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Re: One faaaast updater

Postby Shandem » Wed Jan 12, 2005 3:00 pm

OOOH!! i love these stories with twisty plots and romance. This just gets better and better....and you update so darn fast. i bet when i get up tomorrow morning there will be another one. pweeze:aww



i loved it when the girls woke up and they were like was it a dream, and they remember what happened. It's all one big fairytale. Great work!:clap

Willow: I was trying to program in some new puns, and I kind of ended up with word salad.

Edited by: Shandem at: 1/12/05 2:01 pm
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Re: One faaaast updater

Postby watersong84 » Wed Jan 12, 2005 5:57 pm

Oh man, this is getting serious! :spin I love it!

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Re: One faaaast updater

Postby xonethousandtears08x » Wed Jan 12, 2005 8:40 pm

Alright, lets get down to business..this is an awesome story!:party

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Re: One faaaast updater

Postby Artemis » Thu Jan 13, 2005 8:59 am

Hi - I just caught up all in one go. Wow! I love Willow the knight in armour (Sir Willow? :D ), and likewise Tara - no armour, but certainly a damsel who's not likely to be in distress easily. They way they were initially baiting each other was a wonderful way to start, it grabbed my attention right away, and then everything else - wow. The romance, that kiss :drool , the politics, the oncoming war and Willow and Tara's resolve to stop it somehow... I can't wait to find out what happens next. Willow and Tara are such interesting characters too - quite true to the natures of Willow and Tara, but coloured by this version of their lives in such interesting and complex ways.



Oh, and on a completely un-intellectual note - Willow smacked Donnie in the face, yay! :bounce



I'd be very grateful if you'd allow me to host this story on Through the Looking-glass ( alia.customer.netspace.net.au/glass.htm ). You can email me at alia@netspace.net.au, or if you'd rather not use an email address, just let me know if it's okay here. Pretty please? :)



Thanks for the story so far, and I'll be eagerly awaiting the next update.

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Artemis
 


Re: One faaaast updater

Postby Truck driving magic mama » Thu Jan 13, 2005 9:11 am

Woohoo!! I jsut love this fic...



I love how there's an analogy between the two levels, or circles.. First there's Willow and Tara's level. That's where things develope in a positive way, and their relationship blossoms. On the other level- the general one, and things just seem to get worse. I also loved how you desribes it so well.. Like once you're in a certain situation, you can't look of the other side as "enemies", because the person you love is there.. And how love changes things. And the way they both thought of each other is very true- the way those things linger in you mood and all that.. It's very pretty.



So, anyway- it was a great update - can't wait for more!

[and the ride home, was kinda funny, reminded a date].



Melissa



I am the knowledge which you cannot conceive

The fire running through you bones

Truck driving magic mama
 


Re: Chapter 8

Postby hidden watson » Thu Jan 13, 2005 9:33 am

I love the irony of their situation -- their countries initially friends then a battle that is brewing over something fairly minor (as far as reasons for going to war with another country is concerned) which is rapidly deteriorating. On the other hand the friendship the girls have is fast turning into something so much more serious.



I have an image of them kissing passionately in the middle of a battlefield, while other knights fight and fall, there they are, oblivious. It's a great image, but one I hope that they can stop. They must find a way to stop this battle, please!

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quiet thoughts

hidden watson
 


Really

Postby silentinformer » Thu Jan 13, 2005 12:22 pm

So the mercanaries have switched sides, Buffy is fighting for Willow's dad, and Tara is supposed to use magic against willow's side of the battle. The plot twists just keep on coming don't they but alas i haven't changed my original conspiracy theory yet cause until the battle i can't prove what happens or doesn't happen :eyebrow but hopefully i am once again somewhat right :laugh



Anyway loved the update and i have to admit i chuckled when the knight said willow wasn't a princess and then he saw tara and said "now thats a princess" i sadly have to agree i view willow more as the knight than as princess willow although Tara is better with the fighting quandries run amok in this fic



More soonish although with the quickness of the updates it really doesn't need to be said



Silent :bigwave

Edited by: silentinformer  at: 1/13/05 11:24 am
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Re: One faaaast updater

Postby EndoraVolk » Fri Jan 14, 2005 3:03 am

Egnalos:It keeps getting better? Thanks, I'm doing all I can to keep you guys interested.



littlecrazy80: You can be sure they'll try to do something, we'll see if they can.



Shandem: This time I didn't update so fast, but I just couldn't. It's not that I didn't want to. No droopy eyes, the update's here. :) It is a fairytale, or an adventure story. Or a mix, I don't know.



watersong84: Yeah, I thought: a simple war isn't enough, we need more twisted intentions.



xonethousandtears08x: Thanks for stopping by and reading my story.



Artemis: wow, in one go, I'm impressed. It's a dense story, you're seeing that. It's okay, you can host it there if you want.



Truck driving magic mama: That's an excellent analysis you did there. Two levels; Willow & Tara's, and the general one. The first one getting better, the other getting worse. That was great. And yes, apart from the war, the Middle Age -or something like that- setting, it was a date!



hidden watson: I know, it was a stupid reason for declaring a war, but yes, that way it's a lot more ironic. You can see how stupid those kings are, for making it such a big deal. But of course, then things degenerate (they're playing dirty), and it's even more difficult to stop and think 'cause they're getting more angry with each other. And the girls' relationship changes things too; at first Willow wanted to fight in a battle, now she wants to stop it.



silentinformer: You hold on to your hypothesis, we'll see if it really comes out or what. I'm curious, and I even hope you're right, 'cause it would be funny. About the fragment you mentioned... I thought about the mercenary thinking that Willow was a boy, but the part where he looks at Tara, it came out by itself. I found it funny too, and it states more differences between the two girls.





Title: Clashing Swords



Author: EndoraVolk



Feedback: If you will.



Spoilers: None.



Setting: Alternate universe, totally. I don't even know if it's set in the Middle Ages. It's probably a completely different universe. Horses, swords, castles, princesses...



Rating: NC-17



Disclaimer: All characters belong to Mutant Enemy, I'm just using them in a very blameless, un-guilty way.



Notes: Hope you like it. It's sort of an idea I've been toying with in my head this Christmas.



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Chapter 9



Willow got on her horse and sped away from the castle as soon as the sun had set. She hadn’t a second to waste. To see Tara again was an emergency on various levels. Firstly, she had to tell her about the mercenaries that her father had hired. If the war took place, the mercenaries would sweep the Highlands’ army as if they were a group of children playing against adults. They couldn’t let this happen.



Secondly, she just had to see her, to have a confirmation. She needed to look inside Tara’s blue eyes and breathe safely. Her head kept toying with the idea that she had simply dreamed it all, and it scorched her with fear. She so wanted it to be real… Because she had never felt nothing like that; never felt so connected to anyone. In fact, she had never thought about those things; she had never looked at someone and thought God, you’re so beautiful, never felt the impulse to kiss anyone.



Her childhood had been spent dreaming of becoming a knight, dreaming of battles, and her teenage years had vanished while trying to be a knight and achieving it. She had never dreamed of loving someone, never wrestled with the weight of a relationship. Grown men had pleaded her for mercy that same afternoon while training, but no eyes had ever pleaded for a kiss. At least, no one before Tara.



She tied her horse and scurried to the castle. The fear of being discovered never came to mind; and so, she wasn’t discovered; all she could think of while climbing the wall was reaching that window.



When she did, she didn’t just enter the room; she rested her chin on the windowsill and let her eyes get used to the lack of light. Tara was sitting on the bed, which was covered in books, but she wasn’t reading them. She was just staring at nothingness, seemingly thinking deeply.



Not wanting to disturb her, Willow closed her fist and knocked softly on the side of the window. Tara turned instantly, but at least she wasn’t startled. Now was the moment to look at Tara and get the confirmation she died for. She jumped inside the room and stood there, one hand grasping the other, getting instantly nervous. Why doesn’t she say anything? And why don’t I?, she wondered, I don’t know. Well, then say something! Okay, okay.



“Uh… Tara?”



No answer. What the…?



“Uh... No candles?” she asked, looking around.



“I missed you.”



What? Willow turned to look at her, and realized that she had spoken. Oh God. Finally, she had been reassured; those three words, the way they had been said, meant that it had happened. Her knees started to buckle, and she stumbled to a sitting position on the floor, her arms and head resting on the bed.



“I missed you too…” she said “Actually, more than missed you.”



“More? How’s that?”



Tara smiled for the first time, making Willow feel instant warmth inside. The blonde turned and lied stomach down, her head resting on her hand, and her face close to Willow’s.



“Uh…” Willow muttered “I-I’ve suddenly forgotten.”



“What have you forgotten?”



“H-how to talk.”



The blonde laughed, and reached out to grasp some strands of Willow’s red hair. She loved it when Tara did this; it fuzzed her mind completely.



“O-okay, I’ve remembered. I was telling you I had more than… missed you.”



“That’s right. Explain?”



“Y-yeah. This morning, when I woke up” Willow licked her lower lip “I… kinda thought that it had all been a dream.”



“Really? So… what do you suggest I should do? Convince you?”



“No, it’s okay, I know-” Willow saw the look on Tara’s eyes and cut her sentence abruptly “Well, I think I maybe need a little reminder…”



Displaying her sideways grin, Tara lurched forward and captured Willow’s lips between hers. The redhead was taken by surprise, but her body reacted faster than her mind, returning the kiss. A couple of seconds later, her mind finally switched on and went where her body was going. Her hand rushed to Tara’s cheek, and she kissed her deeper, to which Tara seemed happy to oblige. More than happy.



“I… I didn’t really need the reminder” Willow grinned devilishly, pulling slightly away “But God knows I really needed that kiss.”



“Who said the kiss is over?”



Before Willow could rise her eyebrows in surprise, Tara had already grabbed her and dropped her on the bed. Her world turned upside down for a moment and, when everything had settled where it belonged, Tara kissed her again.



For a moment, Willow didn’t know where she was. When she opened her eyes, she was still lying on Tara’s bed (her feet on some of the books), and the beautiful blonde was curled up on her side, her face nestled on Willow’s neck. She pressed her cheek against Tara’s forehead, and then kissed it.



“I don’t know how you do it, but I see you and everything’s just… okay. Everything relaxes. I came here fast as ever, wanting to tell you something urgent, and now I have trouble remembering it.”



“I also wanted to tell you something. I wish I could forget about it and just stay here.”



“Me too. Maybe we could just bolt the door and the window for a month” Willow smiled “and by the time we open them, everything will be over.”



“I wish we could do that” Tara said “but we can’t.”



“Yes. Okay…” Willow sat up “I came to tell you that my father has hired about a hundred mercenaries for the battle. They aren’t knights, they’re warriors, and they’re scary.”



“I know.”



“You know?”



“My father…” Tara sighed and sat up too “He knows that your father’s employed those mercenaries, and he has re-employed them.”



“You mean…”



“I mean. He’s paying them more, so, on the day of the battle, they’ll turn against your kingdom’s army. Plus, the chief mercenary, or whatever he’s called…”



“John Mason!” Willow’s anger exploded; she stood up on the bed, with her fists ready “I’m going to kill that man!”



“Willow… don’t. Come on, sit back down.”



Being aware of how ridiculous she looked -her fists clenched, standing on a bed-, she dropped down, her hand fastening to Tara’s, squeezing it.



“There’s no point in killing that man. Think. We’ve got more knowledge than any of them, than any of our fathers. Now, relax” Tara stroked Willow’s hair “There’s still some things I have to tell you. That man, John Mason, told my father that the Slayer’s around there, training your knights.”



“It’s true, Buffy’s there. Oh, but she isn’t fighting. She knows that wouldn’t be fair.”



“Well, my father thinks she is. And… he asked me a few favors.”



“What favors?”



“He wanted me to study my mother’s things. Her books…”



“Magic?” Willow asked, her eyes wide “I knew something like this would come up…”



“Not just magic. He wants it dark. He’s figured that, if the Slayer’s on your side, we had to side up with the others.”



Demons, Tara thought, recalling her father’s demand. He wants me to request their help, to call them in with a spell. With the mercenaries and the dark forces, they would wipe Willow’s kingdom to nothingness. To dust, she thought, and then they’ll blow on that dust.



“So, what have you told him?” Willow looked scared, looking at the books that were scattered on the bed.



“I have told him yes, of course, and luckily, he believed me. Don’t worry, I brought my mother’s stuff to study it, but to try to find a solution.”



“A solution? With magic?” the redhead wrinkled her nose.



“Of course. It has to be done with magic. Or what do you recommend?”



“I was going to attack John Mason” Willow got nervous, seeing the silliness of her plan “Okay, that… was… silly. Then… use witchcraft. Have you thought of something?”



“Not really… and I still don’t know how am I going to trick my father into believing that I’ve invoked all the demons in the area…” she remained silent for half a minute, thinking “One thing’s for sure. We need to talk to Buffy and tell her this.”



“Yeah, okay, work together. Don’t worry, she’s my friend.”



“Oh, I know Buffy” Tara said, shocking the redhead “My mother knew her Watcher.”



Willow was almost dizzy with information, but she managed to stand up and help Tara pack some books. When that was taken care of, she sat on the windowsill, prepared to descend.



“Willow?”



The redhead looked up.



“I’m sorry I haven’t mentioned it, but… you look dazzling in that dress” Tara winked an eye.



She blushed. And kept blushing until she could feel her cheeks burn. She had discarded her boyish clothes that night, and had chosen a dress she thought she looked quite good in… for Tara. It was the first sign of coquetry she had shown in all her life.

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He who fights with monsters might take care lest he thereby become a monster. And if you gaze for long into an abyss, the abyss gazes also into you.

(Friedrich Nietzsche)

EndoraVolk
 


lurvely!

Postby Sheba » Fri Jan 14, 2005 4:04 am

Ok, I have been reading this fic for a while now, and I gotta say I think it's fabulous! I like the pace, I looove that the updates are so regular, and the plot is just plain fantastic! I think you've captured it all so well, so what else can I say except Kudos to you woman! *bows* ;)

Sheba
 


Re: Chapter 9

Postby hidden watson » Fri Jan 14, 2005 5:31 am

Again the reality of their situation vs the development of their relationship plays so well here.



Willow forgetting how to talk, now that's a stunner :) . But Tara's "I missed you" said so much with so few words.
Quote:
“Who said the kiss is over?”
Sigh.



The smooth segue into battle discussions. The realization that magic is probably their best solution. Tara's mother knowing Buffy's watcher. So many threads, but all moving towards each other.



Can't wait for the next part, glad you're updating so quickly.

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quiet thoughts

hidden watson
 


Re: Chapter 9

Postby littlecrazy80 » Fri Jan 14, 2005 6:23 am

Loved the update! :heart

Hopefully they´ll find a solution. :pray



*lil´c*

"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



SweetAmber ~~~ AmberBoard ~~~ Sam´s melody

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Re: Chapter 9

Postby Artemis » Fri Jan 14, 2005 6:28 am

Firstly, thanks for permission to host the story - it should be online in a few minutes :)



Again, Willow and Tara interact so smoothly, it's wonderful to read. Willow wearing a dress just for Tara was great - and somehow it worked so much better because it was revealed right at the end of the chapter, even though she'd been wearing it the whole time. This chapter had some really interesting insights into Willow's life, how she became the woman she is.



Pity the two fathers can't just decide the conflict would be resolved by having Tara marry Willow - somehow I doubt they'd think that was an acceptable solution. Go figure - mercenaries and demons are fine, but two women getting marries... :crazy



Still, Tara's got her mother's books now - and seeing as her father doesn't know squat about magic, she can effectively study whatever she wants, and just assure him that she's brushing up on Demonology 101. Unless he gets suspicious, and hires a real summoner... :paranoid



I had one other random thought - as a male nobleman, is Donnie expected to lead a regiment? God I pity the people who end up with him in command...



Thanks :bow

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Artemis
 


wonderful

Postby frau rosenclay » Fri Jan 14, 2005 7:28 am

I just read this in one go, and am so glad I did! I've been meaning to read it since I saw it first, as the title you gave it caught m eye.



Wonderful job, I am very much looking forward to how it will progress, there is a richness inside, formed of many layers.....I am still curious as to what willow was going to say to tara before they were interrupted on the stairwell at the "engagement" party. Will you get to that, or has the story progressed past those sentiments?



Either way, it is still a stunning piece of w/t fiction. Isn't w/t fic an interesting culture? I do think so. Sometimes it really makes me happy.



:buried

frau rosenclay
 


Re: wonderful

Postby watersong84 » Sat Jan 15, 2005 1:30 am

:clap That scene was so beautiful. The second kiss was almost better than the first! And you got me there with the Tara-knows-Buffy bit. More soon (as if my asking is necissary). :pinky

watersong84
 


Re: wonderful

Postby Truck driving magic mama » Sat Jan 15, 2005 5:27 am

woohoo!



Update goodness... I wrote you a really long fb and then it got deleted! :( So I'm sorry, but you'll get it next time.. lol..

This story is so pretty! and more kissage! :) lol.. Forgive my craziness, I just woke up. :)





More more more! lol

Melissa



I am the knowledge which you cannot conceive

The fire running through you bones

Truck driving magic mama
 


Re: wonderful

Postby EndoraVolk » Sun Jan 16, 2005 5:33 am

Sheba: No, there isn't much more you can say. *blushes* You've praised everything. Thank you very much!



hidden watson: This was just a transition update, just for the girls to exchange knowledge and go to see Buffy; I didn't expect you guys to like it that much. That's great. Yes, the different threads are overlapping.



littlecrazy80: Thanks! They will try to find a solution, we'll see if they finally do. At least now I know.



Artemis: I checked out the site, looked for my story and I have to say that you made a beautiful banner (or whatever it's called) for it. Thanks.

Quote:
This chapter had some really interesting insights into Willow's life, how she became the woman she is.


It's great that you're noticing these things because, when I write a story, that's what I like most, making up a life for someone and then having to justify it.

Quote:
mercenaries and demons are fine, but two women getting marries...


That's some irony, isn't it? But it's true. Not very long ago my friends and I went to the cinema to see an Almodovar film, and this old man we didn't even know came to us and tried to convince us of seeing some horror movie with chopped up bodies. And I asked him: "do you prefer seeing horrible-ax-murders better than two people just loving each other?" And he answered with a "yes", so what can I say about people? *sigh*That stupidity abounds in and out of fiction.

Oh, about your question... Yes, Donnie is expected to fight in a leading position, him being the Prince and all... which is too bad.



frau rosenclay: I always feel very honored when someone tells me he's read the whole thing in one go, because that's what I have done with some really good fics in this site. And yes, I will go back to whatever Willow was going to tell Tara that night at the party.



watersong84: glad you liked the scene, even if it was just transition. It's great that I still get you with the little twists. It makes it a little more interesting.



Truck driving magic mama: LOL, I'm sorry your long update got deleted. Don't worry, next time you'll write it, 'cause I'm interested in you guys' opinions.







Title: Clashing Swords



Author: EndoraVolk



Feedback: If you will.



Spoilers: None.



Setting: Alternate universe, totally. I don't even know if it's set in the Middle Ages. It's probably a completely different universe. Horses, swords, castles, princesses...



Rating: NC-17



Disclaimer: All characters belong to Mutant Enemy, I'm just using them in a very blameless, un-guilty way.



Notes: Hope you like it. It's sort of an idea I've been toying with in my head this Christmas.



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Chapter 10



The horse was exhausted, and no wonder: first, speeding to Tara’s castle; now, galloping back to Willow’s with the weight of two girls on him. Still, Willow urged him on. They had to get to Buffy and explain everything. The inconvenience was that Buffy was a guest in Willow’s castle, so Tara was literally going into the wolf’s lair.



“What are we going to do to keep the guards from seeing me?” Tara asked, her lips touching Willow’s ear.



“Don’t worry” she whispered, her voice confident.



Willow bent her head backwards and gave Tara a brief, reassuring kiss. This was her territory now, her kingdom, and she was very able of taking care, of taking charge. She rode the horse towards a side of the castle, instead of towards the front, and then dismounted. Tara’s face of confusion was worth capturing in a painting.



Grinning to herself, Willow pushed away a couple of bushes that grew against the castle wall and pressed one of the bricks with both her hands, grunting with the effort. Some sort of mechanism was instantly activated. They heard the churning of wheels, and then, a part of the wall bulged and shifted, like a door. It led the way to a dark and somewhat narrow tunnel, excavated in rock, that seemed to cross under the castle.



“We’re going in there?” Tara asked.



“Yes, horse and all.”



With that, Willow began tugging at the horse’s reins to get him inside. Her father had showed her this passage some years ago, just in case. It was a sort of emergency exit; if something happened at the castle, she was to evacuate all the people through that tunnel. Willow had never used it before, but she reckoned it would be safe. If only this damn horse would obey



“Willow…”



As an answer, Willow grunted again and pulled harder at the reins.



“Will, stop doing that to the horse.”



“It won’t move! I have to pull… or push…, or something!”



“No you don’t. Will, this isn’t a donkey. Donkeys are stubborn and won’t move, but this

is a horse. They have reasons for acting the way they do.”



Tara sighed and withdrew a long handkerchief from the folds of her dress,

bounding it around the horse’s head and covering his eyes. Now. If he didn’t see that

dark tunnel, he wouldn’t fear it. Speaking of which… that tunnel was dark as a pit.

Willow scratched her head and said that they would have to light a fire and make a

torch.



“…Which will probably call the guards’ attention.” Willow finished.



“I have an idea…” the blonde murmured, grabbing a branch from the floor.



Following her instructions, Willow guided the horse inside the tunnel, waited for

Tara to get in too, and then pressed on another stone brick to close the “door”. Now

what? She was stuck in a hole in the ground with Tara and a horse, and it was

dark as a… hole in the ground. Then, when she quieted her thoughts, she heard that

Tara was muttering some words.



“Tara? What…?”



She felt her way towards the blonde, touching her arm, and then moving her

fingers down towards Tara’s hand, which was holding the branch.



“Willow, step back, just in case.”



“What are you going to-?”



“Ignis incende!”



Willow’s question was cut off. As soon as she drew her hand back, Tara cried

out those two words, and a flame came to life out of nowhere, setting the branch

ablaze. The horse shuffled nervously, but wasn’t scared since he could see nothing.

Willow was another matter. The redhead jumped and emitted a shriek that echoed down

the tunnel.



The flame illuminated their surroundings with a drowsy light, but it was better than nothing. Willow peered at Tara from behind the horse (where she had hid) and saw that her face was bathed in shadows, but she was alright. What the hell was that?



“It’s… It’s a spell” Tara said, sighing.



“A spell? A magic spell?” Willow’s eyes bulged and came out from behind the horse “But the fire’s real?”



“Yes, it is. The spell sets things on fire.”



“I can’t believe it. Wow. Do you know more spells? Like making my horse fly or something? ‘Cause that would be-”



Grinning, Tara let Willow drone on and on. She didn’t know many spells, just little easy ones like this one. But still, for someone that had never seen magic, the “ignis incende” one would seem incredible.



They walked down the tunnel quietly; Tara holding the improvised torch, Willow pulling the horse’s rein, and their hands grasped together. It was as if they weren’t in the world anymore, as if they had been walking down that passage for ever. The eerie glow that the fire produced certainly helped, and Willow felt as if she and Tara were the only people in the world. With each other but alone; and she realized that she wouldn’t mind that much.



Finally, when not only Willow had lost track of time, but she had begun thinking that time had completely dissolved like a melting clock, they got to the end of the tunnel. They mounted a small ramp and got to a solid wall. It looked like an alley with no exit. She pressed her hands on one of the bricks and pushed, opening the wall before them. Stone grinded against stone, they stomped on the branch to put out the fire, and they trespassed the “door”, which closed again some seconds later.



Willow was assaulted by the smell of straw and animals. The stables. They tied Willow’s horse beside the others and took off Tara’s handkerchief from their eyes. The blonde was about to say something when Willow hushed her. There was someone else in the stables.



“Who’s there?” someone asked. Someone with a deep voice.



The person's silhouette appeared in Willow’s eyeshot and, without thinking, the redhead pushed Tara on a huge pile of straw, disappearing into it. The man came fully into Willow’s view. Frowning, she noted that it was John Mason, the mercenary.



“Who are you?” he bellowed.



“You really have an eyesight problem, don’t you?” Willow sniggered “You never recognize me. I’m Princess Willow. And I always recognize you, mercenary.”



“The Princess?” the man did a double take “Oh, yes, it’s you. I’m sorry, the dress kind of confused me. I’m glad you know what a dress is.”



“Will you persist in insulting me?”



“I’m just saying the truth.”



“Then tell me the truth; why are you here at this hour?” Willow grinned, guessing that she might as well get some more information.



“Just taking a walk. Why are you?”



“Taking a walk.”



“It’s dangerous, Princess. Specially if I’m the one that’s walking around here. Scram.”



The mercenary sniggered and then left. Willow waited half a minute before moving (all the while cursing John Mason), and then ran to the pile of straw. She dug her hands inside it and fished for Tara. She ended up grabbing her leg, Tara’s head popping out elsewhere.



“That was… close” Tara said, spitting out some straw.



“Tara, I’m so sorry!” Willow cried, getting the other girl to her feet and brushing straw off her dress.



“Will, it’s okay. You had to do it.”



“But… I pushed you! Did I hurt you?”



Tara smiled forgivingly and shook her head, letting Willow wipe off the straw if that made her feel better. When the redhead considered that her dress looked decent, she began with Tara’s blond hair, picking a countless number of straws out.



“Ow, that was my hair.”



“I’m sorry! Tara, I didn’t mean to-”



“Willow, I’m joking, it’s okay.”



Profiting from Willow’s closeness, Tara circled the girl’s waist and brought her nearer. For some moments, Willow didn’t notice, and she kept looking for straws. When she did, she swallowed hard, and the inspection of Tara’s hair morphed into caresses.



“You know what?” Willow asked.



“What?” Tara asked, grinning and letting the tips of their noses touch.



“This is an adventure. I like having this adventure with you.”



“I hope it’s more than an adventure” the blonde gave a short laugh.



“Yes” Willow said, bowing her head down “It is more.”



After a moment of silence, the girls held hands and left the stables with sigil. Willow leading the way, they managed to enter the castle without being seen. They climbed one of the many stairways and finally got to the door of Buffy’s chamber. Willow knocked on the door twice before a weak slurry answer came.



“Yeah? Who is it?”



They entered the room and closed the door behind them. Buffy was in her nightgown, and sitting up on the bed. Her blonde hair looked fuzzy and tumbled, and the sheets were out of place. The only light in the room came from a couple of candles set beside the bed.



“Willow? It’s you? And…?”



“Hi, Buffy” Tara said, stepping into the small circle of light.



“Tara?” the Slayer rubbed her eyes, not sure if she was awake “It’s you? What are you doing with…?”



“Buffy, we gotta talk to you. It’s very important.” Willow sat on the bed and placed her hand on Buffy’s, so that she knew that she was real.



“Talk to me? Both of you? I thought your kingdoms…”



“Buffy, we’re trying to stop the war” Tara explained “We can’t let them kill each other off.”



“But-“



“And they’re playing dirty, both kings” Tara added, “We can’t let them.”



Tara ran her hand down Willow’s arm and grasped her hand when she got to it, interlacing their fingers. With her right hand, she stroked Willow's red hair.



“Okay, wait” Buffy rose her hands “Wait. Before explaining this conspiracy thing… Please, explain why the heck you’re holding hands like that.”





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He who fights with monsters might take care lest he thereby become a monster. And if you gaze for long into an abyss, the abyss gazes also into you.

(Friedrich Nietzsche)

EndoraVolk
 


Re: wonderful

Postby robotguru » Sun Jan 16, 2005 6:52 am

Ok, i'm sorry, really, really sorry,i#ve read this from the start and not left any feedback, this is a great story. It honestly caught me from the start but i've either been too tired or should have been doing things like my assignment at the time lol.



Anyways, yeah, more?

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There can be no rainbow without rain, you cannot know true happiness until you know sadness first.

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Re: wonderful

Postby littlecrazy80 » Sun Jan 16, 2005 8:08 am

Great update! :D



Quote:
“Okay, wait” Buffy rose her hands “Wait. Before explaining this conspiracy thing… Please, explain why the heck you’re holding hands like that.”


:rofl



*lil´c*

"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



SweetAmber ~~~ Sam´s melody

littlecrazy80
 


Clashing Swords

Postby Brandnew » Sun Jan 16, 2005 8:17 am

oops...I've missed updates; either way you're still doing an awesome job, this is one of my favorite stories! I hope Buffy's going to be a supportive friend lol.

Brandnew
 


Re: Clashing Swords

Postby hidden watson » Sun Jan 16, 2005 9:28 am

Great update. Willow's still treating her horse as The Horse That Is Just a Horst, while Tara as usual shows her understanding. The spell would seem awesome to someone who doesn't know magic, I mean, if I were stuck in a dark tunnel and someone ignited some branches by just saying “Ignis incende”, my jaws will drop to the floor as well.



This John Mason fella, he's up to no good, I get the feeling he is going to play both kings and betray both. Ugh, what a nasty piece of work.



Buffy is as clueless as normal :) ! She needs to be updated on the gay lovin' that's been going on! Seriously, can't wait to see what she does after hearing the girls' story.

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quiet thoughts

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Re: One faaaast updater

Postby wimpy0729 » Sun Jan 16, 2005 1:49 pm

Oh no, no, no. They're getting ready to fight, with big mean men and a tiny slayer person. This cannot happen. Can't wait to see what the girls do next!





Wimpy

"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

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Re: One faaaast updater

Postby watersong84 » Sun Jan 16, 2005 4:40 pm

Weheew! I am looking foreword to seeing how Buffy, Willow, and Tara's friendship-ish-thingy plays out. This fic is immensely enjoyable! :pinky

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Re: One faaaast updater

Postby xonethousandtears08x » Sun Jan 16, 2005 6:40 pm

:clap very awesome-istic.



*******



'lalalala lalalala elmo's world lalalala' "shut the f*** up"



lol. i just had to do it.

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Re: One faaaast updater

Postby Tempest Duer » Sun Jan 16, 2005 6:50 pm

I've been away far too long. I feel so guilty. And bad. This is such a good story, with swords and armor and smoochies... and I haven't been posting feedback. I'm a bad puppy. *slinks away*

I got bitten by a drunk lesbian! Does that mean I'll turn into one?



~my friend Mary

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Re: One faaaast updater

Postby EndoraVolk » Mon Jan 17, 2005 10:12 am

Lots of dialogue in this update...





robotguru: It's okay, you're leaving feedback now it's not something obligatory. I thank you for leaving it now. Oncoming update.



littlecrazy80: A bit of cliffhanger there, I admit it. Buffy's the first person that has ever seen them together, like the first outside opinion, and she obviously notices that something is going on.



Brandnew: You've missed updates? ^^' well, maybe that's because I update quite fast. Anyway,this one of your favorite stories? That's more than enough for me. Onward with Buffy's reaction.



hidden watson: I keep bringing up the 'horse thing' because it somewhat states differences between the two girls. Differences in how they are and how they were brought up; Willow wanting to be a knight, Tara mostly raised by her mother. 'Magic thing', of course; just because we're used to seeing magic in the original series doesn't mean that someone that sees it for the first time doesn't get surprise. John Mason, basically, a villain which I disdain (not a very good preview for his future). And Buffy, well, being Buffy, or at least that's what I tried to do in this new update.



wimpy0729: Everything's getting ready and urgent, yes, and we just have to stop it. I mean, they. They have to come up with something soon, I know. But don't worry.



watersong84: No doubt they need Buffy's help. Besides, Tara's father wants to eliminate her too, so she has to be in the plan. We'll see how it works out.



xonethousandtears08x: Thank you!



Tempest Duer: Don't feel guilty. Oh, come on, it's okay, it's good enough if you'd read it.





Title: Clashing Swords



Author: EndoraVolk



Feedback: If you will.



Spoilers: None.



Setting: Alternate universe, totally. I don't even know if it's set in the Middle Ages. It's probably a completely different universe. Horses, swords, castles, princesses...



Rating: NC-17



Disclaimer: All characters belong to Mutant Enemy, I'm just using them in a very blameless, un-guilty way.



Notes: Hope you like it. It's sort of an idea I've been toying with in my head this Christmas.



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Chapter 11



There was a very nervous slayer pacing around the room. Buffy hadn’t even stepped into her shoes; she had jumped to her (bare) feet as soon as she had noticed Willow and Tara’s hands grasped together. Her eyes darted from the two girls to the floor.



“Okay” she looked at Willow and Tara, and then back down “Okay. There are a couple of things that I don’t quite understand. How do you guys know about the conspiracy? Why do you suddenly want to stop this? And, in the name of God, why are you holding hands like that?”



“You’re asking for quite an explanation…” Willow shook her head, preparing herself for a long speech.



“We’re together” Tara said, bluntly summing up everything “First thing’s first. Willow and I are together.”



“Thank you, so I gathered” Buffy’s voice tingled with irony “I see you’re together, I’m asking why. Are you guys under a spell or something? Your hands have been stuck together?”



Willow and Tara looked at each other, a smile playing on their lips.



“Buffy, we’re under no spell, see?” Willow let go of the other girl’s hand.



“Don’t you understand when we say ‘together’?”



“Together as in… friends?” Buffy asked.



Tara frowned. Having to explain this to Buffy was tough and a touch embarrassing. They hadn’t talked about it themselves, they had just let themselves go without stopping to define it. And it felt good, she wasn’t complaining; whatever it was, it was theirs. And theirs to decide. But now they had to explain it to a third person that seemed totally clueless. Willow looked a bit confused too, about how and what to reveal.



“Good friends?” Buffy asked again, hopefully.



“No.” Willow said, relieved because Tara was shaking her head too.



“What then?”



“More” Tara answered softly, happy to see Willow nodding at this.



Buffy just stared blankly at them, not daring to take a third guess. They could see that she didn’t understand a thing.



“More?” Willow whispered, trying hard not to smile goofily.



“I guess…” Tara blushed slightly “If you want…”



“Oh, I do. When this is over I could take you to a ball or something. Go out with me?”



“Oh, yes.”



Giggling happily, the girls hugged each other, almost unconscious of Buffy’s presence there, standing in front of them with her mouth wide open and gaping eyes. When they detached from their little –but vital- conversation and their hug, they turned to the gaping slayer.



“Girlfriends, actually” Willow said, with a smile from ear to ear.



“Girlfriends” the Slayer repeated, to which the girls nodded “Together.”



“That’s what we were trying to explain” Tara motioned for Buffy to sit down.



“How can it be? Tara, with the rumors of witchcraft going around, this won’t help you. And Willow, you’re the Princess, the heir of your kingdom. You can’t persist in… I mean, Tara’s a-”



“Tara’s a girl” Willow finished the sentence for her “I certainly know that people will care. I expect them to deny it, to swear, to try to break this up. What I didn’t expect was you trying it. You’re my friend.”



“But…”



“You’re my friend!” Willow repeated, getting up and giving her back to the Slayer.



“You can’t force me to accept something like-”



“Something like going out with a vampire?” Tara asked Buffy, raising an eyebrow.



“It’s not the same” Buffy shook her head and crossed her arms “Angel-”



“Angel is a vampire, and you went out with him. Everyone that ever knew about it condemned it, said it was wrong, impossible, disgusting, abnormal, inconvenient, not right, God-defying and downright weird” Tara said “No one tried to understand. You were alone. Now, remember, who was the person that was by your side on those moments? And don’t dare say it isn’t the same.”



“Your mother” Buffy answered “And then you.”



Willow was in complete awe. She had been surprised when Tara had told her that she knew Buffy, but now she confirmed that she knew her even better than herself. Buffy the Vampire Slayer going out with a vampire? But Tara was right; if Buffy had been involved with a vampire, then she knew everything about prejudice.



“How can you, of all people, say that I can’t be in a relationship with whoever I want?” Tara was asking “I’d expect a little less prejudice, a little less judgment from the judged.”



“I’m sorry” Buffy slouched her shoulders “I really am. My wacky Spanish-Inquisition-side had taken over me. Will, Tare, what can I say?”



“You could begin with ‘congratulations’…” Tara smiled.



The three girls went to each other and hugged. Buffy was still feeling guilty, so she began delivering a sermon about how they should do whatever they made them happy, and not to listen to what anyone said, and if they ever needed someone to defend them, that they should call her…



Enough. Tara sat Willow and Tara on the bed, beside her, and said that they had very serious business to talk about.



“The conspiracy” Buffy nodded.



Taking turns in speaking, Willow and Tara explained that Tara’s father had bribed the mercenaries into his side, that his thirst for defeating Willow’s father was too great. He even believed that Buffy, the Slayer herself, was fighting on the other side. Because of that, he had given Tara all the stuff from her mother, so that she could learn to invoke and control demons.



Buffy couldn’t believe that he wanted to mix the demons into this. Besides, she wasn’t fighting in the war, it would be fighting and killing humans, which her conscience forbid.



“He wants you to summon demons?” Buffy asked, looking at Tara “Mercenaries and demons on the same side, fighting the people of Willow’s kingdom? I’m having a butchery preview.”



“I’m consulting my mother’s books. It would be much easier if she was here… I need help, I need an idea, which is the difficult part. Putting an actual idea into practice is easier.”



“Okay, here’s what we can do” Buffy said “I’m going to contact my watcher, Tara you know him, and I’ll explain all this. Then we can all meet up and, you know, collect ideas.”



“Ooh, a magic-brainstorm” Willow said.



“Sounds well” Tara agreed.



“So, tomorrow morning… where?” Buffy stroked her chin “Somewhere where we won’t be seen or disturbed…”



“We could go to our place” Tara smiled, nudging Willow.



Buffy just rose an eyebrow.



“Yeah!” Willow squeaked, happy to happy to have a plan, happy with the prospect of seeing Tara again the next day and happy to visit their special place again “It’s a little forest to the right of my castle. There’s a willow tree and a small lake.”



“Okay, seems good for me. See you tomorrow then?”



They said goodnight to Buffy and disappeared down the corridor, succeeding in not being discovered. Then, they repeated the procedure, but the other way around. They covered the eyes of Willow’s horse and entered the tunnel. When the wall had already closed behind them Tara realized that she hadn’t brought something to serve them as a torch. She was about to comment on it when Willow grasped her hand and made her grab something, closing her fingers over it.



“What’s this?”



“It’s a candle, I got it from Buffy’s room.”



Tara spoke the words “ignis incende” again, this time much more softly, and the candle was instantly lit. it made Willow’s eyes shine in the almost-complete darkness.



“I know it will blow off, candles are delicate in that way, but I brought it anyway.”



“Why?” Tara asked.



“It’s extra flamey.”



“What?”



“If it blows out you’ll whisper some words and it will light up again. You’ll encourage the flame.” Willow said.



Tara held the candle with one hand and used the other to put it around Willow’s waist. She nodded and they began walking towards the exit. Since the blonde was allowed to go out when it was daytime, they decided that Willow wouldn’t risk going to her castle to pick her up. They accorded their meeting at the lake.



“Goodnight” Willow whispered, when she helped Tara get inside her bedroom.



“We won’t have to wait a whole day to see each other” Tara smiled.



“Just a few long hours.”



“I’ll miss you.” She’s my girlfriend, Tara thought, I’m her girlfriend.



“I’ll miss you too.” Tara, my girlfriend, Willow mused.



They leant in for a kiss, the sweetest they could make it, their lips moving slowly over each other.



When she got to her castle, Willow dove into her bed –covering head an all- and closed her eyes. She still had Tara’s taste on her lips, and she licked them to savor it, to imagine that Tara was there, on the bed, breathing beside her and embracing her before going to sleep. How would it be, sleeping with Tara?

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He who fights with monsters might take care lest he thereby become a monster. And if you gaze for long into an abyss, the abyss gazes also into you.

(Friedrich Nietzsche)

EndoraVolk
 


Re: One faaaast updater

Postby Artemis » Mon Jan 17, 2005 11:18 am

Darn, you updated before I got around to leaving feedback to the last chapter. That'll teach me to be lazy :punish Not that I'm suggesting you slow down, far from it! The more the merrier :)



Anyway, with regards to the last chapter, I found it interesting (and sweet) that Tara's broadening Willow's horizons - showing her magic, teaching her how to interact with her horse, kissing :heart ... it's like she's helping Willow catch up on everything she missed out on while she was training to be a knight. And that little tease she did, "that's my hair" with the straw, I got a big grin out of that. I love Tara humour.



I'll be back later, with feedback on the present chapter :wave



Edited: right, back now - clueless Buffy was pretty funny. I'm glad Tara found the way to relate her and Willow's relationship back to Buffy's personal experience. I guess it's easy to have prejudices generally, but if you've been through that kind of thing yourself it's another matter entirely. I'm still curious to see how Tara's father's plan will play out - so long as he doesn't know Tara's not on his side he's hardly going to outright force her to summon demons... it'll be interesting to see what they come up with, with Giles' help.



I loved the final scene too, with Willow letting her imagination run wild. Let's hope she finds out soon :)

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Edited by: Artemis at: 1/18/05 2:13 am
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Re: One faaaast updater

Postby watersong84 » Mon Jan 17, 2005 1:27 pm

Yay! I hope Willow finds the answer to her question soon... this fic is great! And every update you bring more into it - Angel, Buffy's watcher (Giles?), etc. Update Soon! :pinky

watersong84
 


Re: One faaaast updater

Postby littlecrazy80 » Mon Jan 17, 2005 2:06 pm

Great update. :D



Tara telling Buffy to stop judging them was great. :D And hopefully Buffy´s watcher (Giles?) can help them.



*lil´c*

"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



SweetAmber ~~~ Sam´s melody

littlecrazy80
 


update

Postby Idgie » Mon Jan 17, 2005 2:48 pm

My wife is out of town for the long weekend so I spent last night reading this whole story so far. I ended up going to bed before I could leave feedback, and when I went to do it this afternoon there was already another update. Yay!

I love the plot of this, as well as the way you're portraying the blossiming relationship between Willow and Tara. Their first kiss was great - the way they just gave themselves over to it without trying to think too much about the repercussions. I could envision the whole scene. I'm curious to see how they'll work with Buffy and Giles to stop the inevitable battle. And if history is any indicator, I'll find out pretty soon, since your updates are so wonderfully frequent.

Idgie
 


Re: update

Postby Tempest Duer » Mon Jan 17, 2005 4:15 pm

I'm forgiven? I'm happy... since I like this fic. It's got SWORDS! And an update so soon... this is better than my favorite brand of dog biscuits.

I got bitten by a drunk lesbian! Does that mean I'll turn into one?



~my friend Mary

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