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Re: Update

Postby warriorlove » Sun Feb 29, 2004 5:30 am

MORE :bounce MORE :bounce MORE :bounce



Otherwise I would get :gnome :-)

I can take care of her...even if she never...she's my girl.

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Feedback

Postby Lost in blue » Sun Feb 29, 2004 3:09 pm

Gimpgirl- Hey baby. Thank you for your feedback gorgeous. :heart I don’t think I would ever let you leave without getting my smoochies, me needs my kisses…. mmmm…. *clears throat* sorry got lost for a moment :blush



pikescoob- Dude!! Thanks again for your feedback, always appreciated. I don’t know what Willow was thinking leaving without kissing her girl, I think she had a momentary lack of sanity. Who doesn’t take every excuse to smooch with their honey?! I am Queen of making up the excuses so definitely not me. :D



sam darls- Thanks for the feedback. I’m sure Tara will be okay, all she needs is some Willow-kisses *sigh* kisses: the cure to all things.



Sappho- I hope I can make up for the lack of Willow-kisses, I’ll do my best.



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Thanks for your replies to the feedback, I love hearing back from writing kittens.

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No problem :D I’m only sorry it took me so long to thank everyone properly. I didn’t realise how important feedback was until I started posting myself. Feedback gives me nourishment!!



warriorlove- don’t :gnome more on the way, in just a few minutes in fact. :D Thanks for the feedback :bounce



"Had a bottle and a half of this very interesting beer called Delirium Tremens. All I have to say is that it had pink elephants on the bottle." -Amber Benson[/i]

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Update

Postby Lost in blue » Sun Feb 29, 2004 3:14 pm

Hey kittens. Good day today. Went round my Dad's with my sister and spent the day watching M*A*S*H- no other way to spend a Sunday. And now I've had X-files on all evening whilst writing.... *sigh* I love weekends. Anyway I should really stop talking and just get on with the update:



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Willow had had to put off going to see Tara that morning. Riley had come back and since then everything had been a little crazy. Now though Willow was stood outside Tara’s dorm room. Her guilt over the previous afternoon had reached new heights. Willow took a deep breath and pushed her guilt down and forced a smile on her face as she knocked on the door.



The door swung open to reveal a slightly dishevelled looking Tara, she looked like she hadn’t slept in days.



“Willow!” She exclaimed in surprise.

“Ummm, hi. Mind if I come in?”

“Y-yes of course.” With that Tara quickly stepped aside. Tara closed the door and waited for Willow to speak, avoiding her gaze.

“Tara, are you okay?” Willow couldn’t help but notice the dark circles under the girl’s eyes, and her eyes.



Oh Goddess her eyes.



Those eyes which normally shone so brightly whenever Willow was around looked so dull, so sad. And not to mention that Tara was refusing to look at her.

“Yes I am fine.” Tara replied trying to make her voice sound normal. In truth she was nervous, she was sure Willow had come round to tell her it had all been a mistake with them, her heart ached at the thought.

“Oh, ok.” Willow couldn’t help but feel her heart wrench with fear that Tara had changed her mind about them. Both girls stood silent for a moment, both lost in their own distressed thoughts.



Why won’t she look at me? Has she changed her mind? Doesn’t she want me anymore? What did I do? What do I do?



Willow’s head was spinning. The only way she could know what was wrong was to speak. She put on her resolve face, took a deep breath and spoke.



“Tara I-I have to apologise.”

“No, Will, it’s ok, I mean you know- I understand.”

“You do? Wait, what do you understand?”

“I-I understand t-that you’ve had second thoughts.” Tara was trying desperately now not to cry. Between her guilt over the spell and having not seen Willow since she was an emotional wreck.

“What? Why would you…. oh Tara I’m so sorry. That’s not it at all. I’m apologising for the fact that I’ve not really been here the past few days. I mean other than yesterday but that wasn’t really for long, and I left in such a hurry and, and…. It’s not that I haven’t wanted to be here. I love spending time with you. I didn’t mean to leave the way I did yesterday but with everything going on I was kinda all with the distracted and I didn’t think of how that might have seemed to you and, Tara I’m so sorry. Do, do you forgive me?” Tara looked up at Willow for the first time since she’d arrived. Her heart wrenched at the sad look on Willow’s face. Her beautiful little face was so full of concern and guilt, she looked so damn cute and huggable right now.

“I-it’s okay Willow.” Tara’s voice was barely above a whisper, she couldn’t believe it was all going to be okay, Willow hadn’t changed her mind, she wasn’t leaving her.

“Really? It’s just, these past few days, they’ve been so crazy.”

“Will, it’s okay. But what’s happened?” Tara moved to her bed and gestured for Willow to join her. The two girls sat comfortably on the bed together as Willow explained everything that had been going on.

“So Riley, is he okay now?”

“We think so. I mean he’s back at least. He seems okay. He’s still hurt but it’s nothing that won’t heal.”

“How about mentally? I mean, he’s just been through a lot, it must have been hard for him.” Willow smiled at Tara’s words. Only she could care so much about someone she’d never even met.

“He’s doing okay, as well as can be expected considering. He’s not so much with the insanity now at least.”

“Good, that’s good. And how’s Buffy? It was quite an ordeal for her too.”

“She’s good. She’s just so relieved to have Riley back in one piece.”

“So do you know what you’re going to do next, the Scoobies I mean?”

“Not really. We know nothing about Adam really other than the fact that he’s really strong and really crazy, oh and that he likes killing things in what seems to be a completely random fashion.”

“Oh,” Tara couldn’t stop the slightly nervous tone in her voice, she wasn’t yet used to the world of the Scooby gang, “so ummm, no ideas on how to stop him?”

“Not yet, we will do though. We’re meeting up tomorrow night to do some research. It was a little late to start tonight and we thought maybe Buffy and Riley could use a little alone time together. Actually I need to kinda ask you a favour…. ummm, could I maybe stay over here tonight? I know that its kinda rude what with having not been round the past few days and I feel bad asking but…. would you mind?”

Tara broke into a broad grin. “I would love that.”

“Really, you don’t mind?” Willow was grinning now too.

“Of course.” With that Willow pounced Tara and pulled her into a huge hug.

“I’ve missed you ya know.” Willow said pulling back to look into Tara’s eyes which were getting their sparkle back.

“Really? I-I missed you too.” Both girls gazed at one another, their feelings flowing between them. Their lips met for a soft, lingering kiss. Both girls too exhausted to do much more lay in each others arms and fell into deep contented sleeps.



.....to be continued.



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Well that's it for another part. Hope it was okay. More up tomorrow :)



Love Helen xxxxxx :pinky



"Had a bottle and a half of this very interesting beer called Delirium Tremens. All I have to say is that it had pink elephants on the bottle." -Amber Benson[/i]

Lost in blue
 


Re: Update

Postby Gimpgirl » Sun Feb 29, 2004 3:36 pm

Hey honey....



Yet another great update. Keep up the writing cause I just can't get enough. I'm glad that Willow and Tara are working things out. I know that would never happen to us, but I'm glad our girls are working things out. And I'm glad that your day was filled with fun things. You are always happy when you go round to your Dad's and just hang out with your sister.



Anyway-enough babbling...more, more, more.....please *pout*



I love you......:pinky



Michelle

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx:kiss2

"just when you think you got me figured out the seasons already changing...."-Meredith Brooks

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Re: Update

Postby sam darls » Sun Feb 29, 2004 3:38 pm

Awww..kissage..yay!! Bless those two :heart . Great update. Loved it. Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

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Oh....the days

Postby LizPuRR » Sun Feb 29, 2004 10:47 pm

As per usual another great update....



keep 'em coming!!! the updates I mean, however I wouldn't complain if it were the girls;) ;)

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"Oops, that kind of talk's more appropriate for the bedroom. I apologize."

Alyson Hannigan, That 70's Show

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Re: Oh....the days

Postby The Rose24 » Sun Feb 29, 2004 11:59 pm

I love your frequent updates.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


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Re: Oh....the days

Postby SJ » Mon Mar 01, 2004 2:14 am

Lots of updatey goodness :read

SJ
 


Re: Oh....the days

Postby Sappho » Mon Mar 01, 2004 5:50 am

Oh yay! But, more smoochies, more smoochies? :eatme



~Sappho :balloons

Willow: Yeah, that’s me. Reliable dog geyser person.

***

Anya: Give me a beer. Bartender: I.D. Anya: [Looks at him w/ disbelief] Bartender: I.D.

Anya: I’m 1,120 years old!!! Just give me a friggin’ beer! Bartender: I.D. Anya: [Sigh] Give me a Coke.

Sappho
 


Feedback

Postby Lost in blue » Mon Mar 01, 2004 10:16 am

Gimpgirl- As usual thanks for your feedback baby. I always love to get feedback from my number one fan- even if you are biased!!:kiss2



sam darls- thanks again for your feedback. If you liked the kissage in that one I hope you enjoy the next lot I have planned.



LizPuRR- thanks for your feedback. Don't worry I'll keep 'em coming, the updates that is. As for our girls, well if I get the guts to post Nc-17 stuff then I will.... me being brave doesn't happen often though, I tend to be like :yikes



TheRose24- thanks again for your feedback. I'm glad you like the frequent updates, what can I say- I'm waaay too impatient!! :D



SJ- Thanks for the feedback,, hope you like the next lot of updatey goodness, although I've gotta finish writing it first!!



Sappho- thanks for the feedback. Ok just for you I will put more smoochies in the next update.... what do you mean I was gonna have them in it anyway?! Tara and Willow smoochies *sigh* ya gotta love 'em!!



Thanks again to everyone for feedback, it's much appreciated.



Love Helen xxxxx:pinky



"Had a bottle and a half of this very interesting beer called Delirium Tremens. All I have to say is that it had pink elephants on the bottle." -Amber Benson[/i]

Lost in blue
 


Update

Postby Lost in blue » Mon Mar 01, 2004 1:08 pm

Hey Kittens!! Thanks for all the feedback everyone, it's much appreciated. Anyway for once I'm not gonna babble today so I'll just get straight to the update:-



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Willow awoke to the feel of Tara’s arms around her. She smiled to herself, she had really missed this the past few days. She opened her eyes to see the familiar blue pools gazing fondly at her. Willow smiled even wider.

“Morning.” She mumbled, snuggling closer to Tara. Tara returned her smile.

“Morning sleepy head. You look very cheerful this morning, particularly for someone who is such a grouch usually when she wakes up.”

“Hey who you calling a grouch?”

Tara chuckled softly, “I’m sorry, I must have been mistaken, clearly you’re never a grouch in the morning.” The only response Willow had to this was to poke Tara in the side playfully. Tara giggled and assaulted the redhead with tickles. Willow desperately attempted to defend herself from the attack but her efforts were in vain. So Willow resorted to the only tactic she could think of and planted a full and smouldering kiss on Tara’s lips. Tara immediately stopped her bombardment and sunk into the kiss. After a few moments of enjoying the feel of Willow’s lips against her own she pulled back slightly.

“Mmmm, using Willow-kisses against me, that’s so cheating.” Her voice was mockingly indignant but she couldn’t stop the lustful gaze she was bestowing upon Willow. The past few days had seemed like an eternity.

“Well it worked didn’t it? And anyway you didn’t seem to be complaining.” Willow smirked, knowing that Tara most definitely had not minded her choice of tactics, but just in case she started to kiss and nibble Tara’s neck.

“Mmmm, no, I don’t mind.”



Their kissing soon hotted up, they had been apart for a few days and whilst they had both been too exhausted the previous night they were both feeling awake and refreshed this morning. They had lost time to make up for and Willow intended to make sure Tara knew how much she had been missed.



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Hours later the two girls were laying in each others arms, bathing in the warmth of their afterglow. Both girls sleepy but satisfied. Willow’s hands gently danced their way over Tara’s tummy whilst Tara’s fingers weaved their way through Willow’s flamey locks.

“Tara?”

“Mmmm?” Tara’s voice had a dreamy lilt, lost in the feel of Willow’s hands as they performed their magic over her stomach.

“I am sorry you know, for the way I was yesterday.”

Tara opened her eyes and propped herself onto her elbow so that she could look into Willow’s eyes. “I know Will, it’s okay, really.”

“No. I mean I didn’t even kiss you goodbye, I didn’t mean to, it was just-” Willow was cut off by a soft kiss from Tara.

“Ssh sweetie it’s okay. I-I understand. And besides I think the past few hours more than made up for one missed kiss.” Tara smirked sexily at Willow.

“I know but, I just feel bad. I shouldn’t have just left you like that.”

“Will.” Tara chuckled softly and adoringly at just how cute Willow could be. “It’s okay I understand. You had things on your mind, what with so much going on with the Scoobies.”

“Yeah? It’s really okay?”

“Yes. Sweetie if that’s the way you apologise you are most definitely forgiven. I really don’t think I could “forgive” you many more times in one afternoon.” Tara grinned cheekily which received a smirk in return from Willow.

“Yeah? Maybe I should test that theory…” Willow murmured softly, the words gently tickling Tara’s ear. Tara giggled softly. Her giggle became a moan as Willow began to nibble on her ear, slowly licking her way over the lobe.

“Uhhh Will.” Tara gave herself over to the sensations firing through her body. She had never known such a simple contact would be capable of causing such an array of sensations to course through her body. Suddenly and somewhat unexpectedly Willow pulled away. Tara whimpered in confusion and frowned in frustration.

“Nah you were probably right.” Willow said, turning away smirking she made as if to move away from Tara. She was stopped by the weight of Tara on top of her, pinning her down on the bed.

“My, my Miss Willow, how the tables have turned.” Tara grinned devilishly down at Willow.

“Oh yeah, how do you know this wasn’t my plan all along?” Willow waggled her eyebrows suggestively at the sexy girl above her.

“You are such a vixen.” Tara chuckled. With that she leaned down and engaged Willow in a deep, passionate kiss.



Once again the girls found themselves lost in the sensations of one another. Afternoon turned to evening as they lay lightly dozing in one another’s arms.



.....to be continued.



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Ok well that's another part, well technically two small parts. Hope it was okay. More smoochies on the way :D :banana :eatme :bounce



Love Helen xxxxx :pinky



Lost in blue
 


Re: Update

Postby Gimpgirl » Mon Mar 01, 2004 1:29 pm

Hey honey....



More smoochies and yet again another great update. I so love the way you update everyday and don't leave all us Kittens hanging to figure out what is going to happen.



And now I have to be the typical feedback person.....more, more, more.



I love you....:pinky



Michelle

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx:kiss2

"just when you think you got me figured out the seasons already changing...."-Meredith Brooks

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Re: Update

Postby The Rose24 » Mon Mar 01, 2004 9:14 pm

I think Willow made up for her hasty exit alright. Wink. Wink :wink

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: Update

Postby SJ » Tue Mar 02, 2004 2:11 am

Lovely update and lots of smoochies :read

SJ
 


Re: Update

Postby sam darls » Tue Mar 02, 2004 3:28 am

Aww more smoochies..yay!! :heart . Wonderful update. Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Feedback

Postby Lost in blue » Tue Mar 02, 2004 1:45 pm

Gimpgirl- thanks again for your feedback baby. Sweetie you’ll never be the typical feedback person coz you is just too special.

The Rose24- thanks for the feedback. Yes I’m sure Willow did more than make up for her hasty exit…. perhaps I should put in some more smoochies just to be sure though.

SJ- thanks for the feedback. More smoochies goodness in the near future I promise.

sam darls- thanks for the feedback. As I said above there will be lots more smoochies to come. Gots to love the fluffiness.



Thanks kittens!!



Love Helen xxxx :pinky



My poetry site: http://www.xanga.com/home.aspx?user=lostinblue1004

Lost in blue
 


Update

Postby Lost in blue » Tue Mar 02, 2004 2:41 pm

Hey Kittens. Ok so I've just woken up from a nap so I'm not much with the talkative, I'm a very sleepy kitty today. Anyway I wanna get back to sleep so I'll just get on with the update:



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Later that evening Willow awoke to the incredible yet familiar feel of Tara’s lips against her own. Willow smiled into the kiss and opened her eyes to see Tara smiling affectionately at her.

“Sorry I had to wake you but it’s getting late. I wasn’t sure if you were meant to be doing anything this evening, if you had any plans?” Tara’s voice was full of the hope that Willow had no plans and that she would get to keep the gorgeous red-head to herself all night.

“Mmmm, it’s okay. I don’t mind waking up if I’m waking up to Tara-kisses. Ummm, no, I don’t think I have any plans. Oh wait I do.”

“You have plans?” Tara’s face fell in disappointment.

“Yeah, I’m going to be spending the night with a gorgeous blonde girl who has the most incredible blue eyes.” Tara grinned and then put on a mock look of jealousy.

“Who is this girl and how hard can I kick her ass?”

“Firstly sweetie you know I mean you, and secondly I don’t think you would harm a fly, let alone kick anyone’s ass.”

“You got me on that one. So ummm, you wanna stay over?”

“That was the plan. I can’t well get my smoochies if I go home now can I?”

“And what makes you think you’ll get smoochies when you’re here?” Tara tried to look indignant but couldn’t keep the smile from creeping onto her face.

“Oh I don’t know, maybe, this…” Willow pulled Tara into her arms and kissed her with all the fervour she could muster.

“Mmmm, okay you make a fair point. So ummm, you’re staying over?” Tara shot Willow her sexy half grin, one that nobody, especially not Willow, stood a chance against.

“I wouldn’t want to be anywhere else.” Willow stated honestly, her voice heartfelt.



And with that the girls spent another evening lost in the warmth, the comfort and passion of one another’s embrace.



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Willow woke up surrounded by Tara’s scent. She sighed happily and opened her eyes but found that the blonde was in fact not there. She frowned and sat up looking puzzled as she looked around the room. She then spotted a piece of paper propped up on the bedside table that had her name on, she recognised the writing as Tara’s.



Dear Willow,

I just couldn’t bear to wake you this morning; you just looked too cute sleeping. I know you have no lessons today so feel free to stay in my room if you like; I know how much you hate to get out of bed. Make yourself at home, my lessons will be done by lunch time, maybe we could spend the afternoon together? I thought maybe we could have a lazy video day- your choice of video, not that I’m trying to tempt you!



See you later,

Love always, Tara xxx




Willow smiled, she loved that Tara trusted her enough to let her stay in her room. She would still however have to make a complaint about the lack of Tara-smoochies this morning. Willow looked at the clock; she had two hours until Tara was due back. She went back to her own dorm room to shower and change and then returned to Tara’s room. She picked out some videos for them to watch later, she suspected they wouldn’t actually watch half of them, at least if she had her way, but she thought she’d at least make the effort of some pretence of innocence. Willow smirked to herself, she could think of far better ways to spend their time. Willow then settled herself on Tara’s bed, surrounded by several of Tara’s books on magic. Before she knew it the bedroom door was opening, revealing Tara who Willow decided had never looked sexier, or maybe she was just horny from having to wait all morning to see her, maybe a mixture of the two. Willow immediately sprung from the bed and had put her arms around Tara before the door had even had time to close behind her.

“Well hello to you too,” Tara said giggling, “someone miss me?” Tara quirked an eyebrow at her adorable red head.

“Well how do you expect me to be when I’ve had a whole morning deprived of my Tara-smoochies?” Willow said pouting cutely.

“Awww poor honey,” Tara mocked giving Willow a kiss, a kiss which Willow was quick to deepen.

“Mmmm…. Will…. Willow?” Tara was desperately trying to pull away, much to Willow’s disgruntlement.

“Awww sweety, again with the pout. I just need to put these things down and then I’m all yours.”

Willow suddenly realised that Tara indeed had her hands full.

“Oh, I’m sorry baby. I was all with the smoochies and I was smooching…. What is that stuff in your bag?”

“Ah that would be telling.” Tara smirked evilly. Willow made to grab the bag but Tara knew her too well and was quick to hold it out of reach.

“Now, now Miss Rosenberg. Someone’s impatient…. Don’t even think about using that pout on me again missy…. Oh ok,” Tara sighed relenting. Why was it when it came to Willow she could just never resist? She held out the bag to Willow who snatched it eagerly as though she feared Tara would find her resolve and change her mind. She peaked excitedly into the bag.

“Ooh lunch, you got me lunch? That’s so sweet.” She kissed Tara and then took one of the bags from Tara so they could set them down on Tara’s desk.

“Well I can’t have my girl going hungry, you’re gonna need you’re energy.” Tara smirked as she saw a smile creep onto Willow’s face.

“Couldn’t we just skip the food and get straight into some witchy lovin’?” Willow asked, suggestively running her fingers over Tara’s upper arms, up over her shoulders and then lightly down her chest but stopping with a smirk as Tara’s breath caught in her throat. Willow ran her hands gently down Tara’s body, down to her tummy. She ran her hands under Tara’s top, enjoying the softness of the bare skin of Tara’s stomach. Tara sighed contently as Willow ran her hands over and over her stomach.

“I’ve been waiting for you all morning Miss Maclay, I’ve been thinking about you that whole time and I want to show you exactly what I was thinking about.” Willow continued in a sexy, throaty voice.

“Uh huh.” Was all Tara could manage at this moment. Willow had a way of turning Tara from her usually intellectual self into someone barely able to remember her won name. Willow smiled sexily at Tara, she could tell her girl was most definitely getting turned on. She grinned evilly.

“Or we could just eat lunch and watch videos, if you prefer.” Willow said teasingly, making as if to move away from Tara. She didn’t get far though as Tara grabbed onto her arms and pulled Willow towards her. She landed a smouldering kiss on Willow’s lips, immediately turning Willow to jelly, nothing gave her dizzy knees like Tara kisses. Tara ran her hands wildly, passionately through Willow’s hair. Slowly she inched them slowly over to her bed. She pushed Willow gently down onto the bed, quickly pushing her books haphazardly to the floor. Both girls gave themselves over to their constant want and desire for each other, both the lunch and the videos lay forgotten.



.....to be continued.



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Well that's another part, well actually again it was two but you know me and impatience :D I hope it was okay, feedback as ever both welcomed and craved. My bed is calling to me and who am I to ignore it?! More up tomorrow.



Love Helen xxxxx :pinky



My poetry site: http://www.xanga.com/home.aspx?user=lostinblue1004

Lost in blue
 


Re: Update

Postby Gimpgirl » Tue Mar 02, 2004 3:03 pm

Hey honey....



Very awesome update. I so wish we could be having a lazy video day. Although, for some reason we can never make it through a video if we have seen it before. Hmm, I wonder why that is. It's all your fault just so you know...*smirk*.



Anyway-my tummy is telling me that I need food since umm well ok not eaten, but not my fault. As for the update...more, more, more.



I love you......:pinky



Michelle

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx:kiss2

"just when you think you got me figured out the seasons already changing...."-Meredith Brooks

Gimpgirl
 


Re: Update

Postby pikescoob » Tue Mar 02, 2004 8:43 pm

I just read the last few updates and there certainly was a lot of lovin going on...more than making up for the missed kiss. They have the best idea of how to spend their time together *squeaking bed post* :p Loved the updates dude!! *grin*



Michelle

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Re: Update

Postby The Rose24 » Tue Mar 02, 2004 9:27 pm

Lovely. Just Lovely.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: Update

Postby sam darls » Wed Mar 03, 2004 5:17 am

Ooh cute update, so lovely :love Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

I'm addicted to you..like chocolate- Tori (L and D)

sam darls
 


Re: Update

Postby BARE1975 » Wed Mar 03, 2004 5:25 am

A really good fict!!! I can't wait to see another update, it's like a drug!



More smoochies, please, all we need is love

BARE1975
 


Re: Update

Postby Sappho » Wed Mar 03, 2004 5:56 am

That was hot. :heart But. . . could you describe some of the scenes with more vivideness? Like kiss descriptions, or . . . other things. :kdevil Bottom line though- whatever you like to write and are comfortable with writing is the most important thing. :fallen Don't adjust anything if you don't want to. :D



~Sappho :balloons

Willow: Yeah, that’s me. Reliable dog geyser person.

***

Anya: Give me a beer. Bartender: I.D. Anya: [Looks at him w/ disbelief] Bartender: I.D.

Anya: I’m 1,120 years old!!! Just give me a friggin’ beer! Bartender: I.D. Anya: [Sigh] Give me a Coke.

Sappho
 


Feedback

Postby Lost in blue » Wed Mar 03, 2004 2:31 pm

Ok my computer is being a pain but I will hopefully get my thank you's and my update up tonight



Love Helen xxxx :pinky

Edited by: Lost in blue at: 3/3/04 1:36 pm
Lost in blue
 


Feedback

Postby Lost in blue » Wed Mar 03, 2004 2:37 pm

Gimpgirl- Thank you for the feedback baby. And sweetie you know as well as I do that it's not just the films we've seen before that we don't make it through, the ones we haven't seen get ignored too. Wow wonder where I get my ideas for this fic from?!

pikescoob- glad you liked the updates, thanks for the feedback. I love their ideas on how to spend their time together too, now if me and my baby could just be on the same side of the ocean *sigh*

The Rose24- Thanks for the feedback, hope you like the next lot.

sam darls- thanks for the feedback, more cuteness on the way. I can't resist the fluffiness- I think I'm addicted!!

BARE1975- Ooh new person, I'm so excited which I guess is probably kinda sad but hey, I never said I wasn't!! More smoochies to come I promise. Now I have "All you need is love" in my head *grabs one of many Beatles albums* (sorry- Beatles fan, ignore me) Thanks for the feedback, its always very much appreciated

Sappho- Thanks for the feedback. I do plan to write in more vivid details, just figured I should build up to it, save a full on smutty part for the appropriate part of the story. That plus I'm an evil tease and like to give just a little and then just leave my readers wanting more- mwa ha ha ha ha ha!! .... what?! It's fun!!



Anyway thanks everyone for the feedback, always appreciated- it feeds my soul!!



Love Helen xxxx



Edited by: Lost in blue at: 3/3/04 1:41 pm
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Feedback

Postby Lost in blue » Wed Mar 03, 2004 3:53 pm

Hey kittens!! Other than my computer being a pain I'm in a good mood tonight. Watched lots of M*A*S*H round my Dad's (you'd think we'd get sick of it by now, must have seen them all at least 20 times but nope, it's just too darn good!!) That plus Liverpool won the footie (soccer to you American weirdos.... just kidding baby) tonight- whoo hoo!! Ooh and since reading my feedback from BARE1975 I've had "All you need is love" in my head".... believe it or not I'm only 20, I know I sound middle aged!! Anyway enough babbling, (you can tell I'm in a good mood) on with the update:-



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“Willow.”

“Mmmm?” Willow mumbled. She was too lost in the feel of Tara’s fingers stroking over her bare shoulders and back to open her eyes.

“Will.” Tara tried again to get the red-head’s attention.

“Yeah” Willow reluctantly opened her eyes.

“I hate to break the mood sweetie but didn’t you say you had a Scooby meeting tonight?”

“Yeah but that’s not until 8:00.” Willow replied quickly falling back into her dreamy state.

“Ummm, Will, it’s just gone 7:00 already.” With that Willow’s eyes flew open. She sprang out of bed and ran around like a headless chicken, grabbing her scattered clothing. Tara quickly got out of bed to help the other girl who in her panic was really not getting anywhere.

“Will.” Tara tried to get Willow’s attention. Getting no reply other than Willow’s arms flailing around wildly she went over to the other girl and put her hands gently on her shoulders and reached up to tilt Willow’s gaze towards her. One look into those endless blue pools and Willow was calmed, at least enough to stop her still for a moment.

“Will honey, you’re not getting anywhere by running around like a crazy person. Let me help and I promise you’ll get to your meeting on time, ok?”

“Ok.” Willow pouted slightly, she looked like a child that had just been told off for eating too many cookies.

“Good. Now firstly I’m pretty sure that top is on the wrong way round.”

“Yeah well, that’s an easy mistake.” Willow pouted indignantly.

“Sweetie it’s also inside out.”

“Oh.” This time Willow broke into a large grin and both girls started to giggle.

“Ok now let me help you find your clothes coz I’m fairly sure that bra is mine.”

“Oh, I was just trying to steal it.” Willow grinned cheekily.

“Hmmm, being a lil perve huh? Care to rummage through my underwear draw too whilst you’re at it?” Tara teased. Both girls got the giggles again. They only managed to control themselves when they realised that at this rate Willow was going to be late. A lot of giggling later and after much teasing from Tara Willow was finally dressed, everything on the correct way round. Looking down at her watch Willow realised she now had only ten minutes to get to Giles’, even if she ran all the way she’d still be late.

“What the? Oh crap I’m gonna be late.” Willow quickly grabbed her bag and made for the door. Tara watched the door close behind the red-head only for it to reopen seconds later. Willow came charging back in and overwhelmed Tara with a deep, fervent kiss. Tara felt her knees weaken and her head began to spin into a dizzy, heavenly state. Eventually she pulled back and surprised herself by managing to form a coherent sentence.

“Will, sweetie. As much as I would rather drag you back in here and into my bed, aren’t you already late?”

“I figured I’m already late, what’s a few more minutes? Especially if it means Tara-kisses.” She leaned in and kissed Tara tenderly to make her point. Both girls sank quickly into the kiss and lost themselves for a few moments. Before they could get too carried away they reluctantly pulled apart but with the promise of continuing later that night. Reluctantly Willow left and made her way over to Giles’ running most of the way.



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Well that's it for today's update. Hope it was okay. I'm off to go shower whilst listening to The Beatles, if I can find a way to "gently" remind my housemate that she still has my stereo (haven't seen it for about a month) and then babble my poor baby's ears off over the phone- whoo hoo *bounces around in a caffeine induced hyper-active frenzy* Ok going now. Sorry for the babble, I just can't seem to stop it.



Thanks for the feedback!!!



Love Helen xxxx :pinky



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Re: Feedback

Postby Gimpgirl » Wed Mar 03, 2004 5:10 pm

Hey honey....



Very awesome update. I did love the panicy Willow, but then again that would be either me or you trying to get ready for a plane ride or something. But the snuggles and the smoochies were very good. And awesome descriptions.



I love you......:pinky



Michelle

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"just when you think you got me figured out the seasons already changing...."-Meredith Brooks

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Re: Feedback

Postby Doppelganger5x5 » Wed Mar 03, 2004 6:00 pm

:bigwave



Ya know, ive been reading this story from the beginning, but for some dumb reason i havent left feedback. Sorry! So i thought i would just do it now. I love this story! Everything about it, its just so cute! And i love how you update everyday, it always makes me happy, knowing ill have something good to read each day!:D . But now i just wish it was tomorrow already cuz i cant wait for the next update!

I hate everything about you,why do i love you,You hate everything about me, why do you love me~3 Days Grace

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Re: Feedback

Postby The Rose24 » Wed Mar 03, 2004 8:52 pm

They can't tear themselves away from each other, eh?



I always look forward to your updates because a lot of authors don't update for days, weeks or even months. I appreciate it.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


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Re: Feedback

Postby SJ » Thu Mar 04, 2004 2:34 am

Don't blame them for forgetting the videos either,great updates :read

SJ
 

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