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The Elements: The Series

Postby Fuzz WT » Sun Aug 31, 2003 1:25 am

TITLE: THE ELEMENTS

AUTHOR: FUZZ WT

RATING: Almost R to NC-17

DISCLAIMER: I'm not making any money out of this. All belong to Mutant Enemy, UPN, Joss, whoever and such. Not mine. But I have wished.

SUMMARY: Set in AU. Tara, Willow, Buffy and Faith are normal Sunnydale High students. But soon, they will weight the world on their shoulders.

AUTHOR NOTE: It’s like they’re going to be super hero or something. Hope I didn’t read too much Manga. Ya know, those manga always about saving the world in a crazy horrible sense. And really, English is not my language and I’m having no Beta Reader. So, bear with me...please. Oh, and I know that this part is not much about W/T but later will do. I promise.

FEEDBACK: Want. Take. Have. Here on board.

ARCHIVE: That would be grateful. Let me know.

DEVOTE: This is for the kittens and really, for the sake of W/T and B/F



So,



THE ELEMENTS : INTRODUCTION



HERE WE GO!





THE ELEMENTS

INTRO>>>




The Elements. No one in Sunnydale High School that don’t know them. They are popular far more than the king and the queen of the prom. They are touching more than any word in Drama class. They are desired more than ice cream, chocolate or sex. Their mojo spread all around the school.



Although, The Elements is far from being god, they’re like goddess to every student of Sunnydale High School. But how could it be?...The Elements is just normal....normal four girls.



Do you know them? No? I’ll do you a favor for the love of god. Oh! Here they come...Begin with your left...



That’s The Earth, she’s a babe for everyone. She has a nice personality. She’s open-heart and friendly. Regularly she’s kind and optimistic. But often she has a quiet time withdrawn in herself. On nice day she like to talk to people and she’s easy to talk too. Everyone loves her for always being there for everyone and that she always full of energy and it’s get them going too. You could say that she’s the center of energy in four elements. For what I know, they call her Buffy, the one who could always keep her feet to the earth.



Then The Wind, that’s right, that dark hair girl with much attitude. She’s free spirit and kick ass. Normally she’s nice until something or someone upset her. The thing is she get upset too easily. She’s a true ambitionist, always up for what’s hers. She’s is a braver out of them four, so brave that’s it sometime look like she’s not afraid of anything. Half of the students quite afraid of her outrageous but other half worship her like a goddess. They call her Faith, the unexpectable like the wind changed. Um, GO! FAITH!!!



Oh, boy you see that? That’s The Fire, like her red hair. But true quality is that she’s true hottie, um, according to what people say. She’s charming and is A LOVE. She’s funny, a bit silly and have a sarcastic sense of humor, not so many people can really keep up with her braining. I WAS unbelievable that her IQ is above genius. She is a brain of the four elements. People love her for how she always helping them...them whom being treated wrong. And because The Fire have a quick temper if she feels that it’s not right, she’ll go straight ahead and really lose it. That’s Willow as they called her, the hotter than fire.



Last is The Water, that blonde. She’s so beautiful and so elegant. People often stunted by her silky blonde hair and a face of Greek goddess. She is a lady. She’s especially sensitive and have a true gold heart. With her kindness and generous, she’s the heart of the four element. She naturally blends them all together in one unity. She’s a bit shy but I think she’s just quiet, you know, deep thinker. In a way, she’s the most rational and calm of them four. She has this power that everyone will be really warm and feel nurture when they are with her. People love her for that. She also has this instinct sense that never really wrong. That’s her, Tara, the serene of the water.



So, you know them now, all four elements. Like you see, everything going great with their life, friends, school and the popularity. Oh, yes, but every story has their own complicate path and this is no exception....



Not so long,......



And why do I know this all?



.....



Well, I’m trying to keep it low profile…so…umm...



****************



THE ELEMENTS

BUFFY >>> Intro




Things shouldn’t be this way.



It’s dark



I am just a girl.



I should live peacefully in my house, at this time...nighty scary time.



So why am I running now!!! Being chase by some stranger, nighty scary stranger!!!



BOY, he’s getting close.



"HELP!!!!" I scream. Is that the only way out?? Wait, Yes it is. "HELP!!! HELP!!! SOMEBODY HELP ME!!!"



I don’t even know where I’m running to now...look around...this is a... CEMETERY???!!! GREAT!!! Who gonna be a cemetery at this time now??!!! I’m so in trouble.



I shouldn’t went to the Bronze. I shouldn’t left for home alone. I should let them, my friends, ride me home like they suggest. I...I....oh god help me!!! He’s coming!!!



That man, he grabs me, at my arm, tightly "Ouch! That’s hurt!!!" I yell.



"Not so long anymore" His voice crack, he looks at me hungrily, and excuse me, WHAT’S THAT!!? I think he’s transforming. OH MY GODDDD!!!! He transformed and now his face looks horrible, it’s so scary. I think...hell to what I think!



I couldn’t even scream. I’ll sure be death...GOD! I HAVE TO FIGHT NOW!!!



...HOW?!!



His look like animal or demon face come right near at me, what’s he going to do!!! Then he come to my neck…Wha...what!!?? Is he going to suck my neck...in what way...!!!? Oh my god, is he a vampire?



No please, no vampiring me.



Hell!!! I don’t care anymore!! He’s going to eat me!!!! MOMMY HELP!!!!



I tried to get away but he’s so strong...I couldn’t....



.....Fight, I have to,



fight...



fight...



"Buffy..." Christ! He knows my name...



"BUFFY" But his voice sounds so familiar.



"Miss Summers" ..Wait, not so familiar now.



"BUFFY!!!" ...oooh...familiar again...



I think this is no time to be glad about this.



"Damn, B, what’s got you so much!" huh? That voice....



My head is spinning. And then...the light come. So bright.



"BUFFY? You got me worry now"



I blink, and then what I see is...Faith, Willow, Tara and...the teacher. I am in...a?...a class room.



"Am I dreaming?" I ask, my head is dazzling.



"I think you pretty much done that a while ago, Miss Summers." The teacher answers with what I called not so familiar voice. I can tell he doesn’t like one bit of this situation.



"Snap out, B." Faith smirks. What’s that smirk for? Oh...



"Oh." I get it now. "I’m sorry Mr.Giles...I was just...”



"Dreaming? I got it." He throws the paper right at me. "And, You got it yourself too, C+ for your dreamy report." He walks back to front class. I look around...everybody has ‘gulp’ on their faces.



Great,...just great. I hate day dreaming. Well, not that everyone is ‘trying to hold’ their laughing at me, at least Willow is glaring at me, blaming my disconcentrate to the class. Tara is looking at me worryingly. And...not to mention about that funny look on Faith face.



Then, the lunch break bell rings. Every student hurry out of class. Left us four who still our seats. I rub my head slowly.



"Are you okay?" Tara asks, walking toward my desk.



"Okay, I think,...I had a weird dream." I answer, not really remembering it cleary.



"Or a wet dream?" That’s so Faith.



"It’s not like that, Faith." I roll my eyes. "It’s scary, a nightmare."



"How scary?" Faith asks collecting her books and stand up. Willow does too.



"Pretty much, I think someone er, ...vampired me in a cemetery."



"Ooh, neck sucker" Faith smiles wryly.



OH! FAITH! Could you please take me seriously once in this lifetime?



Since I’ve met her in my 2nd year high school, she never took me seriously. When I first met her I was shock by her outrageous. She’s so wild. Faith moved to Sunnydale because her mother got divorce and moved here. She’s so dark back then. I found her having a fight with some ‘snobbish shit’ girl, as she recalled, on the first day she go to this school. Faith was about to smack that girl face with her fist, it was so horrified. But me, I did all exercise and stuff to keep on with my cheerleading, I knew I can stop her. So I did. I locked her arm tightly; she looked at me with surprise in her brown eyes. I thought we could get into the fight. But then she just snorted her nose, broke from my grip and walked away saying nothing. I look at that ‘snobbish shit’ girl and she just shrug and walked away too. How ungrateful?



Later, in the class it appeared that she sat next to me. It was so awkward and really, I hate having a fight. So I took a deep breath and decided to say something better than nothing. I said hi to her, expected to receive some sort of anger back but she just ‘hey’ back. And then things went on.



After we became friend. She said that day, she just got mad because that girl was ‘taking shit’ on her. And that girl was just a ‘slut’ girl that not even know her. She just hated it. She admitted to me, that she’s not that calm. Quick temper, aggressive, angry and all. So she’s like impressive that somebody ‘looking so slim and all beauty like you, B’ would have enough guts and strengths to take on her. And beside, she was having a fight with that girl not me. So when I ‘hi’ she just ‘hey’ back, normally. Well, I also secretly blushed at her ‘beautiful’ comment.



I thinks she’s great. She’s now in the band also, which is really cool.



After she’s got into a band, I think her temper is better. Like people said, music can heal. And yes, she’s so cool at doing guitary and vocally. People is so nuts about her band and her music. It’s wild and fascinating. Students are all worshiping her for that. But she always simply said ‘ Look B, it’s just ROCK&ROLL.’ Well, I think it’s cool anyway...I wish I had that kind of artistic in me.



But Faith is Faith. She’s so full with attitude. Never take it down for anyone. She has this strange wall, never let anyone in and never believe in anything. It’s not nice, she got pessimistic almost of the time. Which Willow called ‘Dark knight of dark night.’ Behavior. And what’s bugging me the most is no matter how good friend she is, she never really take me seriously, like just now. Oh yeah, she thinks that I’m just a stupid cheerleader.



"You know, it could be subconscious sexual dream" Willow taps her fingers on my back, interrupting my thought. "Freud stuff."



"Or it’s telling you something, mystical." Tara smiles, gives a look at Willow. They have this cross over thing. While Willow is a brainiac,Tara is a mystical.



"Oh, craps, you just stay up late at night again right? B?" Faith is starting to leave the room.



"Yes, actually I did...wait! that’s not the point! It felt so real. You know?" I can still feel it. The terrified of me. But I don’t wanna said too much, Faith’s gonna think I’m a big whiney. Then she turns to me, biting her lips and frowning her brows. Why is she looking at me like that? Something wrong, Faith?



Faith turns away. Slowly making her way out.



"So real? If it’s a Freud stuff, you know, you are in trouble." Willow grins, walking right after Faith.



"I love trouble!!! Oh! Come on! I’m hungry, LET’S EAT!!!" Faith growls loudly. Disappears out of the room. Willow follows her.



Start collecting my books. Stand up. Tara reachs my arm and gives me a worry look.



"You know, if it’s so real then it’s always telling you something." Her brows furrow. "J-Just don’t look over it, me never."



"I don’t know...Tara...it’s quite scary." I shake my head slightly.



"Dream, it never tell you straight out, you have to dig it." She gives a lop-side smile. "But then again, I could be wrong."



"Maybe." I repeat.



"Maybe?" She lurks her left eyebrow slightly.



"You two come on! Just get your butt out." Willow walks back to get us.



"Maybe it was just a silly dream. And...I’m hungry now." I shrug as I smirk.



With that, we head to the cafeteria.



*********************

TBC.

*********************



Oh god! Hope the kittens like it.

*Fuzz*

*******




Hey! You're gonna back off! She said no and that's it. ~ TARA

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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby maudmac » Sun Aug 31, 2003 1:52 am

This Kitten likes it. :grin



Very interesting. And a great start. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.


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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby Willowtara19 » Sun Aug 31, 2003 2:48 am

Hey, Fuzz!!



This kitten likes it too!! ;)



I wonder what's with Buffy's dream? Seems kind of intriguing :hmm



Pleeeeease, update soon?? :pray I think I'm already hooked! :)



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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby littlecrazy80 » Sun Aug 31, 2003 5:14 am

I like it. Hope to read more.



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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby LostWithoutTara » Sun Aug 31, 2003 5:19 am

This is a very interesting and intriguing start!



I like the interactions between the Buffy, Faith, Willow and Tara and the way you assigned the elements to their personalities.



Looking forward to reading more!

Every time you walk away, I pretend that I'm okay

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The Elements: The Series

Postby Fuzz WT » Tue Sep 02, 2003 2:34 am

Oh god, my life kicked me in the face so I was pretty slow for the update. But anyway, here it is.



Thanks maudmac, Willowtara19, lil´c and LostWithoutTara for replies. Also, thanks everyone for reading and not reply ;) . I feel very grateful. Attention is all the writers want anyway. :grin



Okay, here's update.



TITLE: THE ELEMENTS

AUTHOR: FUZZ WT

RATING: Almost R to NC-17, I think...

DISCLAIMER: I'm not making any money out of this. All belong to Mutant Enemy, UPN, Joss, whoever and such. Not mine. But I have wished.

SUMMARY: Set in AU. Tara, Willow, Buffy and Faith are normal Sunnydale High students. But soon, they will weight the world on their shoulders.

AUTHOR NOTE: It’s like they’re going to be super hero or something. Hope I didn’t read too much Manga. Ya know, those manga always about saving the world in a crazy horrible sense. And really, English is not my language and I’m having no Beta Reader. So, bear with me...please. Oh, and I know that this part is not much about W/T also but later will really do. I really really promise.

FEEDBACK: Want. Take. Have. Here on board.

ARCHIVE: That would be grateful. Let me know.

DEVOTE: This is for the kittens and really, for the sake of W/T and B/F



THE ELEMENTS

FAITH >>> Intro




"Damn! What’s got you so much,B ?"



B, ...Buffy, she said she had this weird scary vampiring dream and it’s shaking me because last night I had it too. This dream, in the cemetery, only it’s not vampire that ran right after me it’s some horrible creature. I knew I have to fight for my life but I just couldn’t. I didn’t know how. That beast was so strong.



"Oh, craps, you just stay up late at night again right? B?" I recognize my own voice but I don’t really believe it.



Right?



I’m not so sure.



I hate to admit that I was scare. So I really don’t wanna talk about it. Now that I said it was craps, I don’t think I would bring that subject up again. Anyway, I think B feels it, something I haven’t tell her.



Hell, it’s just a dream,



that…felt so real.



So now we’re at the cafeteria. I’m getting my food done quickly because I have this rehearsal with my band after lunch.



"Whoa, Faith...slow down. What’s the hurry?" Red wonder.

"I have the rehearsal with the band."

"Which remind me I have something to do after lunch too!" B makes a widen eyes, well, must be cheerleader thing.

"Ok, why do you get so excite?" Taking more bite at my bread, I ask though I knew the answer.

"A CHEERLEADER TEST. I get to audition new cheerleaders today. You know, have to prepare cuz we’re all senior, 12th and all preparing to leave. We need new generation to inherit our glory." B looks so happy and I have to roll my eyes. What’s so important again, B?

"Talk about it. Who have you planned to have this Cheerleader queen after your retirement?" Red curiously asks before taking a sip of her milk.

"Hmm,...I was thinking about Cordelia."

"YUCK!! No you wouldn’t!!!" I can see Red almost choke out those words and milk too.

"I know you hate her but she’s the best after all." Our cheerleader queen gives a sorry smile.



Well, Cordelia is in 11th Grade, according to Red she’s a bitch but I have to agree with B. In cheerleader path, she’s the best to replace B...



Everybody knows that after all B’s blue eyes and cherry lips are above standard. More than just fine. According to what Red knows because Red is doing the school newspaper and she knows everything that going on, B is the most popular person in this school. Well, it should be, with the beautiful face, blue eyes, golden hair, slim body, long legs, delicate looks yet strong, kind heart and the fact that she has a mystery energy to get everybody going with her like that. She’s just so damn unbelievable when she’s doing her cheer things. Putting HER ALL for it. Me, who actually thinks that it’s fucking stupid before, when I saw her dancing along those beats of cheering like that, I just can’t help but really like her for that. She has a gift!



The thing is I really respect her for that. She shows me that she has a heart and no matter what, it’s heart that important for everything. But of crouse, I never tell her that.



And Cordelia? Even if she’s not really a blonde chick like her but at least she can dance well and with the body, popularity...and money. Funny that. I guess they need same ‘above standard’. But really I think she doesn’t have a mysterious power like Buffy Summers.



Then they go on and on about Cordelia. Because, well, we all know how Red hates her because she always picking on people, usually those nerds, geek people. And this Red has a lot of followers...I need to use that word because Red really has them!!! She’s so superb with braining everything out. I think she’s a geek, in a good way. Red is a geek with a style. Like Neo in Matrix.



....um,



Okay,Okay, Red has a lot of followers that are normal people, the geek, the outsider and nerds. Mostly I think someone who’s in serious shit about the world would really like her. But I think they just lust after her cute smile....



Really! I think it’s cool. Because with all stuff she’s doing like newspaper, computer, doing great at studying and got a damn fine IQ like that. I think she’s a fucking future!! She’s trying to make something different. Just that maybe it’s good for someone to have her as a role model.



So, Red is like, hating Cordelia who’s picking on her followers. I don’t think she has ever been pick by Cordelia. Red just doesn’t like that kind of behavior or maybe she has a geek root, I don’t know. And I don’t care about that enough to ask too.



Red...if you have any geek root, take it easy, you’re doing great.



And, I really don’t care, just don’t mess with me Cordy.



Blondie sits so quiet. She’s normally quiet, but this is strangely quiet of her. I want to ask what’s wrong. But then again if it was Blondie, then Red always the faster to recognize it. Always. I don’t know why.



I have this feeling, maybe something going on between them…though, couldn’t really say what.



"What’s wrong Tara, you’re so quiet." Red asks.



"Nothing" Blondie shakes her head, but it looks like she has something to say. Here it comes. " Just that,

I have this weird feeling." She looks at us one by one.



"Wow, weird festival, weird dream, weird feeling" Red lurks her brows.



"Seriously, it’s been a week now. I think Mr.Giles are watching us." Blondie whispers. Huh? What again?



"What? That English Teacher? That C+ teacher?" B rolls her eyes. Oh, that Rupert guy.



"He’s my A+ teacher." Red looks proud.



"Oh come on! You got A in every class." We exclaim, almost in unison.



"Oh, B? while you were lost in dreaming head of yours, he’s confirm that he’s my C+ teacher too." I snicker.



"C+." Blondie waves the paper with the C+mark on it to us. Buffy rolls her eyes once again.



"Sure, he’s watching us. We’re not doing very well in his class. Except Willow." B has a point.



"No, not like that. I mean he’s WATCHING us." Blondie said. OOO-KAY, that’s scary.



"Blondie, that’s freaky."



"Unlikely, he’s like…"



"Stalker?" Red finishes.



"No, …kind of…examined us." Hmmm…?



"Huh?" Willow narrows her eyes. Looking uneasy.



"Now that’s getting more freaky." I laugh sarcastically at Blondie’s definition "I don’t know...we don’t really know him. He’s come here just about a month before you" I gives my opinion to her, as I look at my watch. Damn, I have to go now. "Look, I have to go, anybody care to accompany me?"



"Nah, Cheerleader thing." B takes a sip at her orange juice.



"I’ll go, I have nothing to do." Red pauses and is that her eyes widen? "Wait!! Not anymore. Got to go do some research for…um…oh… homework." Suddenly Red looks…jumped. Why? Well, I don’t have a time for this…yet.



"I...have to finish my...art piece." Blondie seems distract, rubbing her temple slowly but finally she gives a sorry smile. "But maybe I could go after I finish my stuff." Oh, kindly as always.



I walk out of there. Behind me, I can still hear them discussing about that English teacher. I take a quick glance at him who’s sitting over there with his fellows. Plenty ‘Yuck!’ to Teachers. If what Blondie sensed was true, then I have to beat it out of that man somehow.



It’s sunny outside the cafeteria. But I could see the rain cloud is coming from a far horizon. It's slowly eating half of the sky now.



Is this Rupert Giles thing have something to do with our weird dream…B?



Oh, Fuck that.



Music ahead. Get real, Faith.



*******************

TBC.

*******************



Yay! Any goody point for me?

*Fuzz*

*******




Hey! You're gonna back off! She said no and that's it. ~ TARA

Edited by: Fuzz WT  at: 9/2/03 1:37 am
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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby LostWithoutTara » Tue Sep 02, 2003 4:21 am

Great update!



I like the Faith POV and her views on all the others.



And Willow still hates Cordy - some things never change! :wink



And I'm very intrigued by the dreams and what they'll mean.



Looking forward to more!

Every time you walk away, I pretend that I'm okay

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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby Willowtara19 » Tue Sep 02, 2003 6:36 am

:bigwave Fuzz!!



You were asking if you were going to have any goody point for your update? I'll tell you: I give you lots of them!!! Gotta love this story of yours :clap



'Kay, more intrigue. What's with the dreams and teacher Rupert?? :hmm



Can't hardly wait for your update!! ;)



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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby littlecrazy80 » Tue Sep 02, 2003 12:34 pm

What´s going on with Mr. Giles?

I liked how you showed us Faith´s POV.



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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby halfsmile » Tue Sep 02, 2003 1:25 pm

Hummm....I loving this fic so far.....:clap

want more!!! Soon, I hope!

:pray

bye':bigwave

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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby Lt Sticks » Tue Sep 02, 2003 1:31 pm

fuzz this is awesome!

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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby Washi » Wed Sep 03, 2003 8:28 am

I hafta say I've been reading this from the beginning and I will continue to read it! I'm really liking this... It's a fresh and new idea, at least I think so, I haven't seen fics quite like this, so more. :grin

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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby Fuzz WT » Mon Sep 08, 2003 12:17 am

Hey there, ya all!



Thanks LostWithoutTara, Willowtara19, lil'c,Halfsmile, Lt Sticks and ooh, Kinky Washi! Thanks for the goody points for me. Thanks for feedback everyone. :) :) :) I promise to do individual replies next time!



My life is fast forwarding. So, not to waste it, HERE'S UPDATE!



THE ELEMENTS

TARA>>> Intro




Good god! Someone is using magic.

And really strong, not controlling one.



"I...have to finish my...art piece." I rub my head slowly. I have had this sudden dazzling every time I feel magical force. Especially strong ones. It’s like a Spiderman sense the screaming of helpless people. But only I’m a Spiderwoman. Hmm...Spiderwoman with a rubber suite?



"But maybe I could go after I finished my stuff." Don’t want to really say no because Faith might think we’re careless. This band and music is her big ambition and all.



Gosh...it’s coming again!



This magic, who’s using the spell. Where? Who? Why?



Huh?...It’s gone. The dazzle head. Suddenly it go away. And Faith gone too. Was it Faith’s?



Couldn’t be. Why Faith? Why now?



But then why must I have this strong feeling that it’s someone near.



"I have to go. Don’t want ‘em wait." Buffy actively stand up after long disscussion with Willow about Mr.Giles.



"Me too, studying in order." Willow stand up and see me sitting here, looking unfine "Tara? Are you Okay? Really, you look pale." Willow notices, and touches my arm gently.



"No, it’s okay." I shake my head and try to form a assured smile. How can I tell her the truth to freak her out? Anyway, thanks for caring, Willow. She’s so kind to me...as always.



Buffy gives me a smile that contain worry hiding "Are you sure?"



"Sure, it’s okay, really. Don’t worry. Just go. I’ll meet you guys in the next class."



With that they walk away and I’m back to the thought of what’s going on.



Tara...look hard! Who? Mr. Giles? Over there?



But the power was so pure, so vividly delicate. God, never felt that kind of power since mommy...



....



Mommy, I miss you.



I know that I ran away from home. I’m not such a good girl, am I? Mommy? But Dad, he changed so much. I know he’d changed long before you’d gone, mom. But after you gone, things got worse. Everybody was afraid of him. Donnie was completely under his control, got a lot of pressure and taking his anger on me. And Beth? Oh, you know, Beth always...



Our family turned terrible, mommy. Last few months before I broke down totally, they beaten me up...just every time they got angry on something. And it’s too many times. I got bruises all over my body. I emotionally cracked. They’re fury. I was like the lost child in the Black Forest. So scary. I needed to go or I’d die slowly. I had no choice.



I thought about Uncle Jo and Aunt Beatrice, living here in Sunnydale. Remember? You used to take me to visit them when I was little. They are the only family I know. The good thing is I know Dad hates them so much and never even want to contact them since...forever...So, I was sure that he wouldn’t expect this at all.



I took a risk, ran away. When I got to the house, I was broken. But they, not knowing before that I’d come, welcome me so well. Uncle Jo and Aunt B have been taking care of me good, mommy. So, don’t worry.



And Dad, I never heard from him anymore, not that I wanted to. I don’t know if he doesn’t aware that I would ran away to here or that he just doesn’t care. I don’t know. Maybe he just doesn’t care.



Even if they’re taking care of me well but it’s never gonna be the same anymore. I’m broken and shattered. I hardly trust anyone anymore. I’ve behaved very well to them, and maybe too much because they’ve told me to stop tense up all the time and just relax. They said I don’t have to try, they’ll love me no matter what. But my heart just couldn’t believe.



But it’s getting better.



I attended to the Sunnydale High School in senior year, just this year. Uncle Jo did the entire thing. Then I met these wonderful three girls. They’ve been best friends for quite sometime. Willow, one of these girls found me and welcomes me to her friends. They’re super nice.



Willow found me?



She found me in the library.



Back then, me, who having no friend, like always, you can find me in library or art department almost every time. Willow is an intelligent girl. She goes to library A LOT. Messing with books and busying her laptop. She saw me in the library A LOT too. So she just came and talked to me. I think we just clicked. Click. I testify that because...I feel understanding and I trust her completely. Strange, I know but...



And...



Well, things go on, I met another girls and we became friends. Don’t worry, mommy. They are good friends. Buffy is so nice and energetic. Faith is wild and sincere. Willow is....Willow is just...amazing. Yeah, that’s the word. Amazing and endlessly fascinating.



More important, I found myself actually smiling. I found myself actually feeling good. I found myself beginning to actually trust the persons again.



And anything passionately going on? Hmm? I don’t think so. But Faith and Willow told me that I’m starting to have a lot of admirers because my acting in Drama Fest and my paintings has been published in the School’s Newspaper. The ones that Willow is an editor. Admirers! Can you believe that? This is me! A shy, stuttering girl. Well, not stuttering much anymore now. And it’s only two months since I got here.



But no, thanks. I don’t really care about that. I just have my friends and that’s it. I’m so happy enough I could cry now.



I think got carried away. Sorry, mom.



Now, back to dazzling head. It happened again. And it’s a strong one. I know you used to teach me since I was a baby about magic! I did well, didn’t I? You said I have a gift. Because I learnt fast and I can connect my power to the other’s. One time I felt that someone witch-ey was coming and I never felt it before. You lurked your eyebrows surprisingly. You said it’s your witch-friend coming but she’s still 3 miles away. You laughed happily and asked if I have a dazzling head. I nodded. You laughed more and said maybe I’m the one who can cured the world.



I didn’t really understand that. Not even now.



I don’t see that it’s useful because lately it’s growing more powerful, I can sense everybody aura. I could sense the stares like Mr.Giles’ glances, everybody angers, the tense feelings, the souls and all. Just as I turned 18th this year, I think I’ve sensed black energy. And it’s lots in this town. It gets me tired sometime. Because as it’s growing strong, I can not really point out where those forces coming from. But it’s okay. Nothing happen. No one attacks the town yet. Or that I didn’t know of?



It grows strong fast. And magic too. It’s easy to do magic now. Without much try, just a little wave of my hand. I mean, a little kind of magic anyway.



Don’t worry mom. I’m careful. I remember about your words. I didn’t let anyone know. Not even my friends, Uncle Jo or Aunt Beatrice. Well, my friends, they know about that terrible home anyway. But not much...just...that I moved here because you died. Ok, they know nothing. I didn’t try to hide. I just didn’t tell them. Yet.



I'm careful. Very.



And I'm frustrated because I can’t point out where the forces are coming from. Like just now...



Do I need to dig it out by using the spell? Oh! I need my book.



...



Goddess, who used that magic?



************

TBC.

************



There! Be gentle with me, okay? ( or better, spank me! ) :glasses

*******




Hey! You're gonna back off! She said no and that's it. ~ TARA

Edited by: Fuzz WT  at: 9/8/03 1:29 am
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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby Willowtara19 » Mon Sep 08, 2003 12:59 pm

:bigwave Fuzz!!



You finally updated! :)



'Kay, I'm enjoying this story of yours a lot, but I'm also something like :confused and :hmm



Who's using that magic and what for? And why did Tara feel it? Sorry, but I can't help it, I need to know what's gonna happen :p



Thank you very much for your update, Fuzz!! Can't hardly wait for the next one!! :bounce



Pleeeeeeeeease, next one soon, pleeeeeease??? :pray



Willowtara19 :kitty

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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby littlecrazy80 » Mon Sep 08, 2003 1:21 pm

This story gets more interesting with every update. I´m really curious why Tara sensed the magic. And who did it.



*lil´c*

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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby Insanity » Tue Sep 09, 2003 3:54 pm

WOW.. hat was a really fantastic insight into Taras thoughts and feelings.



Good work go on soonish *g*



Inanity

"Nobody messes with my girl!"Tara, Bargaining

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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby nika » Tue Sep 09, 2003 6:27 pm

Hola Fuzz. This is real nice. I love the premise, plus how each element reflects their essence. I'm looking forwrd to more.:clap

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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby the vamp nurd » Wed Sep 10, 2003 6:01 am

:bow



Fire plus water = ... :boot

Sorry I missed church, I was busy becoming a lesbian and worshiping Satan



Open up Pandora's kiss.



Bardlet no #27



the vamp nurd
 


Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby Fuzz WT » Thu Sep 11, 2003 12:49 am

Oh, thanks for feedback and for reading!



HERE'S REPLIES...



Willowtara19 : I'm glad you like it! The last update had given me a :stink and :hmm to write the next one too. ( see, I needed to choose where I'm heading from the two storylines I've prepared. ) but I needed to decide where the story would go so I...well, you'll see in the update below...



lil'c : Thanks for reading! The curious-ey won't be too long. I'm a little bit impathiene to let you know that. ( PS. I like your sig. )



Inanity : Thanks! I was having fun writing her feeling too! I try to keep it down and not too obvious about her feeling ( with Willow ) because I had to remind myself all the time that she's sort of talking with her mommy above...But I kept writing her all Willow is amazing and Willow is this and that. :smug



nika : Hi! Thanks for dropping by! One day, I was thinking about the four elements ( Don't ask why. :eyebrow ) then the idea suddenly came up. The more I wrote it, I thought 'hey, it's so fits with their personalities.' It was kind of odd in a way.



vamp nurd : What can I say? It's going to be so fun when Willow's on fire! :drool



Alright! Let's end the curious! ( Atleast just one thing. ) There's one answer to your question!



...



HERE'S UPDATE! ( Forgive my bad spelling and for don't check it first!!! I'm on hurry to the class! )



THE ELEMENTS

WILLOW >>> Intro




"Huh?" I narrow my eyes...I feel my body is getting on higher temperature.



"I’ll go, I have nothing to do." ...WAIT...Shit!!! It’s on. Say something Willow!!



"Wait!!! Not anymore. Got to go do some research for…um…oh…homework."



I lied.



And I’m suck at lying.



Anybody noticed that? Please…no-noticing. Not now.



It’s real!!! I think I have a power!!! See, when I brought this stake and potatoes to the cafeteria table and I cut it and it’s not well done all over the piece. I could still smell the bloody blood. And not really surprise at that fact because our school has been famous for pathetic nutriment. Really. And don’t get me start with the hundred petitions that the school board just doesn’t care.



Okay, I just thought ‘Jeez, I wish that it was being more cooked but there’s no way cuz our cefeteria are hopeless’ and then I thought about the heat, the fire that would cook it up. Sure, nothing happen.



Then just 20 minutes later, the stake is heating up!!!! I could see the smoke coming out of that cold meat!!! And my body is all hotter. Wait! Is there any smoke coming from me too. Oh..no?



WOW!!!



Just as I has wondered.



Last week, I was thinking that my room was so untidy when I was going to bed. I promised to myself I would go big cleaning my room tomorrow and I went to bed.



When I woke up in the morning, mi god! The books were on its shelf, organized. The clothes were in the basket. The dust on my study desk and laptop was gone. I was confusing. Did my mom does that for me? But no it couldn’t be, My mom had been out of town since the day before.



And then I thought about the ghost. My house was haunted or what!?!? Then I thought that’s there is no Mr. tidy-room ghost and laugh ironically. Maybe I need that kind of ghost in my room.



Another case, Last Monday, When Tara walked into the class. She dressed in this purple shirt, I hope this isn’t strange or anything but I just thought that she’s hot in that dress and maybe if that second button was unbutton...it’d be more sexy. It’s normal, right? To thought that, right? Because well she’s my friend and I was just thinking that if she wore it that way it would be so good. What? No, not good for me. I no needed her sexy-ey for me. No?...,um,...NO!!! It’s for her own good, that she would get sexy. Not that she’s not sexy or anything because HELLO!! She’s one damn fine woman on this planet.



And,..and?...and?...I can prove that because?...I-I know that she has a lot of crushes on her. Which I don’t really like them...which I don’t know why I don’t like them. Because they are too demon-ey? and Tara is like flowery? And they are going to just take the flowery of her away. Hey! Where was I again?



Umm...Well,....



Ok, back on the subject, then after the class she complained that her second button was lost to nowhere. So, like, she had no second button anymore and that shirt exposed her milky flesh very good. Did I say milky? No! I didn’t stare and think that it’s delicate, soft, milky and all. Oh NO! Did I just say delicate and soft? Ha, very funny, this is not going anywhere. I need to stop this babbling. NOW.



...



‘Kay, just that...see, I was wondering if it’s up for anything I wished before. Then I think it’s just coincident.



But now…could it be?



I think I have a power or something.



I need to do some research. Fast!



Buffy, Tara and me say goodbye at the cafeteria. Buffy is still a bit worry about Mr.Giles. Though what I worry about is Tara that suddenly looked so pale. But she said she’s fine. So I left her there. Wishing see her okay-ey again in the next class.



I walk into the library. Fast to second floor to find it.



I don’t know what to find but I have to find it, something unnaturally book.



"Frog rain." NO THANKS!

"Cow fly." What in frickin’ hell was that?

"Mind and Control." Hmm?

"Ghost of the mall." NOPE.

"Little Green Friends That Hopping Around." Jeez, what’s wrong with this place?



Okay, okay, back to ‘Mind and control’.



I have an intention to flipping the pages up all my lunch break.



According to the book, it’s about the power of control. I’ll make it easier to understand, for me, noting in my book. In different colored of pens.



It’s like you have this signal in your body, a wave, a signal, a line. Whatever. And everything around you have it too. The stone, the pencil, the earth, the moon, whatever, they’re all having it. And if you want to control anything. Say, if you want to move the pencil, you just have to tune your wave to the pencil’s wave into one. Make it the same. If the pencil’s wave have three wavelengths then you have to make your wavelength the same. So there! You got yourself a moving pencil!!!



...Only that, even if you want to move the piece of little toilet paper for 1 milli-centimeter, you’ll have to practice it over years. Because you know, it’s easy to do it, just change your wavelength but the problem is where’s your wavelength anyway? In your brain? Your heart? Your toes? I guess not.



Then what’s going on with me. Eventhough my power is like 20 minutes late, it’s work without practicing before. Maybe I have a gift! It’s must be. Like those in X-Men.



Huh, not so weak now, right?



But, really, does anyone notice that? Because I think all X-Men have to live in another far away place and people hate and afraid of their power.



Please just not now. I don’t wanna be a freak now. Though it’s just a cartoon. Isn’t it?



Maybe I should talk to Tara. Because she’s into these things. Mystical stuff.



Nah, she’s not gonna believe me.



I need to borrow this book back home...



I look out of the window, it’s raining outside. Since when? I don’t know. I seem to pretty lost in my own world.



Don’t like rain a bit. It could contain frogs along.





*******************

END OF INTRODUCTION.

*******************



CHAPTER ONE IS ON THE WAY...SOON :heart



*FUZZ*

*******




Hey! You're gonna back off! She said no and that's it. ~ TARA

Edited by: Fuzz WT  at: 9/11/03 2:07 am
Fuzz WT
 


Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby the vamp nurd » Thu Sep 11, 2003 1:17 am

:hmm



I see that there's power in that young one. :lol



Interesting.

Sorry I missed church, I was busy becoming a lesbian and worshiping Satan



Open up Pandora's kiss.



Bardlet no #27



the vamp nurd
 


Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby littlecrazy80 » Thu Sep 11, 2003 12:00 pm

So Willow has power. I loved her inner babble about Tara´s button. This is so Willow-y. I like what you are doing here. Please keep the updates coming.



*lil´c*

Let´s get happy and let´s be gay. germany´s grand prix song



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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby Lady6string » Thu Sep 11, 2003 10:03 pm

I've been checking in on this fic like crazy! I'm sorry that i haven't replied till now, but i'm finally dropping by to tell you that i'm so excited about this story! i love how the intro was written in each charachters POV, you've done an excellent job with that and i hope to be reading more very soon.



~Cyn

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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby LostWithoutTara » Fri Sep 12, 2003 1:01 pm

Another pair of great updates!



I'm really looking forward to seeing who was behind the magic that Tara sensed and what is going on with Willow's power and the other's dreams.

Every time you walk away, I pretend that I'm okay

LostWithoutTara
 


Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby Fuzz WT » Thu Sep 18, 2003 3:38 am

Replies :



the vamp nurd : :) May the force be with her. :)



lil'c : Willow-y babbling always about Tara-ish, doesn't it? :eyebrow



Cyn : Hey, thanks for finally dropping by!!! I have been checking the replies like crazy too!!! :p



LostWithoutTara : :hmm *hint* It's someone near her[Tara]...



Okay, I have to apologize for slow updating. See, I have been busying this film making thing but it's all about to finish now. So I took a little time here to post the update.



Here's Chapter One : Are We Going To Do This?



Author note : I know I have bad spelling here somewhere. And the language...oh god. Please, bear with it. :whistle





THE ELEMENTS >>>

Chapter One_a : Are we going to do this?




The next morning



Tara walked into the library room. It wasn’t hard to know Willow was there too. For Tara, she seems to always knows whenever Willow’s near.



In fact, Tara was there to search some books about spell, because the books that she had at home didn’t contain any informationË about locating magical force spells. But that can wait because there’s another thing too. For tonight, just us four....Faith, Buffy, Willow and me. Willow and me...? Tara thought.



Willow, no different, sensed it too. She looked up from all her ‘high-level-too-hard-to-understand-it’ books that spread all around the table. Tara sweetly smiled stimulated Willow’s green eyes to got sparkling.



As Tara smiled, the redhead grinned back, she noticed herself got a huge heart-beating phenomeneon. But as always she thought it’s just herself being glad to see her best friend....



Only that it happened almost every time.



“ Hey…” Tara voiced softly as she sat across her best friend.



“ Hi, Tara” Willow replied in the same tone.



“What are you up to?” Tara asked, reaching for one of those books and flipping through pages. “Anything new? ”



“ Oh, you know me, just studying this and that” Willow gave a cute smirked. Tara can’t help but loving it and found herself staring. Blue eyes locked with emerald ones. Willow began to felt a strange giddy by the gaze.



Tara was lost in mysterious green eyes but finally she managed to broke her stare. Wondered herself for her beheavior and pretended to look around the table instead. “ Psyche much? “



Willow jumped as Tara asked. The blonde would be blind not to see all the books were all about psychometric stuff. Willow was studying them since the early morning in afford to understand of what’s going on inside of her. She couldn’t figure out about why her power sometime did working and sometime did not.



“ What? Well,” Willow decided to play it cool “ Yes, it’s a…new topic for the newspaper…new issue.”



“ Interesting. Can I help?” Tara asked sincerely.



“ Oh, it’s okay. It’s about to finish.” Willow was cursing herself for lying to Tara. Who she trusted completely. Why couldn’t I just say it! Willow thought. But Tara gave a beautiful smile that chased Willow’s thought to the sea. The blonde girl reached for the hand across hand. Touch oh so lightly on the redhead's backhand.



“ Look, don’t work too hard, okay?” Blue eyes fixed on green eyes again and Willow could only nodded like a brainwashed girl.



“ Actually, I was just coming here to ask you if you’re free tonight. Buffy called me last night said we’re all going to The Bronze. She’s gonna told Faith herself. You wanna come? It’s good, you can rest and relax from your work...for a while.”



“ The Bronze? Why not? What time?” Willow got all too excited. Why? It’s not like she asked me out or anything. Buffy and Faith will go there too. And for heaven’ sake I’ve been to the bronze a hundred times. Jeez, dork much Willow? Why do I get excite if she ASKED ME OUT anyway? Is that normal?



“ About 8pm, let’s say I’ll pick you up?” Why did I say that? Maybe she just wants to meet up there. Who am I to pick her up? For what? ...Oh…damn! Tara cursed.



“ DEAL! “ Willow said without thinking a second. It just slipped out. Tara’s face was happiness mixed with ...well,...more happiness.



“ Right. Deal.” Tara finished with big glad smile which seem like a shine for Willow. The redhead couldn’t really understand what it is about this friend of her. Couldn’t really understand what it is with Tara’s smile that seem to blinded her, everytime.



The blonde girl stood up. “ Well, then, I’ll just go to, ya know, to really finished my painting“ She said that but didn’t really want to go. Something prevent her for leaving. Could it be...my heart? Why am I feeling this? Is this what I suppose to feel? Am I under some spells? The puzzled girl didn’t even know where to put her hands so she doesn’t look so nervous with all the nervousness that started to forming. I just have to go, now it’s awkward to stay because I was just saying that I have to go…Ok, just go,Tara. GO!



Tara gave a last grin and get out of the table.



Willow was getting another feeling. She just got confused. She didn’t want Tara to go. Oh I wish we’d have more time to... But why? She couldn’t understand. This girl was her friend. Why did she feel such a longing for Tara? Is it because I love her so much, as a friend, as loving Tara-friend so much. See? it’s supering normal to love having her stay longer.



Willow opened her mouth as to protest Tara’s leaving. But then the confusing filled her heart. With that, she’s just let Tara walk away.



*****************************************



“ Silent is golden, I have been broken,

My body is a temple, But nothing is simple”



The song burst into Buffy’s ear as she entered the rehearsal room of the Music Department. Faith was there, all wicked and wild as always, playing her favorite guitar. Buffy sat quietly on the sofa. Faith noticed and gave her a wink.



Buffy was enjoying the sight of Faith playing guitar so fascinating and it brought her lost in the melody. But not too long the song ended, she secretly let out a short sigh for didn’t want it to.



As Faith walking to the blonde girl. Buffy could see the line of sweat rolled down along Faith’s long neck. Which is damn sexy! She surprised at her own thought but couldn't tear her eyes away.



The brunette lurked her brows questioningly “ Whatcha staring?”



“ Hmm? “ Buffy finally alerted. “ OH! Nothing, …Hey you’re so cool with all this” She switched her gaze to everywhere but Faith’s face.



“ What! Like you never see me doing this before, B” Faith laughed softly. The brunette grabbed the half-filled bottle of water that placed at the table near the sofa with her left hand and drank in thirst until the water all gone. She is damn thirsty. Buffy thought as she watched the thin line of water that slip out of Faith’s lips which now rolling to her chin. Faith slide the back of left her hand to her month and wipe away the water. …that’s… Buffy was sort of seeing it all in slow motion and it’s giving her strange feeling. The blonde girl shook her head, dashed away all thoughts that was going to appear in her head.



“ So what’s bring you here?” Faith threw the empty bottle to the trash basket. The band members started to pack music equipment and left. Faith waved goodbye at them.



“ Well, see,…I was thinking that we all could go to the Bronze tonight.”



“ No shit! I’m going there too.” Faith exclaimed. Buffy frowned.



“With whom? Well, did you as least expect to tell me, or invited me? Oh? Is it a date? Because if it’s a date then I’ll totally understand. Wait, if it’s a date, why I never know about it?“ Buffy's eyes grew in different expressions as she talked. Is it really a date? Because...Buffy pouted. “Considering I’m your best friend and all ” Well, that’s not really the point...She thought.



Faith laughed loudly. “Now, no making that face“ She paused and said with playful voice. “No date, B. I’d go there because last night I received this phone call from that place’s manager.”



“Yucko! That maneger’s hitting on you? And you said no date!“ Buffy made an ‘eww’ face. Faith rolled her eyes and drew her hand to the way her guitar was resting. The blonde finally got it “ WHAT! DID YOU MEAN?…YOU?!! ” Her eyes widen, her jaw dropped. “You got a gig there?” She almost whispered in unbelieve.



“ Hey, that’s a nice way to call it, B. But we’ll just be there for a few songs.” Faith grinned. Mocking Buffy, whispering as the same tone.



“ Holy god! A few songs?!! That’s a damn good move!!!” Buffy almost shouted, she got up and gave Faith a hug. Squeeze tight with gladness kind of hug. Both laughed happily. For a second, Faith thought in was a perfect moment for...anything.



“ Wicked? ” Faith asked as she releasing her arms from hugging Buffy.



“ Wicked cool. ” Buffy replied with the sweetest smile Faith ever seen on her friend’s face. That was…Well, to think about it, we didn’t spend that much happy time together since we’ve known each other. I spent half of the year dealing with my damn-family-issue- feelings and another half year to regret the first wasted half. I guess I didn’t really have a quality to make the friends happy, smile or laugh much. But now I see she’s really happy for me. Oh...did I just get softy? Oh...no...she makes me go softy? Faith thought drifted away, then back to Buffy because she pouted again.



“ You evil! When did you plan to tell me. I wouldn’t know if I didn’t come here.” Buffy said, lurking her eye brows. Wanting good explanation.



“ Now, do not complained, babe. Because I was about to go telling you and the rest of us to go to there tonight and just let you found out yourself. Surpirse?” Faith shrug her shoulder but inside her mind running heh-heh, BABE?. B, Buffy, Babe...hey that's weird. Okay, not babe-babe. I hope she thinks it’s jokingly-babe. Wait, what do I mean exactly?



“ Oh! Nice. Just unbelievable, Faith! “ Buffy punched Faith’s shoulder lightly.



“ Little mystery couldn’t bite, B “ Faith said grabbed her stuff and motioned Buffy out of the room.





*****************************************



So, as you know, The Bronze is like hottest place around in Sunnydale. Everyone is so going there. Dorks, Popular, Artists, Geeks, etc. All kind of people are here but just don’t really mixed up. Just stayed where they should.



The only thing that can gather all kind people to get together is when the band playing good. People just don’t care anymore, they just want to threw themselves there together and lost with whatever’s on.



Tonight shouldn’t miss that out.



I heard that one of the element are going there too, tonight. The news spread all around quickly that the Wind and her band has a performance around 9pm. Everybody eager to go. Because as I used to say, Faith has a whole LOT of worshipers.



Without much brain anyone would know the other elements would be there too. No doubt.



I’ll be there too. Why not? Almost every student are going there.



Good for me. Time to rest. Or not? The bad thing always comes with beautiful package.



That’s all for now.



Again,...



I’m trying to keep it low profile.



******************

TBC.

******************



Well, any spanking reward? :glasses



*Fuzz*







*******




Hey! You're gonna back off! She said no and that's it. ~ TARA

Edited by: Fuzz WT  at: 9/22/03 2:34 am
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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby the vamp nurd » Thu Sep 18, 2003 4:35 am

Quote:
the vamp nurd : May the force be with her.




Uh huh!



My my aren't you the myserious one???

Sorry I missed church, I was busy becoming a lesbian and worshiping Satan



Open up Pandora's kiss.



Bardlet no #27



the vamp nurd
 


Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby Willowtara19 » Thu Sep 18, 2003 7:02 am

:wave , Fuzz!!



I'm sorry it took me so long to post something for you in here :sob :paranoid I've been a very bad kitten haven't I?



I wanted to tell you how much I loved :read these two last updates of yours and apologize once again for not doing it sooner.



So, you were asking if you earned a spanking reward? I'll tell you, you earned :punish :punish :punish :wink



:pray Update soon, please??? :pray



I promise from now on I won't miss one of your great updates :grin



Willowtara19 :kitty



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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby onyxsundrops » Thu Sep 18, 2003 9:13 am

I just read the whole thing for the first time, and I gotta say...Fantastic story!:) Thanks so much for the update!



Yvonne:peace

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Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby LostWithoutTara » Thu Sep 18, 2003 1:00 pm

Yes, there shall be much spanking! :punish :boot ;)



Great update. The sexual tension between W/T and B/F is building nicely!

Every time you walk away, I pretend that I'm okay

LostWithoutTara
 


Re: The Elements: The Series

Postby littlecrazy80 » Thu Sep 18, 2003 1:17 pm

The story you are setting up here is really interesting. Willow and Tara are already in love, but don´t know it. Their inner babbles are cute. :heart



*lil´c*

Let´s get happy and let´s be gay. germany´s grand prix song



Check this out

littlecrazy80
 


Replies!

Postby Fuzz WT » Tue Sep 23, 2003 3:52 am

I can't help it...I need to replies the feedbacks. I really promise the update before friday!!! Please...forgive me for being slow.



Replies:



the vamp nurd : I'll take that as a compliment :p



Willowtara19 : Thanks for loving my work and Good god! that's a lot of spanking I earned!!! :boot



Yvonne : Thanks so much for reading! Promising update soon!



LostWithoutTara : :eyebrow Another spanking...am I ever gonna sore?



lil´c : Thanks! For W/T unaware feelings, it will kick them right in the heart soon.



Okay! Will be back before friday!



Love the kittens!!!

*Fuzz in a very good mood*





*******




Hey! You're gonna back off! She said no and that's it. ~ TARA

Edited by: Fuzz WT  at: 9/23/03 2:54 am
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