*~*~*~*

TBC...
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Re: New Fic: Me and Emily

Postby Guppy » Tue Mar 28, 2006 10:58 pm

Interesting beginning. I like Faith already. And how cute is Emily?
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Re: New Fic: Me and Emily

Postby Aine » Wed Mar 29, 2006 7:42 am

hey, i really love the premise to your fic. But might i suggest getting a beta? the plot and story line are amazing, but some of the grammatical errors and spellings are kind of distracting. I really like how you take an idea of a song then turn it into a story, not just a song fic. great start.

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Re: New Fic: Me and Emily

Postby Willowlover » Wed Mar 29, 2006 8:09 am

It's a good start. I think you have started a very promissing story. I have to admit though that because of the basic setting (Enough) I was kinda worried it wouldn't be very good. Judging by what ive read so far and by the last story of yours I read I think it will be a very good story. :-D
I can't wait to read some more of this story.
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Re: New Fic: Me and Emily

Postby Emms » Wed Mar 29, 2006 8:40 am

Good start. I have to admit, like Willowlover, I too went into reading this with the thought that this story wasn't going to be very....strong. (for lack of a better word) because stories can be good or great even and still not be very strong.

There were two things I liked about your story before even reading it.

I liked that Willow has a kid (because I think there are not enough such stories out there...and I enjoy reading them. )

And I liked the idea that there will be a lot of angst. Fics are always more interesting to me when I can discover another's take on common situations found in our world. ie: how Willow would handle an abusive situation if she had a child to care for.

Now...that being said...there were a couple things that I didn't find so appealing, once having read.

I'm not sure that I like Riley in the part of Willow's husband. There's this ick-factor that just seems like it's going to be hard to get around. Almost like in those fics where people are paired up crazily...like Buffy and ....Giles together ? *shudders*

And I don't know if I'm going to be too fond of Faith (I don't know why).

Now, having said all that, I think you've got a solid foundation for the makings of a great story. And I will definitely be following this. I really can't wait for the inclusion of Tara. :)

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Re: New Fic: Me and Emily

Postby Willowtree252 » Wed Mar 29, 2006 8:59 am

:pinky yes I like the start to this already life is hard and there are woman in bad marriages but thay should have better . cant wait for more
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Re: New Fic: Me and Emily

Postby AlysonGoddess » Sun Apr 02, 2006 12:46 am

ooo new fic! like it! reminds me of the movie enough with jennifer lopez thats a great movie! but this fic seems to be going well keep it up! update soon please!
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Re: New Fic: Me and Emily

Postby tarebear » Sun Apr 02, 2006 9:56 am

hey stef...

i'm not a big riley fan myself, so need to worry there. i'm glad willow had somebody like faith to help her out of this very bad situation. now who could this friend be that faith is talking about that will help them? perchance a girl named tara? ;-)

anyways, emily is so cute with her big heart... she still loves her father in spite of how he's been treating them and being concerned about faithy too. too cute!

like ms emms, can't wait for the introduction of tara... this is a really promising start though... more soon please.
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