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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Darth Pacula » Thu Apr 06, 2006 12:03 am

G'day, Alcy.

I've been reading this with great delight since it was first posted (all of a week ago :grin) but I haven't gotten around to leaving feedback until right now, rather obviously.

Now, Sin City isn't a genre I would normally associate with Willow and Tara, but I loved the movie, and you're doing a wickedly awesome job of melding our favorite couple into this dark, grim world.

I heartily approve of the changes you've made to the girls' characters (well mostly Tara, because we haven't seen too much of Willow yet). In Sin City, you can't afford to be meek or nice, and a foul-mouthed, but still honorable Tara fits in perfectly.

Your descriptions of Glory Talbot are a hoot, with all the hilariously side comments about how much of her looks are artificial. Tommy Talbot? Well, he deserved far worse than what Tara gave him, though I do admit I was disappointed she didn't follow Hartigan's lead and 'take away both of his weapons'. :devil Guess I'll have to be content with him losing a hand and getting knee-capped.

This last update, with all the fluffy kittens and happy puppies of life in a maximum security prison (yes, I am insane, in case you were wondering :grin) was brutal fun. Baby sounds like a grade-A, first class bitch, and if I'd been Tara I'd have capped her 'tween the eyes when she was making her getaway. Still, I suppose that's the difference between heroes ... and well, me. :grin

Her seatmate laughed and remarked with scorn, “You mean that shit they pretend is beef casserole, I used to feed my dog better tucker than that.”


Hmm, I wonder. A fellow antipodean, perhaps? :grin

I laughed my ass off at your casting of Buffy in the role of your own version of Miho. It's perfect, but also so hilariously ironic that little Miss Motormouth is now playing someone who'd kick Oz's ass in the run for the monosyllabic stakes. :lol

One thought I had is that Glory can't have been trying to have Tara killed too hard, if she lasted eight years in prison. I know Tara's a tough bad-ass, but if someone wants you dead, and they have the resources and the will to do whatever it takes, odds are you'll die unless you kill them first.

Great story, mate!

Cheers,
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Artemis » Sat Apr 08, 2006 5:45 am

Okay, now we're away from the movie script, I'm really interested in finding out what's going on - Willow's obviously in with the Old Town girls somehow, but in what capacity? I'm not abandoning the notion that Willow has become a lawyer - maybe Faith thought a lawyer would be handy to have 'on staff' once she and her girls were effectively running that part of the city.

The moment when Tara realised it was Miss Kitty she was holding was very sweet - sort of a book-end to losing Willow's letters, because it's clear that no matter how much she tried to tell herself the paper didn't matter, that hurt her. They were real, physical evidence of Willow - holding Miss Kitty in her hands felt like it would help heal that hurt.

I love Buffy as Miho (though in that section of the movie, between Devon Aoki and Michael Clarke Duncan, I was starting to feel like it was some kind of uber-noir D.E.B.S. sequel - I had to keep myself from giggling whenever Miho was on screen, because all I could think of was her doing her ridiculous French accent ;-)
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Mon Apr 10, 2006 8:50 pm

Darth Pacula: Thanks so much for leaving such excellent feedback!
I agree, Frank Miller’s dark, dirty and distinctly foul noir world isn’t the usual setting in which you would find love blossoming between our girls but I love a good challenge. Making their characters work in such a setting is something I am enjoying! But of course their characters need to change in order to adapt to the setting and be realistic within it. There hasn’t been a lot of Willow yet, this is definitely a Tara-centric fic with her the driving force behind the storyline, the source of the voiceovers etc. I’ll deliver more of Willow in the next chapter and hopefully a better look at who she is in Sin City.
I love making glory as over the top as possible, in canon, she was mean – here she’s even meaner and I look forward to introducing a few more villains as well as the story progresses. I deliberately avoided the Sin City route in relation to Tommy for various reasons but mostly because I didn’t really want to go there. (It’s one thing to watch but another to write!) Although I aim to be as gritty and violent as possible everywhere else in the fic!
As I’ve noted before, I loved writing the prison scene, I might have to send her back just to get to write another chapter! There’s always flashbacks!
Haha! I don’t suppose Americans say ‘tucker’, a bit of antipodean slippage there! We’ll make that prisoner an Australian then!
And yes, I am loving the irony of casting Buffy as Miho! Should be interesting to explore that more in upcoming chapters!
I think in terms of Tara not being dead yet, Glory wanted her to suffer for as long as possible so didn’t try too hard to kill her…until now! I think she’ll be pulling out all the stops!!
Cheers very much mate!

Artemis: Yep, starting to depart from the movie (great script that it is) although I do have one more major element that I’ve incorporated. You’ll see what I mean when you read the next chapter, but I had to bring it in!
Willow could very well become a lawyer although its safe to say she’s not one yet. Speaking as someone who has been to law school, nineteen is a little young to graduate and be admitted to the bar.
Exactly, Miss Kitty is a link to Willow, even more real than the letters. As she gets closer to Willow, the objects become more valuable. Miss Kitty is obviously something Willow cherishes, so for Tara to be holding it would mean a lot to her.
I agree, I find it hard to see Devon Aoki as anything except Monique in DEBS!
Thanks very much Chris.

Right kittens, I look forward to being able to deliver you the next chapter very shortly!!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Mon Apr 10, 2006 9:03 pm

Chapter Three – “Meet the Ladies.”

My rescuers have taken me straight to Old Town. Old Town, the prostitute’s quarter where the ladies are the only law. I should have known that’s where they gonna run to, where else could you go with an escaped prisoner with more than enough enemies wanting her dead? As we drive through the streets of Old Town I look at the two women sitting up front with a deep feeling of unease. Cops never go into Old Town unless they have the cash to spend and are looking for the kind of ‘favours’ the ladies bestow. I don’t see the point of paying for sex when there are enough women out there willing to give it away. I look at my rescuers in a new light. However benevolent they have been towards me, they are ruthless women solely concerned about protecting their own people and interests. The Oldsmobile grinds to a halt outside the foulest looking joint I have ever seen and Buffy exits the car without so much as a word. Doesn’t say much that one. Faith asks if I’m coming and I nod. I look at the name above the bar…Kitty’s, an innocent sounding name for a place that looks far from it.

“Here, you might wanna chunk this on,” once out of the car, Faith tossed Tara a long leather jacket, “Cover up those prison digs.’

Tara glanced down, she had been so busy savouring her newfound freedom that she forgot she still wore her dirty prison-issue coveralls. Her appearance screamed ‘escaped prisoner.’ She accepted the coat with a nod and tugged it on, drawing it tightly around her. Tara then glanced up at the flashing neon sign that spelt out ‘Kitty’s’ over and over again. It was obviously not designed to flash but was flickering due to some fault. It made Tara’s eyes hurt and she quickly looked away. The doorway was little more than a hole in a brick wall. It was watched over by a muscle bound bouncer who’s every visible body part was covered in tattoos, including his shaven head and face. Tara reached out and grabbed Faith’s elbow before they entered the joint.

“You got somethin’ to say blondie?” Faith asked over her shoulder, looking as though she were impatient to be getting inside.

Tara held back from entering Kitty’s, her hands firmly on her hips, “Don’t get me wrong, I’m really grateful to you both for risking your necks for me, but how on earth does Willow know people like you? I mean, she’s a good kid and would never be mixed up in…your sort of game.”

“Our sort of game?” Faith asked in a low voice.

The brunette stopped in her tracks and stepped out of the entranceway. She stared long and hard at Tara, a stare Tara met and returned in kind. Both knew they were of a similar disposition, tough women used to being in situations that called for them to be blunt, abrasive and uncompromising. Although where Tara had chosen to uphold the law, Faith had proudly flaunted, broke and ignored it.

Faith eventually spoke, keeping her tone low and threatening, “You’ve been away eight years, that’s an awful long time in a little girls life and an awful lot you’ve missed out on. Me, Buffy and the other ladies, we were here for her…so don’t you go judging us when you’ve got no clue!”

To emphasise her last point, Faith jabbed Tara hard in the chest with the tip of her index finger. Tara wasn’t about to take any of that shit, even from Faith. With both hands she grabbed her by the collar of the guard uniform she still wore and with a violent heave, threw her up against a wall outside Kitty’s. She met Faith’s outraged glare with an intense one of her own and kept a firm grip.

Tara had a comeback of her own, “Don’t you dare underestimate how much I care about this kid, if I find any of you have harmed her in any way over the past eight years I am gonna personally…”

“You’re gonna what, blondie?” Faith interrupted with a menacing scowl, “You’re alone on my turf and I personally could make you wish you were back in prison with my bare hands.”

“I’d beg to differ,” Tara hissed in reply, knowing full well as she sized Faith up that her threat was overly ambitious, “Nothing you could ever do to me would mean anything compared to that place. You think you scare me? The most powerful woman in this town wants me dead so I really couldn’t care less about you or your gang of whores!”

Tara watched the play of emotions across Faith’s face. The brunette’s eyes narrowed with outrage, her lip stiffened and if Tara looked down she knew she would see her fists clenched. Slowly however, her facial muscles relaxed.

“Tara, you should really shut up while there’s still time for us to be friends,” Faith’s teeth were slightly gritted as though she were still holding back the urge to lash out with her fists.

Tara’s eyebrows raised, she had expected a fist rather than an offer of friendship, “Why the fuck would I want to be your friend?”

Faith sighed as though Tara were profoundly stupid, “Because we both have the same interest at heart in protecting Willow…and unless I’m very much mistaken this ‘gang of whores’, as you so charmingly called us, are the only friends you have at the moment.”

Tara instantly knew that Faith was completely right but she waited a few moments before releasing her hold on her. She couldn’t bring herself to appear weak in the slightest.

“I lost all my good manners in prison,” was all Tara said by way of apology.

Faith didn’t seem to mind, she merely shrugged, “You need a drink, come on, it’ll be on the house.”

Faith ushered Tara inside beneath the baleful glare of the bouncer. Once inside, Tara ran her eyes over the joint. Its interior matched it exterior. It was a dirty, low ceiled room where the only real source of light hovered about the stripper dancing on a stage in the centre of the place. However, Tara could also now see the type of patrons who frequented this establishment…and they weren’t a pretty bunch. Tara entered cautiously, although it was clear that no one was in there for the purpose of drawing attention to himself. Most gave her a quick glance and returned to downing their beers and watching the stripper longingly. She half wondered if she’d run into any of them before in her previous incarnation, however long ago that seemed. Tara ran her eyes back over the crowd, there were a lot of leather jackets and tattoos, back over the stage with its lone stripper and finally back to Faith who was nodding her head appreciatively. Whether at the music or the stripper, Tara couldn’t say.

“What are we even doing here?” Tara asked her, almost shouting in order to be heard over the music that filled the room.

Faith looked over her shoulder and smirked, evidently Tara’s manners were not about to be restored instantly. She clapped Tara heartily on the back, almost forcing her to stumble forward.

“Tara, I’d stop talking and sample the entertainment if I were you,” Faith nodded towards the stage.

“The stripper? But I’m not interested…” Tara began in an indignant manner.

Her eyes drifted towards the stage with the intention of confirming that she was not the sort of drooling drunkard who would sit and leer at some half-dressed woman when she saw a flash of vibrant red hair.

Tara whispered just one word, “Willow.”

I had expected to find redheaded little Willow Rosenberg exactly the same as I had left her, a skinny, bookish twelve-year-old kid. Instead I see in front of me, up on that stage, a woman.

Tara watched transfixed as Willow’s body gyrated around the pole in front of her. When she noticed what Willow was wearing, or rather the lack of it, she was torn between her desire to watch and the guilty feeling that she ought to turn away. Willow’s lithe legs were clad in a pair of black leather chaps so tight they seemed to be a part of her. Beneath them she wore black underwear. When she spun around, Tara saw it was a g-string, revealing Willow’s creamy white, perfectly formed arse. Tara felt a hot wave pass through her body, culminating in a hot pink flush at her cheeks. From there, her eyes moved up over Willow’s taut stomach and to her chest. A thin black leather bra barely covered her breasts, as she danced she trailed a finger along her small, but perfect cleavage. Tara had to reach out and grab the back of a chair to keep from falling to the ground. Tara then stared intently at the face she had last seen eight years ago to find that although it had changed considerably, it was still familiar. Her pixie-like face had lost its puppy fat to reveal lines which were both strong and soft. Her small red lips were opened in a tantalising pout, breaking into a small grin every now and then as she drew appreciative comments from the crowd. Her eyes were closed as though she were imaging herself somewhere else for a moment, however, when she opened them, the green eyes sparkled amidst the light spray of freckles over her pale skin. Then there was her hair, it’s deep red hue was both luxuriant and brazen. Although it was now swaying with the movement of Willow’s head, Tara could see it fell straight down to the small of her back. She could almost imagine running her fingers through its mass.

Everything about her is perfect, from the way her hair falls about her body as she works that pole to the curves of her perfect little breasts. I realise that I don’t know this young woman and I have no clue why after all this time she would want to remember me. Of course, she wants to repay me for saving her life. That’s all Tara, she’s grateful, she’s helped get you out of that place, helped get your life back…and now you need to get on with living it. It will be awkward seeing her, thanking her, she won’t know what you expect. And the way you’re looking at her…it’s trouble. Just get out of here Tara, write her a thank you note later.

Tara took one last look at Willow up on that stage before turning and making a beeline straight for the door. As soon as she took her eyes off the beautiful young woman she needed to see her again, it was a burning desire within her to look at Willow. Tara turned and looked over her shoulder as she made her way out. As she did she saw Willow look her way, their eyes met and Willow’s widened with instant recognition. The girl smiled, white teeth flashing in a huge grin. Before Tara could take another step Willow leapt off the stage and down amongst the crowd. She took a few more steps and then threw herself into Tara’s arms.

So many things assaulted Tara at that point. It was not just Willow’s physical body, but also the way she smelt and that warmth that radiated from her. Small arms were flung around her neck, holding her tightly. Willow’s face filled her vision and Tara’s heart stopped beating for a few seconds. She almost keeled over completely when Willow went straight in for a moist, enthusiastic kiss. It was definitely not the chaste kiss Tara had expected in thanks. When Tara gently pulled away, Willow was gazing up at her with rapt adoration on her face.

“Willow,” Tara croaked weakly, wanting only to apologise and tell Willow that she was wrong to kiss her in that way but something kept the words from leaving her lips.

Willow just kept smiling, interpreting Tara’s rather choked whisper as a sign of approval, “I know, I’ll go put some clothes on and Faith and Buffy will take us home.”

“Will…” Tara half-heartedly began to protest but Willow was already out of hearing distance.

Tara felt her heart skip more than several beats as she watched Willow move away from her through the throng of Kitty’s patrons. She noticed how the crowd parted to let her through with no jeering or attempts to grab her. For a group of drunken men, they were almost respectful. Willow turned and glanced back at Tara over her shoulder, flashing a dazzling smile. Tara gulped noticeably. As Willow disappeared from sight, Tara turned and caught Faith’s eye from where the brunette stood at the bar with a shot in hand. She gave a long, hard look that Tara couldn’t decipher, only looking away when she downed the shot in a single gulp.

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Ten minutes later, I find myself once again in the backseat of the Oldsmobile on my way to god knows where. Although I’m damned relieved to be out of that joint, the memory of what I saw in there plays insistently in my mind. I try to shake the image of little Willow Rosenberg wearing provocative leather clothing and dancing around a pole in front of a room full of men but it’s well and truly stuck in there. And that’s not even what really worries me…I see her perfect breasts, the creamy white skin of her arse and the way her hair falls around her face and upper body. My heart beats faster, my mouth goes dry and I know more than anything else, I want her…I want her and it terrifies me. Even more so when I look across at her as she is sitting next to me now. She’s changed her clothes. She’s wearing a black duffel coat with dinky wooden buttons and a fluffy hood sitting on her shoulders with her bright red hair tucked beneath it. From the corner of my eye I see a pair of red Converse peeking from beneath her jeans. The make-up has been hastily scrubbed from her face. Fuck, she doesn’t even look fifteen…

Tara’s alarm bells worked over time when Willow scooted across the space that separate them and burrowed into the crook of her arm. Her cheeks flushed red because the day’s filth still clung to her like an ugly blanket. Willow smelt so sweet and clean despite the fact she had just been dancing.

“Uh, Willow, I wouldn’t get too close to me if I were you…I stink like a pig,” Tara looked down at the young woman who was gazing up at her.

Willow wrinkled her nose as though she could smell something foul and it was a few moments before Tara realised she was playing with her. Tara’s lips very nearly curled up into a smile, the redhead was just too cute for her own good. She had to look away and settle for staring out the window, it was far less exciting, but also far less likely to have dangerous consequences. Beside her, she heard Willow giggle quietly and felt her body quiver.

“Tara, I’ve been waiting for this day for eight years, do you really think I’d let the fact that you’re a little bit smelly stand in my way…hmmm, okay, the fact that you are very smelly!” Willow giggled again, “I honestly don’t give a rat’s arse, if you only knew how I’ve been missing you then you’d understand,” Willow then straightened up so she could sit and look Tara in the eye, her face taking on a more serious expression, “I’ve missed you so much, the thought of you locked up in that awful place just for saving my life was making me sick. Those guys were scum and they deserved what you did to them. Almost from the moment I met Faith and Buffy I was badgering them to rescue you, we would have come sooner but you have no idea how long it takes and how many bribes you have to dish out to get someone on the inside in a prison…and Faith’s not exactly prison guard material…”

“Hey!” Faith interrupted, breaking Willow’s stream of incessant babble, “I am so prison guard material, look how butch I am for fuck’s sake!”

“You’re not as butch as you think you are…or as tough,” Willow retorted, “But anyway, I shouldn’t tease you when I haven’t even thanked you and Buffy for pulling off Tara’s rescue.”

“Only for you kid,” Faith replied, as she said it she met Tara’s eyes in the rear vision mirror and gave her another of her long, hard stares, “Only for you.”

Faith returned to focusing her attention on the road. Their stop had obviously come up faster than expected as she slammed on the brakes and wrenched the steering wheel hard to the right. The car slid violently, sending Willow straight into Tara’s lap. When all was still again and the car had ground to a halt in front of a large, formerly opulent building.

Tara looked down at the young woman that had ended up in her lap. For a few moments she just stared at her, longing to reach down and brush the stray strand of hair that had fallen over Willow’s eyes. She was poised to do so when the car door beside her opened suddenly and she glanced up to see Faith holding the door open. Biting her lip, Tara gently prised herself out from beneath Willow and exited the car. She was about to offer a hand to help Willow out but Faith brushed passed her and took Willow’s hand instead. Tara was left to follow them inside, with Buffy bringing up the rear. She couldn’t help but feel that the pint-sized assassin’s hands were twitching on the handles of her katana.

Added to the threat from behind, on either side of the doorway were two gorgeous women. Their scanty leather attire not masking the fact that they meant business and knew how to use the Uzi’s in their hands. They welcomed Faith and Willow with warm smiles but watched Tara through narrow eyes.

Faith released Willow’s hand as they moved into the entranceway and turned to Tara, “Welcome to the Palace of Dreams!”

Tara eyes roved down at the black and white tiles that covered the floor, up at the massively vaulted ceiling above her and around at the dominating, solid wooden staircase that lead up to the next floor. She found that she was standing in the lobby of an old hotel, although to call it a Palace was akin to calling a sack a Givenchy gown. There was very little furnishing beyond a few leather couches that had seen better days, in fact, the whole establishment had seen better days. The whole dimly lit place gave off a distinct aura of long past opulence. Although on the whole, Tara had to admit it was nicer than anywhere she had ever lived.

“It’s nice,” she shrugged, only hoping that it had somewhere she could wash and sleep.

A smartly dressed young woman welcomed the small gang home from behind the desk to one side of the lobby. She wore a plain, almost conservative white shirt and her hair was pulled back into an even plainer ponytail. It was only when she stepped out from behind the desk that Tara saw she was wearing the shortest leather skirt ever made. The curve of each buttock protruded from behind it, showing off her pink panties. Her high heels showed off an exceptionally lithe leg and a pair of very slender ankles. She moved to embrace Willow with a warm smile.

“Hey Dawnie, how’s business?” Willow asked, giving the taller girl a quick hug.

“It’s slow tonight,” the other girl shrugged and turned to regard Tara with a wry smile, “Who’s your new friend? She looks kinda dirty.”

“Ah Dawn, this is Tara…you know the Tara,” Faith answered quickly, nodding discreetly in Willow’s direction.

“Oh!” Dawn’s face broke into an all-knowing smile.

Tara glanced around at each of the women’s faces to see them sharing knowing glances. She was unnerved to see that even Buffy had a sort-of smile tugging at the corner of her lips.

“Who said business has been slow tonight?” a rather brash voice sounded from the lower landing of the stairs and all eyes turned to see the newcomer, “I’ve certainly been busy enough.”

Tara’s eyes widened at the sight of a scantily clad female making her way down the staircase in a pair of red pumps. The pumps matched her red garment, which appeared to be little more than a silk nightdress. Whatever it was, it was barely held up over her breasts by two thin straps and it’s length left little to the imagination. Her perfectly coiffed blonde hair sat in curls on her shoulders. With carefully calculated steps she made her way down the stairs and joined the group standing in the lobby.

“Haven’t you heard all the excitement coming from my room?” she directed the question in Dawn’s direction.

“Your vibrator’s not a client!” Dawn shot back.

The woman in red let out an angry huff and shunned Dawn instead of rebutting the argument. She turned her attention to Tara who stuck out like a sore thumb as a stranger. The blonde crossed the short distance that separated them and stood in front of her with one hand on her hip, breasts thrust right under Tara’s nose. She ran her tongue over her teeth as she looked Tara up and down, showing off her lipstick which was as bold as her attire.

“Who’s this?” she purred, her voice now throaty and husky, “You know I don’t usually do women, but I’ll do her…as long as she has a bath first.”

“Ah, Anya…this is Tara…Tara meet Anya,” Faith quickly intervened as Anya appeared ready to jump Tara then and there, even without the bath first.

Anya’s face quickly morphed from sultry and sexy into a rather annoyed pout as she realised she wasn’t going to get her way with this dirty but mysterious new blonde.

“I suppose this is the Tara?” she asked, looking at the other ladies.

“Yes,” Faith and Dawn replied at the same time.

Tara frowned as more knowing looks were passed amongst the ladies. She looked at Willow. The redhead’s face now matched her hair and she sincerely appeared to want to sink through the floor. She kept her gaze downwards so she wouldn’t meet Tara’s eyes.

Tara sighed, it was all becoming too much to take in. She was more than used to lack of sleep but this day had taken a particular toll on her emotionally as well. Obviously Willow’s intentions towards her went beyond thanks and friendship. Just the very thought of this was enough to make her want to run straight back out the hotel door. She didn’t care how many bounty hunters would be waiting for her on the streets of Basin City, she just wanted to get away.

“Is there a shower in this joint?” Tara asked Faith, desperate to get away from Willow and hopeful of finally getting to shower in private after eight years.

“Yeah, sure thing, I’ll show you…and we can probably rustle you up a room away from the business end of things so it’s nice and quiet for ya,” Faith nodded, their interaction earlier that evening forgotten, at least on her part.

“Make sure it’s not next to Anya’s room,” Dawn quipped.

“Bite me Brittany,” Anya growled angrily, retreating back up the stairs ahead of Faith and Tara.

Tara followed Faith, taking a last look at Willow over her shoulder. The young woman had finally allowed herself to take her eyes off her feet and had been staring at Tara’s back. Her eyes widened slightly when Tara looked at her, as though she were surprised Tara had actually looked. Neither turned away, Tara continued to look even as she ascended the stairs. Little Willow Rosenberg, Tara’s lips parted slightly at the sight of her standing down in the lobby. Her expression was somewhere between guilt and hope, but all Tara noticed was how small she was. Her thoughts were abruptly interrupted when she walked straight into Faith at the top of the landing. She looked up and met Faith’s eyes defiantly.

“Eyes front blondie,” Faith said as she continued up the stairs.

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From the doorway of her own room, Willow had seen Tara slip out of the shower and make her way to the room Faith had made available for her. Tara’s hair hung in wet strands down her back and she had a single white towel wrapped around her body. Willow watched the blonde’s bare legs move with a graceful, stealthy beauty. Her eyes travelled up Tara’s body to her shoulder where she saw a long-healed bullet wound. Willow remembered watching Tara’s partner pull the trigger. Her own tongue had frozen to the roof of her mouth in fear and she had been unable to call out. She had suffered the guilt of knowing that she could have warned her rescuer of the threat from behind. Willow sighed, she was determined to spend however long it too to repay Tara.

She waited a few minutes to give Tara a chance to make herself decent before padding down the hallway to stand in front of Tara’s door with a cup of coffee in hand. She was poised with her hand about to rap on the door when there was a small cough from behind her. Willow spun to see Faith leaning against the wall.

“Give her some space kid.”

“But it’s Tara!” Willow protested as she held up the steaming cup of coffee in her hand, “And I thought she could use a coffee.”

Willow stared longingly at the door that was separating her from Tara. There was so much she had to say and she wanted to say it all right then. Faith just crossed her arms and refused to budge on the matter.

“She’s just got out of prison, you have no idea what that does to a person. Trust me, she’ll be needing her space,” Faith said softly, crossing the hall to stand just behind Willow.

Willow dropped her gaze to the floor and spoke in a sad voice, “But I’m the reason that she spent all those years there.”

Faith put a hand on Willow’s shoulder, “Which is why, when she’s ready, she’ll talk to you. But for now kid, you gotta let her be.”

“Alright,” Willow whispered, allowing herself to be led away from the door, “But you don’t know everything…you don’t know her.”

“You don’t know her either Willow,” Faith was quick to reply.

Willow snorted indignantly, stopping in the middle of the hallway to stare Faith down, “I know Tara…”

“The last time you saw her you were a twelve year old kid, how well could you know her?” Faith demanded, trying to pry Willow out of her infatuation.

Willow wasn’t about to back down, “You wouldn’t understand…and you’re not…”

Faith quickly interrupted, “Yeah, I know I’m not your mother, but I’m the closest thing you’ve ever had to one so it might pay for you to listen to me once in a while. Okay?”

Willow bit her lip and just nodded in response. Faith half-heartedly grinned and reached out to give her a pat on the cheek. Willow watched her walk away before her gaze travelled back down the hallway to Tara’s door and then back to the coffee cup in her hand. As she stared at the liquid she realised she had no idea how Tara took her coffee, she had just guessed that it would be black. Perhaps Faith was right and she had no idea who that woman was. Willow sighed and made her way back to the kitchen. The only thing she knew for sure was the way she felt…and in this city, love was damn hard to come by.

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I listen to the voices outside my door, not quite hearing what they’re saying. I just want them to go away. I stare at my reflection in the chipped little mirror hanging over the duchess. It’s exactly the same face that I woke up to this morning while still in my cell. There’s that same look in my eye, the same set to my jaw and that same damn scar…but something’s changed and boy do I know why…little Willow Rosenberg. The kid saved my life…and more. I bring my fist crashing down on the edge of the duchess. It hurts and I’m glad. There shouldn’t be more! What on earth have you gotten yourself in to? There can never be anything between you and her. You’re an ex-cop who’s done hard time for a violent act…hardly good credentials. You’ve got to get out of here, got to put some distance between yourself and that kid…
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby SithLordWiccan » Mon Apr 10, 2006 9:21 pm

Alcy wrote:Tara watched transfixed as Willow’s body gyrated around the pole in front of her. When she noticed what Willow was wearing, or rather the lack of it, she was torn between her desire to watch and the guilty feeling that she ought to turn away. Willow’s lithe legs were clad in a pair of black leather chaps so tight they seemed to be a part of her. Beneath them she wore black underwear. When she spun around, Tara saw it was a g-string, revealing Willow’s creamy white, perfectly formed arse. Tara felt a hot wave pass through her body, culminating in a hot pink flush at her cheeks. From there, her eyes moved up over Willow’s taut stomach and to her chest. A thin black leather bra barely covered her breasts, as she danced she trailed a finger along her small, but perfect cleavage. Tara had to reach out and grab the back of a chair to keep from falling to the ground. Tara then stared intently at the face she had last seen eight years ago to find that although it had changed considerably, it was still familiar. Her pixie-like face had lost its puppy fat to reveal lines which were both strong and soft. Her small red lips were opened in a tantalising pout, breaking into a small grin every now and then as she drew appreciative comments from the crowd. Her eyes were closed as though she were imaging herself somewhere else for a moment, however, when she opened them, the green eyes sparkled amidst the light spray of freckles over her pale skin. Then there was her hair, it’s deep red hue was both luxuriant and brazen. Although it was now swaying with the movement of Willow’s head, Tara could see it fell straight down to the small of her back. She could almost imagine running her fingers through its mass.


Holy shiznit, Alcy! I gotta admit, I've never sat down to watch "Sin City". But I have seen the previews, and I know that those previews of Jessica Alba are what got a lot of warm blooded males...erm, you know.

I didn't think that anyone could have topped Alba as a sex symbol, but DAMN! You managed to do it. (If they had cast Aly as Nancy, I'd have plonked down my ten bucks to watch the movie and spent the rest of it with my jaw like this:

I've been following this fic, and I plan to leave more detailed feedback once I've read this update. But for now, I just wanted to comment on this.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby BigBlueEyes » Mon Apr 10, 2006 9:38 pm

Nooo!!!! I need more, please I'm so frickin hooked. I love it, great job. It's awesome! :pinky
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby sacinema » Tue Apr 11, 2006 2:30 am

Wow, Alcy. Another great fic's coming out of your pen with this one. In the beginning I hesitated reading it because I had no clue neither of the comics nor the film. You got me hooked so I rented the DVD last weekend. And what am I able to say? Even if I was fascinated (except it is really bloody and brutal) I like your story much better. No wonder. It has W/T in it.

Loved how Willow changed from droolworthy stripper to little girl in less than 15 minutes. But Tara's hesitation is understandable. For her Willow is pure as a virgin and she herself seems dark and lost. I'm only glad that we are on the kittenboard and there is no chance this could end like the story between Nancy and Hartigan.

You really have a talent for good angst. And I'm dying to read the next chapter and the next and... Definetly no pressure here. :shy Thanks for sharing this precious piece of fic with us.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby WillowRulez » Tue Apr 11, 2006 2:34 am

Oh boy, Willow as a stripper? I havent watched Sin City yet, it's on my list though.
Love the idea! Faith is annoying, she's in the way ;)
Keep it up! I hope Willow & Tara are gonna talk soon and can let go off the guilt a little bit.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Boadecia » Tue Apr 11, 2006 3:50 am

Woah! hummina hummina hummina noice work govna!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby PancakesinBellies » Tue Apr 11, 2006 6:31 am

Oh, I really like this story. It is very well-written and I can't wait for an update! I'm unfamiliar with either the movie or the comics (though I'm very intriuged now), but I love the juxtaposition of Willow-on-stage vs. Willow-off-stage, and how it is the part of Willow that remains innocent (after a fashion) that is so in love with our dark-disillusioned-escaped-convict-type-Tara.

They're going to make with the smoochies soon though, right? ;)
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby caz » Tue Apr 11, 2006 11:58 am

Willow - pole dancing! I'd pay to see that and then I'd buy the DVD so I could watch it over again!!!

Still haven't watched the film but I've got the next three days off so I might give it a go.

I'm glad that Tara and Faith didn't start on each other cos I think that Tara would have come off worse.

Let's hope that Tara's willpower weakens sooner rather than later. Willow's up for it, she just needs to persuade Tara.

Good update.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby DelWhicker » Tue Apr 11, 2006 4:29 pm

Woohoo! Two chapters to read!

Chapter 1: I've split wood before...ok, ok, I've helped split wood before and it's tough. So I can only imagine what splitting rocks would be like. I can't think of anything more hard laborish than that and add to that being a cop in jail and having to rub elbows with some of the folks she helped put in there. I guess her time as a Basin City cop did some good...it at least toughened her up to endure the mounds of crap she had to deal with in jail.

And Yay! Willow for sending her letters every week. It was that one little speck of hope that Tara could latch on to get her through it all. Too bad it was so one sided and Tara couldn't send return letters. Although, thinking about it, what could she write about? Wow, that last rock was a tough one to break. And to end a perfectly shitty day, someone tried to stab me in the mess line. Imagine the nerve!

And Grrrr! The Queen Butch taking those letters away and destroying them? I'd say Faith and Buffy had good timing getting Tara out of there when, essentially, her hope was gone.

Well, let's see....chapter 2. I tend to notes while I read and all I had written down was, well, nothing. All that was on the paper was a big drool spot and a bit of scribbling that I can't make heads or tails of. Second time I around, I was a bit more coherent to think that both of them have so very different expectations of each other. Tara is Willow's hero, so I guess the "worship" goes hand in hand with that, and Tara still thinks of Willow as a scrawny 12yo. It'll take a bit of time to have her mind catch up with her eyeballs. I must admit that I was as shocked as Tara to find what our little Willow had been up to all those years. Hubba hubba! :drool

Great job. I can't wait to read more.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Willowlover » Tue Apr 11, 2006 4:39 pm

Okay first off good update. Second, well SithLordWiccan pretty much said all I had to say. lol. Awsome story, I can't wait for the next update.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby wimpy0729 » Tue Apr 11, 2006 9:51 pm

Wow, and again...WOW.

So that's what Willow's been up to. Now my smutty brain will have some nice visuals as I drift off to sleep tonight...mmm...Willow, pole and chaps...DAMN.

I can understand Tara's feelings and the shock of seeing "little Willow" all growed up. Yes, Tara has a lot of stuff to sort out, but I'm certain you will take care of that for us eventually. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next.

Great job!

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Darth Pacula » Wed Apr 12, 2006 1:48 am

G'day, Alcy.

Ah, now we start to diverge from the storyline of the movie (well, one of the three, anyway). This should allow you to put more of your own particular spin on the dark and twisted world in which Sin City exists.

The visit to Kitty's was fun, although I was hoping for a cameo from Marv. I love that big confused psycho. :devil Ah well, c'est la vie.

I liked the clash of wills between Tara and Faith. They're both hard as nails and neither is likely to put up with anyone's crap. Also, they're both exceptionally protective of Willow. That makes them about as likely to operate in close proximity without striking sparks as Dubya is to march in Sydney's Gay Mardi Gras wearing a fishnet vest and arseless chaps, sans underwear.

... and boy do I apologize to everyone who suffers that particular mental image.

Ah, speaking of arseless chaps ... enter Willow, and cue a Kittenboard's worth of drool. Point in case ... :drool And really, does anything else need to be said?

For a group of drunken men, they were almost respectful.


:hmm I wonder what could possibly be behind that? Perhaps the fact that if they behaved otherwise, Buffy would turn the place into the restaurant from the end of Kill Bill Part 1?

Willow certainly doesn't seem to share any of Tara's reluctance, does she? Moist and enthusiastic, huh? Yep, no mixed messages from Willow's side.

You know, if nothing else (not that I don't love the gritty violence with a disturbing level of passion) this setting is good for putting the Buffy cast into a ... different sort of wardrobe. See Dawn for an example. :grin

Now, I know that Willow is going to get her woman in the end (for this is the Kittenboard after all), but I can understand Tara's reluctance. Hers is a very tenuous position after all. Not only is Glory still after her, and all her assorted cronies, but Tara is still an escaped convict, so even the non corrupt boys in blue will likely be after her. Not exactly the sort of situation that Tara would like to bring Willow into.

Tres fantastic update, Alcy. Bring it on, mate!

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby JustSkipIt » Wed Apr 12, 2006 4:40 am

Wow and also wow. I'm loving this so much. Tara is hardened and tough.She's smart and knows about the world. But she doesn't know anything about Willow. And Willow still seems so sweet and innocent even though she's wearing black chaps and doing a pole dance. But she wants to see Tara and bring her a cup of coffee at the end of the night. How sweet.

Ok, I've now been reading quite a bit of fan fic (no? really?) and I have to say:
When she spun around, Tara saw it was a g-string, revealing Willow’s creamy white, perfectly formed arse.
I really think I like y'all's word "arse" better than our word "ass." Ass sounds to me like you're cursing while Arse sounds like you're geniunely admiring something.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Artemis » Wed Apr 12, 2006 5:29 am

Well, I'm not about to make any friends here: I actually don't drool to Jessica Alba much. She was kind of cute as Sue Storm, but in her Sin City guise... I dunno, she was lacking something, for me. Didn't smoulder. Especially compared to Rosario Dawson, or (oh god yes) Carla Gugino (and I'm not just saying that because of her, ahem, 'costume'). So, on the positive side, Willow instead? Yay. Drool.

She could still be studying to be a lawyer, of course - no rule that you can't be a hot dancer and practise law at the same time. (Imagines Alex Cabot doing a striptease, drools again. And don't get me started on Jennifer Walters...)

I liked the feeling of the club around Willow, the sense of respect that there was towards her - in a place like Sin City, you'd think quite the reverse would be the case, but no. There was the same thing in the movie, the feeling that, as bleak and violence-prone as it is, Old Town as run by Gail's girls is a step up from the rest of the city. Not that that's difficult. But frankly, if I had to live anywhere in Basin City, I'd pick Old Town - ironically for the red light district, it seems more civilised and less corrupt than everywhere else.

Nonetheless, it's no surprise that this is all a hell of a shock for Tara. Letters aside, the last time she saw Willow, it was as a young, innocent girl, and that's probably how she kept thinking of her, deep down, in spite of knowing that everyone grows up. And now she's confronted by Willow who is most definitely not innocent, or a child, and as if that weren't enough just on an intellectual level, who stirs feelings of horizontal fun in Tara. She's been in the big house for eight years - it must feel like she's come out into a parallel world, and that'd be unsettling for anyone.

Plus, I'm thinking that Tara sees that Willow is still, in a sense, innocent - she's not cynical and hard-edged the way most adults in the city are. While Tara sees herself as purely cynical and hard-edged, because that was the only way to survive - I'm not surprised at all that she's thinking thought of getting away from Willow. She doesn't think she's good enough, and doesn't want to spoil Willow's innocence - she was willing to die for it once, after all. And she's not blind to the fact that Willow's got a pretty good deal going, in terms of what's possible in Sin City - so far as she's seen Willow has a safe place to call home, the guys at the club know better than to lay a hand on her when she gets off the stage, and she's got friends who no-one in their right mind would want to cross. That's not bad, all things considered - it's easy to see why Tara wouldn't want to drag her troubles into Willow's life.

And for Willow, I'm thinking it won't be easy either. Firstly, she'll have Tara's reluctance to overcome - she has to convince Tara that she is the beauty that Willow sees. Secondly, I think she's going to have to overcome her own feelings of guilt, and how that makes her see Tara. She feels like it's her fault Tara was shot, and wants to repay her - fair enough, but Tara's never going to accept Willow devoting her life to her on that basis. I think Willow is going to have to forget about guilt, and just fall in love with Tara for who she is, not for a debt she's owed.

I really like the Tara/Faith relationship, too. Both of them are hard as nails, because they've had to be - Tara to survive in jail, Faith because she's got the safety of Old Town riding on her shoulders, and she can't afford to show weakness. It's fun seeing them bicker and test each other, but at the same time recognise each other's strength, and give a measure of grudging respect.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby cutiepatootie » Thu Apr 13, 2006 8:32 pm

Ok....WOW ! Willow pole dancing.... :thud ...the description was just downright...awesome. Can't wait to see what happens! More PLEASE :pray
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby watty » Sun Apr 16, 2006 8:21 pm

Alcy, sorry about lack of feedback before. I wasn't sure if I could 'get' Sin City, not being familiar with the comics or the film. Ack, I shouldn't have doubted you. I can really sense the depravation of Basin City, the seedy characters that inhabit it, the blanket of cynicism that permeates.

Tara's hard edge doesn't hide the soft spot she has for Little Willow Rosenberg. I think that the letters partly sustained her and kept her sane during her time in jail, but she still thinks of Willow as that 12-year old when obviously the 12 year old has grown up. And gained really awesome sidekicks -- Buffy and Faith are wonderfully portrayed.

You haven't yet told us Willow's side of the story, but I'm thinking the gratitude she felt for the cop who saved her life gradually grew into infatuation. It'll be interesting to see how their relationship develops, both have some way to go before they realize that the other woman isn't how they had remembered and pictured. Obviously, I know that eventually they will grow to love each other for what they are, but I also know that you will bring us with you on their journey of discovery.

Very compelling. Great work, Alcy.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby beanie » Sun Apr 16, 2006 9:47 pm

Knock, knock.

I'm late. There was SOO much traffic (internet), and then my keys got stuck and it was all . . . a lie. Okay, but laziness isn't a crime. Just a sin.

Well upon reading your update several, several times I couldn't help but feel awkward about Willow and Tara. Not your writing! It's just the idea that Tara's picture of Willow is that little innocent child as was mentioned several times. And now she's a pole-dancing babe. Tara, being the isolated-I-just-broke-out-of-prison woman that she is, is feeling the stirrings for said babe. Just in Tara's head I could only imagine (as you probably do) how weird that is. It's kind of from "oh you're such a cutie" to "hot mama." But of course you already knew that, you evil writing mastermind. It'll be interesting to see how Tara overcomes her whole schema of who Willow should be when their relationship gets with the hubba hubba. I just hope Tara doesn't end up feeling like a pedophile because that's just bad.

In terms of Willow's view of Tara, yes she is grateful blah blah blah. But as a child, Willow only saw Tara during that one heroic moment, yes? I guess even in such a short moment, feelings and emotions are so intense that Willow idolizes Tara from that point on. And then idolizing turns into a deep infatuation . . . I'm sort of working this out in my head as I go, so sorry about the ramblings. At first I didn't really find fault in Willow's feelings for Tara, and I thought they would just naturally segue-way into the whole relationship thing, but I see where you're going with the whole Willow loves Tara because she's grateful. It's hard to start an actual and plausible romantic relationship from that.

OH WELL. We'll just see how it rolls, eh?
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby tarebear » Mon Apr 17, 2006 5:16 am

another great chapter alcy! so tara finally meets grownup willow... a scantily-clad pole-dancing willow at that! and to say that tara was shell-shocked was an understatement

Willow’s face filled her vision and Tara’s heart stopped beating for a few seconds. She almost keeled over completely when Willow went straight in for a moist, enthusiastic kiss.


i myself have never read or watched sin city so i was shocked to find out that willow was stripper, but i am glad that she is surrounded by a supportive "family" who seems to have taken good care of her through the years.

“But you don’t know everything…you don’t know her.”

“You don’t know her either Willow,” Faith was quick to reply.

Willow snorted indignantly, stopping in the middle of the hallway to stare Faith down, “I know Tara…”


i can empathize with willow here... she seems to have grown infatuated with tara over the years... maybe even has hero worship since she saved her all those years ago and she is the reason tara went to prison... but like tara said, prison changes things and tara may be afraid that willow may find out that she is no hero at all or maybe what she's feeling is what scares her the most.

And that’s not even what really worries me…I see her perfect breasts, the creamy white skin of her arse and the way her hair falls around her face and upper body. My heart beats faster, my mouth goes dry and I know more than anything else, I want her…I want her and it terrifies me.


this last few thoughts from tara gets me worried:

You’re an ex-cop who’s done hard time for a violent act…hardly good credentials. You’ve got to get out of here, got to put some distance between yourself and that kid…


is she really going away without telling willow? that will surely break willow's heart i think.

more soon please!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Mon Apr 17, 2006 1:58 pm

SithLordWiccan: Thanks very much for reading along, I think the theatres would have been overflowing with Kittens and their drool if Aly had been cast to play Nancy!

BigBlueEyes: Glad to have reeled you in! Might be a slight delay with the next chapter as I took a break from writing for Easter and I have a paper due next week but I promise to hurry myself along!

sacinema: I should get a cut from the DVD profits for encouraging people to rent the movie! Not to blow my own trumpet, but I like my version better too! Simply for the fact that it is 100% W & T!
Willow is basically two different people, she has her stage persona where she is this major sex bomb capable of holding men (and our hero cop!) to ransom with just a glance, but then she has her normal self who is just as much a nineteen year old girl as anyone else and one used to being protected. She’s still trying to find the balance between the two.
A talent for angst? Thanks very much, angst is what I strive for, and no problem, I love sharing!

WillowRulez: You should give the movie a go, it’s pretty unique but I think you either love it or hate it. I’ve deliberately put Faith in between W & T and I’m going to have fun with her role as guardian of Willow’s innocence. But W & T will definitely talk in the next chapter, wait and see to find out what they have to say!

Boadecia: Thanks very much! I try.

highlandlass25: Thanks, there is definitely the juxtaposition there, although I think that both of Willow’s personas are in love with Tara…they would just express it in different ways. It’s going to be a challenge to bring them together but there will be smooches eventually!

caz: It would have been interesting to see who would have come off worse between Faith and Tara, I think they would have both beat each other to an unrecognisable pulp! I’m sure Willow is up to the challenge too! We’ll just have to see how long it takes her.

DelWhicker: Love your new Avatar, although I was quite partial to the old one as well!
I actually really like splitting wood! But rocks would be beyond me, I’m not even sure if they make female prisoners do anything of the kind, but the imagery of Tara splitting rocks was so much better than anything else I could think of. Tara’s letters wouldn’t have been about puppies and kittens that’s for sure, I think they would have depressed Willow to no end. And I don’t think that Tara would have had the capacity to lie about her treatment there and pretend everything was alright.
Ha! I make notes when I read chapters too, although I often get so caught up in reading that I forget to write anything down. We’ve got both Willow and Tara coming from two completely opposite points, and it is going to take some major changes in both of them to come together in a way that is meaningful and appropriate for both of them. Thanks very much!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Mon Apr 17, 2006 3:00 pm

Willowlover: Thanks very much, I think Sith pretty much said what we all had to say…a big puddle of drool!

wimpy0729: Mmmm, yes, a lot of nice dreams coming out of that image. I think both of them have a number of issues to sort through before they can even think about becoming the sort of W & T couple that we all love…although the issues are going to be fun to sort through! Much angst promised!

Darth Pacula: Exactly, we can’t just have a rehashing of Sin City because there would be no surprises…and the ending isn’t exactly the most conducive to a happily ever after W/T relationship. I love Marv as well, although I’m deliberately avoiding using the real Sin City characters because I don’t think I could do them justice.
I’m thoroughly enjoying writing Tara and Faith, both are the same…but not. They’re on opposites sides of the law.
And yes, I agree, the ladies rule Old Town and Buffy would indeed have a field day if the men were to rough up the star stripper!
There are no mixed messages coming from Willow at this stage, although one does have to be worried at where her enthusiasm is coming from. I think Faith is very right to say that she doesn’t know Tara. In the real world, there are so many levels of wrongness that need to be worked out before they can even think about being together…even though this is Sin city and morals etc are a little skewed.
Cheers mate!

JustSkipIt: You’re exactly right, Tara is streetwise and world weary, but when it comes to one young women, she’s completely clueless. I think they have some serious talking to do to get past their issues but the question is whether Tara will be able to stay and listen, or will she run?
I really like the way that ‘arse’ rolls off the tongue, and the page! I agree, ‘ass’ is a derogatory term for a person (not to mention an animal!). Thanks very much!

Artemis: You’re entitled to your opinion Chris! (Although I don’t agree with it!) But I’m glad I could substitute someone that is drool worthy!
Willow could definitely be pre-law, at least I know the American legal study system is different to the one I went through in NZ.
I’d live in Old Town too, there the women get the respect that they don’t get anywhere else. It’s like Jacky Boy’s treatment of Shelley would be the norm across the City, except in Old Town. He tries to pull the same sort of shit there but gets a tough lesson in treating women right instead!
Tara was expecting to never see Willow again, but instead she not only instigates the rescue, she’s a stripper. No wonder Tara’s having a hard time dealing. You’re exactly right in your analysis. Tara did feel as though she was jailed for protecting Willow’s innocence, and now she’s understandably pissed off and confused at where Willow has ended up in life. It doesn’t matter that she has a ‘family’ and is protected and loved in Old Town, Tara can’t see past her occupation. I wonder if Tara would have been happier upon her release to find Willow stuck in a loveless marriage with a couple of kids and a husband who was stinking rich but treated her like shit. So, Tara has issues.
On Willow’s part, gratitude is one thing but loving someone simply because of it is altogether wrong. At this stage in the story, Willow has no proved to anyone that she loves Tara for something more than the fact that she saved her life.
Faith and Tara are fun too, not to mention the whole group dynamic, it’s going to be fun to flesh out each character a little more, although I will definitely be concentrating on my favourites…and we all know how much I like Faith!

cutiepatootie: Thanks very much! More to come soon.

watty: You’re forgiven…just! I agree, it is a little difficult to get into a fic when you feel you know nothing about the original premise, although I’ve tried to make this fic as accessible as possible without compromising the style and feel of Frank Millar’s world.
Having never been to prison myself I can’t really give an accurate portrayal of what it would be like to emerge 8 years later and find that everyone has changed and, in Willow’s case, grown up. However, I can imagine that it would be exceptionally difficult to deal with and would take a long time to come to terms with. I don’t intend to take too long, but I do want to do justice to Tara’s situation.
Willow will get a chance to tell her side of the story in the next chapter. Which incidently is proving difficult to write as I really want to get it right!
Thanks very much watty!

beanie: At least it’s a sin you can be forgiven for!
The situation is so incredibly awkward and so incredibly wrong. I think in the movie it came across as being wrong with just the juxtaposition of leathery, haggard Bruce Willis and nubile, gorgeous Jessica Alba. In this fic it comes across through their actions and their words. Willow wanting to be closer to Tara but Tara keeping her at a distance, and wanting to be even further away.
You can be rest assured that I will not bring W & T together for the wrong reasons.
If you’ll remember from the brief description in Chapter 1, Tara first met Willow while she was at school, while she was giving a talk in her role as a cop. So Tara not only views Willow as a kid, but a school kid, it gets even worse for her. Both Willow and I have our work cut out to get a plausible romantic relationship out of the situation. I think it’s going to be up to Willow to convince Tara that she has grown up and that she loves her for all the right reasons.
Wish me luck!

tarebear: Tara has met grown-up Willow but she can’t bring herself to accept grown-up Willow, there’s a huge gap between the two concepts.
Willow is indeed surrounded by a family who genuinely care about her.
It remains to be explained just where Willow’s love for Tara has developed from, we know that she is of course grateful and she feel guilty for Tara’s getting sent to prison, but is there more?
Tara definitely wants to run, she doesn’t trust herself around Willow so we know she feels something for her…but is it purely lust or something more?

Thanks so much for all the great feedback discussing and analysing what has been happening so far in Sin City, it definitely helps with the development of the details and to know whether I’m on the right track. As explained earlier, I’ve had a bit of a break, and I really must write that paper (but it’s sooooo boring!) but I should be too far away with an update.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby sinkinghearts » Sun Apr 23, 2006 5:02 pm

no updates yet? :(
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Thu Apr 27, 2006 1:10 am

Sorry Shane and others! I've just handed my paper in yesterday...fancy Masters study getting in the way of Fic writing! :smug

I'm working on the next chapter right now! Well, give me another few moments to surf the Kitten...then I'm off.

The next chapter will see some long awaited Willow and Tara interaction, a little light on the action, more on the talking for this one.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby sinkinghearts » Thu Apr 27, 2006 5:05 am

:party :party :party

I'M EXCITED ABOUT THE NEXT UPDATE

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby willowbaby05 » Thu Apr 27, 2006 7:28 pm

:thud HOLY SPADOINAKLE!!!
Wow.. I'm glad I found this fic. :banana :banana :banana :banana Like Mc Donald's I'm Lovin it. ( :smash Wow that was a cheesy line. *shakes head*) But steady still. Cant wait for the next post Alcy. Most definally will be waiting for it. :kgeek
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby VixenyTarasHot » Thu Apr 27, 2006 9:25 pm

So.. I've never seen the movie, but you've got me way hooked on this story

I don't want anything to be spoiled, so you have to promise to finish this fic so I can go watch the movie mmk? :D

More soon por favor!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Mon May 01, 2006 9:01 pm

willowbaby05: That was indeed cheesy but it works! You won’t have to wait long for the next chapter, it’s pretty much done and I’m just editing and re-reading etc.

VixenyTarasHot: I don’t think this fic will spoil the movie for you at all, apart from a very general plot idea, most of it is completely different. So you could watch the movie and it will probably enhance your enjoyment of the fic rather than ruin anything. But I do promise to finish this fic! Cheers.

Next chapter is pretty much finished, just re-reading it a couple of times to iron out any mistakes etc!
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Mon May 01, 2006 9:19 pm

Chapter Four – “Dreams and Nightmares.”


I wake soaked in sweat and my hands immediately grasp my neck where I expect to find large welts bruising the pale skin, where just moment ago I had felt Baby Dedara’s fingers pressing in my sleep. I feel them still despite being fully awake. She’s still with me, hiding in the shadows that surround me.

Draw in a couple of deep breaths, just relax and let your heart slow down.

Heart’s pounding like a freight train, my breath comes in ragged gasps as I struggle to breathe. I manage to get it under control and it slows enough for me to get my bearings. I look around the room, the shadows pierced by shafts of moonlight streaming through the open blinds. This is not my cell, I’m not behind bars, and I’m safe…after a fashion. As I move to peel back the bed sheets I realise they’re soaked through with sweat. I climb out of bed and my feet hit the cold floor with a soft thump. I don’t think that I can sleep anyway. There’s no way I’m going back to that place, or anywhere near that woman…even in my dreams.


Tara’s door opened with a creak and she stepped out into the hallway wearing just the white t-shirt and boxers that Faith had given her that evening. They revealed her well-toned body. Her darkly tanned arms a stark contrast to her pale white legs, usually covered up beneath her coveralls. Her hair fell in bed-tossed waves down past her shoulders to the middle of her back. For a moment she savoured the feeling of actually having her hair unbound. In prison, due to the intense labour or the fact that someone was likely to give it a hard yank out of sheer spite, meant that it had spent much of the past 8 years swept back into a usually untidy ball of hair at the back of her head. She was surprised it hadn’t turned grey and fallen out.

Tara began to walk down the dark hallway. She had no sense of direction within the Palace and therefore no actual destination, she just needed to walk. The halls were silent but Tara knew she was being watched from the shadows. She didn’t care. Tara almost wanted to give them some sort of excuse to come at her with raised fists or perhaps shoot her in the back and be done with it. Although if she were given the choice, she wasn’t even sure which option she would choose.

As she walked her stomach let out a furious growl. Tara realised just how famished she was. She passed more doors spaced at regular intervals along the corridor before reaching the end which terminated at a single door. Tentatively, she reached out and twisted the knob, the door opened inwards without a sound. At first her eyes met nothing but darkness. Gradually they adjusted, aided by thin strips of moonlight finding their way through badly drawn curtains. She found herself in a sitting room of sorts, squat shapes were actually a motley assortment of couches of a variety of different styles. A pool table stood on one side of the room, cues were laid atop it as though someone had just put them down. Tara crossed the short distance to it and ran one hand over the smooth wooden sides. As she moved she glanced around, hoping to spy the squat shape of a refrigerator in the darkness but there was none to be seen. Her stomach growled again as though it too realised this. She continued past the pool table to one of the windows. Her fingers reached out and drew one back, revealing moonlit rooftops and dark city streets. Old town was obviously not a well-lit place. As she stood gazing out at view she was surprised to find the place looked almost pretty. The darkness hid the most depressing aspects, and the moonlight gave it a gleaming shine that it definitely lacked during the day. Tara folded her arms across her chest as goosebumps appeared on her skin. For the most part she ignored the cold, lost within her own thoughts…until a small voice interrupted them.

“Can’t sleep either?”

Tara didn’t have to look over her shoulder to know exactly who it was, she exhaled a shallow but troubled breath to try and calm herself. She kept her eyes on the night sky beyond the window. A part of her willed the other person to leave and another part wished more than anything that they would stay. She closed her eyes slowly in an effort to stop her heart beating at a million miles an hour before she spoke.

“Hi Willow,” Tara replied quietly, opening her eyes once more.

From the corner of her eye she saw the small redhead join her at the window. She watched as Willow bounced lightly on the balls of her feet as though she were impatiently waiting for something. Tara had known the moment she met Willow as a school child that she was not one to stay still. She remember Willow constantly bounding to her feet or raising her hand in the air to ask yet another question. The two of them stood side by side awkwardly. Both had much to say, although where one was fairly bursting with the unspoken words, the other buried them deep down as far as she could.

One of them moved first. Tara looked down in surprise to see Willow’s thin arms around her waist. She felt her small body pressed against her back, pelvis snug against her arse. For just a few seconds Tara luxuriated in the feeling of a warm body pressed against her own. She savoured everything about it, Willow’s warmth, her hands pressed against her stomach and her small breasts pressed...

“Willow don’t…” Tara suddenly twisted out of Willow’s embrace and spun to end up standing face to face with her.

As Tara looked down at Willow she realised she had ended up in the worst possible situation that she had told herself to avoid at all costs. Alone, with Willow, and in a darkened room no less. She took a step backwards but even as she did she could appreciate that the situation was also rather ridiculous. Here was Tara Maclay, tough as nails ex-cop who had survived eight years of hell on earth in prison, backing away from a skinny little kid wearing a pair of pale green pyjamas. The colour made her hair vibrant even in the semi-darkness. The pyjamas were several sizes too big for her, as though they were hand me downs. The plunging neckline revealed her creamy chest but kept the breasts, which Tara had moments ago felt against her back, safely hidden. Even in the wrong-size pyjamas, Tara could see little Willow Rosenberg was no longer a kid.

However, as Willow ducked her head and bit her lip, she continuing to fidget, her fingers playing with one of the buttons on her shirt. Tara sighed, there was still more than a little bit of kid left in her. It was maddeningly adorable.

Willow finally looked up at Tara, an adult measure of impatience registering on her features, “Would you say something?”

“I have nothing to say,” Tara replied bluntly, trying to regain some sense of herself.

The ex-cop quickly resumed her former posture facing out the window, arms crossed over her chest as though she were trying to keep something in…or out. Tara was effectively telling Willow the truth. She had nothing to say to her because she honestly had no idea what to say. Willow was predictably not impressed with the answer.

“You have nothing to say in general or you have nothing to say to me?” Willow suspected it was a case of both, with an emphasis on the latter, “I don’t understand Tara. Why are you going all avoidy on me? I told you how much I’ve missed you and all I get in return is a blank stare. Surely you must realise that I…”

Tara interrupted Willow before she could say the three words she knew would be the death of her, “I know you’re grateful Willow and I don’t demand anything of you in return. What more do you want from me?”

“I want you,” Willow replied simply, talking to Tara’s back as the blonde refused to turn and face her.

She had to make do with studying Tara’s bland and expressionless reflection in the window. It was like talking to a ghost; a particularly silent ghost at that.

“You can’t have me,” Tara replied bluntly, her features remaining expressionless, “I’m too old for you.”

“You’re not old, you’re beautiful!” Willow protested indignantly.

Tara wasn’t about to be swayed, “I’m several lifetimes older than you, Willow.”

It sounds harsh and it is. I’m blunt and I have to be. This is the moment, if I can convince Willow to forget about me now then I will be free. There’s only so much of her attention that I can bear before surrendering to temptation. I continue to stare out the window, refusing to look at her face. I can’t tell if she’s upset or if there are tears threatening to roll down her face. I hope she cries, I want to hurt her so she’ll get over this infatuation.

“Didn’t you see me dance? I’m not a child anymore,” Willow growled, “So you can’t use that bullshit line with me.”

Willow was angry that Tara had decided to play the obvious age difference between them; it was irrelevant in her opinion.

Tara did not reply straight away. Of course she had seen Willow dance and that was a large part of the problem.

“How did you end up in this sort of lifestyle?” Tara asked quietly.

“This sort of lifestyle?” Willow fired the question back at Tara, “”What are you insinuating by that?”

“You know exactly what I’m talking about Willow.”

“Look Tara,” Willow began, feeling the conversation slipping completely out of control, “I dance, I’m not a whore.”

Tara sighed sadly, “From the company you keep I would say otherwise,”

Willow felt like screaming in frustration. Tara’s calm, blunt and pointedly brief answers were infuriating, “What? You mean Faith, Buffy, Dawn, Anya and the others? Tara, those women are the only people besides you who had ever been kind or good to me. I love them for what they’ve done and continue to do for me. Who they are has nothing to do with how I feel about them. They’re my family, I feel safe here.”

“Here? Willow, ‘here’ is a whore house!” Tara finally spun around to face Willow, her voice rising for the first time, “My understanding was that you were going to a foster family.”

Willow gave Tara a look taken straight from Faith’s handbook, “My foster family kicked me out on my own when I was fifteen.”

Tara’s jaw dropped slightly in disbelief, “Willow? Why would they do that? How could they do that?”

Willow arched her eyebrow and replied testily, “It was all very simple really, they walked in on me fucking their daughter and I was out of there faster than they could say ‘you’re a dyke and you’re going straight to hell.’”

“Willow please stop cussing,” Tara whispered, struggling to maintain eye contact with Willow.

Tara’s fists clenched at her side and eventually she did turn her head, pretending that she was intensely interested in the view once again. It took her a few moments to realise that she was not angry at Willow for swearing, but rather she was jealous of the object of fifteen year old Willow’s affection or at least, attention. She realised that the question of whether Willow had loved the other girl was burning a hole in her mind.

Willow merely thought Tara was entrenching even further within herself and she was not ready to let up, “Why the fuck not Tara? Because it’s another reminder that I’m not a child? How many more reminders do you need? What is it going to take for me to convince you that I’m a woman and I’m in love with you? In love with you not out of gratitude or guilt but because you’re the most amazing woman in my life and the only argument you can come up with in return in that you’re too old for me? I’m sorry Tara, but I’m not satisfied with that. I think, seeing who I am now, you feel exactly the same way.”

I haven’t been in her life for eight years, and before that I was barely a part of it and now…what the fuck do you call this mess I’m in now?

“Would you say something? Instead of standing there like you’re made of stone. I know you’re not made of stone…I remember you laughing…well, maybe not laughing, but you used to smile and that smile was gorgeous!” Willow desperately searched for a reaction from Tara and received none, she tried a different approach, “At least you should be able to say you don’t love me…I reckon it should be pretty easy for a tough old cop like yourself to say a few little words.”

Willow threw down the ultimate challenge, and she knew it. As soon as the words left her lips she discreetly bit her lip, it was the most rotten trick she could have pulled on Tara and she immediately regretted it. She reached out a shaking hand and laid it on Tara’s upper arm. Tara wrenched her arm away in one brutal movement. In that same movement she also wrenched Willow’s heart.

“Don’t do this to me Willow,” Tara groaned in a small whisper, “And don’t do this to yourself.”

Tara backed away from Willow, hands raised in front of her as though to ward her off. She looked as though she desperately wanted to say something, however, her lips moved but no sound came out. She eventually threw down in hands as though frustrated at her inability to speak the words she wanted to say. Willow then watched Tara run from the room without actually physically breaking into a run. The redhead was left standing by the window alone with the painful knowledge that their conversation had not exactly progressed the way she had imagined.

~~~~~~

Tara had slammed the door behind her as she left the room. She slammed it hard as if her leaving in the first place did not give enough indication that she did not want to be followed. As she was half way back to her hotel room, she suddenly found her path blocked by Faith, Buffy and another of the ladies, a Uzi toting woman wearing a cop’s hat. Buffy had in her deadly hands not only one of her katana, but also the leather collar of a jacket. The jacket was on the back of a rather defiant looking man. She threw him to the floor and delivered a firm kick in the small of his back to send him flying face first into the carpet. Faith reached down and grabbed a fistful of his hair, yanking his head back so they could all get a good look at his face.

Faith looked up at Tara and frowned at the tortured expression she found on the blonde’s face. Although there were any number of explanations behind that expression, Faith knew it was not due to the most sensible. Tara may have just escaped from a life sentence but it was a skinny little redhead that was eating her up from the inside.

“Do you know this guy?” Faith returned to the matter at hand.

“Huh?” Tara looked as though all she wanted to do was throw herself from the nearest window.

“Do you know this guy?” Faith repeated, cuffing the prisoner over the back of his head.

Tara glanced down at the face of the man Faith held, he glared back at her defiantly. She didn’t spare him more than a second, a two bit crook of the type she would have packed off to the slammer in a heartbeat back when she was still a cop. He was nobody. She shook her head in Faith’s direction.

“Never seen him before. Why?”

“Cos he says he’s got a message for you,” Faith replied.

Tara’s eyebrows raised slightly, “Well?”

The man laughed chokingly, “I’ve got a message for you Tara Maclay.”

Tara crossed the floor in two powerful strides, kneeling down before the man, “I think we’ve gathered that already you piece of shit, now what’s the message?”

“It’s from Glory Talbot.”

“I guessed as much. Obviously she’s not setting me up on a date with her son so what does that murdering bitch want?” Tara felt like herself once more, she had a problem she could deal with.

“You,” he replied.

Tara snorted quietly, “Seems that’s what everyone wants at the moment…the short answer is I’m not available and you can take that back to your Madam Talbot with my fucking compliments.”

“If you don’t hand yourself over…she’s declaring open war on Old Town, the cops will swarm here like flies on stink,” he replied, glancing up at Faith with another chuckle.

Faith glanced across to her fellow Ladies with narrow eyes. The very thought was inconceivable…Old Town was a safe haven. The Ladies didn’t mess with the cops, and the cops didn’t mess with the Ladies, that was the law and the uneasy truce that kept the whole place hanging together. If either side stepped over the line then all hell would break loose.

“They wouldn’t dare!” the Lady wearing the cop hat hissed, gripping the handle of her Uzi with white knuckled fingers.

“And they won’t, Lola,” Faith slammed the man’s head into the carpet and then let his hair go, wiping her hands on her jacket with a look of distaste.

I watch Faith rise slowly to her feet, keeping her eyes on me the whole time. Behind her, Buffy does the same and I watch that wicked looking knife of hers like my life depends on it. These women aren’t my friends, and the sooner I realise that the better off I’ll be. I reckon they’ll hand me over to Glory in a heartbeat, especially to keep the peace. Open war or handing over one tired ex-cop? It’s a fucking dead cert.

Faith continued, “They won’t because Glory knows if her goons or the cops so much as put a toe onto our turf with ill intentions then we’ll cut them up so bad the streets will run red with blood, and you can bet your arses it won’t be Ladies blood!”

Beside her Buffy gave one sharp nod.

If I hear it right, they’re gonna protect me…maybe Willow’s right and I’m short-changing these women…even so, they’re a bunch of crazy, suicidal broads.

“Don’t be stupid, they’ll come in here with so much manpower you won’t stand a chance,” Tara spoke the truth and everyone knew it.

The door at the other end of the hall opened. Tara didn’t need to turn around, Willow’s smell filled the air and she heard the girl’s footsteps pounding along the hall with urgency. They stopped just behind Tara, so close Tara could hear Willow breathing.

“There’s no way we’re handing Tara over to her!” Willow growled firmly.

They’re a pack of goddamn heroes, and I hate to see it rubbing off on Willow. I imagine her going down in a hail of cop bullets and it hurts like fuck.

“No one’s saying that Willow, now go back to bed,” Faith pointed one finger in the direction of Willow’ room at the other end of the hall.

Tara didn’t see the expression on Willow’s face but knew it was one of protest when she saw the reply expression on Faith’s face. The brunette raised her eyebrows and glared in a commanding manner. Tara felt Willow move past her before she saw her. She then watched the redhead’s back as she moved past them all without a glance back over her shoulder. Tara watched Willow move away from them, her hips swinging in those green pyjamas of hers, red hair flowing free over her back. She disappeared throw a door down in the darkness at the other end of the hall and Tara turned her attention back to the scum at her feet. By now he had dragged himself to a kneeling position, one foot forward as though he were prepared to spring to his feet. He was looking over his shoulder, up at Faith.

“So what’s your answer whore? What word should I take back to Madam Talbot?” he asked, obviously impatient to be out of the Palace.

“What word?” Faith cocked her head to one side, “’Cos I’m so fucking generous, she can have several, ‘Keep the fuck out of Old Town!’”

“It’s your funeral bitches!” he sneered in reply, standing all the way up with a slight stagger.

Tara clenched her fist, “And this is from me.”

In one powerful movement, she drew back her fist and let it go. It smashed into the guys jaw, dislodging teeth and sending them flying in a cloud of blood to the carpet. He fell backwards into the arms of Faith and Lola. Faith smirked across at Tara.

“Take this creep outside and send him on his way real nice like,” she commanded Buffy and Lola, “Make sure he gets out of Old Town safe, we wouldn’t want something nasty happening to him before he gets to deliver his message.”

Tara watched as the two women half-dragged the man back out the way they had come, she watched until they disappeared and found herself alone in the hallway with Faith. The whore stood with one hand on her hip, a pose so maddeningly confident it made Tara ache.

“You’ll soon see that we’re not who you think we are,” Faith said in Tara’s direction, she was not boasting but rather making a simple statement of fact, “Whether you like it or not, we’re going out on a limb for you.”

I don’t reply. Call me a rude, ungrateful bitch but my time in prison has made me cynical. All this self-righteous heroism makes me sick. When will they realise that it all counts for nothing? My throat is as dry as hell and I realise I need something to drink, something that burns. I push past Faith with the intention of going back to my room, pulling some clothes on, and getting the hell out of here.


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