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Smash Hit

Postby amberfan87 » Wed Nov 24, 2004 4:45 pm

AUTHOR: not me...but someone i knew for a couple of months and just wanted to post this here. it's good though.

DISCLAIMER: I own neither Willow and Tara and Buffy and whoever.

RATING: G for now.. We'll see if I want to finish what she started... unless she gets mad why i posted this.

SPOILERS: I dont know. NOne. Just read on.

SUMMARY: willow's a tennis player. i dont know where to put Tara yet. just got to read

FEEDBACK: i guess so..please do. so i can decide to finish this or not. ill ask her permission though...who are you her?

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SUNNYDALE TIMES

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The Boracay Open was a smash with Willow 'Red'

Rosenberg defeating Buffy Summers, winning the women's

singles championship. Winning the title on friday with

a 6-2, 6-7, 6-1 victory.



The glamorous players shown their feat with a sizzling

performance. Although they are great rivals on court, those two are good friends. They met at Cornell

Valley Tennis Camp five years ago, and they'd been friends ever since.



Willow in her trademark Nike black outfit of hot pants

and sleeveless top scampered tirelessly around the

court with her red hair damp with sweat, so red it

gorgeously framed her stvlish face. She marshalled the

net with poise and confidence.





Buffy in her tailored Addidas white outfit complete

with a rope of blonde pony-tail at the back of her

white sun-visor.



Willow hits the ball with accurate angles that pushes

the ball to the edges of the court, Buffy is on hot

pursuit towards each shot. The shots were so precise

you would've thought that Willow calculated her swings

for results like those.



Although Buffy is reknowned for her unbelievably fast

serve, Willow was ready and she gave her best

receives.



Scrutinized by a sea of lenses, the high-profile

players looked to be heading for an astounding rally.



But in the second set, Buffy Summers hit back. With

Willow keen to get off court in the 30 degrees-plus

heat, she seemed to feel the pressure and began to

rush and make errors.



Buffy hit a series of astute lobs and the 13th seeds

levelled the match on a tiebreak.



Red dropped her serve in the opening game of the

decider but the she stole back the break taking

Buffy's serve.



Willow held for 2-1 with her dominant at the net and,

despite buffy's attempts to settle the next game, the

teenager appeared to let the occasion get to her as

she dropped serve.



Willow saved a break point on her serve with an

athletic smash and the eighth seeds moved 4-1 ahead.



Buffy was broken again and Willow, given the chance to

serve out for victory, made no mistake.



The crowd roared their praise for Willow. Included are

her Family and Friends. Speaking of friends, Super

model Lisa Hermosa is there to support her bestfriend,

Willow. Gorgeous as ever although blushing pink after

being under the sun for the entire 3 hour match.



It has been the content of thousands of tabloids that

these two hotties have had the hots for each other and

are under mutual understanding. A lot have been pleased

and a lot also have been dismayed. No matter what, these

two are gorgeous and people love them for whoever they.

( So sod off assholes)



The ceremony of receiving the trophies was an amazing

show of sportsmanship between the players. Although

Willow is painfully shy in accepting awards and making

Speeches, she surprised the crowd of saying s0 much.

For short, she babbled on…



"I'd like to thank my family for the support and my

bestfriend Lisa for coming here and endure the

scorching heat ahehe , she's been great," Willow said

as she accepted the trophy.



Accepting a trophy also, Buffy said "I want to

congratulate my good friend...hope to play a game with

you again. Red that was THE game. whew" .



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feedback please??:geek :pray :pray :pray

Edited by: amberfan87 at: 11/24/04 3:51 pm
amberfan87
 


Re: Smash Hit

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Wed Nov 24, 2004 5:54 pm

:bounce :bounce

LES!!! "waves at you" :bigwave

dudes you have a fic! And Willow playing tennis! :drool

I like this, great start and you should definatly write more!

:pride

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

Spikeizmine87
 


Thanks

Postby amberfan87 » Wed Nov 24, 2004 6:14 pm

hey rose! hehehe... :kiss hehehe...thanks for the fast fb.. hehe.. i was actually trying to empty my folders in the pc when i came across this sports article joan(red jassy) sent me around 6 months ago. it was supposed to be a collaboration. didnt happen though. busy and stuff. anyway, i just posted it coz i thought it was good. i hope she doesnt get mad. anyway, i ackknowledge her. ill try asking her if its ok i finish what she started okemz? thanks again...

mwah...

-les

amberfan87
 


hmmmm....

Postby Red Jassy » Wed Nov 24, 2004 10:32 pm

hi les.



no, im not mad. why would i be? anyway, im just not sure if what i wrote is good.. so i wasn't really planning on posting. I also had the original article in my harddisk.. just didn't have the courage to post it.. co'z im not sure can finish it. you know.. work and stuff.. i hope you'll have fun continuing our idea.. have fun les.. hmmm.. tara.. she can be the sexy trainor of willow or a new rival in the tennis world.. kinda like charapova..new, beautiful and skilled.. make some conflict. tara going to be the new darling player.. :grin

ok.. thats only ideas.. have fun.



-joan redJaSsY




Don't you understand? That everything I do, I do for you? Anything that might be special in me...is you.

---GREAT EXPECTATIONS
all for you...

Red Jassy
 


joan

Postby amberfan87 » Fri Nov 26, 2004 7:14 am

hey. thanks. i never thought ud reply. ok. ill try finishing it for you. really miss you po. so much po. wala na po me kinukulet every morning. but its cool. whatever u want. anyway, i have something in mind bout tara....

amberfan87
 


Re: Smash Hit

Postby aussiegurl89 » Fri Nov 26, 2004 8:07 am

Hey Leslie,



hehehe here is your promised feedback!

it's a cool fic...please continue



-Sarah





Edited by: aussiegurl89 at: 11/26/04 7:11 am
aussiegurl89
 


Re: Chapter 1

Postby amberfan87 » Fri Nov 26, 2004 8:45 am

AUTHOR: me...and donna. shes a friend. and i hope joan would help me with this... a help from you would surely make this story sweeter.your ideas are gorgeous.... :bow :bow :bow

DISCLAIMER: I own neither Willow and Tara and Buffy and whoever. as a matter of fact i dont think i am capable of owning anything...no money....poor.

RATING: PG 13 for now.. why? i dont know... i just feel like it...i feel sleepy though...

SPOILERS: I dont know. NOne. Just read on. this is au so why the heck are there spoilers?

SUMMARY: willow's a tennis player. tara is on the way....

FEEDBACK: please do...well a fb asking joan to help me with this would mean so much...nag her to help me..hehehe.... :laugh

DEDICATED TO: Joan.....Joan...Joan...Ate JOan.. :flirt :bow



~~~~~so here goes...sorry im sleepy so this sucks. ehhehe...bear with me..itll get better ..promise???i hope so....~~~~~~~~~~~~



Cordelia Chase paced through her office after putting the phone down and leaving on a dreary, weary and restless face. The staff were staring at her intently, wondering if she disliked the sports section of Sunnydale Times that week….wondering if she’s gonna be bitching again.



Everytime she bitches, someone has to pack her things up and leave, although it does not happen all the time. The last time it happened, Anya Jenkins, who then had an affair with Cordelia’s three year boyfriend Xander Harris, left the Coolier Building with tears, regret, and hundreds of scratches and bruises from a cat fight with the great Editor in chief Cordy.



She strode some more and after five minutes of getting her staff nauseous, finally moved out of her office and called everyone to gather near her office.



“ Ladies and Gentlemen! Gather up!”



“The president of the Times read the column on Rosenberg. He said it was by far, the greatest sports articles we’re made,” Cordy paused for a grin and her staff clapped in elation.



“However,” and the laughter died.



“He wants more on Rosenberg and Hermosa’s private life which after all these years had not been confirmed by either party. He wants it on his laptop next month. It’s what people buy he says. Sales people!!! Sales!!! And guess what? If he says if we get the scoop on it, he’d finally finance the Sunnypolitan. Ladies and gentlemen, this is our dream. It’s our chance to reach it. I want this guys. We all want this. Sunnypolitan will be the best Sunnydale Magazine ever. Of course! It’s our baby. More than you Xander. Ahehe. Seriously, people all over the world would want to read our mag. Publication would increase to over 10 million. Sheesh. Imagine! From a University town official paper to a University town official magazine to the world’s leading fashion, social, showbiz, etc etc etc magazine. We’d no longer just interview the Mayor and the Principal every single time. It’s you, me, and Hollywood on our fingertips. Everything we ever dreamt of can be ours. O-U-R-S!”



“But I want the decision to be undivided and united. I am the editor-in-chief. I am in charge. I end up making all the decisions. I know that. And don’t think I don’t know what you call me behind my back. Yup, I am the Evil Bitch Monster of Death. I never thought I’d get my Psych 101 Professor’s epithet. But don’t get me wrong, as old and mature as you are, you would understand why I do everything you allege me to be doing. I do everything for this paper and now we are here. So what do you say?”



The room stood in silence until one brave soul finally came out…and made Cordy smile sexily and gaze at her brunette, properly built, Hilfiger clad fiancé .



“I say let’s make this happen! We have done everything in our powers to get Mr. Finn to invest on the Sunnypolitan to no avail! After five years, I think it’s about time we get this right, and totally hot Lisa and her bitch Red are our ticket to this deal. So I say we pin these ladies down, get the money rolling and girls coming!” ends Xander with a horny wink at Cordy as she reciprocated it with a stripping stare. The rest of the staff followed the speech with shouts of support to Xander’s one-time sensible speech.



Xander waved his two hands, signaling everyone to shut up, and asked his fiancé.



“But how do you suggest we do it baby?”



Cordy’s eyes trailed through the corner of the blue-and-orange-tinted office, located in the 15th floor of the Coolier, towards the vending machine; towards a pair of dazzling and sizzling blue eyes, framed with a slim yet chubby blonde body wearing her ukay-ukay long Sylvestré Lé Tané Salud skirt and pink PARIS FOR PRESIDENT shirt. Yes, slim yet chubby.



Cordelia has found the answers to her prayers.



Red’s not going to be able to resist this private/public eye. Cordelia’s eye.



Cordy beamed in enchantment...



The prey has found her predator.



fb>??? please....

:pinky

:baby

amberfan87
 


Re: Smash Hit

Postby willow fan7 » Sat Nov 27, 2004 9:53 am

I've never read a fic where Willow is a tennis player. Intriguing.. I'd like to see where you bring this. Don't keep me waiting too long..:cool

But here, the energy, the collective intelligence. It's like this force, t-this penetrating force, and I can just feel my mind opening up, you know, and letting this place just thrust into and -- and spurt knowledge into -- that sentence ended up in a different place than it started out in - Willow

willow fan7
 


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