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Re: Update Angels and Goddesses Chapter 9

Postby LeatherQueen » Sun Jul 07, 2002 7:41 pm

Ah, my lady Athame... T'was a wonderous update. So sensual and hot, it made me tingly all over. :)



*LQ takes the lady's hand and kisses the back of it* Many, many thanks, and anything else you want, for this beautiful story of their first time.



And this:

Quote:
Willow drew back and looked at her sweetheart who was now placing little butterfly kisses across her collar bone and drawing invisible hearts on her hip.


That was a wonderful image. I loved those lines. :D Elegantly written, my dear.



Edited to add: And just look at my new "Vixen" level. Just in time for this update... ;)








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"But when they're playing your song on the jukebox in Hell, you might as well dance." - K. Simpson


"Futile... like a FOX, baby!" - Tara in The Late Shift by wiccachica

Edited by: LeatherQueen at: 7/7/02 6:43:44 pm
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Re: Update Angels and Goddesses Chapter 9

Postby Tiggrscorpio » Sun Jul 07, 2002 8:22 pm

Oh Athame! Would it be okay if I just hugged you? A simple thank you for the wonderful images you've just portrayed in my mind. This was glorious! As always, you took my breath away. Thank you!

*****

She's my everything!

Tiggrscorpio
 


Re: Update Angels and Goddesses Chapter 9

Postby eccentrictulip » Sun Jul 07, 2002 8:25 pm

**hands athame giant bottle of brandy and proceeds to faint....THUD**

*please use both hands....*

eccentrictulip
 


Re: Update Angels and Goddesses Chapter 9

Postby The Rose24 » Sun Jul 07, 2002 10:06 pm

Beautiful. Very...ummm descriptive. :grin

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

The Rose24
 


Re: Update Angels and Goddesses Chapter 9

Postby Murasaki S » Sun Jul 07, 2002 11:07 pm

So glad there's an update to this fic. And what an update. :lol

It seems so Tara to be wondering about what her mother would think of her relationship with Willow. That was a nice touch.

As for the rest of the update, yay for take-charge Tara!





Murasaki S
 


Re: Fic: Angels and Goddesses

Postby Jennpurr » Sun Jul 07, 2002 11:42 pm

Mmmm... WOW... that was awesome, Athame. So beautiful. Thank you. :love



I will probably never get to sleep now, but that's fine. My visions can keep me awake all night. Or if I can fall asleep, I hope my dreams are filled with remembrance of this beautiful and touching update. Just.... WOW :love



**THUD** :drool



**Hands Athame a glass of Brandy and kneels at her feet** I come to offer kisses, my lady. You did say you wanted them right? Take as many as you want. :) And can I also second what Tiggr said, and give you a hug as well?



Jen (Who may go read that again, now) :grin

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"Alyson Hannigan is a frickin' amazing kisser."Amber Benson
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Mi corazon perdido en ti...

Edited by: Jennpurr  at: 7/7/02 10:44:20 pm
Jennpurr
 


...

Postby Rane018 » Sun Jul 07, 2002 11:55 pm

oh my god they are finally doing it is right. sigh.. that was beautiful!

"She has magic fingers." Then, as though the words had just echoed back to her and sounded not at all right, she perked up and glanced around at the others. "On the keyboard." Tara, The Wisdom Of War...

Rane018
 


Re: ...

Postby willntlover » Mon Jul 08, 2002 1:26 am

*kiss*



thank you for the lovely update.

-Will

"Hear that baby? You're my always."

"well, you know, when you play a lesbian witch you've gotta get killed in this fun kind of exciting way, so the heart was the way to go..."

"we have the most amazing fans though they LOVE us."


willntlover
 


Re: ...

Postby IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous » Mon Jul 08, 2002 4:37 am

very inspiring update. :drool loved every single bit of it. *let me get something to wipe the drool off my keyboard*

ok...

thank you.

take care.

C

"Es ist fuer einen Menschen unertraeglich, ertragen zu werden." (Jean Cocteau)

IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous
 


Re:

Postby mollyig » Mon Jul 08, 2002 5:13 am

As always, your writing is rich and sensual. An endless love, evocatively and beautifully portrayed.



I present thee, Lady Athame, with a snifter of the finest brandy, and bow humbly in awe and admiration.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re:

Postby pikescoob » Mon Jul 08, 2002 6:02 am

I loved the rating for this update....lol...;) I bring you brandy...it's only half full cuz I had to swig some after that update....woah....hehe. *kisses Athame on the cheek*....thank you for another wonderful update...in fact, it deserves a hug as well...*hug* :grin



--Michelle

pikescoob
 


wow

Postby tiyodragon » Mon Jul 08, 2002 7:31 am

Lovely.



*Thud*



Just lovely.



Can't thank you enough.



...but I'll try.



Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you.....you get the idea.



It's no wonder you had to stop and take breaks.



tiyodragon

tiyodragon
 


Re: wow

Postby bulldog tidnab » Mon Jul 08, 2002 9:40 am

my lady... i fear that i have no brandy to offer, nor do i believe that my kisses are worthy in comparison to the wonder that is this tale. i simply shall thank you for it's beauty and intensity and hope indeed that it is enough.



you truly astound me dear lady, as your words are more potent and affecting than any drug. (i think any number of the *THUD*s around here would agree.)



lovely. simply lovely.



that said, i shall tumble off to sleep with a smile upon my face.

be well Joy.



your loyal bulldog



And so we live to fight another day.

bulldog tidnab
 


Re: wow

Postby jdcioffi » Mon Jul 08, 2002 9:59 am

Holy Wow!



That was so wonderful. Perfect love scene ...



To reiterate ... wow.

JD

"I smell the smelly smell of something that smells smelly!" (SpongeBob Squarepants)

jdcioffi
 


Re: wow

Postby Puff » Mon Jul 08, 2002 10:58 am

Great update and LOL over the rating you gave it. Thank you for the wonderful story you have given us all so far :)

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You know, it's a real deal relationship and that's why people can relate to it
Amber Benson

Puff
 


Re: wow

Postby xita » Mon Jul 08, 2002 9:22 pm

Oh awesome thank you, this was a great fic. And I love how you brought in the title at the end, angel and goddess .. sigh.. so perfect. Thank you.

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What's this? Bag of tricks?

Pack of lies

xita
 


Re: wow

Postby Blue Athame 1 » Tue Jul 09, 2002 8:04 am

Athame lifts her head from the pillow a tad tipsy from all the brandy and a bit delirious from all the hugs and kisses. She looks out onto the room full of kittens, happy and satisfied that she has pleased them...she has been a good hostess. She nods, blushing silently, thanking them for all their praises. One more chapter left my sweets...one more. She rolls her head back and closes her eyes for a moment dreaming of kittens and Willow and Tara. Soon we will finish....after a little rest.



Athame

Edited by: Blue Athame 1 at: 7/9/02 7:07:26 am
Blue Athame 1
 


Re: wow

Postby tkheaven » Tue Jul 09, 2002 1:22 pm

ok, so I pic up this fic a few days ago. I calls to me, saying "Please read me. I'm an incredible fic full of Willow/Tara love and goodness. Pure love and goodness and innocence..." WELL, I must say that I absolutely LOVE this fic; from Willow's diving in and exploring her emotions for Tara to...well, *ahem*, Willow literally diving in and exploring Tara, well, umm, her emotions... :grin

*a flood of Willow-babble beginning to invade tk's brain* an-and, what you mean one more chapter left. This is good, *tk's voice cracks an octave higher*...really good. And, well, how can you leave it with one more?? *tk looks away thinking of what she has just read, shifting her feet about.* I mean, it has lots of loving, licking and, uhh groping.. *tk beams a smile* oh oh, oh...and did I mention the licking a-and the groping?

Tk's new and improved "GrrArgg"

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Tara was similarly riveted, her body on slow burn as Willow's lips parted and her mouth opened, the food slipping inside and being consumed. Never in her life had Tara ever wanted to be a chicken casserole so badly...Later that night..."It's good to be a chicken casserole," Tara murmured, before passing out. ~ Answering Darkness by Sassette

tkheaven
 


Re: wow

Postby Jennpurr » Tue Jul 09, 2002 4:54 pm

Hee.... ditto, tk!



I second all of it. ONE MORE??? :cry :cry NO!! Tell me I read that wrong?



Athame, it's been a wonderful ride and I thank you for writing this. I hate to see it end, but I know everything has to come to an end at some point.



Thank you. **Walks over to tk to join her in her pout**



Jen

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"Alyson Hannigan is a frickin' amazing kisser." Amber Benson


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Mi corazon perdido en ti...

Jennpurr
 


Re: Angels and Goddesses

Postby Triscuit7 » Tue Jul 09, 2002 5:12 pm

The end?????

Oh say it isn't so.



Blue Athame I have absolutely loved this fic right from the angel in the library, the beautiful bountiful breasts, the grilled cheese sandwiches, the picnics....through the first kiss and the glorious lovemaking. Thank you so very much.



Triscuit7

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I brought marshmallows!

Triscuit7
 


Re: Angels and Goddesses

Postby eccentrictulip » Tue Jul 09, 2002 7:41 pm

the end? no......*pouty face*

*please use both hands....*

eccentrictulip
 


Re: Angels and Goddesses

Postby Blue Athame 1 » Tue Jul 09, 2002 9:34 pm



The now shamelessly drunk Athame raises her head and smiles at her beloved kittens. Chocolate...does anyone have chocolate...she might be persuaded with chocolate.

Blue Athame 1
 


Angels and Goddesses

Postby Drakkenfyre » Tue Jul 09, 2002 10:15 pm

My lady, I will provide you with whatever you need. All you need do is ask..You know I am here to serve your every wish and desire...or take advantage of you while you are drunk!!

"In my world there are people in chains and we ride them like ponies."

Edited by: Drakkenfyre at: 7/9/02 9:17:17 pm
Drakkenfyre
 


Re: Angels and Goddesses

Postby eccentrictulip » Tue Jul 09, 2002 10:27 pm

chocolate!! i have chocolate!!!!! *kneels and presents lovely box of chocolates to athame*

*please use both hands....*

eccentrictulip
 


Re: Angels and Goddesses

Postby bulldog tidnab » Tue Jul 09, 2002 10:59 pm

i shall second my favorite dragon's statement, anything you need you shall have my lady. it is the least i can do in exchange for use of this lovely couch. if it is chocolate you desire, then chocolate you shall have.



as for you dear dragon... gasp! taking advantage of our lady. i am disappointed.

i think this means you win another round...



foiled again!





And so we live to fight another day.

bulldog tidnab
 


Re: Angels and Goddesses

Postby Blue Athame 1 » Wed Jul 10, 2002 6:06 am





Well it is about damn time someone tried to take advantage of me! Poor lady in a house full of kittens and all alone. You all are so well behaved. Come on, lose your clothes, run about, have some fun, entertain bulldog, fly be free.



And as for you you naughty dragon....took you long enough!Athame smiles...come here you....it looks like I may need some story ideas.:)



A.



Yum....chocolate...you have me now you wicked things.

Blue Athame 1
 


Re: Angels and Goddesses

Postby tkheaven » Wed Jul 10, 2002 6:16 am

All teh chocolate you want, and did I mention I'd throw in some strawberries to the batch? Nice...fresh..cooool..sweeeeet strawberries.....

(look at tht, I just get into work and already I'm feeling evil) :angel

Tk's new and improved "GrrArgg"

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Tara was similarly riveted, her body on slow burn as Willow's lips parted and her mouth opened, the food slipping inside and being consumed. Never in her life had Tara ever wanted to be a chicken casserole so badly...Later that night..."It's good to be a chicken casserole," Tara murmured, before passing out. ~ Answering Darkness by Sassette

tkheaven
 


Re: Angels and Goddesses

Postby Blue Athame 1 » Wed Jul 10, 2002 7:01 am





Chocolate....Strawberries....Seduction....To hell with the Brandy (all though it was very nice, thank you)...time for Champagne! "Cook, break out the champagne....champagne for everyone!"



Hmmm maybe I will find a story idea here.

The still drunk Athame is pulled back into the butler's pantry, by that randy dragon. Hope they wont be needing any glasses she giggled into the dragons neck.





Weeeeeeeeeee.

Blue Athame 1
 


Angels and Goddesses

Postby Drakkenfyre » Wed Jul 10, 2002 3:10 pm

Come here my lady *growls the dragon* I do believe there some things I need to do...to you! We will make up some wonderful ideas for your story but first we must test them. *Drakkenfyre opens a bottle of champagne and pours it slowly on the lady's breast* I will leave the rest to the imagination.

"In my world there are people in chains and we ride them like ponies."

Edited by: Drakkenfyre at: 7/10/02 4:43:44 pm
Drakkenfyre
 


Re: Angels and Goddesses

Postby bulldog tidnab » Wed Jul 10, 2002 6:50 pm

good lord... it's getting rather warm in here. hmmm, the temperature change seems to be coming from the butler's pantry. interesting. wonder what it could be. *sends a pointed look to her much loved dragon* oh my dear, you know i love it when you growl like that... do stop, lest i get jealous. (and when making use of champagne don't forget the stawberries, the lady will love them)

*scampers off to her couch to dream of her dragon and her lady* (in a completely innocent way) :grin



i would be forgiven if i failed
i may not be forgiven
if i succeed.

bulldog tidnab
 

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