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Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby foreverpiper » Sat Jul 27, 2002 5:54 am

*slaps hand on forehead* DUH!!!!! See, now I feel stupid! :lol hehe. As for the waking up thing...if i just woke up it'd probably be around 1 in the afternoon. It's wierd cause last night i didn't get one, not one, wink of sleep! :yawn (I love this thing)



I do however, have an update for all you guys. Yes, you heard me right...an actual honest to goodness update. I wish it could be longer but it's kinda short...sleepyness and all. :grin





Chapter 8: Finding Xander



Buffy, Willow, Tara, Dawn, and Anya had been sitting in front of the guys bathroom for at least 5 minutes, and they were all getting mildly restless.



“Where is he?” Anya wined, “It can’t take him that long!”



No one had an answer so they all just shrugged.



“Well, I’m not waiting around any longer.” Anya said, standing up and began walking away.



“Anya, where are you –” Anya strutted right up to the boy’s bathroom door and went into it, banging the door open as she went.



“- going?” Buffy finished lamely.



The four remaining ladies could hear some muffled yells behind the still-open door, and then a loud “Xander?” could be heard from the inside. Doors opening and shutting loudly could be heard, which was undoubtedly Anya searching for her missing fiancé.



About a minute later, an angry looking Anya stormed out of the bathroom, huffing. “He’s not in there!” she glared at the door, “I opened every single stall door and he wasn’t in any one of them!”



Buffy, Dawn, and Willow chortled at Anya’s display.



She turned to them, “What’s so funny?”



Dawn looked up at her from where she sat and choked out a “nothing” before raising her hand to her mouth, trying to muffle her very loud and obvious giggles. This however, did nothing but make Buffy and Willow laugh even harder.



Tara sat with a small smile on her face. She, for one, wasn’t going to engage in the wrath of Anya. “Anya, I’m sure we’ll find him. Why don’t you and I just go into the bathroom…uh, the-the other bathroom, and just splash some water on our faces, okay?”



“Okay,” Anya sighed dejectedly.



“We’ll be right back,” Tara told the others, who were still in fits of giggles.



Tara led Anya around the shop separating the boys and girls bathrooms, and she opened the door for Anya. They were no other people in the vicinity, which Tara thought, was a little odd. Anya wrinkled her nose at the smell of the bathroom and went over to the sink to splash some water over her face. She repeated the process a few times while Tara walked to where the mirrors were.



She frowned at her reflection. Some of her hair had come undone from the ponytail she had hastily put up after going on the log flume. Tara blushed a little when she remembered the ride as she undid her ponytail and put it into a new one, which was much less messy. All of a sudden she heard a toilet flush, and whipped around to scan the area. She had though the only occupants of the bathroom were she and Anya. Apparently she had been wrong. She shrugged it off and turned back to look in the mirror, examining herself and trying as best she could to fix her hair, which, at the moment, seemed nearly impossible to do.



Anya had finished washing her face and called to Tara. “You coming?”



“In a sec. Let me just freshen up a bit.” Tara answered.



“Whatever,” Anya called, before Tara heard the door close, signaling that Anya had left. She turned away from the full-body mirror and went to the sink where Anya had been moments ago and washed her hands. She looked up to see her reflection once more.



The end stall opened suddenly, as Tara saw in the mirror, and a large shape backed out of it. Tara studied the figure in the mirror. Hey, that looks a lot like –



“Xander!” she said, rushing to him. He looked rather winded as he leaned against the stall door, breathing heavily.



“Remind me never ever to get ribs again…or at least…” his cheeks puffed out a little, “not so many of ‘em,” he finished. Tara nodded.



“Are you okay?” she asked him.



“Yeah, I’m better.” He shook his head before moving his jaw up and down and making a face of disgust, “my taste buds are telling another story though.” He looked at her for a moment before asking.



“Hey, what are you doing in here anyway?” he asked her. Tara bit her lip to try and keep herself from laughing.



Xander looked around, his eyes widening in horror. There are no urinals on the walls! “Oh, God!” he moaned, banging his head against the stall door lightly before stopping because well…it hurt. “This day just can’t get any worse.” He moaned, putting his hands on Tara’s shoulder to steady himself as they began walking towards the door.



The door to the bathroom opened.



“Tar, honey?” Willow called, “You okay?” she walked into the main part of the roomy bathroom and stopped dead when she saw Tara and Xander, Xander’s hands on Tara’s shoulder.



Her eyes widened before she decided to mess with her best friend a little, “Xander Harris! Are you trying to steal some time alone with my girlfriend?” she scowled playfully at him, “Is that why you went into the girls bathroom? Cause lemme tell ya mister, this one here,” she pointed at Tara, “she’s mine.” She walked over to where they were and playfully yanked her girlfriend out of Xander’s grip, slinging an arm around Tara’s waist. She sighed dramatically, “Xander, Xander, Xander…what would Anya say?” she shook her head, lightheartedly.



Xander rolled his eyes at her. “You’re never gonna let me live this down are ya Will?”



Willow grinned. “Nope.” Xander turned around and threw his hands up. When he turned back around a bright flash filled his vision. He blinked and glared at Willow through the stars. He patted his pocket where his camera should have been. Unsurprisingly, it wasn’t there.



“Willow! What was that for?” he asked, slightly peeved.



Willow just grinned at him innocently, waving the camera she had taken from Dawn in front of him. “Two words, Xand.” She held up two of her fingers, “Log. Flume.”



Xander huffed, “Fine, whatever, let’s just go.” He opened the door to let Willow and Tara out. They stepped out, giggling at him as three girls appeared and went into the bathroom, looking at him strangely.



He followed the two Wiccans. “Oh, and by the way I’m fine Will, thanks for asking,” he called to her sarcastically. Without turning, she lifted the arm that wasn’t around Tara and gave him a thumbs up sign behind her back, before putting it down again, and snuggling farther into Tara, as they both walked back to the group.



Xander shrugged, helplessly, and trotted after them.



TBC…







Also...my beta reader gave me a great idea. Since most of you seem to like Xander's camera...she suggested a contest of who could make the coolest photo of them (Willow and Tara or of the whole gang) that would be like a developed photo of them straight from Xander's camera. In fact, it doesn't even have to be a contest...it could...but what do you guys think?

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

Edited by: foreverpiper at: 7/27/02 4:55:04 am
foreverpiper
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby Loco2 » Sat Jul 27, 2002 6:21 am

heh heh, highly amusing, i saw the xander in the girls toilets thing coming...hee hee. aw, sorry you couldn't sleep. you want some help with that? ;) i'm sure i could think of something...



lovely update, as always!



and the camera thing - i'm not sure i understand, but it sounds like a very good idea! i say go for it!





"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby spazz07 » Sat Jul 27, 2002 7:11 am

He he Xander's not having a good day, though Will an Tara wouldn't be complaining i bet. :grin



A photo contest, great idea, can't wait to read it :)



Cheers

Nath

If life was meant to be a bed of daisy's we'd have chicken crap thown on us all the time.

spazz07
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby pikescoob » Sat Jul 27, 2002 7:31 am

Sorry you had trouble sleeping....I hate when that happens : Hehe....I knew Anya would go charging into the men's room :lol . Aww poor Xander not only was he sick but he went into the wrong bathroom :laugh can't imagine how embarrassing that would be....at least it was only Tara in there with him.



--Michelle

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Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby foreverpiper » Sat Jul 27, 2002 7:42 am

Steph: hehe, yeah I thought the Xander thing might have been a gimmie. :D



Nathan: No, Xander's really, really not. But don't worry...his day should get better...maybe...ya know...with all the picture taking...;)



Michelle: So kay...after a nice cup of coffie (I'm lying, it wuz apple juice) i woke up. :) Tara's always good for the comfort thing! :grin





Now for the photo contest. I'm not sure if I made myself clear or not cause i wuz really tired, but now I'm remotly awake so I'll try and explain it in a less confusing way. :)



Okay...I was thinking if after, or before, the fic is finished, that some people who know how to do the photoshop thing (or whatever the thing is where you can make your own pictures) and actually re-create one or more of the pictures in the fic. Take for example, the Xander with all the stuffed animals. The picture could include an attempted Xander with him holding a bunch of stuffed animals. I really don't know how to do that cause I suck at photoshop. But it's like what Shinnen made for Lisa's "Unexpected Consequences". Did that make sence? Tell me if you kittens think it's a okay idea.

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby Loco2 » Sat Jul 27, 2002 7:54 am

hee hee hee, i'll make one and send it to you, don't expect it to be any good! heh heh!

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby foreverpiper » Sat Jul 27, 2002 7:59 am

:lol Okay, I won't. j/k I'm sure it'll be great! :grin

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby Loco2 » Sat Jul 27, 2002 8:10 am

no, seriously - i just made it. just now. it took me two minutes! sorry, i am in a funny mood, so there's bound to be a killer bunny in it somewhere. that damn killer bunny appears in every picture i draw somehow....;)



steph

(who has just sent you the pic, so u should be very, VERY afraid!)

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby foreverpiper » Sat Jul 27, 2002 8:41 am

i'm gonna go check it out right now! and believe me...i'm terrified!

foreverpiper
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby Grimaldi » Sat Jul 27, 2002 10:29 am

cool update :) i thought that Xander was at least smart enough to see the difference between the womans restroom and the mens restroom, its a good thing that Xander has no guy friends, he really would have be teased for walking into the wrong bathroom.

Dude, we're surrounded by perverts!

Cross my heart, smack me dead, stick a lobster on my head.

We'll roll on with our heads held high - The Living End

Grimaldi
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby Loco2 » Sat Jul 27, 2002 10:35 am

ahem. there is nothing wrong with my accent and i do NOT sound like emily from friends! grrr



steph :grin

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby snuggle79 » Sat Jul 27, 2002 10:43 am

Excellent Update! :D And Xander in the girls room... :laugh :lol ... poor guy..

foreverpiper, I totally like your sleepy smiley, it's really cute! :D



Oh baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I ... stop explaining things.

Hi, um Tara..how are you? well...I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time...for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

Edited by: snuggle79 at: 7/27/02 9:44:23 am
snuggle79
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby Jennpurr » Sat Jul 27, 2002 10:53 am

Piper, Awww... don't pout. The park is pretty cool. I haven't been in a couple of years though. Hopefully I can get there soon. The looping starship makes my tummy all acidy, so I don't ride it. :lol The Battering Ram looks cool though.



That's right, the Log Flume. For the life of my I couldn't remember the name of it. :( Oooh... more Willow and Tara of the wet variety? :grin Looking forward to it.



Hee... you used the yawny smiley. That thing is sooo damn cute. :)



The Next Tara Maclay, Thank you. Pipsqueak was kind enough to make it for me. I can't help, but :drool over it. But, thank you. :)



Ooooh... update!!!



**Scampers off to read**



Jen



Edited to give feedback:



Hee.... poor Xander, going into the girls bathroom. He better be glad there wasn't anyone in there. Who knows what he could have been hit with. :lol Poor guy.



I loved the little scene with Tara and Willow. Will pretending to be angry and then getting him back with the camera. Hee... go Will! :grin



Lovely update. Thank you, Piper. Looking forward to the next part. ;)

------------------------Willow: strong like an amazon?
Tara: Strong like an amazon, right.

Edited by: Jennpurr  at: 7/27/02 10:04:36 am
Jennpurr
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby foreverpiper » Sat Jul 27, 2002 11:44 am

Grimaldi: Well if your running to the bathrooms about to puke I’m not sure if the signs on the door are the main priority! :lol And who says he won’t get teased by the girls? *hint* *hint* ;)



Steph: I never said there was anything wrong with your accent. Of course…I don’t have my mic on so you can’t hear the tone of my voice. *grins innocently* Talk to you later…Emily…



snuggle79: Thanks! Xander is a poor, poor soul! :yawn :yawn :yawn it’s just adorable!



Jen: Fine, fine, fine…I won’t pout. I can be a little envious though right? *looks up hopefully*



Yeah, like that’s never happened to me before! :lol Of course there’s gonna be more wet Willow and Tara! What would this fic be without Xander’s camera, Dawn’s evilness, and of course…wet witches!?



:yawn :yawn :yawn What can I say I just fell in love with the thing! :grin



And much thanks for de’ feedback! :)



It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby Loco2 » Sat Jul 27, 2002 12:12 pm

pah!!! i give you emily! i do NOT sound like emily!!!

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby snuggle79 » Sat Jul 27, 2002 12:21 pm

foreverpiper: Pleeeease can you tell me, how to make that adorable sleepy emoticion?? :)

Thanx!!



Oh baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I ... stop explaining things.

Hi, um Tara..how are you? well...I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time...for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

snuggle79
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby foreverpiper » Sat Jul 27, 2002 1:15 pm

EMILY!: Well to me you do! (But only cause your the only English person I've ever talked to so that may have something to do with it ;) )



snuggle79: All you have to do is press



: yawn



but without the space :yawn :yawn :yawn see? very simple! :grin

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby snuggle79 » Sat Jul 27, 2002 1:17 pm

Thank you! :yawn soooo cute! :grin

Oh baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I ... stop explaining things.

Hi, um Tara..how are you? well...I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time...for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

snuggle79
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby foreverpiper » Sat Jul 27, 2002 1:21 pm

Your welcome. :) *sigh* they're just the cutest damn thing i ever did see! i can't get over em! :yawn

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby Loco2 » Sat Jul 27, 2002 2:40 pm

i don't care!!! i do NOT sound like emily!!! hmmph. :miff

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby TheWhiz » Sat Jul 27, 2002 3:51 pm

Phew, I have sore eyes!! I've just read through all of your fic!! But it has totally been worth it!! I love it!!

I think the theme park setting is great, but thats cos I love theme parks! :grin

You have captured the characters really well, I especially love the way you have written Anya :rollin

All the W/T intreaction is great, really sweet!!

I'm looking forward to reading the next part now!!



P.S I don't sound like Emily either!!! Well I don't think I do even if you do!!

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"

TheWhiz
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby foreverpiper » Sat Jul 27, 2002 4:22 pm

Steph: *pout* fine! ruin my fun...



TheWiz: :grin Thanks very much! I'm glad you like it! As I've said before and will once more say again...Anya rules! YEAH!! *cheer*



And as for the Emily part...you TOTALLY sound like her, so i hearby dub you the name...Emily! Tis what I shall call you from now on!

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby TheWhiz » Sat Jul 27, 2002 4:34 pm

Yep, I agree Anya does rule, along with W/T of course!! :grin



If it makes you happy to call me Emily go ahead!! After all, need to keep you happy in order to get updates!! Maybe I do sound like her to others!!



Emily AKA TheWhiz!!! :lol

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"

TheWhiz
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby The Next Tara Maclay » Sat Jul 27, 2002 6:18 pm

Nice Update.

The Next Tara Maclay
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby The Rose24 » Sat Jul 27, 2002 10:59 pm

That was hilarious. :lol

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

The Rose24
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby MissQuirky » Sat Jul 27, 2002 11:29 pm

Just finished readin ur fic, took awhile but I LOVED it!! It has some really really funny parts, really hilarious!! Anya kills me!! And i'm really enjoyin this lil playfull Dawn. I soo can't wait 4 ur next update!! :)

"W-well, I-I was wondering, maybe, you would wanna go out sometime? For coffee ... food ... kisses and gay love?" - Willow (Normal Again)

MissQuirky
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby Jennpurr » Sat Jul 27, 2002 11:49 pm

Quote:
Jen: Fine, fine, fine…I won’t pout. I can be a little envious though right? *looks up hopefully*




:lol Yes, you can be envious. That's fine. I'm sorry it makes you envious though. :( Come to Texas, then I can take you there. That would be cool. ;)



Quote:
Of course there’s gonna be more wet Willow and Tara!




Is that a promise? :drool ... OH, that anticipation. I don't think I can stand it.



And you are very welcome for the feedback. Oooh... I think that's an excellent idea about the making of the pics. You should e-mail Shinnen, and maybe see if she'd be willing to do it, for you. More soon?? Please?? :)



Steph, I wanna see the pic you made?? Can I? Can I? :)



Take care,

Jen

------------------------Willow: strong like an amazon?
Tara: Strong like an amazon, right.

Jennpurr
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby fidds » Sun Jul 28, 2002 2:58 am

great update! :)

hehe poor Xander having to go into the girls toilets

Very funny as always ;)



*Hannah*

********************************************
I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

fidds
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby Loco2 » Sun Jul 28, 2002 3:14 am

yeep. u realise i made it on paint and it took me two minutes, right..... but sure, i'll send it. :D





see, now thewhiz, SHE sounds like emily. there you go, a new person to harrass!!



steph or squinty or stpeh, or steop or strph, and i'll stop now...

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: Ch. 8: Finding Xander

Postby TheWhiz » Sun Jul 28, 2002 8:33 am

So I'm a new person to harass am I?

God job I'm used to harassment from friends!



Emily/TheWhiz/2!!!!

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"

TheWhiz
 

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