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Re: Fic: AU - You Are The One

Postby JustSkipIt » Thu Apr 26, 2007 9:48 am

Well, that was a very heartbreaking but informative update. I'm facinated that Tara wasn't trying to go to that other plane on her first visit as much as that her mother was there? And that Willow was there that first day is really cool.

Well done.
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Re: Fic: AU - You Are The One

Postby Justified12 » Fri Apr 27, 2007 10:25 pm

hahaha it was sooo late after i finished reading this, i forgot to leave you some feedback! Loving the idea! But i'll tell you more about that... well, now! lol

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Re: Fic: AU - You Are The One

Postby Halo » Mon Apr 30, 2007 11:14 am

Hello!
I just read the whole story and...WOW!! This is really, really good! I especially like your way of describing scenes, I can see them ;-) : the whole place of the dream, or when the car is accidented...
It's also nice to see Tara in a family who cares for her...(well, we know she deserves that! :-D )
I can't wait to know what is going on : why can't Willow remember the place? Will they be able to go back to reality? And I guess too that Tara is pretty bad injured (please not too bad :pray )
I'm looking forward to your next chapter!!
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Re: Fic: AU - You Are The One

Postby BlackIndiaInk » Sun May 06, 2007 10:43 pm

Hey kitties, just a little note. I have been delayed in posting the next chapter, as I am sure you have noticed. I will reply to feedback and post a new chapter by the end of the week.

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Re: Fic: AU - You Are The One

Postby JustSkipIt » Mon May 07, 2007 7:06 pm

Brea - I hope all is going well.
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Re: Fic: AU - You Are The One

Postby BlackIndiaInk » Sun May 13, 2007 7:50 pm

No worries Kittens.. all is as well as it can be but it may take a few more days. The story is there but I can't seem to sit down long enough in the past week to give it a good work through. You have not seen the last of the story!!! ;-)
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Fic: AU - You Are The One - MINI UPDATE

Postby BlackIndiaInk » Thu Nov 01, 2007 3:22 am

Small update Kittens! I will try to get these similar chapters out there for you on a regular basis. Sorry it isn't much but we will get there.

If you need information on the rating or any of that other necessary information please refer to earlier updates.

Mini Update: Prolonging




"Are you thinking?"

One of Tara's eyes slowly opened to see Willow's questioning expression. The obvious answer to that question was easily discernible just by reading Tara's body language. The eyebrow of the opened eye slowly lifted up as the other eye followed its partner to the open position. She had been thinking very hard but she found Willow's interruption amusing.

She could feel the edges of their lives clicking into place. When she was connected to the earth and the essences she had a sixth sense about where life was moving her and how that direction factored into other people's lives. Here in this dream place she was made even more aware of herself. This awareness made it easier for her to react to Willow without reservation.

"How else are we going to get out of here?" Upon finishing her question, to which she expected to actual answer, she closed her eyes again.

Willow poked at the grass with her fingers. The level of levity that was being maintained between them was slightly odd considering the problems they were facing but she could not help but settle into it.

She redirected her ever changing thoughts to finding a solution. Her first thought was to list everything that happened so far and see what conclusion she could draw from that. This was not surprising considering her penchant for organization and order. Before she could act on her thought Tara spoke up.

"This sounds silly, but I was thinking. What if we tried to sleep?"

Willow's mouth froze just as she was forming words. She tried once again to make the words clear her mouth with no luck. Her lips just froze in another formation.

"How do you think that would help," She finally got out.

"Um, I am not sure. I guess I was just going on instinct," Tara meekly said.

"Hey, it's not like I was coming up with anything viable."

Willow could sense Tara's hesitation about her suggestion. Everything was worth consideration.

"Go on," Willow prompted.

Tara smiled, "Maybe if we..."

She cut off as an image of the two of them sitting against the tree sound asleep presented itself as if it were being projected on an invisible screen in front of them. The only word that Tara could find to describe it was a hologram.

"Oh my god," Willow said.

She reached out to try to touch the image.

"How did you do that?'

"I have no idea," Tara muttered.

She could feel the connection between the image and her own mind as if there were a translucent tread stretching between the two. She watched in amazement as Willow's hand passed right through her arm in the image.
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Re: Fic: AU - You Are The One

Postby Willowtree252 » Thu Nov 01, 2007 11:00 am

Welcome back Red I love the update keep it coming my friend.
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Re: Fic: AU - You Are The One

Postby JustSkipIt » Thu Nov 01, 2007 5:51 pm

HI there. Thanks for the update. I hope there will be more soon because this is a very cute story.
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Re: Fic: AU - You Are The One

Postby Halo » Thu Nov 22, 2007 1:12 pm

Hello!
Glad to see the update too! ;-) and yes...How did she do THAT, hm?
Looking forward to your next update. :kitty
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Re: Fic: AU - You Are The One

Postby love_2003 » Sat Nov 24, 2007 5:33 am

I am really looking forward to reading more of this story.
Update soon?
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