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On a day like today

Postby muFFin1811 » Wed Apr 23, 2003 8:23 am

On a day like today



Author: muFFin1811

Email: muffin1811@hotmail.com

Disclaimer: Buffy, Xander, Willow and Tara don’t belong to me (They belong to Joss). I own all the other students.

Pairing: W/T

Rating: I’m not good at this. So I make it R for upcomming violence.

Feedback: Please.

Note: This is my first fic, but I hope you like it. This is also 4 Jesse, who told me I should try to write something. Keep on smilin’ sweetie. :wink (You'll do great :dance and not look like :banana )



Note 2: Hey I'm just a german girl with so many ideas :lol ...okay okay....only wanted to add that.



Here ya go. Enjoy!







She was running as fast as she could. She didn’t recognize how bad her arms and legs hurt, because of her suitcases. All she wanted to do is getting there in time.

When she reached the track, she sighted the train. Willow was right there in time, to board. She breathed out in relief and tried to find her reserved seat. The train was so cramped; that she bumped into a blonde girl, but Willow didn’t seem to notice. She was in her own little world, so she kept going. When she found her seat, she let her thoughts once more drift to the events of the past few days.

When she told Buffy and the other Scoobies a few days before she had to leave to go to a collage in Washington, her friends were so shocked they could not command on this. But they seemed to understand why Willow had to do this. Buffy wanted her to go to get a good graduation. So they let her go. The friends didn’t share a word of Willow leaving until yesterday. They had to say goodbye.

This was one of the hardest things Willow had ever gotten trough. Xander and Buffy were crying so bad she had to leave. She didn’t want her friends in much pain so she left without another word in the morning. Her parents had driven her to the train station and then gone off to a trip to Germany or was it Hungary. She could not remember, but she didn’t care either.

After a few more thoughts about her friends (she was missing them already) she drifted off to sleep.



Tara arrived in Washington at 6 pm and only wanted to get to her new dorm room to get some sleep. She was so delighted to leave LA and her so called family that she could not sleep at the train. So she had learned the city map of Washington DC by heart.

When she got to the university she had to fill in some papers and got her room. She would have a roommate because all the other rooms for one person where assigned. Tara went to the 4th floor and found room 160 at the end of the hall. She knocked on the door and opened it after getting no response.





TBC (if you want me to...)



All they gave me was this ticket to heaven, a damn ticket to heaven...

Now I'm restless and I'm running from everything, I'm running from everything - 3 Doors Down



muFFin1811
 


Re: On a day like today

Postby snuggle79 » Wed Apr 23, 2003 9:02 am

Hallo Nachbarin! :grin :banana



Guter Anfang. I hope you will continue! I think i have a tiny clue of who are going to become roomates ... :hmm ;)

can't wait for more!

snuggle79 :bigwave



~~~"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."~~~

Edited by: snuggle79 at: 4/23/03 8:02:55 am
snuggle79
 


Re: On a day like today

Postby WillowTarafan98 » Wed Apr 23, 2003 10:13 am

Hey I liked this :read !! Please write more!!!



:glasses ~Stephie~ :glasses

If you woke up breathing, congratulations, you have another chance!

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Re: On a day like today

Postby Drumbly » Wed Apr 23, 2003 10:49 am

:bigwave Hey u big cute thing!!!



i soooo love this fic ... and u wrote the fic for moi?? that's so sweet and cute and ... shall i go on??? hahaha :laugh

it's very sweet!! thank you!! :kiss



Love: Jesse:blush



" Jesse, stop plying with my hair and go do night night!!? " My GF:laugh

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Re: On a day like today

Postby littlecrazy80 » Thu Apr 24, 2003 1:42 pm

I love the start of this fic. Hope to read more soon.



Mach weiter so!



*lil´c*



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Re: On a day like today

Postby Stroke of Luck » Thu Apr 24, 2003 2:42 pm

HEY muFFin:bigwave



I got the time to read your story. And it was such a lovley start:love wonder who that roomate is:hmm Hopefully its a beautiful readhead.



More please:pray



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



There are two kinds of tears, tears for those who leave you, and tears for those you never let go - Gabrielle/The Quest

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: On a day like today

Postby Eelzuhtjuh » Fri Apr 25, 2003 12:36 pm

Hey!

Gutter Anfang!

Wirklich klasse!

ich soll gern mehr lesen



(hoffe meine Deutsch ist ok ;)

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

"Aww, baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I...stop explaining things."-Tara





Amber Online www.amberbenson-online.cjb.net

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Re: On a day like today Chapter 2

Postby muFFin1811 » Fri Apr 25, 2003 4:22 pm

snuggle79:Hallo Nachbarin. You have a clue? I think you are right. Thanx for reading. :banana



WillowTarafan98:Thanx for enjoying my fic. Hope you like the next part. :)



Drumbly:Hey cutie. sure I wrote it 4 you. You don't know how much it means to me, that you love my fanfiction. And hey no thank yous. You know Angel is going to be the roommate. *just kidding* :wink ttyl



littlecrazy80:Here ya go. Hoffe der Teil gefällt dir auch noch.



Stroke of Luck:Hallo Du. Yeah it's a cute readhead. Enjoy.



Eelzuhtjuh:Your german is good. Thanx for the reply.





It's 00:19 am and I'm really tired and ill again. Have fun and tell me, if u liked the 2. chapter. Here you go....;) Yeah, SoL just told me something. If this sound like the movie calles "Anatomie" just ignore that. It will turn out as a different story as that movie...(I hope)



Chapter 2



Tara entered the room and was delighted how beautiful the dorm room looked. There where two big beds, three very large windows and two desks. The colour of the walls was a dark blue, but it looked beautiful, because the windows lightened the room up. Two other doors headed to a bathroom and a large walk able closet.

She began to unpack her things, which were not many or heavy things, when she heard a knock on the door.



Willow walked across campus to get to her dorm. A student named David showed her, which way to go, because she could not find the dorm and she had been straying for like 20 minutes. She carried her two suitcases to the 4th floor and her arms and legs where hurting again.

Why does this damn dorm have no lift? And where is my damn dorm room. I hope I doesn’t get a freak as a roommate. That would be the apex of my day. Why did I leave Sunnydale?

When she reached room 160 she knocked on the door. Someone was calling “Just a moment”, but she opened the door and found the two most amazing things she had ever seen.

The first one was the girl standing right in front of her, but the room was not less beautiful then the sight of this girl, who seemed to be her new roommate, but in another way of course. (J)





“Hi. I’m Willow.” she said.

“I’m T-T-Tara.” Man, why do I have to stutter right now. She must think I’m a dork.

“Hey Tara. You are my new roommate. It’s nice to meet you.” ,Willow said and she liked this girl already. She stutters. That’s so cute! Willow, stop staring at her. She has to think you are a freak.

“Nice, t-t-t-to m-e-e-e-t y-y-o-o-u, to-o. “ Tara stuttered again.

After a few minutes of an awkward silence, Willow entered the dorm room and asked Tara, which bed and desk she could use.

“I didn’t chose one, so you can decide which one you want to take” Tara said, without any stutter this time.

They chatted for a few minutes and then Willow began to unpack her things, too.





On the other side of campus a boy was running for his live. He was haunted by two other people, he didn’t knew. He didn’t know what to do. Nobody heard his screams when the two other people approached. It was so dark outside that he stumbled across a stone and hit the floor with his head. That knocked him out.

When David woke up from his unconsciousness, his head was aching and his arms and legs were tied up. He could not move, but screamed for help in desperation. David was in some kind of operating room. There were no windows and only one door, which was open. He was lying on a operating table and next to him was an extra board with scalpels and things like that. Then he heard footsteps coming closer and he tried to scream louder. Nobody heard his cries.

Two men appeared at the door. They approached near him and one of them grabbed a scalpel. He cut the upper part of David’s body open. David screamed in pain. It felt like a thousand razors where flowing through his veins, but there was no chance for him to pass out. The other man made the next step. He peeled the skin off and David passed out. But before this deliverance, he felt like someone cut his muscles and veins by sandpaper. Death came as a release, but the two men were not finished yet. They had a lot of work to do.



TBC...

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _



All they gave me was this ticket to heaven, a damn ticket to heaven...

Now I'm restless and I'm running from everything, I'm running from everything - 3 Doors Down



Edited by: muFFin1811 at: 4/25/03 3:36:34 pm
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Re: On a day like today Chapter 2

Postby Stroke of Luck » Fri Apr 25, 2003 4:35 pm

Hi there again :bigwave



Ahhh great its the readhead:bounce :bounce ´



Hmm I am curious why that two men killed this poor guy!!!:hmm



I see a lot of action, blood and fear:shock



More I want to :read more. So use both hands and of course your brain:wink



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



There are two kinds of tears, tears for those who leave you, and tears for those you never let go - Gabrielle/The Quest

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: On a day like today Chapter 2

Postby Eelzuhtjuh » Sat Apr 26, 2003 3:07 am

Excellent update!

YAY!



i want to read more already.



I wonder what those guys were doing to that boy, well not exactly what that was kinda obvious but WHY

OMG skin peeling yuk



Hope there is an update soon, I'd love to see some smoochies

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

"Aww, baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I...stop explaining things."-Tara





Amber Online www.amberbenson-online.cjb.net

Eelzuhtjuh
 


Re: On a day like today Chapter 2

Postby Bubblecath » Sat Apr 26, 2003 7:56 am

Hey there MuFFin! :wave

i Just stumbled on your Fic and boy am i glad! I love fics where willow and Tara have just met- its so sweet! :heart

Cool Update!

And Ickky skin peeling - that always leads to interesting things!

hope you update soon :pray ! and i second Eelzuhtjuh's smoochie request! :bigkiss

catherine

xxx

Bubblecath
 


Re: On a day like today Chapter 2

Postby snuggle79 » Sat Apr 26, 2003 8:17 am

hey there,



great update! Our girls first meeting was really cute. :D

And they like each other already... :bounce

geez, why did that guys kill David? Kinda reminded me of the gentlemen... :shock

can't wait for more!

snuggle79 :smug

~~~"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."~~~

snuggle79
 


Re: On a day like today Chapter 2

Postby EffieBlue » Sat Apr 26, 2003 11:37 am

HI



It's great!



I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.



soon I hope.



:read <---- Me reading your story instead of writing...





Jill

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Re: On a day like today Chapter 2

Postby Drumbly » Sun Apr 27, 2003 10:47 am

:dance *WoooooooooooooooooHooooooooooooooo*:dance



wow what a update!! i really loved it!!



i can't wait for the next part!!



My love for you! :heart :kiss



Jesse:blush :wave



" Jesse, stop playing with my hair and go do night night " My GF:laugh

Drumbly
 


Re: On a day like today Chapter 2

Postby littlecrazy80 » Sun Apr 27, 2003 11:26 am

Hey! Great update! :bounce

This scene kinda reminded me of the things I heard about the movie "Anatomie". I´m so glad, that I´ve never watched it.

I hope for another update.



*lil´c*





Unter den Blinden ist der Einäugige König.



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Re: On a day like today Chapter 3

Postby muFFin1811 » Tue Apr 29, 2003 8:34 am

Stroke of Luck: Hey there. It was hard to use my brain :D . You wanna know why they killed him? Keep reading... :)



Eelzuhtjuh: Thanx for enjoying my fic. Hope like the new update.



Bubblecath:Hey. Yeah I like these storys where they just met most, 2. Have fun with the update.



snuggle79:Yeah, kinda reminds me of the gentlemen now, too. Ick....U don't have to wait any longer. ;)



EffieBlue:Thanx 4 reading. Could not update sooner. I am sorry. :)



Drumbly: *woo and hoo* *dancing the snoopy dance* I am so glad u liked it. Hope you like the next part, too. Keep on smilin' ;)



littlecrazy80:I love that movie, but at some szenes i was like..."Argh"....but I didn't want it to sound like that. The next updates will show that, I hope.



Guys when I wrote this update it was 00:31 am (Tuesday) and I was up for 21 hours:rolleyes , but I hope there are not too many mistakes. Enjoy.





Chapter 3



It was 8 am when Willow woke up. The sun was shining and it seemed to be a lovely day. She was in no hurry. Her classes would start net week on Monday and she didn’t want to stand up, yet. That’s when she remembered she shared a room with a blonde goddess, who was still fast asleep. She also didn’t want to wake Tara, so she just watched her sleeping.

She looks so peaceful and relaxed, like there is no bad in this world. I wonder if she is dreaming and what would she dream of?

Tara lay on her left side and Willow felt like she could watch her for the rest of her life. When Willow once more wondered how she could be so lucky to have her as her roomy, Tara began to stir. Willow didn’t know what to do, so she acted like she was fast asleep. She did a good job.

The first two things Tara recognized were the beautiful sun shining and the birds singing. The other thing was Willow being still “asleep”. Just as Tara wanted to take her eyes off the beautiful redhead Willow opened her eyes and looked in the most beautiful blue eyes she had ever seen. Tara thought the same thing about Willows emerald green eyes.

How can anyone’s eyes be so beautiful?

They smiled at each other and Tara stoop up.

“G-g-g-ood m-m-o-o-rning” she said and coursed herself once more for stuttering.

“Hey there” Willow said “How did you sleep?”

“F-F-Fine, thanx”, was the last thing Tara said before escaping for the bathroom.



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After getting a shower and a cup of coffee for breakfast, Tara wanted to explore campus a little. Getting the area to know a little better. That was when she saw no other students or people were on campus. She didn’t think of any bad, but then suddenly she noticed a green park behind the university buildings.

That is just what I need a long walk in a green park on a sunny day with no other people and students around.

Tara walked for about 30 minutes and then she noticed a little river near this park, but something was not alright. Everything seemed to be alright. Birds singing, green leaves on the trees and the sun was shining, but Tara still had this feeling something bad would happen.

She kept on walking until she arrived at the small river. When she saw what was lying in front of her she began running back to her dorm room.



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Willow sat at her desk and was typing an email to Buffy and Xander. She missed them already, but one day she would go back to Sunnydale. Her fingers were aching, because she erased the lines she wrote a few times. She didn’t know what to write. Maybe she wanted it to bad. She began writing again and a few minutes later she heard someone sobbing and rushing across the hall. She opened the door to see Tara in front sobbing and shocked. She asked what happened, but when getting no answer, she embraced Tara. Tara became more and more relaxed and after 10 minutes she was not sobbing anymore.

Willow offered her a chair and asked again what happened. She was very concerned. Tara tried to tell her what happened, but her stutter was so bad this time, she gave up trying.

After relaxing a little more Tara told Willow the things she had seen. She was sobbing and stuttering again.

“ W -when I f-f-f-found this p-p-ark-k-k b-b-ehi-i-nd the university b-b-b-uilding I –I-I wanted t-t-to explore-e it-t a l-l-little, but then I-I got this bad f-f-f-feeling. S-s-s-omething was not a-a-lright. I-I-I kept walkin-n-n-g ‘till I f-f-found t-this little r-r-river. I st-t-topped and t-t-hen I saw h-h-him.” She broke up. She was too shocked to tell Willow the whole story. The images of the dead body lying in the river and there was no skin. It was peeled of.

“You saw what? Tara please tell me.” Willow asked concerned.

“I saw a d-d-dead guy and his s-s-skin was p-p-peeled off. I-it was a-awful and

d-d-disgusting.” Tara stuttered.

“Oh my goddess. I’m so sorry Tara, but we have to call the police. Okay?” she asked and felt sorry for this guy and Tara.

“Y-y-eah. O-o-kay” she said and saw Willow leaving the dorm room to call the police.



TBC...



*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*_*

All they gave me was this ticket to heaven, a damn ticket to heaven...

Now I'm restless and I'm running from everything, I'm running from everything - 3 Doors Down



muFFin1811
 


Re: On a day like today Chapter 3

Postby barnabasvamp » Tue Apr 29, 2003 8:53 am

Oh my, all the possibilities of what is to come!



Great start, and Willow in college away from Sunnydale, interesting. :hmm



BV

"When choosing between two evils, I always like to take the one I've never tried before"-Mae West

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Re: On a day like today Chapter 3

Postby littlecrazy80 » Tue Apr 29, 2003 1:59 pm

I like this story. It´s really interesting.

I hope you´ll update soon.



*lil´c*



Unter den Blinden ist der Einäugige König.



Check this out

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Re: On a day like today Chapter 3

Postby Stroke of Luck » Tue Apr 29, 2003 2:27 pm

Hey Muffin:bow



Okay now I know what happend to that poor guy but damn why does Tara found him:sob She would never sleep well again, because of that picture.



But I am curious why do they took his skin and throw his body away. Okay this is different to that movie "Anatomie"



But it´s really interesting. Wanna :read more! So go on and type more:wink



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



There are two kinds of tears, tears for those who leave you, and tears for those you never let go - Gabrielle/The Quest

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: On a day like today Chapter 3

Postby Guinevere » Tue Apr 29, 2003 9:26 pm

Good idea to send them off to work togeth outside of sunnydale! I am enjoying this fic. Keep Going!



Guinevere
 


Re: On a day like today Chapter 3

Postby the vamp nurd » Wed Apr 30, 2003 4:36 am

hmmm blood gore and W/T.



I like it. :read .



'Sometimes I am strange.'

Willow (with pointy ears): "NO kissing and gay love?!!!! That's illogical!" The Sci-Fi Bard W/T trekkie ramblings.



Bardlet no #27



"Why Mother because I won't be baking cookies for the mental patients at the county Hospital?" Alex It's In The Water

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Re: On a day like today Chapter 3

Postby Drumbly » Wed Apr 30, 2003 6:42 am

:applause hey there cute stuff!!



this is me liking the update!! i so love it...



hmmm :hmm a dead guy huh??

can't wait for more!



Love: Jesse:blush :wave



" Jesse, stop playing with my hair and go do night night!!? " My GF:laugh

Drumbly
 


Re: On a day like today Chapter 3

Postby Bubblecath » Wed Apr 30, 2003 9:46 am

yay an update :bounce :applause

Yipes! poor Tara finding that dead skinless type guy!

whats gonna happen next?? now i need more! :pray great update!

waiting patiently exactly right here!!:grin

catherine

xxx

Bubblecath
 


Re: On a day like today Chapter 4

Postby muFFin1811 » Thu May 01, 2003 10:34 am

barnabasvamp: Many possibilities. Hope you like this one. :peace



littlecrazy80: Here you go. Hope this is soon enough. :D



Sroke of Luck: Oh she will sleep again. I said it. Different. Enjoy! :wink



Guievere: Here is the update. Hope you enjoy it! :pray



the vamp nurd: There will be more blood, I think. :hmm



Drumbly: Hey you are the cute stuff here. Thanx again for the update. :blush <--- that is me 10 hours after reading that. Thanx. :kiss You don't have to wait. Hope you like. :pray



Bubblecath: Yeah, I broke myself by writing that. I wanted Willow to find him, but I choose Tara. I dunno why. :hmm :wink



Okay, thanx for reading again. I really hope you like the next part. Here ya go!



Chapter 4



Tara, who was now alone at the dorm room, was sitting on her bed sobbing and shaking. She still had the image of the dead guy in her had. With the blood everywhere and the skin being peeled off. It was just disgusting and she had the feeling to have to throw up, but she didn’t. Tara was still in her own world thinking about that poor guy, when Willow entered the room with a worried expression on her face. She sat down on the edge of Taras bed and asked if there was anything she could do to make her feel better. Tara didn’t reply the question so Willow sat next to her and embraced her like she could take away the memories with that.

A few minutes later the sobbing and shaking Tara relaxed and her breathing became regular again. She was asleep in Willows arms, and she would not go anywhere.



Tara began to stir and Willow was still holding her. A smile was on Taras face when she finally woke up.

“Hey there. Had a nice nap?” Willow asked gently.

“Y-e-a-h t-thanx.” She stuttered.

“No need to thank me. But I have to tell you the police wants to interview tomorrow.” Willow replied as soft as possible.

“I-I d-don’t w-w-a-n-t t-to.” She stuttered and had this bad feeling in her stomach again.

“Tara, you have to. I know you don’t want to, but maybe I could go with you. Support you? Only if you want me to, of course” Willow babbled.

“T-t-h-at w-w-ould b-be gr-e-e-a-t.” She said now dancing a happy dance inside.

“Okay, they want us to be there at 11 am. Is that okay with you?”

“S-s-ure.” Tara said stuttering, but still not convinced that it would be a nice thing to go there.



Tara didn’t sleep much that night. She was so scared of the police to find out her little secret, but she was more frightened of Willows reaction, if she would find out. She thought about this the whole time, when they walked to the police station. She was terrified and didn’t know what to do or say to Willow, who was walking next to her. She knew that Willow was worrying about her, but she was trying to hide her feelings.

After a walk to the police station, that took about 20 minutes, they entered the station and Willow asked Tara for the 10th time this day, if she was alright. She didn’t answer like the other 9 times, and Willow cursed herself once more for asking that question over and over again.

A deputy noticed them and introduced himself as Julian Robbins . The girls told them, officer Michael Martins wanted to interview Tara about the incident yesterday.

“Okay, Miss Maclay would you please come with me? Miss Rosenberg, you have to wait here.” The policeman told them.

“Oh no, I will join the interview and make sure she is okay with the questions. Try to detain me, if you want.” Willow snapped.

“Okay okay, but if you don’t behave yourself I will kick you out of here. You get it?” asked Mr. Robbins.

“Whatever” Willow answered. She didn’t like this guy. He was so harshly.



He guided the way to the office, where Mr. Martins would interview Tara. Willow hoped he would be kindlier than the deputy. She would protect Tara. Come hell or high water.

Why am I thinking this way. Am I attracted to her? No. I am straight, ain’t I? This is giving me a headache. Stop thinking. See they are waiting for you to enter the office.



They entered the office and Michael Martins and he introduced himself. He seemed to be a nice man, but then he asked Tara harshly what happened and why it took her so long to call the police.

“Hey. She found that guy. It was a big shock. I don’t think you noticed. His skin was peeled off.” Willow shouted at the policeman.

“It’s okay Willow. I found him around 10am and it was just disgusting. I didn’t call, because I was in shock. So Willow called you” Tara didn’t stutter this time. It was very hard not to stutter, but she didn’t want Mr. Martins to be curious, why she was stuttering. There is always a reason for stuttering that bad. Tara looked at Willow and saw a surprised face. She always stuttered when Willow was around, but her eyes pleaded not to say anything. So Willow kept her mouth shut.

“Did you notice anything in particular?” he asked gentle this time.

“No, I didn’t see anyone or anything.” Tara would not tell him about the bad feeling she had before finding the dead guy lying in the river.

“Where were you 2 days ago at 9 pm?” the officer asked still not convinced the girl in front of him didn’t have anything to do with the murder.

“I was at my dorm room. Willow was there, too. Why do you ask? Oh no. You suspect me as a murderer?” Tara asked a little scared, but still not stuttering.

“I do. You found him and nobody was around. Maybe that girl is your accomplice.” He told her pointing a Willow.

Now Willow and Tara were in rage.

“We are leaving” They said in union and left the police station.



TBC...



Again. Thanx for reading. Please leave feedack. :whistle





All they gave me was this ticket to heaven, a damn ticket to heaven...

Now I'm restless and I'm running from everything, I'm running from everything - 3 Doors Down



Edited by: muFFin1811 at: 5/1/03 9:39:05 am
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Re: On a day like today Chapter 4

Postby barnabasvamp » Thu May 01, 2003 11:00 am

Hmm, just leave us wondering as to what Tara's secret is...



Dumb cop, I don't blame them for leaving!

BV

"When choosing between two evils, I always like to take the one I've never tried before"-Mae West

barnabasvamp
 


Re: On a day like today Chapter 4

Postby EffieBlue » Thu May 01, 2003 11:44 am

Hey.





Excellent update.



Looking forward to the next bit. I'm sure the writers block will vanish!





Jill





Perfect teeth give me nightmare... -My Youngest.

EffieBlue
 


Re: On a day like today Chapter 4

Postby littlecrazy80 » Thu May 01, 2003 2:59 pm

Great update!

Willow should kick the ass of this stupid cop! And what is Tara´s secret?



*lil´c*

Unter den Blinden ist der Einäugige König.



Check this out

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Re: On a day like today Chapter 4

Postby Eelzuhtjuh » Fri May 02, 2003 4:55 am

Love the update!

And I can kill those olice guys for being so mean to Tara

and I don't think Tara has a secret I guess she just didn't want to stutter because in that case she looked nervous to the police and then they would suspect something's wrong with her

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

"Aww, baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I...stop explaining things."-Tara





Amber Online www.amberbenson-online.cjb.net

Eelzuhtjuh
 


Re: On a day like today Chapter 4

Postby snuggle79 » Fri May 02, 2003 7:35 am

Geez, those police guys were really stupid. and rude much..

I'm really curious about that dead guy and Tara's secret!!

Great update!! :applause

snuggle79 :wave

~~~"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."~~~

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Re: On a day like today Chapter 4

Postby Bubblecath » Fri May 02, 2003 8:11 am

Hey! great update

hmm- so what is Taras secret?? :hmm interesting!

damn police officers! :punch

waiting patiently for your next update!

catherine

xxx

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