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Interactive smut

Postby Killin Joke » Mon May 27, 2002 8:01 pm

Ok, last one, I promise... On the former spoilerboard, someone (Robin ?) introduced a thread, which introduced the preface to a story (well, not much going on, happening really, plenty of girl-on-girl action, though :evil ) Anyway, anyone could join in and continue it. It was meant as a sort of comforting counter-weight to all the bad spoilers, news back then. I thought it worked out kinda well (the tale, not the 6th season ending) and it such a shame to let it wither and die (with a nickname like that, I guess I truly am a threadkiller), so maybe you friendly folk at Pens want to contribute something and expand the thing. My last entry was (location: bathroom). Oeh, I should probably rate this... Uhm, PG... I don't know the American rate-system... Some help required ! Ah well, it's pretty playful...

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While Willow’s fingertips nuzzled the roots of Tara’s hair at the base of her neck, their lips brushed and played with each other. The blonde softly stroke the sides of Will’s back. With her free hand Willow fidgeted with her lover’s zipper, her legs tightly wrapped around one of Tara’s. There didn’t seem to be much movement in the damn thing, so the redhead’s mouth removed itself, and as their cheeks gently caressed one another, Will whispered into her girlfriend’s ear: “I hate your jeans...”

Tara’s face tensed. Willow immediately picked up on it and could see the girl’s typical worrying frown on her forehead.

“You think it makes me look fat ?” Tara asked a bit insecure. Her hands had come to a standstill.

“Oh... Sweetheart, no...” Will tenderly squeezed her shoulder. “Of course not.” She traced the wrinkle of worry with her thumb as to wipe it away. “They fit perfectly, and I love the way they hug your luscious legs...” Willow stroke Tara’s leg - the one not clutched between her own - for emphasis. “And how they linger around your waist, at just the right height...” Will’s hand moved towards her hip. “I mean, not slutty Britney Spears low, but low enough to reveal that tremendous Tara tummy...” Willow tickled her belly.

“My zipper’s stuck again, right.” Tara grinned all-knowingly at her babbling beloved.

“It’s evil... It won’t let me in...” Willow pouted, which caused Tara to chuckle.

“I am so proud of you...” Her soulmate beamed, tucking a strand of red hair behind Will’s ear.

“Huh ?” Now it was Willow’s turn to frown.

“Normally you would have... you could have used magic, but you didn’t...” Tara elaborated, cupping her cheek.

“Where’s the sexiness in that ? I want to feel every inch of your silky skin... I need to explore that myself...” Will leaned into Tara’s touch and kissed her hand.

“Wow...” Tara said silently, not for long though. “Here, let me try.” With one gracious move she unzipped her pants.

“How did you do that ?” Willow was in awe.

“There’s a trick to it...” Tara smiled mischievously.

“It’s a kind of magic, alright...” Willow hungrily attacked her neck, but slowed down as she placed a sweet trail of butterfly kisses, from her throat, between her breast, over her stomach, till she stopped above the rim of her now visible underwear. Tara obviously relished in it, her fingers entwining in Will’s locks, her other hand rubbing her shoulderblade.

Suddenly Willow began to laugh.

“Now what ?” Tara looked at her girl.

“Pink...” Willow chortled. “Gee, Tara, I realize we’re out of the closet and all, but I didn’t know you were going to throw yourself actively into battle for the Pink Movement. What’s next ? Rainbow coloured bra’s ?”

“Yeah, I’ve been meaning to talk to you about that... Promise me you won’t get mad...” Tara bit her lip nervously.

“Honey, how can I ever get angry at you again, after the way I behaved in the past...” Willow turned serious, holding Tara’s chin between her fingers.

“Well, I kinda borrowed your favourite red top, without asking... I was going to wash it and iron it and stuff, but things worked out differently... It sorta ended up between my whites, the colour rubbed off, and... uhm... it shrunk.”

Willow laughed out loud now, kissing Tara’s forehead. “Sweetie, we’ll buy another one, and give my old one to Miss Kitty or something...” Her fingers wandered over Tara’s face. “You scared me there for a second: maybe it was a gift from some radical lesbian who managed to seduice you...” Will joked.

“Hey !” Tara slapped Willow’s tooshie, which caused her to fall flat on top of her. “Ok, I showed you mine, you show me yours...” Tara turned the tables and literally rolled them around. “Oeh, buttons...” She flicked at them, meanwhile stradling Will. Black panties started to show. “Goin’ dark on me, Will ?” She smirked at her fellow wiccan.

“Yep, I thought it was my turn to play the bad witch...” Willow smiled wickedly, flinging her arms around Tara’s neck.

“Gal, you’ve been watching way too many devious Xena eps...” Tara fondled Will’s arms.

“Guilty as charged and you know what the best part is...” Willow drew the love of her life towards her.

“No... but I’m sure you’re going to tell me...” Tara gave her a kiss, filled with passion.

“That I have a cute blonde sidekick too... for real... for sure...” Will flattered her head against Tara’s.

“Side... I resent that... Who’s on top ?” Tara objected, but snuggled closer nonetheless.

“Though I’d really appreciate it if you could help me out of these knickers, coz they’re killing me.”

Willow gave her a huge smile. “Your wish is my command.” They twisted around once more, Will got up and tenderly slid her naked foot over Tara’s body, as she tugged at the sleeves of her jeans.

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This was my very first attempt at W/T-smut... (Is that what they call it these days ? Sorry, used to terms like subtext: I should move on up and expand my vocabulary, he, he) So, please be gentle. Furthermore, I didn't had a lot of time to type it, since I was supposed to be studying. It may not read as smooth as it could have been. Oh, and I apologize for the Xena reference: Old habits die hard "Next, please..."


"In the half-tone light of a young morning she sighs and shifts on the pillow. And across her face dancing, the first shadows fly to kiss the Pussy Willow." (Jethro Tull)

Killin Joke
 


Re: Interactive smut

Postby BabyJune » Mon May 27, 2002 9:11 pm

As an american, I can tell you that that's definetely not PG. Try R.

***"Now whatever will become of me? Elegant waste and chivalry."

BabyJune
 


Re: Interactive smut

Postby Bagheera » Mon May 27, 2002 9:47 pm

If that was on Channel 4 (UK), PG would be about right.



;)

"Wiilow and Tara keep kissing. It is intense, it is passionate, and it is, above all else, love. Truly and forever."
"Entropy" shooting script

Bagheera
 


Re: Interactive smut

Postby Killin Joke » Tue May 28, 2002 1:17 pm

/chortle/ And what are PG and R the abbreviations of, if I may ask ? Anyway, it was the very first time I ever wrote something like that (going that far) Is it any good ? Or should I stick to the innocent stuff, he, he...


"In the half-tone light of a young morning she sighs and shifts on the pillow. And across her face dancing, the first shadows fly to kiss the Pussy Willow." (Jethro Tull)

Killin Joke
 


Re: Interactive smut

Postby shootingstar » Tue May 28, 2002 1:39 pm

Hey



That was great, not only was it sweet and pretty darn hot but it was funny to! Loved the whole rainbow-coloured-bra bit!



And I gotta agree with you Killin Joke I find the whole rating thing difficult 'cos I don't have a clue about American ratings. No matter how many times I'm told I never remember, I can be dense like that sometimes.



Bagheera: Lol, definately agree with you there.



Luv Star

x

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'I know what it's like to want to die. How it hurts to smile. How you try to fit in but you can't. How you hurt yourself on the outside to kill the thing on the outside'
-Girl, Interrupted.

shootingstar
 


Ratings... what they mean

Postby DarkWiccan » Tue May 28, 2002 1:41 pm

And why do we care? (the latter is sucha good question...)



anyhoo.. here's the breakdown for all you lovely foreigners...



G = Kid stuff.



PG = Parental Guidance suggested



PG13 = Parental Guidance, not suitable for anyone 13 and under without an adult present (when going to the cinema)



R = Restricted. Not suitable for anyone under 17 unless accompanied by an adult (also when going to the cinema)



NC-17 = Absolutely no one under 17 should view, or read or whatever...





Well, there it is in all it's puritanical, stuffed-shirt glory



Cheers

DarkWiccan



DarkWiccan
 


Re: Ratings... what they mean

Postby snuggle79 » Tue May 28, 2002 3:24 pm

great story and sooo sweet! :D I really liked it! Want some more!!!

Oh baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I ... stop explaining things.

Hi, um Tara..how are you? well...I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time...for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love? oh and btw, Joss, you can kiss my pissed ass

snuggle79
 


Re: Ratings... what they mean

Postby Killin Joke » Tue May 28, 2002 3:52 pm

Oeh, positive feedback ! :) Keep it coming, guys: I can use every sweet last bit, after screwing up one third of my exam, due to a terrible throbbing headache today.



Thanks, star, for thinking I found a good mix, despite the tricky genre maybe. I just love W/T but I've never written for them before, only some Xena subtext, but it's not the same, since I didn't go all the way. I just wondered if I could portray the essence of their relationship, and apparently I'm not that off... Was a tinge worried about the bra-bit to tell you the truth. I mean, taking supposed symbols and stereotypes and use 'm in a humourous context... I'm always scared I'm gonna offend someone, but I hoped no one has anything against a good dosis of self-irony here. Respect. BTW, love your Girl interrupted-quote !



LOL, DarkWiccan. Yeah, personally I don't care much about so-called ratings either, but I don't wanna get kicked of this board, for posting something without a proper warning. Thanks to you, I finally get those lines from Scary movie. PG13...



Thank you too, snuggle79. I just started my exam-run, but knowing me, inspiration always comes when you don't have the time to type it down (and do it anyway of course: who can resist muses like this ?), so maybe I'll come up with something after all. Otherwise, all the thrown off stress is gonna transform in smut during the holidays. ;)


"In the half-tone light of a young morning she sighs and shifts on the pillow. And across her face dancing, the first shadows fly to kiss the Pussy Willow." (Jethro Tull)

Killin Joke
 


Re: Ratings... what they mean

Postby Vampire Willow » Mon Jun 03, 2002 6:55 pm

I loved this! If I wasn't too embarresed I would write the continuence. I hope that somebody has the guts too. I want to see where this story goes! PLEEESSSSEEE KITTENS!!! FOR ME?



~Willow :evil

"I'm so evil and skanky and I think I'm kinda gay." - Willow, in Doppelgangland

Vampire Willow
 


Re: Ratings... what they mean

Postby Killin Joke » Sun Jun 09, 2002 5:18 pm

/chuckle/ Glad you loved it, VampWill :) I'm not too experienced myself in the hardcore smut area (always stayed in a teasing Xena subtexty environment) Trying to catch up however by reading some of Ruth's fic, who strikes me as the Melissa Good of W/T FF Anyway, I already got a new idea and as soon as my exams end, my laptop will be spinning like a content kitten ;)


"In the half-tone light of a young morning she sighs and shifts on the pillow. And across her face dancing, the first shadows fly to kiss the Pussy Willow." (Jethro Tull)

Killin Joke
 


Re: Ratings... what they mean

Postby tommo » Sun Jun 09, 2002 5:46 pm

Melissa...who?



:lol



Apologies. You're not the first person to say that though, and probably won't be the last. I'm flattered, thank you. But I suspect it's a favorable comparison of which I'm not deserving. After all, I don't hear my phone ringing with Joss on the other end begging me to write an episode.



Wha...what's that? He can't get through because I'm online? Ooooh...silly me. Heh. ;)


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Squish. Squish. Squish.

tommo
 


Re: Ratings... what they mean

Postby Killin Joke » Sun Jun 09, 2002 6:01 pm

LOL Hey, don't apologize ;) Sorry... If you were a newbie in the Xenaverse: you know, innocent and naieve, in search of you very first fanfic, Missy was the real mean deal, the name that always came up. Resistance is futile, he, he. Could just be me (apparently not, since the analogy has been made already) that you kinda rule the queendom of smut (as you call it) around here. Since Whedon seems to be stealing so much from Tapbert, I wouldn't be surprised if he wants to reel in a fanfic writer in the last season to overcompensate for the previous lame season... I'd start thinking about opening a seperate phoneline, hon ;)


"In the half-tone light of a young morning she sighs and shifts on the pillow. And across her face dancing, the first shadows fly to kiss the Pussy Willow." (Jethro Tull)

Killin Joke
 


Re: Ratings... what they mean

Postby hellmouthhottie20 » Mon Jun 10, 2002 11:00 am

Killin Joke that was great, you have to keep going and do some more.



I get confused with ratings as well.



Bagheera - lol, channel four is kinda cool with there ratings, not like the beeb!!!



Tommo = smut goddess :grin

So what if my grades are lousy, you always said its not what you know its who you know.

hellmouthhottie20
 


Re: Ratings... what they mean

Postby Killin Joke » Mon Jun 10, 2002 1:42 pm

:) Why thank you, hellmouthhottie20 (wicked nickname ! ;) ) I could really use some positive feedback today. Just what I needed.



I'm writing this piece for university (deadline's due today, but I hope my professor won't mind finding it in his mailbox tomorrow) Anyway, it's for this workcollege I took "Literature as ally ? Homosexuality in Dutch literature." Cool, you say... Yeah well, it was only the male gay kinda type, but damn me if I don't mention Sappho somewhere. :evil



Luckily people were so friendly around here to explain the ratings system to me (found out it's in the PENS FAQ too /slaps head/)



Thanks again for urging me to continue. I'll never be able to get to the Smut Goddess's level of gorgeous graphicness, but that's ok. Heh.



BTW, love your sig line






"In the half-tone light of a young morning she sighs and shifts on the pillow. And across her face dancing, the first shadows fly to kiss the Pussy Willow." (Jethro Tull)

Killin Joke
 


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