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:-) I can take care of her...even if she never...she's my girl.
I don’t think I would ever let you leave without getting my smoochies, me needs my kisses…. mmmm…. *clears throat* sorry got lost for a moment
I’m only sorry it took me so long to thank everyone properly. I didn’t realise how important feedback was until I started posting myself. Feedback gives me nourishment!!
more on the way, in just a few minutes in fact.
Thanks for the feedback
"Had a bottle and a half of this very interesting beer called Delirium Tremens. All I have to say is that it had pink elephants on the bottle." -Amber Benson[/i]
"Had a bottle and a half of this very interesting beer called Delirium Tremens. All I have to say is that it had pink elephants on the bottle." -Amber Benson[/i]
"just when you think you got me figured out the seasons already changing...."-Meredith Brooks
. Great update. Loved it. Love sammi xx "Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)
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"Oops, that kind of talk's more appropriate for the bedroom. I apologize."
Alyson Hannigan, That 70's Show
Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.
Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.
Willow: Yeah, that’s me. Reliable dog geyser person.
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Anya: Give me a beer. Bartender: I.D. Anya: [Looks at him w/ disbelief] Bartender: I.D.
Anya: I’m 1,120 years old!!! Just give me a friggin’ beer! Bartender: I.D. Anya: [Sigh] Give me a Coke.
"Had a bottle and a half of this very interesting beer called Delirium Tremens. All I have to say is that it had pink elephants on the bottle." -Amber Benson[/i]
"just when you think you got me figured out the seasons already changing...."-Meredith Brooks
Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.
Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.
. Wonderful update. Love sammi xx "Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)
My poetry site: http://www.xanga.com/home.aspx?user=lostinblue1004
I hope it was okay, feedback as ever both welcomed and craved. My bed is calling to me and who am I to ignore it?! More up tomorrow.
My poetry site: http://www.xanga.com/home.aspx?user=lostinblue1004
"just when you think you got me figured out the seasons already changing...."-Meredith Brooks
Loved the updates dude!! *grin*Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.
Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.
Love sammi xx "Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)
I'm addicted to you..like chocolate- Tori (L and D)
But. . . could you describe some of the scenes with more vivideness? Like kiss descriptions, or . . . other things.
Bottom line though- whatever you like to write and are comfortable with writing is the most important thing.
Don't adjust anything if you don't want to.
Willow: Yeah, that’s me. Reliable dog geyser person.
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Anya: Give me a beer. Bartender: I.D. Anya: [Looks at him w/ disbelief] Bartender: I.D.
Anya: I’m 1,120 years old!!! Just give me a friggin’ beer! Bartender: I.D. Anya: [Sigh] Give me a Coke.
"just when you think you got me figured out the seasons already changing...."-Meredith Brooks
. But now i just wish it was tomorrow already cuz i cant wait for the next update! I hate everything about you,why do i love you,You hate everything about me, why do you love me~3 Days Grace
Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.
Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.
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