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Careless

Postby Irishlassie101 » Thu Mar 09, 2006 3:36 am

Careless

Title – Careless
Author name – Irishlassie101
Email Address – irishlassie101@hotmail.com
Rating – PG 13 at the beginning, and then, who knows ???
Disclaimer – The established BTVS characters belong to Joss Whedon (may his soul never find peace !). All others are mine.
Summary – Some things are as they always were, but some things turn out pretty different…sounds stupid I know, but more information would spoil the plot…….

Note – I´m posting this without a Beta, because RL has deprived me of some wonderful kittens who were willing to put up with my crazy ideas.
So please don´t be offended by the mistakes I make, I´ll try to keep them to a minimum, and if you feel the urge to kick my rear-end please be gentle !!!!!!
Feedback – PLEASE !!!!!!
Note – Italics represent a character’s thoughts.


Careless – Chapter 1

“Breathe Willow, breathe” was the only thing the redhead was able to say for the past half an hour, and the colour of her face was pale even for her standards.
Why are you so nervous, why…why….
Everything was organized, she had personally supervised every little task, had double-checked every order, every delivery, she had left no space for even the tiniest little mistake.

And everything went perfectly.
The church was full of people, families and friends had gathered for this special occasion, had come together to witness the handfasting of two people who had known each other for a good while and had fallen in love. Two people who had decided that they wanted to share happiness and sorrow for the rest of their lives.

Willow Rosenberg was happy and thankful, two of her best friends were now the happiest people on earth, but deep inside her brain there was a tiny little voice, that grew louder and louder.

She watched the bride, Tara Maclay, the most beautiful girl she ever met, walk down the aisle with her newly wed wife, Buffy Summers, her best friend since…forever… and yet, the voice inside her head kept saying: ”This is wrong, this is not the way it was meant to be !”
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Re: Careless

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Thu Mar 09, 2006 6:07 am

Owwww....I've read a few "Tarffy" fics here and there but this one is painful already. Very effectively done :applause .
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Re: Careless

Postby darkwillow6 » Thu Mar 09, 2006 6:07 am

OMG! I really like where you're going with this. Buffy marrying Tara?! :lol That's just too funny. WIllow has to do something to stop this wedding. Great job. Please continue.

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Re: Careless

Postby Sandman78 » Thu Mar 09, 2006 2:09 pm

Very interesting start to what seems like an extremely interesting storyline here.
I hope to read more soon. :flirt
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Re: Careless

Postby AlysonGoddess » Thu Mar 09, 2006 2:17 pm

haha yes a new twist i have to say that i have never read a buffy/tara fic before but this sounds like its gunna be good with lots of angsty plz? hehe plz update soon!
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Re: Careless

Postby Irishlassie101 » Tue Mar 14, 2006 9:48 am

Hello there,

thanks for dropping by, I hope you liked what you read !!!! :clap :clap

To all of you who left feedback:

Thank you very much, I really appreciate your effort.
I promise I´ll get back to you all in detail, but I´m a little stressed right now....

Thanks again

Aishling



Careless – Chapter 2

Flashback

“…and so…well…she asked me if I would marry her…!”
“Oh my God…that is wonderful” Willow shouted and pulled Tara into a crushing hug, “that is so wonderful, I am so happy for you…my bestest friend is going to marry my best friend, I can´t believe it…”
“I can´t believe it either” Tara said after she got her breath back and hid her face behind her long hair, “I mean…Buffy…gorgeous wonderful Buffy Summers asked me to marry her, me…”
“The most gorgeous wonderful amazing Tara Maclay” Willow finished the sentence and her voice let no room for arguments, “don´t start that crap again Tara…”
“…but..”
“No but, I´ll smack your butt if you don´t stop instantly, I mean look at you, how on earth can you NOT believe that you are gorgeous ?”
“…but…”
“Ouch !” Tara yelled as Willow hit her right across her back side, “Ouch, that hurt !”
“Serves you right, I warned you and you ignored me !” Willow answered smirking, “and thank you for the opportunity…”
“What opportunity ?”
“To smack you butt !”
“Pervert !”
“You liked it !”
“No way !”
“Did !”
“Did not !”
“I´ll tell Buffy you liked it and then she can…” Willow´s eyes suddenly went wide, “On the other hand, I´ll better not tell the Slayer that I just smacked her wife across the butt...nope…better not…better not !”
“Yes” Tara replied with her trademark lopsided grin, “better not tell the Slayer, she might be a little jealous, and…better not tell her.”

After talking Tara into letting her organize the wedding and the party, Willow left Revello Drive feeling very happy for the two women.
My Tara is going to marry…
My Tara…

“My Tara ?” Willow spoke out loud, “my Tara ? No…not my Tara, not Willow´s Tara, it´s Buffy´s Tara, yes Buffy´s Tara…Buffy and Tara !”
Buffy and Tara…Buffy and Tara…Buffy and Tara…
Willow and Tara…Willow and Tara…Willow and Tara…

All the way home, and all night long, one thought echoed through her mind, one thought she could not get rid of, not even with all her determination…Willow and Tara…and it sounded so right, so perfect…but it felt so horrible, it felt like betrayal, but its sounded so right, so perfect.

End Flashback

…but it sounds so right, so perfect…
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Re: Careless

Postby Hers Always » Tue Mar 14, 2006 11:02 am

i am really anxious to see how you are going to take this. cuz wow. marriage. really great so far.
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Re: Careless

Postby cantbefredless » Tue Mar 14, 2006 3:01 pm

buffy and tara oh my.. you got my hook now.. i have to say this will be very Interesting. now i will dance :dance
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Re: Careless

Postby AlysonGoddess » Tue Mar 14, 2006 7:18 pm

dang this is gunna be hard for willow i wonder how shes gunna manage to get tara .. cant wait for an update but ill be patient i promise..
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