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Poetry by aladdin

Postby aladdin » Thu Mar 28, 2002 9:49 am

The "almost kissing" scene in Tabula Rasa inspired me in part for this poem. I'm a beginner so tell me if I suck..just please give me some proper reasons, OK?

Close



Your breath is tickling my neck

and your body, laying on mine

soothing me with its weight.

Your eyes are so stormy and green. And mine.

And you look at me like

it is the first time.

I brush away the hair,

curling on your forehead

like a curtain of silk.

Right then, I knew I couldn't be without you

and that I'd worship you forever.

No thinking, no speaking

just this feeling of safety,

of being at home when in your arms.

Your lips move, they smile.

Green looks at me with such joy.And fear.

Why fear?

And we just lay there and it's enough.

We both know that we

have all the time this world gives us.

Just close. So close.



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The shade of your voice (it's a working title, I'm searching for a better one)



The shade of your voice

when we just made love

is beyond words for me.

Held and reflected by you.



The shade of your voice

after hours of laughter.

I fall in love, over and over again

every night, every day, always.

Words that once said it all.



The shade of your voice before danger arrives.

So honest, brave and scared.

Who will protect you now?

And me.



It's losing it's beauty, this world

if I can't share it with you.

At the end, you didn't even have words.

Your eyes cursed me, still, loved me.



Every morning after dawn

and shortly before sunset

I miss you most.

Silence surrounds me.



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Endnote: Baroque binary forms inspired me immensely.



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Set somewhere in Season Four. And again, looking for a better title.



Trust



You make a

quick touch of hands,

a brief brush on my forearm

so much more important

so much more real

than two bodies

pounding against each other in sweat.



I never knew

I could look forward to your

smile a whole day.

Daydreaming about this little angle

on your upper lip

that makes me shiver.

We can talk and our souls are touching,

more that anything else,

we have time.



It’s too early.

We can’t admit, not yet,

first to ourselves.

Still, I know where to surrender,

the sweetest of defeats.

My home is wherever your head rests,

my heart will stay with you,

no matter where you turn.

Will you ever know?

I feel you, I always will.

It’s trust. It’s eternal.



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Paralyzed



Webs by red spiders of pain,

spun inescapable

threaten to suffocate me casually



Long hairy legs of fear

all over my skin, sucking me out

three miles above the ground



Soaked feelers rejoice over

making me cry soundlessly

savoring the sweetness of my panic.



While you stand outside, waiting?,

I hear a pencil scratching paper

a big field of sunflowers



When I'm pleading for you help, inwardly

she's standing there, considering to pretend

Her lips tense



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aladdin
 

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