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Re: Chapter 17 - Horsie Tales

Postby the vamp nurd » Mon Jun 09, 2003 3:36 am

Ah Anya always trying to wind up Willow....:D



Maybe Willow should get her own back :devilish



great update...:D



:pride



:letter



:geek

Sorry I missed church, I was busy becoming a lesbian and worshiping Satan



Bardlet no #27

the vamp nurd
 


Re: Chapter 17 - Horsie Tales

Postby Grimaldi » Mon Jun 09, 2003 8:11 am

yay an update :)





kind of figured Anya would do something like that since she likes to get Willow riled up, although that wasn't the smartest thing for her to do at that moment.

I'm not stealing, I'm just taking things without paying for them. In what twisted dictionary is that stealing?
Consciousness: that annoying time between naps

Grimaldi
 


Re: Chapter 17 - Horsie Tales

Postby nika » Mon Jun 09, 2003 10:22 am

Since I'm a bit of a prankster myself I gotta say I loved Anya.:lol the ketchup was a beautiful touch.:clap

I'm so glad this fic is back.:banana

nika
 


Re: Chapter 17 - Horsie Tales

Postby Lt Sticks » Mon Jun 09, 2003 12:05 pm

OMG i was nearly peeing myself with laughter! hahaha anyas so mean...but so funny! it was nice to see tara get willow to touch a horse...well a pony, but there u go :D

A fire in my heart, reborn from the ashes...just call me Phoenix



I'm Under Your Spell, nothing I can do, you just took my soul with you...

Lt Sticks
 


Re: Chapter 17 - Horsie Tales

Postby Scout » Mon Jun 09, 2003 6:51 pm

Oh, this was a nice surprise! And very enjoyable. Thanks for the update! :)

Scout
 


Re: Chapter 17 - Horsie Tales

Postby foreverpiper » Mon Jun 09, 2003 8:39 pm

Karen: well i logged ON to tell you!! but you wasnt there! horses rock!! the best is fiddle faddle though :smug he's the one i ride...hee and trust me...i believe you when you say even buffy wouldnt stop you...i've seen you mad...well, partically...not really mad...more like icky scary dominatrix like.



the vamp nurd: much glad you liked! lol, i love your little quote thing at the bottom! :lol



Grimaldi: So true, so true...but then again, it IS anya...and she kinda does her own thing. :wink lol



nika: yes! we should all bow down to Anya! i know i do!! :bow lol, i have lots of ideas for pranks and stuff...but i'm always to chicken to do them...i dont particularly like getting into trouble...that means no computer and that...well, isnt good...



Lt Sticks: :lol i'm glad you liked it!! Anya's the best! and i'm pretty sure tara could get willow to do just about anything :wink



Scout: you are so very welcome :)



well i am working on the update as much as possible...hopefully it'll be a bit longer that this one...until then! *mwah*

And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Chapter 17 - Horsie Tales

Postby fairydust » Tue Jun 10, 2003 9:40 am

Quote:
Karen: well i logged ON to tell you!! but you wasnt there! horses rock!! the best is fiddle faddle though he's the one i ride...hee and trust me...i believe you when you say even buffy wouldnt stop you...i've seen you mad...well, partically...not really mad...more like icky scary dominatrix like.




:| first of all....that "wasn't" up there should be "weren't' second of all...dominatrixy Karen is NOT icky....:blush :drool



Anyhoo....i will be harassing you throughout the completion of this fic:p teehee

I LOVE MY KARE-BEAR

fairydust
 


Re: Chapter 17 - Horsie Tales

Postby mocha fiend 22 » Tue Jun 10, 2003 10:34 am

:blush ok i do not do anything icky :miff hehe ok Piper shhh i do not get angry and i am not a dominatrixy Karen nope not me nope nope nope :p as for this fic where is my update NOW PLEASE NOW LIKE RIGHT NOW

:banana :dance :banana :dance :banana :dance

hehe im not hyper nope nope nope :p im leaving now :blush

I love you now and forever and a week

Edited by: mocha fiend 22 at: 6/10/03 9:34 am
mocha fiend 22
 


Re: Chapter 17 - Horsie Tales

Postby foreverpiper » Fri Jun 13, 2003 12:29 pm

faye:
Quote:
first of all....that "wasn't" up there should be "weren't' second of all...dominatrixy Karen is NOT icky....




:mad :mad :mad you're such an ass :p bring on the harrasment



karen: :lol not dominatrixy! thats good!! :lol as for the update...today was the very last day of school so first i'm going to

a) scream and yell for joy

b) stuff my face with as much food as humanly possible

c) go horseback rididng

d) finish the next chapter (which i'm nearly done anyhow)



:grin tata for now



:moo moo :D hehe

And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Chapter 17 - Horsie Tales

Postby mocha fiend 22 » Fri Jun 13, 2003 6:40 pm

:sigh piper dont you know that telling us that there will be a update is mad torture even tho you like that i dont *smirks and winks at Jayma* so you should do this eat while on ur horse and when ur mouth is full scream and yell then get ur silly butt back here and update now or ill show you dominatrixy Karen oh yea and dont call Jayma an ass or ill show you how to whip *smirks* thats all for now :lol i shall be back :D

I love you now and forever and a week

mocha fiend 22
 


Re: Chapter 17 - Horsie Tales

Postby fairydust » Fri Jun 13, 2003 10:06 pm

hehe:drool sexy defensive karen:grin and piper, it's spelled harassment;) see ya later! *kisses karen and pokes piper in the eye* and you better update before my girlfriend gets too upset....hehe....then i'll get all dominatrixy:whistle

I LOVE MY KARE-BEAR

fairydust
 


Chapter 18 - The Bird Show (Preview)

Postby foreverpiper » Sun Jun 15, 2003 10:03 am

god dammit! i hate my computer! i had both your replys all written and then it messes up and delates everything!! *Screams loudly*



Karen: i had a long reply but then it craped up...so i'm making it short because if it messes up again after i wrote a long thing, i would be supreamly pissed. now, i have a update for you...its a very tiny one, a preview, if you will, because i'm still going to write more of it...its really short, like 1 1/3 pages on word, but it'll have to hold you until i finish it...i planned to finish it yesterday, but was somehow made to help a friend babysit 15 kids for a karate sleepover...which also leads me to the desicion to never have kids ever...



Faye: its rude to poke people...*kicks you*





so w/out any further ado...here ya go...oh and to let you guys know, i think this is really bad so far, and i'm not too pleased with it, but i dont want anyone to get dominatrixy on me...so i'm sorry in advance, it will be better eventually!





Chapter 18: The Bird Show



“What time is it?” Buffy asked Xander as the group wandered around aimlessly, pondering what they should do next.



Xander glanced at his watch, “It’s about 3:50.”



“Oh! Oh! We could go to the bird show! When me and Buffy were going to the games we saw a sign that said there was a show on at four!” Dawn perked up.



“What happened to ‘no, shows are so stupid’?” Willow raised and eyebrow.



Buffy gave an indignant snort at the comment, “Will, it’s not the same thing at all.”



“And what, may I ask, is the difference?” Willow challenged.



“This one has live entertainment! With actual living creatures! So really it’s not like a show…more like a…display.” Buffy answered, puffing out her chest.

Anya shook her head, “Whatever, lets just go before we’re late! I don’t want to miss any of the action.”



“Action?” Xander asked, skeptical. "It's just a bird show."



Anya rolled her eyes, “Oh come on Xander, you can’t be serious. Large birds flying over people…mouths open in shock that a big, humongous bird is flying over their useless heads…birds just itching to relieve themselves from all their nuts and berries. You do the math Harris.”



He thought for a second, before his eyes widened, “Oooooh!” He grimaced, “Eeeewww.”



“See! Now you know why we can’t miss any of this! Let’s go!” She grabbed the two nearest arms, which belonged to Xander and Tara, and began pulling them along with her.



Everyone laughed at Anya and trudged along behind here, heading towards the Bird Show.



------



On a normal day the rows of seats would have been mostly occupied, but this particular day there were only 16 people there, scattered around to different points. The group made their way to the middle of the front two rows and seated themselves.



“Best seats! Yes!” Dawn said, her face scrunching up into a grin.



Buffy looked around them, noticing how empty it was, “Not many people here today…”



“Yeah, lucky us.” Dawn said.



“Oh! Maybe if we’re really lucky they’ll pick one of us to come up there and help them! They’re always doing cool stuff like that.” Willow said, ecstatic, hoping she was able to go up.



“Yeah. Maybe.” Tara said, smiling slightly.



A woman with a microphone earpiece stepped onto stage and everyone became silent.



She began with the normal rules and precautions. “…And also, throughout the demonstration many birds will be flying over your heads. Please, if you do not wish to have a second lunch, do not look up with your mouth open.” Everyone laughed, save Anya, who was looking furiously at the lady for warning the people. She glowered, crossed her arms in a venoms fashion and leaned back, looking at the woman with a cross between anger and plotting a painful revenge.





***to be continued



hopefully i'll get the rest of this chapter and maybe another one before i go to horseback riding camp this sunday...and i'm going to try to get you guys a really good chapter on firday cause its my birthday! :grin and karen and faye...i do not want any birthday spankings...



And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

Edited by: foreverpiper at: 6/15/03 9:27 am
foreverpiper
 


Re: Chapter 18 - The Bird Show (Preview)

Postby Lt Sticks » Sun Jun 15, 2003 11:21 am

HAHA! Oh that was awesome! Anya's disappointment at the warning...hilarious





Btw its my bday Saturday :D Happy bday for friday piper :D

A fire in my heart, reborn from the ashes...just call me Phoenix



I'm Under Your Spell, nothing I can do, you just took my soul with you...

Lt Sticks
 


Re: Chapter 18 - The Bird Show (Preview)

Postby foreverpiper » Sun Jun 15, 2003 4:35 pm

lol, wait till ya see what happens to her next :whistle





and happy birthday for you! :grin hope you have a great one! :wink

And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Chapter 18 - The Bird Show (Preview)

Postby The Rose24 » Sun Jun 15, 2003 10:16 pm

Yay! There is an update. More fun stuff.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: Chapter 18 - The Bird Show (Preview)

Postby Grimaldi » Mon Jun 16, 2003 7:57 am

nice update :)



Anya's comment about the bird show was funny

I'm not stealing, I'm just taking things without paying for them. In what twisted dictionary is that stealing?
Consciousness: that annoying time between naps

Grimaldi
 


Re: Chapter 18 - The Bird Show (Preview)

Postby amazonaa » Mon Mar 01, 2004 2:18 pm

OH MY GODDESS



I love this story soooo much.:D update soon please.





brittney





Quote:
Say you all didnt happen to do a bunch of drugs now did ya? -- Willow in Doppelganglang


amazonaa
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby Faithless_7 » Sun Aug 20, 2006 12:41 am

i agree please update sooon!
im so hooked :pray :pray
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