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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Alcy » Sun Feb 12, 2006 2:32 am

WillowRulez: I think it’s time for them to get back together as well, I’m not too fussed on writing them apart…although this is a good exercise in patience.
Haha! That’s fantastic, I should write to Oxford and see if they’ll put it in the next edition of their dictionary!

Useful_Oxymoron: Thanks so much for joining in with us! I thikn Mars Attacks was as funny as heck, I hated it the first time I watched it but now I can appreciate it for its pure silliness. Although Captain Red was never meant to be that silly, I do try to capture that sort of atmosphere.
The dreamscape almost never happened because I thought it would be too complicated to pull off. I was right, it is complicated! But it’s been good for me…and I can never keep myself to a simple plotline anyway!
I had a lot of fun with W & T in this incarnation and I’m glad people have come to care about them because I sure have.

caz: In my opinion, bad guys in action serials have to be a pack of bastards…otherwise they’re not the bad guys!
And now we have the brave little group trooping off into the ship for them to be picked off one by one. A basic plot element begun so very well with Alien and now a staple of so many movies, both good and bad. My only problem is I care too much about all the characters to kill them off!

sam7777: I couldn’t really think of a worse situation to put Tara in…I’m so mean! But the trying situations serve to bring out the best in individual character…and we know Tara’s going to come through this test…the question is how? And yes, I was sick of having no smut to write…so I had to put it in somewhere!

Sabina: Thanks for delurking, but I’m incredibly guilty of enjoying the Artifact and never leaving any feedback so you’re forgiven!
It’s bittersweet writing the last few chapters too! After having lived with a story for so long it seems weird to finally type in the last few pages and hope you’re doing it justice! Although I do feel Captain Red has had a good run so I won’t be too sorry to see it finished…and a finished fic always means a brand new one to start which I hope is exciting!
I couldn’t have Willow running off into the Mothership by herself, no matter how brave she is and how much she loves Tara, that would have been suicide…and we couldn’t have that.
What is happening to Tara is basically a reference to Glory, I always felt that storyline wasn’t given its full due on the show. I don’t know about exploding heads…but maybe I could throw in a couple!
Hmm, I don’t know if its going to be the last chapter…maybe, maybe not…

grimmy: I agree, Tara’s mistreatment definitely earns them all nasty deaths…that is if killing most of the world’s population didn’t already earn them nasty deaths!
Haha! I love your Faith imagery, a very pissed off antibiotic! And you’re very right about the Bren, tommy guns are far more suited for close combat but I liked the image of Faith with one. And I was referencing ‘Aliens’ where the majority of the grunts have small laser rifles but then two of them have those massive ones which are mounted on swivels which I’m sure arent good for close quarters but look awesome!
It does suck to lose someone from your team but like I said above, staple movie plot element where the good guys get picked off…and I’m trying to write an action movie so we’re stuck with it.
And Tara’s childhood sucked arse, but I wanted to create a huge contrast between her family life with Diana and then what happened after that. And yes, Diana is still an unknown. We know she was the best of mothers and the nicest of people…but who is she now? Stay tuned!

Artemis: Yay for the tension, always good to be able to create a wee bit of that when the finale is looming! And yes, war is all about sacrifice which sucks of course.
I kinda have placed a lot on Tara’s shoulders haven’t I? I guess it says a lot about how I feel about the character that I would do that to her. Hmm, either I hate her guts or I really admire her! I think it’s obvious that I think the latter.
And I firmly believe that smut keeps the world going around!
I wanted to create that feeling that they are so close you cant separate them. Even though they are in reality so far apart they are still a team like you say, let’s see how well they can work together to bring these bastards down!

JustSkipIt: I had a really, really long break from all fic writing which in many ways was a shame, but was quite necessary. I did hate to leave it half-finished for so long though.
Upon re-starting I had to read the whole thing through again to keep everything flowing and in the same frame of mind, I’m very glad that the emotions come through so strongly. I find that despite the wooden acting in action or sci-fi flicks, emotions do often feel more powerful and essentially OTT. I feel that kind of raw, extreme emotion suited W & T really well, although I hope I was able to bring a little more realism to it.
The reason I enjoyed Buffy so much, besides W & T, was because of the ensemble nature of it, it was never just Buffy…but always Buffy, Willow & Tara, Xander, Spike etc etc and that translates into my fics. I love having the full compliment of characters surrounding our girls.
And yes, climax time, this chapter’s gonna take a while but hopefully not too long.

wastson: I’ll forgive you since you do always leave such great feedback! And I agree about the work thing, damn it!
When it comes down to it, this is a war and people do die. I couldnt count all the films I’ve seen where a character I enjoy has been killed off but you have to accept it as part of the story as a whole.
I hope the climax can be nail-biting and maybe a little scary. Trooping off into an alien ship would be enough to terrify me, which is probably why I’m not off saving the world! I hope I can deliver the goods!

As I said earlier, work has been a nightmare lately but I’m working hard on writing the climax to Captain Red. Given that we are winding up, I don’t just want it to be another chapter, it has to be better than that! Stay tuned everyone!
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Alcy » Sun Mar 12, 2006 1:54 am

Okay, I tried to fit the last Chapter all into one but it's gotten away on me and I've had to split it up. So without further ado...

Chapter Twenty-One – “Endgame.”

Willow felt the extremely unpleasant sensation of sweat trickling down the side of her face, from her hairline, down over her temple and finally dripping off her cheek. She did not even dare dash her forearm across her forehead to mop it up; so tense was the atmosphere as the group of humans made their way into the very bowels of hell itself. It was certainly hot enough to be hell inside the LGF Mothership.

Despite the chaos that was erupting in the world outside the ship, silence reigned inside. The group moved so silently that Willow could hear Barrel’s heavy breathing behind her and the slight clink of Buffy’s Tommy gun against her webbing as she walked just ahead. Her own breathing was like a deafening storm in her head. She half wished that it would stop and give her room to think.

So far they had seen no other sign of life, nor any sign that their intrusion had been detected, a fact which was making them all dangerously cocky. William and Tad led the group down the corridor. They had very little decision making to do as the only way was forward, there had been no turns or undulations whatsoever in their path. While the leading pair had started out at a bare creep, they had slowly increased the pace to a brisk walk. The others followed their lead, although wary to check each point they passed for any signs of change…anything other than the stark corridor which seemed to go on forever.

Willow had the distinct feeling that if she closed her eyes she would still see the tubes of neon, green lighting her way forward. Leading her forward and straight into hell. Her eyelids refused to shut however, they were frozen open, constantly alert. They had adjusted to the strange lighting and semi darkness to the point where each shadow did not trouble her. She had noted that the corridor seemed to widen as they walked to the point where it was now a good twelve feet across.

“I get the feeling that these guys aren’t too big on security,” Buffy whispered, turning her head slightly over her shoulder so she spoke in Willow’s direction.

Faith’s sharp ears picked up the comment and she replied a little louder, “I think given that they are currently blowing our positions to hell that they don’t expect any of us to be sneaking in their back door.”

Willow made an angry hissing noise in the back of her throat as an indicator for them both to keep their mouths shut. Buffy turned to face forward once again and Faith merely grunted her assent as she readjusted the heavy Bren on her hip.

What happened next put paid to any assumptions that they would be able to stroll through the Mothership undetected. In retrospect, Willow knew it was coming from the moment of her hair-raising entrance into the ship. The atmosphere of dread had built to the point that she was poised, waiting for whatever it was the LGFs would throw at their little group. So when the floor shook beneath them, sending Tad and William sprawling and the rest of them to the walls for a secure handhold, Willow merely cocked her Tommy gun and waited.

“What in blazes?”

Tad picked himself up just as the floor in front of him rent open with an awful grinding and tearing of metal. He found himself staring down into a deep, black chasm. If William had not reached out and yanked him backwards by his backpack them he would have discovered just how deep it was.

The floor tore at irregular intervals, leaving jagged gaps across what had once been a secure walking surface. It became a treacherous maze which they would have to negotiate in order to continue.

Willow padded her way forward and came to a halt just in front of William and Tad. With her toes barely on the edge, she peered into the darkness below and then up at the route that lay before them. While every ounce of good sense within her told her that turning around would be the safest option, she knew it was the wrong choice. There was no way except forward, forward and on towards Tara. Raising her hand she made a slow motion forward for her team to follow her. With her heart continuing to hammer in her head, Willow began negotiating the jagged surface to the other size. With each step she was prepared for the floor to give way beneath her. The further she went, the more she felt as though she were a school child walking a balancing beam in the playground.

She glanced over her shoulder to see Tad following close behind, obviously poised to react if she should fall. His Tommy Gun was slung over his shoulder so both hands were free. Stretching out behind them both, were the other members of the team, a rather nervous looking Alex bringing up the rear. Willow noted approvingly that Faith and Buffy had branched out, choosing different routes across the maze. They each tested the way ahead cautiously before taking a step.

“Kinda makes you feel like a youngster,” Tad remarked, echoing Willow’s thoughts.

“Just keep your eyes peeled,” Willow replied, unable to respond as jovially as she would have in the past.

She concentrated on putting one foot after the other, trying to look both where she was placing her feet and at the way ahead. Even though she was almost safely across the jagged portion of the floor, she could not relax.

“Hey...” Tad began in a low voice.

Willow glanced over her shoulder to find him staring intently down into the depths below them.

“There’s something moving down there,” he continued.

With calculated care, Tad began to slowly unsling his weapon. For a split second Willow was torn as to whether to order everyone through as fast as possible or freeze and prepare to fire. It was an obvious choice, they were defenceless with limited footing, she was about to bark the order when a foreign shape shot up out of the darkness. It moved at such a pace, Willow could not make out what it was until it shot through Tad’s back and protruded hideously from his stomach. Willow found herself staring at a thick cylindrical shape with a tapered end, much like a tentacle. Embedded in the very end was what appeared to be an eye of sorts. It regarded Willow coldly and she shivered. The tentacle undulated grotesquely as though it were alive and yet it’s materials indicated that it was mechanical. It was made of some sort of transparent material though which Willow could see the now familiar green liquid pulsing as well as any number of what appeared to be wires and tubes. The bright red blood which was splattered over the eye facing her, drew Willow back down to earth. She glanced up from the tentacle to Tad’s face, it was ashen and slack as he stared back at her.

Behind her, the rest of her team members had opened fire as more of the sinister tentacles arose from the chasms beneath their feet. Combined with the threat which they now faced, they still had to contend with the fact they were dancing on narrow ledges themselves. Alex had managed to retreat back to the secure footing at the start but the others were all playing a dangerous balancing game. A wrong foot would send them down into the depths, no doubt to the origin of the monster-machine they now faced.

Meanwhile, Willow could not draw her eyes away from the look of surprise on Tad’s face as he was forced to confront his mortality. Quickly slinging her weapon, she reached out across the gap that separated them and took both his hands in hers. Suddenly the tentacle that held him dropped and he fell along with it. With a strangled cry, Willow dropped to her knees. She would have been dragged down along with Tad had not the tentacle become entrapped on a piece of jagged metal. Tad hung downwards, only the tentacle in his stomach and Willow’s desperate grip preventing him from falling. His grip on her hands grew slacker with each passing second. She dragged her eyes away from Tad’s to search out Faith in the chaos and found her in the midst of hacking off one of the tentacles with her knife. Half severed, the writhing tentacle was still trying to wrap itself around her chest. With one last guttural cry, Faith hacked it free and it fell harmless to the ground. Searching for her next target, her eyes met Willow’s and before her gaze fell upon Tad, she knew. With a bound, she leapt the short chasm that separated them and fell to her knees in front of him. She took his hands from Willow who immediately leapt to her feet to defend her friends as they spent precious last moments together as Tad’s wound was clearly fatal.

Tad’s eyes misted over at the sight of his lover. He gripped her hands with all his remaining strength even as he felt the life drain out of him.

“Tad…” Faith whispered in a broken voice.

A tentacle screamed towards her. Faith calmly raised her head for a moment and let go of one of Tad’s hands. In one fluid movement, she swiftly drew her pistol and emptied the magazine into its eye. It exploded in a shower of hot, green slime.

The tentacle impaled in Tad’s stomach writhed momentarily, tearing at the already gaping wound. Stark white from blood loss, Tad couldn’t feel a thing. Blood bubbled from the corner of his mouth as he tried to speak his last. His mouth opened and closed, teeth stained with blood. With a brutal tug, the tentacle wrenched itself out of Tad’s stomach accompanied by the sickening sound of collapsing flesh. Faith had to scramble to hold onto him, flinging her pistol away to hold him securely with both hands.

Behind her, Willow fired her Tommy Gun into the blood-spattered tentacle as it tried to renew its attack on the couple. She gained no amount of satisfaction from seeing the bullets tear into its skin as it fell backwards into the pit. There was no time to dwell on anything as more emerged to take it place. She was frantically trying to keep Faith and Tad clear from attack.

Her hands slick with blood, Faith was loosing her grip on Tad. The tendons on her arms bulged as she fought to pull him back up. In one awful moment, it appeared as though she was going to let herself get dragged down with him.

“Let…me…go!” Tad choked, with nearly more blood coming out of his mouth than words.

“I can’t!” Faith replied desperately, as though that would be killing him herself.

“Please…” he urged, his voice was a mere whisper.

Faith had her legs wrapped around the beam of metal upon which she sat but even that was not leverage enough to retain her hold on Tad. Her grip continued to falter. He slipped further downwards, his eyes pleading with her to let him go.

“I love you,” Faith whispered, her mouth set with grim determination.

Tad’s lips curled up in a grotesque but genuine smile, neither of them ever expected to hear those words coming from her lips. Rather than let Tad slide out of her grasp, Faith let him go suddenly as though that were the only way she could do it.

Willow stood over Faith, watching her out of the corner of her gaze. For a moment she though the brunette might throw herself down into the darkness below along with her lover’s body. However, she realised just how little she knew the woman when she suddenly sprang back into action as though the past few tragic moments had never occurred. The only indicator that they had was an even more determined set to her expression. As soon as she was on her feet, she deftly dodged a spearing thrust made by a tentacle. Spinning around it she grabbed it from side on and held fast.

“Knife!” she barked urgently in Willow’s direction, having lost her own in her scramble to reach Tad’s side.

“Here!” Willow responded quickly despite her amazement at the speed of Faith’s movements, withdrawing her own sheathed knife and tossing it to Faith.

Faith snatched it out of the air by its handle and plunged it downwards into the writhing tentacle. Gushes of green slime sprayed upwards, covering her head and shoulders. Willow watched her pare the tentacle like a vegetable. Eventually, the end flopped lifelessly to the ground even as the now headless stub continued to thrash around. It threatened to knock both of them of their feet.

All around them their fight against the huge, all-consuming creature seemed to be in dire straits. It was clear that no matter how many tentacles they succeeded in removing, more surfaced to replace them. Several grenades thrown into the pit had little effect, other than to threaten to bring the roof down on their heads.

Faith glanced across to Willow desperately.

“We’ve got to give you enough room to get out of here…we’re here to find Tara, not…” Faith stopped talking momentarily to wallop a tentacle with her fist and slash at it wildly. She continued talking, “…get slaughtered by these things!”

Willow looked helplessly at the path ahead, she could she no road through the writhing mass. She then looked to her friends, she also hated to leave them alone facing it, if it weren’t for her, none of them would even be here.

No, but they’d still be out fighting…still probably be getting killed. Willow thought of the swarms of LGFs outside and reasoned that perhaps they did stand more chance in here.

“Everyone, concentrate all your fire, everything you’ve got! We’ve got to make a path through for Will!” Faith yelled, her voice barely resonating over the sounds of the struggle, she also signalled out Buffy as the next closest person, “Buff, you’re going with her.”

Buffy, covered from head to toe in the green goop secreted by dying tentacles, nodded her assent and leaped to join Willow in a position to make a sprint through the path created. As the remaining members of the team gathered around Faith, Willow could see it was going to be suicide for them. To concentrate their efforts on one area, would leave them exposed to all others. They would be able to create a path for bare moments, and then would most probably be cut to ribbons.

“We’ll be right behind you Will,” Alex said over his shoulder as he pumped yet another magazine into the nearest tentacle, they were all running dangerously low on ammo.

Willow detached her remaining magazine from her Tommy gun and tucked it in Alex’s webbing. She slapped him fiercely on the back in thanks and for luck. She threw her now empty machine gun to the ground, knowing she had only her handgun remaining for self-defence.

“Now!” Faith barked.

Willow and Buffy watched as their friends threw themselves against one side of the mass of tentacles leaving an almost clear run for the two of them down the other side. Neither wasted a moment in making for it, otherwise their friend’s sacrifices would have been in vain. Willow ran first, Buffy close on her heels.

Willow was forced to duck urgently as a rouge tentacle went flying over her head. She felt it brush the hair on her head as it was carried by its momentum straight into the wall beside her. Without time to think, she leapt the last open space between her and the corridor ahead. For anyone it would have been an impressive and difficult jump. Exhausted and wounded in several places, Willow barely made it. Her toes caught the edge of the ledge and for a few dangerous seconds she windmilled her arms in an effort to fall forward. However it was Buffy crashing through behind her that eventually knocked her forward. She fell flat on her face, incredibly relieved.

Buffy grabbed her upper arm in a vice-like grip, “Up Will!”

Buffy was right to urge her forward, even as Willow struggled to her feet tentacles came crashing after them. Willow could sense them straining at her heels as she ran full tilt down the corridor in front of her. Both pilots running as fast as they possibly could, trying desperately to block out their friends screams that echoed from behind them.

******
When Tara managed to open her eyes, she was surprised to be able to do so. She thought perhaps they would have frozen shut with the temperature in the cell. As her eyes grew adjusted to what little light filtered into her cell, she realised that her eyelids were about the only thing she could still move. It felt as though she had no limbs, she was just a detached consciousness floating in a tiny room.

So when the door to her cell was slammed open and heavy booted feet crashed into it, Tara was barely aware of it. It was not until cruel fingers wrapped themselves around her frozen flesh that she actually felt something. It was as though their flesh was burning her own, permanently branding her skin. With one on either side, they dragged her upwards. A weak, barely audible cry tore from her lips. Had she had the strength, it would have been a full throated scream. Tara half expected to find her legs had been ripped off at the hip as they jerked her into a standing position. Her feet hit the floor and immediately could not support her own weight. Her legs simply crumpled beneath her. The Juthungi barely paused and resorted to dragging her out of the room.

Tara’s frozen feet felt as though they were being scraped raw. However, despite the pain of feeling returning to her limbs and her rough handling, Tara refused to make a further sound. After being dragged longer than she could stand it, she gritted her teeth and made her feet work. It felt strange at first, as though she were not the one doing the walking. Eventually, she was stumbling along between the two Juthungi. Each step felt as though she was walking on knives, but she was heartened slightly by the fact that her strength had not deserted her altogether. For she knew exactly where she was going…and that she would need to draw upon all the reserves of strength she could muster.

When she finally saw it, Tara was surprised to find that she was no longer scared of it. It seemed that the machine had haunted her dreams for so long that it was becoming as familiar to her as her own bed. When the Juthungi roughly shoved her back against its surface she did not gasp in shock…for she knew exactly how it would feel. As they manoeuvred her limbs about to tie the straps, Tara felt as though the contraption had been constructed with her body in mind. Every surface moulded to her flesh perfectly.

They were none to gentle strapping her in, each one threatened to cut of circulation as Tara tested them experimentally. She did not want to seem overly willing for them to carry out their plan with her despite the fact that it was exactly what she wanted them to do. The look of terror on her face however, was very real.

Tara regarded each of the four Juthungi in the room as she waited for them to begin. There was nothing to separate them, each was dressed identically with no rank insignia of any kind. She could no more tell what they were thinking than she could a rock. Each moved about their duties without so much as a signal or any form of communication with one another. It was only when all but one of them left the room that Tara guessed they were about to begin.

As Tara stood in silence, awaiting her fate she closed her eyes in an effort to a place from which she could draw strength. Although all she did was lower her eyelids over her eyes, she effectively sealed herself off from reality, disconnecting the rest of her emotions as well. It was a technique she had learned to master during her most difficult periods of adolescence. This time however, it was slightly different. Never before had she held the same amount of strength within herself and it was for one reason…Willow. It took a few moments for her raging heartbeat to slow, to forget the cold that enveloped her entire body but eventually she found the place inside of her where Willow lived. Tara let the love that dwelt there fill her body. The cold fled and was replaced by the love that Tara cherished more than anything else in her life. Willow was her life. She loved the redhead for just who she was, the daredevil pilot, the leader and the wonderfully talented lover who never failed to send her over the edge.

Suddenly there was pain!

Tara’s eyes flew open as the calm that she had built around herself was torn down in the most violent manner possible. All over her body she felt an intense burning fire consuming her. Her eyes opened even wider when she saw what had caused her pain. Dozens of tubes had emerged from the machine which held her and pierced her flesh. They entered in her legs, her arms, chest and even, as Tara accidentally tugged one of them, in her face. Each one carried the same green essence that pumped throughout the entire vessel into her veins. Tara stared in horror at the tubes in her arm, she could see a green colour spreading through each of her veins where there ought to have been the faint blue of her own blood. She could feel it as it entered her body and it was the most awful feeling Tara could imagine. It was as though there was another entity inside of her, invading her body. Her vision clouded over and she realised she was seeing everything through a green filter. Her heart thudded fiercely once more as her previous state of calm fled. Tara lost the picture of Willow in her mind. All she had left was her name.

“Willow!”

******

As Willow and Buffy continued into the bowels of the ship, their friends were still with them in spirit if nothing else. For the first time they now found themselves up against turns and corners in their path. A veritable labyrinth of choices presented themselves to the two pilots who had no idea which direction to choose. Both were so used to flying by compass, here they had nothing to guide them save a burning desire to find Tara. Willow found herself choosing pathways at random, knowing in her head it was futile and yet sensing in her heart

“Willow!”

Willow stopped dead in her tracks and turned to Buffy with an urgent look on her face, the blonde stared back, her face streaked with blood, dirt and sweat.

“Did you hear that?” Willow cocked her ear, straining to listen even though the first word had been like a shout in her ear.

Buffy frowned, the tension evident on her face, “Nope, what was it?”

She studied the direction to which Willow was listening intently, her Tommy Gun trained ahead with her finger poised over the trigger. Willow cupped her pistol in both hands, holding it in front of her in a cautious manner as she listened. Suddenly she surged forward and quickly broke into a run.

“Hey!” Buffy was helpless to do anything but follow.

She chased after Willow as the redhead seemingly knew exactly which way she was going. Panting, Buffy caught up and tried to slow the redhead down.

“Will, slow down…you’ll run us straight into a whole nest of ‘em or something!”

“I can’t Buffy!” Willow shrugged off Buffy’s restraining arm and quickened her pace, “I know where she is.”

Buffy looked at Willow sceptically as they ran, “And how on earth do you know that.”

Willow replied as if it were the most natural thing in the world, “Because I can feel her.”

******

Cherry felt the dust that filled the air scorch the back of his throat. He coughed and choked but more flooded into his mouth until he was doubled over with spasms rocking his small frame. Peering through slitted eyes, everywhere he looked, was chaos. Explosions rocked the earth and the skies overhead were black with aircraft, none of them friendly. Cherry felt as though her were drowning, not knowing which way to run. He stood hunched over with men and women swarming around in, running in both directions as though no one knew exactly where to go. Mrs Chippy shivered in her hiding place beneath his coat.

Suddenly his arm was snatched up in a fierce grip. Cherry peered upwards to see a young soldier standing over him. The soldiers face betrayed his youth but the dirt and blood caked upon it said otherwise.

“You can’t just stand here kid!” he yelled over the din.

Without a further word he began dragging Cheery along behind him. His confidence and strong frame gave the boy a glimmer of hope.

When Cherry stumbled one too many times as the ground shook beneath his feet, the soldier simply picked him up in both arms. Cherry buried his face in the soldier’s greatcoat, keeping both his own arms in a protective shield over Mrs Chippy.

Cherry thought they had run for miles when the soldier finally slowed, although in reality their dash had lasted mere seconds. He found himself set on his own feet quickly yet gently.

“Get under the ledge. As far back as you can and don’t come out for anything!” he motioned Cherry beneath an overhang which was so low to the ground only a child could hope to squeeze beneath it.

Cherry didn’t need to be told twice, he scrambled beneath the thick concrete of what had once been part of a building’s basement. He jammed his body as far back as he possibly could. Not caring that he could just as easily be crushed like a small bug if it were to fall. He peered back out at the soldier who was crouched down to check his charge was safe. As he gave Cherry a quick grin he suddenly disappeared amidst a shower of fire and ash. Cherry heard a scream in his ears and it was not until it stopped that he realised it was his own voice.

When the dust cleared he met the young soldier’s gaze once again. He stared back at Cherry through eyes that had seen too much…and now saw nothing at all. Cherry burrowed against the surface behind him. He squeezed his eyes shut and pressed his hands against his ears in a vain effort to block out the sounds of the world ending. He could feel Mrs Chippy’s heart thudding along with his own.

******

Despite the fact that Willow obviously strongly believed they were headed in the right direction, Buffy couldn’t help but feel a very palpable dread with each step she ran. It was as though they were getting closer and closer to the centre of hell. With the walls closing in on her, she began to wonder if she would ever see the sky again. She stole a glance across at Willow and the singular look on her face told her everything she needed to know. Willow no longer cared about the sky, or her own life…all she cared about was Tara.

“We’re here!” Willow hissed urgently as the two of them rounded one last corner.

Both Willow and Buffy skidded to a rather abrupt halt as they emerged into a small anteroom. It was made all the smaller by the fact there were three massive aliens standing in the centre before a small door.

“Fuck!” Willow yelped, raising her pistol.

“This is all your fault Will!” Buffy said through gritted teeth.

“I’ll buy you a drink later!” Willow replied quickly.

In the space of a split second, both of them opened fire at two different targets. Without stopping to think clearly, Buffy pumped the one nearest to her full of hot lead from the Tommy Gun at her hip. She watched as the bullets at first seemed to bounce right off its chest armour before they finally began to tear into its flesh. Worried by the initial ineffectiveness of her attack, Buffy emptied her entire clip into the creature. Rather than falling instantly, it slumped to the floor as though willingly into oblivion.

Meanwhile, Willow fired two shots in rapid succession right into the forehead of an LGF. It dropped like a stone and lay motionless on the floor. She soon realised as she watched her target and Buffy’s fall to the ground that they had been surprised by the two humans that appeared in their midst. Not wanting to waste a second of that advantage, Willow moved swiftly to the single standing LGF and pressed her trigger firmly. With a gut-wrenching click, the hammer struck an empty chamber. The second time she pressed the trigger, she met with the same result. She was out of ammunition.

“Get out of my way!” Willow yelled.

She was not about to let an empty clip come between her and Tara…or a three hundred pound monster for that matter. With the angry roar of someone who was incredibly pissed off, Willow charged at the creature.

Buffy stared in horror as Willow leapt on its back, arms encircling its neck. She watched as Willow held on with all her might, even when the creature brought its hands up to try and tear her off. Willow screamed as its taloned fingers dug into her skin. Buffy swiftly drew her knife and rushed to Willow’s aid. As the creature was trying to tear Willow off, she drew back her arm and plunged the knife up to the hilt in its chest. The LGF roared, opening its huge mouth beneath the mask of its helmet. Buffy saw rows of tiny teeth, at odds with the image of shark-like fangs she had expected. It wrenched its body sideways and the dagger snapped off at the hilt.

Buffy tossed the useless handle away and looked frantically for something else to use as weapon. She looked to one of the motionless bodies on the floor. At its waist the creature wore a scabbard of sorts with a long handle protruding from it. Willow cried out again as Buffy scrambled over to the body. Her fingers closed around the oddly shaped handle. With a powerful heave and a grinding of metal, she pulled a wickedly curved knife free of the scabbard. Well over a foot long, the weapon looked and felt deadly. Buffy wasn’t convinced.

“Why can’t they carry guns for gods sake!” Buffy snapped as she brandished it awkwardly.

“Quit your whining and stick it in this guy before he rips my arms off!” Willow yelled, still hanging on for her life.

Without wasting anymore time, Buffy thrust the knife deep into the LGF’s stomach. With a cry, she twisted the weapon brutally, causing it to roar once again. Buffy withdrew the sword and was sprayed by a hot gush of green liquid, the same that had erupted from the tentacles they had faced earlier. Buffy grimaced as she spat out some of the foul stuff.

The LGF then let go of Willow and lunged instead for Buffy. The blonde nimbly stepped away from its increasingly sluggish attempts to grab her. Finally, with Willow still on its back, it slumped to its knees. Willow stepped down from its back as it slowly dropped. With no pity whatsoever she gave it a fierce shove in the middle of its back with her boot. It crashed to the floor along with its fellows. Buffy and Willow surveyed the carnage they had created. As they did, Buffy wiped green sludge from her face.

Willow nodded in her direction, “Lookin’ good Buff.”

“Shut up Willow,” Buffy muttered, spitting once more to clear the taste from her mouth.

Willow glanced down at the bloody rents that the LGF’s talons had torn in her forearms and winced slightly. Trying to ignore her pain, Willow looked towards the doorway at the back of the room, knowing in her heart that Tara was ever so close. However, as she took a step towards the opening, yet another LGF moved to block her path. He regarded his fallen fellows just once before looking at Buffy and then Willow in turn. Lacking a weapon, Willow backed away cautiously. Buffy moved forward to stand at her side. In her hand she held the knife with a little more familiarity. The LGF continued to regard them calmly as it drew its own weapon. Both women backed off a little further.

A weak cry emitted from the next room and Willow’s ears perked up at the sound, her face reflecting her desperation. There was no mistaking who it was. She surged forward with no thought as to how she was going to get passed the creature blocking the doorway.

“Tara!”

“Will!” Buffy restrained her with a firm hand and a determined look on her face, “He’ll slice you to ribbons. I’ve got a better idea, I’ll take care of him and you get in there to Tara.”

“That’s the stupidest idea you’ve ever come up with…did you pick up a few samurai skills all of a sudden?”

“I’m not bad with a kitchen knife,” Buffy muttered grumpily.

“Should we just stand here and bicker in the hope that he gets bored and leaves us alone?” Willow cocked her head to one side as though in thought.

“How about we take him on together? I’m sure there’s another one of these pointy things lying with that guy over there.”

“Pointy thing? Seriously Buffy.”

Buffy growled angrily and before Willow could stop her she charged at the LGF as though she were a medieval knight. With a resounding ring, her blade met that of the alien. Buffy then traded several frantic blows with it before she was knocked to her knees. Willow lunged forward with the intention of helping her friend.

“Willow piss off!” Buffy waved her away as she jumped swiftly to her feet, “Go get Tara, I’ve got this guy’s number.”

“Buffy!” Willow was torn between the desire to help her friend and her lover, both of whom desperately needed her.

“Go get Tara! And then you can think about helping me…if I still need help!”

Showing absolutely no fear whatsoever, Buffy charged once more. As Willow watched for a few moments, she had to agree that Buffy was astoundingly managing to hold her own. She traded blow for blow with the creature who, despite its size and strength, seemed not to be able to gain the immediate upper hand. Each time their blades met, there was a fierce grinding of metal upon metal.

“I’m feeling good Will, now move!” Buffy nimbly stepped to avoid a body on the floor and ducked as the LGF swung his fist in obvious frustration at his inability to kill his prey.

Willow reluctantly but gratefully turned away from Buffy’s struggle with the LGF and turned her attention to the door. She moved through it and entered a different chamber. Somehow the entire room felt slimy, as though the very air itself had changed. The now familiar tubing seemed to converge at this point and each one ran straight towards a contraption at the heart of the room. At the heart of the machine…was Tara.

“Oh dear lord,” Willow felt the words leave her lips along with her heart.

Her eyes were fixed on Tara. For the life of her she could not tear them away from the sight of her girlfriend strapped into an awful contraption. Clad only in her woollen underwear, each of her limbs were spread and tightly fastened. For those awful moments in which she stared, Willow saw everything magnified tenfold. Tara’s skin was chalky white, a stark contrast to the bulging blue veins that pulsed beneath her skin. Her fists were clenched, white knuckled as Tara tried to cope with what must have been immense pain. Her hair hung in sweat soaked strands on either side of her face, her beautiful features were contorted. The mouth Willow loved to caress with her own was open wide, lips drawn back against her teeth in a rictus of pain. Tara’s beautiful blue eyes were wide open but completely sightless.

Willow took an urgent step forward with the aim of reaching Tara’s side as soon as humanly possible. With a sickening lurch, her boot did not fall on to metal. Willow heard and felt the crunch of gravel beneath her feet. Tara was gone and she was staring out into the dreamscape. Nothing but the pounding of her heart echoed in her ears.

Another beat, she was standing in front of Tara again. Confused, Willow glanced around to find herself back in the chamber she thought she had never left. She took a second step towards Tara…and another…

Crunch…her boot sank into gravel once again. The room and Tara were gone…

Willow stumbled and crashed heavily to her knees. Instead of feeling the sharp bite of gravel beneath her, she slammed heavily into the metal floor. As she looked up through tangled strands of her hair, Tara’s sightless eyes stared down at her.

“Will!” Buffy’s voice pierced her clouded mind, Willow dumbly listened to the sounds of the urgent struggle that continued in the anteroom behind her, “What the fuck is happening?”

With a flood of realisation, Willow knew exactly who was responsible for sucking both her and Buffy…and god knew how many others, into the dreaded LGF dreamscape.

“It’s Tara,” Willow whispered.

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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Tues » Sun Mar 12, 2006 2:20 am

I'll just call this a 'place holder' for now while I digest all this. But I'll start with 'holy $hit'!


ETA: Howdy Alcy! I've been reading this since my lurking days & neglected to leave feedback since coming out of the shadows. My apologies.

This is a white-knuckle ride & one truly exhilarating tale! I feel like a kid in the 1930's waiting for the next installment of an exciting sci-fi serial. So, I'm sitting here on the edge of my seat with my licorice whips & popcorn, my eyes big as saucers... what's next?!?!
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Boadecia » Sun Mar 12, 2006 4:22 am

Woah! intenseand excellent! i'll repeat my mantra "if they're together, they'llbe alright!".....hopefully:/ great work as usual look forwrd to the next thrilling installment!
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby spells42 » Sun Mar 12, 2006 4:56 am

I don't remember if I've left fb for this fic before - my apologies - but I know I've been devouring updates whenever I saw one, from the time I found it. I think this was a great update: so tense! The almost overwhelming danger comes across clearly, as does the desperate straits the human race is in.

I really want Willow to rescue Tara (and for their friends to make it out alive), but I wonder - if she does it too early will it ruin the plan to trap the LGFs in the dreamscape, or if she does it too late, will they all be trapped in the dreamscape with the LGFs?! It'd be a dilemma for Willow if she only knew of it, heh.

Can't wait for more. thank you.
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby caz » Sun Mar 12, 2006 5:46 am

Oh Shit!

That's all I'm saying until I read the next chapter.

Looking Forward to it!

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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Willowtree252 » Sun Mar 12, 2006 12:25 pm

oh my god this is great i cant wait for more
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby grimlock72 » Sun Mar 12, 2006 1:35 pm

The aliens are vulnerable then, GOOD :) Mr. 3of3 died a quiet awfull dead didn't he? He was blocking access to Tara though, which really isn't a good idea with Willow around.

Whatever big alien thing is living in the ship, it appears to be rather hungry. Killing Tad wasn't very nice, Faith saying goodbye was bittersweet. Besides, I *liked* Tad...:cry

Not entirely sure why they didn't all run forward and away from the creature-under-the-floor. Unless they can hack all its limbs off, that would work nicely too :)

Reading about Tara was making me sad once again, poor girl :cry. I'm still not sure what she is doing at the moment and if she has any control over how the aliens use her energy. Seems to be they're tapping her special abilities the crude way to get people/food into their dreamscape. I wonder what Tara can do about that in her weakened state in that chair.

Could be quite a dillema Willow gets to face, if she can't just get Tara out of the damned chair. Since there's an entire chapter to come I doubt it is that simple though :-D

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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby WillowRulez » Sun Mar 12, 2006 5:35 pm

Holy cow... what a battle.
I really hope Alex and the others will be okay, though it seems unlikely. And let's pray Tara 'knows' how to get out of that situation...
Next part soon??? :x
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby GayNow » Sun Mar 12, 2006 9:49 pm

AAAAAHHHHH!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!

Okay...seriously, I do love this story. I'm waiting for the final chapter...for the fic to be completed...and then I'm going to read it all from the beginning...again...so I can get the full effect of this wonderful world. THEN I will reply with some deep, meaningful feedback.

Great stuff, Alcy!
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby sam7777 » Mon Mar 13, 2006 10:40 am

It's amazing how you have worked in all the dream stuff at the beginning into the final conclusion. Wonderful plotting. The Aliens think that they can use Tara to win but she has her own plans and I'll bet that they haven't planned for the Willow factor. It's sad to see Willow's pilot friends killed by the LGF. This final mission should put paid to all that. Great fic!
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby watty » Tue Mar 14, 2006 4:47 am

Holy cow Alcy, another stellar chapter! Now I wish this story will never end, it's that gripping. This chapter was pretty scary. And I don't scare easy. Mechanical tentacles shooting up from a dark pit is high on my scariness factor. I'm saddened by another loss, poor Tad, what a grisly way to have his life snatched away. Poor Faith too, didn't realize the extent of their involvement.

The nightmare machine-contraption that the LGFs strapped Tara in was scary too. I could imagine all sorts of tubes and slimy bits extending from it and poking into her. grrrr. Scary alright.
Tara let the love that dwelt there fill her body. The cold fled and was replaced by the love that Tara cherished more than anything else in her life. Willow was her life. She loved the redhead for just who she was, the daredevil pilot, the leader and the wonderfully talented lover who never failed to send her over the edge.

Suddenly there was pain!

Good use of contrast, like Tara was snapped out from her place of sanctuary.

I also like the little moment of levity when they were facing off with giant aliens, almost desperate humor.
““That’s the stupidest idea you’ve ever come up with…did you pick up a few samurai skills all of a sudden?”

“I’m not bad with a kitchen knife,” Buffy muttered grumpily.

“Should we just stand here and bicker in the hope that he gets bored and leaves us alone?”

Seems in most reincarnations, Buffy is good pointy things. :lol

Interesting cliffhanger. :hmm Could even the whole LGF mothership business be one of Tara's dream? Or does Willow have to go into Tara's dream world to kill off the alien threat? What do you have in store for us next? Can't wait.
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby sacinema » Tue Mar 14, 2006 2:51 pm

Just wanted to stop by and say thanks for this wonderful story. Started reading it yesterday and I'm only up to chapter 18 for now. So I have no time to leave proper feedback until I catch up to the present update. Your story is to thrilling. Have to look how Tara and Willow get back together after Tara had to land with her broken-down Guardian.

Man they both had to go through so much. They kinda walk in the same shoes with feeling responsible for the death of father and brother on Tara's and for Dawn's on Willow's side.

Thanks for now. Have to leave and to read on. But I come back soon and leave a proper feedback.
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Artemis » Wed Mar 15, 2006 4:05 am

Okay, best thing about this? I don't know what's coming next. I mean, I know all the plans, Tara and her mother's hope to destroy the LGFs, Willow obviously just wanting Tara safe and out of there... but what's next? No idea - I'm just stuck here on the edge of my seat, waiting to find out. It happens quite often that I can see the end of the movie, for instance, ahead of time, just from seeing how things are being set up - it's nice that this is too subtle to be picked apart like that. Good work! :bow

You're certainly not flinching from showing the nasty side of busting into an alien warship - poor Tad. Poor Faith, and the rest of the team. Poor Buffy too, up against a big nasty alien swordsman - I'm starting to wonder if anyone's going to get out of this in one piece. Besides Willow and Tara of course, they'll be okay. Right? :paranoid

Looking at it dispassionately, the rescue mission might not have been the brightest idea - they've already lost most of their number, just to save Tara, a single pilot. But it's very human - one of them needed saving, so in they go, without waiting to count the cost. And if they're still looking shaky on their chances of actually getting Tara out, they've at least gotten Willow to Tara, which might just be what she needs.

(If Buffy's going to complain about LGFs not carrying easily-stealable guns, though, she might consider conserving her own by going for head shots, next time aliens invade the planet.)

So... here I am, tense, nervous, scared, and wondering what comes next. Bring it on! :party
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby beanie » Wed Mar 15, 2006 2:54 pm

GODDAMNIT WOMAN . . .

. . . and that is the first comment I've ever left for your story

I nearly soiled myself reading about the tentacle-y LGF. And Tad! Poor Tad and Faith! You really aren't afraid of killing off characters are you? You just go write to the meat-y center GRR. I don't know if I like that about you or . . . who are we kidding? Of course I do. If I ever end up with heart palpitations (sp?), I think we all know how. (Psst, from reading your story). Okay, now we do.

When Buffy fought the alien swordsman thing to let Willow go ahead, I really felt that Buffy was willing to let Willow back in. I mean, of course beforehand, the whole deciding to go along with Willow to help her get Tara shows that too, but for some reason it just really struck me during that passage. And I think that's what so goddamn wonderful about this story: you bring out all of the base emotions that we having during and after times of fighting. I mean, Willow and Tara first . . . consummate their relationship (read: engage in wild crazy gay sex) right after Willow sees that dude die. It's all very intense and then you double it by having a loved one die, or a loved one risk his/her life for someone else. But the best part is that you always balance the intensity of a situation with a character's sarcasm. Noting the same quote that watson mentioned, the samurai thing was a nice and short reprieve from all the DIE DIE DIE.

And man oh man, Tara. Man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man . . . oh.

It's all so intense, I don't know if I can wait for the next chapter. I mean of course I can, I mean duh, but I might just be bald from pulling out all my hair by then. Please support my hair and update soon. With only an update every other day, you can save many a follicle.
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby JustSkipIt » Thu Mar 16, 2006 6:10 pm

This story seriously fries my brain. I mean I feel really stupid at times. I've gone back and read and then re-read and I think I'm getting it but then I'm not sure. I mean first Willow et al. were just in the normal world but then (when the floor fisured) they went into the dreamscape right? So that means that Tad is really dead in this world right? And the rest of them can die in both worlds? And Willow and Buffy are going back and forth between the two worlds? Just making sure and maybe I totally missed it all. Not sure.

Great job and I hope you finish it up soon.
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Useful_Oxymoron » Sun Mar 19, 2006 6:32 pm

Wow, this story is so good... It's like an almalgamation of historically mixed sci-fi a-la Harry Turtledove with horrific elements a-la Clive Barker added in. Rousing action, terrifying settings (that tentacle thing... errgghhh...), combined with the true loss of a character.

They entered in her legs, her arms, chest and even, as Tara accidentally tugged one of them, in her face. Each one carried the same green essence that pumped throughout the entire vessel into her veins. Tara stared in horror at the tubes in her arm, she could see a green colour spreading through each of her veins where there ought to have been the faint blue of her own blood. She could feel it as it entered her body and it was the most awful feeling Tara could imagine. It was as though there was another entity inside of her, invading her body. Her vision clouded over and she realised she was seeing everything through a green filter. Her heart thudded fiercely once more as her previous state of calm fled. Tara lost the picture of Willow in her mind. All she had left was her name.


May I vote this as one of the horrific part of this story? Poor Tara.

And poor Faith. I hope she makes it. Please? :pray And their other friends too.

Okay, Wills, now go get Tara and kick some alien ass! :D
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Alcy » Thu Mar 23, 2006 1:53 am

TuesBlu: I'm a self-confessed lurker so it's nothing to be ashamed of, although thank you very much for taking the time to say you're enjoying! This story has been carefully crafted to cause a sense of thrill and adrenalin in readers so I'm glad I've suceeded a little! I hope you enjoy the final installment!
Boadecia: Thanks very much! Your mantra is an excellent one which hopefully will prove correct!
spells42: Hopefully the updates have been tasty! Thanks, along with the adrenalin and all that of course comes danger. Basically its the worst situation ever that I've thrown our girls into and they have to come out alive!
Those are some really good questions which I hope will be answered soon. Willow of course has no idea what Tara's agenda is, so it's going to be interesting.
caz: Haha! Well said.
Dianneswillowtree: You shouldnt have to wait for too long, Im making great progress on the next chapter.
Grimmy: Yes, these awful suckers can be killed by our plucky little band of heroes. I really liked Tad too...which is precisely why I killed him. I wanted to create a huge sense of dread over their final mission, it wasn't realistic for them all the come out alive. Tad wasn't a 'redshirt' he was a character we knew and liked.
I don't think they would have all got through if they all tried to run passed the creature. The others had to cover Willow and Buffy and they barely made it.
Tara is going through one hell of a struggle at the moment that is only going to get worse. It’s going to be a real test of her strength to see what she can do.
Yep, there’s an entire Chapter of excitement to come!
WillowRulez: I know what you mean, it’s hard when there’s a whole group of people you’ve come to know a little bit. We’ll have to wait until the next chapter to see how they all fare. Yes, next part soon!
GayNow: I think I might have to read it from the beginning as well! It just seems like such a huge journey, it amazes me that all still all makes sense…at least I hope it makes sense! You’ll have to tell me if it does when you read it all again!
sam7777: Thanks very much! There’s no way that the LGFs can plan for the Willow-factor, she and Tara’s inner strength are the unknown factor in their evil scheme to destroy the world…and we all know how strong both of those are!
watty: Woohoo! I have been on a wild ride with this story and I almost wish that I could keep going, keep writing more aerial adventures with cool planes but I have to admit at the same time I’m keen to move onto something else.
And yes, a grisly death but this is a sci-fi flic and people do die by nasty means. I did keep the Faith/Tad relationship pretty quiet, read between the lines stuff but I’m sorta glad the extent of it could come out at the end.
There is a danger of becoming too grim and serious with events heating up like they are, I’m keeping it firmly entrenched in its Buffy-roots with the levity. I need that for my own sanity. And I had to have a pointy things reference!
Ah-uh, Im not giving anything away!
sacinema: You’re very welcome. Good luck catching up to the last update! I know its hard work reading a story all at once, but fun too since you don’t have to wait for the next chapter.
Artemis: I’ve finally managed to leave the field wide open as to what is going to happen next, excellent! Yeah, there are plans there…but when it all comes down to it, we don’t know what’s going to happen and who’s coming out of it at the end. I’m no good at picking endings, so this is perfect for me!
Nope, I’m all with the nastiness here, green goop and all! I’m not giving any guarantees as to who’s going to come out…well, we do kinda know that Willow and Tara are going to be alright. Although how much are they going to have to sacrifice?
The rescue mission wasn’t a great idea manpower wise, but they stand just as much chance inside the ship as they would against the assault going on outside. And don’t forget, Willow didn’t invite any of them along with her. And I agree with you there, Willow is exactly what Tara needs…
And yes, Buffy needs some serious target practice, I’ll put it down to the fact that she was scared shitless.
I’m bringing it!
beanie: Great way to start off the feedback! Sorry to hear about the soiling…well, actually I’m not - that means my evil plans are working! And although I don’t really like killing off my characters, it is necessary. I mean, this is a fic about a war that’s tearing the world apart, so people are going to die.
You’re absolutely right, there’s something instinctive in human nature when it comes to war and fighting. It was interesting to explore the W/T relationship in this setting and see what kind of effect it would have. The answer would be that their love is made all the more intensely fierce and passionate by the fact that they are both in danger. There is a sense of urgency to their love.
I really hope we don’t have a bald beanie by the time I get around to updating this story!
JustSkipIt: I really ought to feel guilty for the brain fryage! Nope, Willow and the rest of the gang were still in the real world when the floor ripped apart, it was a defence mechanism built into the ship. And yet the nightmarish nature of it illustrates the fact that the real world is almost becoming the dreamscape, simply because it has become so hellish. Tad is sadly dead in every world.
Okay, then we come to the part where it starts to get tricky, only when Willow has found Tara and Buffy is fighting the remaining LGF do they start switching between the dreamscape and the real world. The alien machine, with Tara at the heart of it, is trying to do its job - draw people into the dreamscape. However, Tara is fighting against it, although this will become more clear in the next chapter, hence the fact they keep coming back to reality.
Thanks very much, I hope I finish it too!
UO: That’s definitely the inspiration behind the fic! I love action, I love things that move fast and don’t pull any punches.
Everyone is going through their own private hell at the moment. The group of pilots battling an huge creature and for Faith, having to do it knowing her lover is dead. For Buffy, alone as she faces an alien beast. And Willow and Tara, so close together and yet miles away from one another - both seemingly helpless to help the other.
Man, I love it!

Okay, I don’t want to rush the next chapter so I’ve been working on it steadily, alternating it with my newest fic which will be posted when Captain Red is finished.
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby JustSkipIt » Thu Mar 23, 2006 6:15 pm

Okay, I don’t want to rush the next chapter so I’ve been working on it steadily, alternating it with my newest fic which will be posted when Captain Red is finished.
Just so you know, I would be ok with your posting the new fic before you finish this...
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby SithLordWiccan » Thu Mar 23, 2006 6:16 pm

Just wanted to leave a message and say that, although I haven't left feedback, I have been reading and enjoying. I'm saving my major feedback for when you're finished. :)
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Alcy » Sun Mar 26, 2006 1:24 pm

JustSkipIt: I'd be okay posting my new fic now too but the last time I had three fics going I didn't update one of them for six months! It won't be far away though!

SithLordWiccan: Thanks very much for enjoying, can't wait to hear what you think!


Well folks, if I work hard I might be able to have the last chapter up today! Stay tuned...
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Alcy » Sun Mar 26, 2006 10:15 pm

Title: “Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars”
Author: Alcy
Rating: R for war-related violence, occasional bad language and naughty stuff.
Disclaimers: I don’t own the rights to BtVS…nuff said. No spoilers for any season.
Summary: Surprise, more AU! Set in an alternate reality version of 1936, the clouds of war that are looming are not those of WW 2 but something a little different…alien invasion!
Willow Rosenberg is a hot-shot pilot for Air Command, Captain of the Red Devil squadron and a law unto herself. Her world is about to be disrupted completely. Firstly by the invading Martians and secondly by something far more intimidating, a strange blonde, blue-eyed bombshell by the name of Tara Maclay.
Buffy, Xander (as Alex), Spike (as William), Faith and Giles also feature.
Feedback: I love it! Yes please.
Notes: This is it, the last chapter! I suppose I had better thank a few people, thanks to Sarah for not nagging me too much for spending time writing instead of more important things! Thanks to Chris for continuing to post the fic and making such cool graphics over at
http://alia.customer.netspace.net.au/glass.htm

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Chapter Twenty-Two - Endgame Part II


“It’s Tara…”

As soon as the whisper left Willow’s lips she knew she had to find a way to break Tara out of the trance in which she was trapped. While at first she had been unable to draw her eyes away from Tara’s expression, Willow recoiled in horror when she noticed the tubes piercing Tara’s skin. Her fists clenched with a yearning to grab them and tear them quickly but tenderly from her lover’s body. Yet at the same time a part of her was trying to instil a sense of caution. She had absolutely no idea what the liquid running through those tubes was doing to Tara, and more importantly whether their removal would cause her pain or lead to her death.

“Hold on Buff!” Willow called over her shoulder, where she hoped Buffy was still alive, “I’m going to fix this!” And just how are you going to do that Rosenberg? Think!

Her face set in a grim mask of determination, Willow dragged herself to her feet with the intention of reaching Tara no matter how difficult that was. She reasoned that once she reached Tara and somehow removed her from that machine, everything would stop. Tara was right in front of her…all she had to do was reach out and touch her…

Willow stumbled, suddenly feeling incredibly dizzy.

There was a blinding flash. Willow’s boots crunched on the gravel.

A blast of icy cold wind and the deathly silence of the dreamscape hit Willow at the same time. Someone stood just in front of her…but it wasn’t Tara. Purple eyes bored into her own, fearless and merciless. Willow just stood shock still in the presence of the muscular alien where her lover ought to have been. The LGF regarded her as though her appearance had been entirely expected.

Before Willow could even think that it was all a bad dream and it would be over in a matter of seconds, the LGF’s huge hand surged forward and its fingers wrapped themselves around her neck. Willow felt the steely fingers tighten around her flesh, slowly cutting off her air passages. As though she weighed nothing, it lifted Willow right of her feet. Her legs were left thrashing helplessly at the air. She struggled for breath, powerless in its grasp.

In one lightening movement, the LGF moved its free arm. Willow suddenly felt a sharp, piercing pain through her left shoulder and her eyes watered fiercely. She wanted to scream but couldn’t. Within her limited field of vision, Willow glanced down to see a skewer-like instrument in its hand. The other end was embedded in her shoulder. She was stuck like a pig on a roasting spit.

When the LGF withdrew the skewer from her shoulder in one brutal tug, the scream finally came. The cry tore from Willow’s lungs but sounded little more than a strangled gasp due to the vice-like grip on her neck. It nevertheless pierced the air with palpable pain as she struggled desperately, kicking her legs but still finding nothing but air.

As though in response to her futile attempts to escape, the LGF drew its arm back slightly and with a mighty heave sent Willow flying like a rag doll. At some stage during her flight through the air, reality shifted yet again. Rather than continue flying until gravity brought her to earth, Willow’s limp body collided with a cold, metal wall. Already unconscious, Willow’s body then dropped like a stone to the floor and she lay crumpled in a small heap in front of Tara.

The first thing Willow felt when she regained consciousness was the damp of her own blood soaking her jacket sleeve. Then she felt the wound where the skewer had pierced her shoulder. Face contorted in silent pain, all Willow wanted to do was curl into a little ball and hide. However, somehow she knew she had to restore a semblance of sanity and bodily function. She tested one limb at a time and was a little surprised to find that everything still worked except her left arm which hung limp and useless at her side. It was useless but still managed to cause her a tremendous amount of pain. She had nothing to stem the flow of blood except a few field dressings in the front pouch on her webbing. Awkwardly she fumbled for them and pressed them against the wound. As soon as the dressings made contact with the wound it radiated even more pain. Barely conscious, Willow managed to jab herself with a tiny syringe of painkiller. She then lay gasping against the wall as she tried to force herself to get moving despite her injury, sweat beading her face.

Her pain-fogged mind cleared enough for her to focus on Tara once more. In fact, the sight of her lover still bound to that awful machine instilled an inhuman will within her. She dragged herself to her feet and stood swaying for a few seconds before taking a lurching step forward. Willow felt like a drunkard as she staggered towards Tara, all her effort focused on reaching her as fast as possible. She had no idea how much time she had before being dragged back into the dreamscape again. Willow knew she had no chance of surviving another bout with her LGF assailant.

She thanked her lucky stars with each step she took that did not wind her up in the dreamscape. After what felt like an eternity had passed, she found herself face to face with her lover’s sightless eyes. Willow almost broke down at the sight of what Tara had become. Veins of vivid green pierced her beautiful porcelain skin as the alien substance moved beneath her skin.

Instinctively, Willow raised her cupped hand towards Tara but stopped just short of actually coming into contact with her skin, fearful of the consequences. She was made acutely aware of the fact that while she was so close, she could see no way in which to help her. Tears began to flow as a result of her inability to do anything.

“Tara…baby, I don’t know if you can hear me,” Willow tried to keep the tears from choking her voice, now was not the time to give into her pain, “Wherever you are, I need you to come back to me…please, come back.”

A split second later, Tara’s eyes rolled back into focus.

******

Through the haze within her mind, the mixed images she was getting, Tara heard Willow’s voice. She struggled to concentrate on that sound she knew so well…using it as a point from which to focus all her scattered thoughts. If she could just hold onto that voice, she knew she could make some sense of the chaos in her mind.

In her mind, Tara reached out and tried to take hold of Willow’s words. She found them and latched on, refusing to let go even as everything accelerated at a dramatic speed. Tara found herself carried on a torrent, moving faster and faster towards something both real and intangible. Just as she was about to be forced to let go, Tara came to an abrupt halt. She jerked forward once. When she lifted her head she found herself face to face with Willow. It was a very dirty, bloody and wounded Willow.

Willow’s face was wet with tears and her mouth worked soundlessly for a few moments before the words poured forth.

“My god Tara! You’re here, is it really you?” her words came out in a single stream, so urgent was her need to speak, “Stay here, don’t let it draw you back in again…please, I have to get you out of here, out of this chair and out of this ship!”

No! I can’t, I haven’t finished yet!

Tara knew she couldn’t give up as everything depended on her. However, she not only had to find a way back into the dreamscape, but also a way in which to control it rather than vice versa which would result in the destruction of the human race. She looked sadly at Willow and knew that she had given herself a chance to say goodbye. Tara tried to speak but she could not even move her mouth let alone make a sound. The cruelty of fate would have it that she could see Willow one last time, but not say a word to her.

However, the bond between them was so intense that the mere expression on her face spoke to Willow. Tara saw the redhead’s face grow intensely worried and her torrent of words became even more urgent.

“Tara? Why are you looking at me like that? Stay with me for gods sake!”

Only now did Willow reach out and physically touch Tara. With both hands, she grabbed her cheeks, fitting her fingers carefully around the tubes emerging from Tara’s skin.

Tara felt a powerful surge of emotion with the contact. She drew on Willow’s love for her and her incredible strength which still remained despite the fact she was horribly wounded. It was exactly what she needed and she drew as much as she dared, more even.

Willow felt it and in that instant she knew that Tara would let herself be drawn back into the dreamscape. She knew it…and was not going to let it happen.

“Fucking hell Tara, I want you to stay with me!” Willow was almost screaming, her grip on Tara’s cheeks growing steadily stronger as though that in itself would keep Tara with her, “I don’t care about whatever it is you are doing, you’re not going back to that place…Tara, I love you…”

Willow was gradually fading as she was drawn back in…

Love you too Will…

Even as Tara was consumed by the dreamscape, she managed to remain aware of herself. Unlike her previous chaotic experience where she had struggled to grasp anything substantial, she retained a hold on herself.

She found herself walking, or at least a movement which passed for walking in the strange dreamlike state in which she existed. It was not the dreamscape she was so familiar with; she couldn’t describe it except to think that it was like being behind the scenes. There was nothing below her feet, above her head, or to either side. She couldn’t describe exactly what was out there except to say that there was nothing. The only focal point she could see was an intense bright, blue light directly in front of her. Tara squared her shoulders and definitely walked towards it.

As she moved towards it, she gradually made out of the source of the light and discovered that there was not one, but two sources. A perfectly spherical ball of blue light hovered in the nothingness, to its right was an identical sphere save for its red hue. Tara thought that they were that perfect size to contain a single human. A thought that was confirmed when a body moved within the blue sphere. Tara ran over to it to find herself staring at her mother, trapped within the field of blue light.

“Mom!” she had to fight to restrain herself from reaching in there to pull her out.

Diana raised an exhausted head to meet her daughter’s gaze, “Tara…I can’t hold it for much longer. With your help, they’ve started the process and already people everywhere are being drawn into the dreamscape…”

“Willow…” Tara breathed.

“…I’m powerless to do anything without you. You have to help me turn the tide against them!”

Tara was frantic, “How? Just tell me how and I’ll do it!”

Diana weakly pointed towards the red sphere opposite her, “You must enter the red…join with me and together we can draw the Juthungi and trap them in their own creation.”

Tara looked over her shoulder towards the red sphere and felt a sense of dread just looking at it. She turned back to her mother, hesitation beginning to creep in when faced with what she did not understand.

“Why…I don’t understand…”

“Trust me Tara! The red sphere,” Diana looked as though she were faltering, she sunk to one knee within the sphere, clearly exhausted.

Tara finally turned away from her mother and faced the red sphere. She moved towards it, although even as she did, she couldn’t help but feel a sense of foreboding. Something was terribly wrong.

She put her hand out towards the red sphere, her skin almost coming into contact with the light that made up its surface. As she did so, there was an immense surge from the surface of the sphere as it acted like a black hole, seeking to draw Tara within its depths. Tara faltered and took a single step back. Her mind was working overtime.

Surely the sphere would be working to keep me out if this is the way to destroy them…I should have to fight to get in…everything else so far has been a fight…

“Come on honey, you can do it…just step into the sphere and I’ll take over from there. Everything will finish…the world will be saved and you will be with Willow once more!” Diana cried out from within the blue sphere behind her.

Willow! All I have to do is step in here and Willow and I will never be parted again…so easy…

Tara took a step forward to counter the backwards step she had made a few moments earlier. Once again the sphere pulsated and surged, seeking to haul her into it. Tara gave herself up to its magnetic attraction and at once everything came surging forward. As her skin met the red sphere’s surface she felt tiny pinpricks cover its surface. However, it was more than that. All of a sudden, she felt as though her entire life draw through those tiny holes. First, just her hands and forearms where they entered the sphere but slowly creeping forward.

No! Tara wrenched herself out of the sphere in an instant.

She stood gasping just beyond its reach and realised exactly what had happened. Everything was again moving fast. Behind her, Diana’s voice was growing increasingly shrill as she demanded her daughter step within the red sphere.

“Trust your mother dear one, I’m the only one that loves you!”

You are not! Tara raged inwardly, at that moment knowing that everything surrounding her was one gigantic lie.

Her fists clenched at her sides, nails biting into the flesh of her palms as she realised that whether the being in the blue sphere was her mother or not, she had fooled her. Stepping into the red sphere would have cemented the process and humanity would have stood no further chance. It was exactly where the Juthungi wanted Tara.

She seethed with anger at not only the betrayal, but the fact that there now appeared to be no hope of saving her friends, and Willow.

With her features appearing like ice and fire combined, Tara raised her head to look the Diana-thing straight in the eye. Given the rather startled expression she received from it in return, Tara knew it was not the response it wanted.

“Tara my love…” it whispered helplessly.

“You’re not my mother!” Tara screamed as rage overtook her.

Tara was swept away by the ferocity of rage coursing through her body. Unable to contain the emotion or give any rational thought to what she was doing, Tara charged at the sphere that held the Diana-thing. With a primeval roar she launched herself into it, passing through its surface. She landed inside and to her surprise she was alone. The Diana-thing had disappeared. Inside the sphere, she lost all concept of reality. There was no sense of time, distance or even self. Tara was aware that she was inside the sphere somehow.

Instead of the tiny pinpricks erupting over the surface of her body as had happened in the red sphere, Tara felt an immensely powerful essence course through the very core of her being.
As she felt them, she became aware of who they were as a race. The predator-like was in which they stalked the inhabitants of an entire world and devoured them inside their dreamscape. Once they had finished with one race, they moved onto the next, always hungry for more. The more she learnt of them, the more she hated them.

Just as Tara was aware of them, they too were aware of her. Thousands of voices cried out in rage when they realised their plan had not fallen into place.

She realised that part of the Diana-thing’s plan had been ground in truth…the powerful force she felt was their essence. The blue sphere was the portal through which their consciousnesses could move from one plane to the other. Tara probed deeper and her mind reeled with the overload of information.

Destroy it, the words entered Tara’s mind as she struggled to make sense of everything, Destroy it?

Everything began to fall into place. The Juthungi naturally existed in a dream state, it was the blue sphere which allowed them to remain in her reality. They had created the red sphere to do the opposite for humanity…and she was to have been at the heart of that process.

Fall into your own trap you little green fuckers! Tara thought angrily.

Stretching each of her limbs outwards until they touched the sphere at different points, Tara begun pushing with all her might. It had nothing to do with strength, and everything to do with the battle for control which raged in her mind. On one had, she had the entire stream of Juthungi consciousness straining against her, and on the other she had her memories of Willow keeping her focused and in sight of what she had to do.

Tara strained against the sphere, every muscle on her body standing out grotesquely as she struggled to destroy it and seal off their portal to her world. Small cracks began to appear in its surface, starting from the points where her limbs touched it and radiating outwards. Tara screamed in rage, concentrating everything she had to will the sphere to break. The Juthungi cried out in horror.

*****

For Cherry it seemed as though the battle had been raging for an eternity. The noise of the explosions had filled his ears for so long he did not think he would ever hear anything else. Even the usually stoic Mrs Chippy was trembling inside his coat.

There was another sound, far quieter than the explosions and other noises of battle and yet also far closer. Cherry looked up and his eyes widened in fright when he saw a pair of massive, heavily muscled legs come to stop just in front of his hole. The legs suddenly went into a squat and Cherry met the eyes of the enemy for the first time. The alien reached beneath the beam, his fingers stretching out towards the boy. Cherry screamed and lashed out with his feet. However he could do little in the face of the terrifying creature attempting to drag him out from his small sanctuary. The alien latched onto his ankle and Cherry found himself being roughly dragged from his hiding place. As he slid out towards the open, Mrs Chippy wriggled her way out from his coat and once clear, darted away. Cherry watched her bushy tail disappear and was relieved that she would be safe for a little while longer. However, he had to think of himself now. As he was dragged out fully and hung upside down by the ankle, Cherry continued to struggle. Trying in vain to get the alien to drop him so he could scarper away. The iron like grip merely tightened.

Cherry looked up at the face that was looking down upon him. He watched the alien ready the long knife he carried. Although he was terrified, he had had enough of screaming and resolved that not a single sound would escape his lips. He wondered if it hurt to die.

Suddenly he did hurt, but it was not the sharp thrust of the knife that he had expected. Instead, he had been dropped and landed hard on his shoulder. Cherry grunted in pain but scrambled to his feet as quickly as he could. He found himself standing eye to eye with the alien who had dropped to his knees. Cherry stared in surprise as the once strong creature slumped forward and fell to the earth. It lay there completely motionless as though dead.

Tentatively, Cherry tapped it with the toe of his shoe. He darted back a few paces, fully expecting it to lash out and strike him down. Nothing. Cherry unleashed the hardest kick he could muster. He yelped and the only result was a very sore foot. It was definitely dead.

Suddenly there was a piercing whine overhead and Cherry looked up to see an alien craft falling in a graceful arc. Without a turn or any attempt to pull up, it ploughed straight into the earth. Sending up both clouds of dust and fire. It was followed almost immediately by a second and then another. The alien aircraft were falling from the sky as fast as they had once flown through it. Cherry starred transfixed until he realised that he was in danger. With a last glance up at the sky, he scrambled back into his hiding place.

******

The Juthungi knew at once what was happening, he felt it coursing throughout his body, felt the other members of his race departing this plane for the other. It was a struggle for him to remain in this reality. The tiny golden-haired being that fought him was strong; there was no doubt about that. He grew angry at his inability to defeat it, and knew that time was running extremely short. He had to dispatch this nuisance and then kill the sensitive in the next room before she wiped out his entire race. With the strength of one who had just one last hope, he pressed his attack forward. The tiny figure fought with courage but was steadily being beaten back. Finally he managed to get inside her guard and felt the satisfying touch of his blade against its soft flesh. Its eyes widened in surprise for a moment before they closed and it sank to the ground. He did not pause to celebrate his kill; he had to kill the sensitive before it was too late.

******

A heavy boot sounded behind her and Willow spun around to see a single LGF standing in the doorway from the antechamber. With a heart wrenching tug, Willow realised it had defeated Buffy and was now coming for her and Tara.

As it moved towards her, she watched its eyes continually losing focus. It also stumbled as though intoxicated. Willow realised that what had happened to her, was now happening to the LGF. It was being drawn in and out of the dreamscape. However, it continued to struggle towards her, brandishing the knife in its hand. Willow stumbled back against Tara’s body behind her. She was exhausted, drained and had lost a lot of blood, she had no hope of defending herself. The only way she could stand was by holding onto the chair which held Tara.

She watched transfixed as the LGF advanced on her and her delirium took over, “You’re not going to stop her…she’s taking care of every last one of you single-handedly and there’s nothing you can do about it!”

If the LGF understood her, it made no sound. What it did was raised it’s weapon in Tara’s direction. Willow watched the knifepoint at her lover and knew that the creature aimed to see her dead, even if it was the last thing it did. Willow lost consciousness for a few moments and woke again to find her grip slipping.

“I wouldn’t come any closer if I were you,” she whispered, struggling not to keel over, “I know kung-fu. I can kill you with my bare hands.”

Willow knew she couldn’t kill a fly at that point in time, let alone a hulking LGF warrior but a little bluffing never hurt anyone. She stood stock still as it came to stand directly in front of her. It was so close that she could feel its hot breath falling on her face. Rather than waste it’s precious time taunting her, it raised its knife above its head and made to finish Tara off with one stroke.

“No!” it was all unfolding in slow motion like a nightmare.

Willow grabbed for its arm but was brushed aside as though she were made of paper. She screamed as she landed on her wounded shoulder. Through her haze, she watched the LGF raise its knife again. With horror Willow realised that she was powerless to do anything but watch it kill Tara. Futilely, she stretched out her hand towards the alien, willing herself to find some last bit of strength.

The creature’s chest suddenly erupted in an ugly spatter of green blood and fragments of something that looked like bone. The knife that had threatened Tara clattered to the ground as it too slumped and fell. Half in shock Willow looked towards the door and saw Faith standing there with a stony expression. The brunette had retrieved her Bren gun and it now sat smoking on her hip.

“Thanks Faith,” Willow whispered.

“You look like shit, Captain,” Faith remarked as she threw the empty Bren aside and crossed the short distance to Willow’s side.

“Nice to see you too,” Willow struggled up into a sitting position and her immediate concern was for Tara.

There was no change in the blonde’s condition, her eyes were still rolled back and her mouth hung open in a silent scream.

A deafening echo reverberated throughout the structure. It came from above them and yet it sounded as though it were everywhere. A second followed the first and this time it shook the deck on which they stood. Faith and Willow looked at each other and both knew what was happening.

“Just fuckin’ brilliant! This thing has a self-destruct,” Faith said angrily, hands tightening into white balls of fury, “There is no way in hell I’m going to die in a BBQ! We’re getting out of here!”

“We are leaving,” Willow whispered, “But not without Tara.”

Willow grabbed onto the chair and with a grunt, drew herself up. Faith quickly grabbed her and helped her up, supporting her beneath both arms. Finding herself face to face with Tara, Willow reached out and placed both her hands on Tara’s face. She felt the smooth skin, traced the green lines pulsing below it. Through her touch, she willed Tara to wake up.

The explosions sounded and felt as though they were growing closer. Faith looked around anxiously.

“Will, you’ve gotta bring back Tara now, or else there will be nothing left to bring her back to!”

Willow only had eyes and ears for Tara. She traced the beautiful skin, now cruelly punctured by the tiny tubes. All she wanted to do was grab a hold of them and pull them out, free Tara from the machine which had her trapped.

******

With the sound of breaking glass, the sphere shattered into thousands of pieces and flew outwards in all directions. Tara hung motionless for a few seconds before she dropped like a stone and fell into the nothing that surrounded her. She fell, completely lost…until she heard a familiar voice calling out to her once again. Tara smiled, Willow was there, and she had never left her side. After that, it was easy to find her way back.

******

“Baby…please…” Willow urged in desperation.

“Will!” Faith growled.

“It’s up to her!” Willow snapped over her shoulder, instantly feeling guilty for doing so.

When she turned around she met Tara’s eyes…seeing very clearly sapphire blue rather than the whites. Tara was staring at her wide-eyed, her mouth working imperceptibly. Willow unashamedly blubbered like a baby at the sight of her lover free from the spell which had trapped her for much too long.

There was a hiss of escaping gas from the chair which held Tara, almost like the sigh of one defeated. In rapid succession, the tubes embedded in Tara’s skin were expelled. Each leaving behind an ugly wound the size of a small coin. Even before the last of the tubes had removed themselves, Willow was struggling with the straps that held her arms and legs. Faith quickly moved to help and together they freed Tara in a matter of seconds. The blonde stumbled forward out of the chair with Faith doing her best to support her as she slumped to the floor.

On her hands and knees, Tara began to retch violently, her entire body wracked with spasm after spasm as it tried to expel the foul ooze within her body. Eventually it came, all Willow could do was cradle her as she vomited up copious amounts of the green substance which had been pumped through her body. Despite the fact that it had been pumped into her veins, her body now seemed to be rejecting it in every possible way.

Faith stood over the pair of them, knowing all too well that their time to escape the ship was rapidly running out. They had to leave as soon as possible despite the fact that Tara could not even stand. Willow looked up over her shoulder from where she knelt beside Tara and her face said that she knew exactly what Faith was thinking.

“Is Buffy dead?” Willow asked Faith as she stroked Tara’s back, the blonde heaved again.

Faith shook her head gratefully, “No, I checked her briefly before I got that bastard you’re your six…she’s unconscious but breathing.”

“Get her and start making your way out as best you can, we’ll follow you,” Willow ordered.

“With all due respect, I’ll wait…” Faith began.

“I outrank you so get your arse moving,” Willow interrupted, in no mood for heroics, “we’ll be right behind you.”

Faith growled low in her throat as she looked at the pair of them, Willow with her wounded shoulder and Tara still curled up into a tight ball, heaving uncontrollably. She then glanced back over her shoulder to the anteroom where Buffy lay, also badly wounded. What a fine group they made.

“See you outside,” Faith muttered before making a reluctant exit.

Willow watched through the doorway as the brunette scooped a limp Buffy up into her arms. With a last look over her shoulder, Faith was off running.

At her feet, Tara had collapsed forward, the last of her strength completely sapped by the fight to rid her body of the alien substance. She lay panting in her own vomit. Willow struggled to pick her up but with one arm she could do little more than roll her over and cradle her head.

‘Tara, baby, we have to get out of here,’ she whispered, gently stroking her matted hair out of her eyes.

“Just leave me here, Will,” Tara whispered weakly, eyes half lidded.

Willow knew they had absolutely no time to be gentle. She grabbed Tara by the shoulder and shook her roughly.

“On your feet soldier!” Willow screamed in Tara’s ear.

Tara’s widened although they were still hazy, she moved her arm ineffectually as though she were trying with all her strength but there was none to be had. Willow wrapped her good arm around Tara’s back and succeeded in heaving her up into a sitting position. From there, Tara reached out and grabbed a hold of the chair which had held her so cruelly. With trembling fingers, she used it as leverage to pull herself up. Willow supported her until she was standing and then shifted her arm to Tara’s waist. Her knees felt as though they were about to give out beneath her.

“Can you walk?” Willow asked quietly, finding a small moment to kiss Tara’s jaw line tenderly.

“No,” Tara whispered, holding onto Willow as fiercely as she was able, “But I can run.”

Willow grinned, “That’s my girl.”

******

With each step Faith ran she felt as though her heart was going to burst out through her ears. Buffy weighed relatively little, but the effort of carrying her and running as fast as possible was taking its toll on her exhausted body. As she neared the corridor where the huge, tentacled monster had claimed the lives of the rest of their group…and Tad, she didn’t even pause to reflect so urgent was her haste to escape the self-destructing ship.

She remembered how it had killed Tad, Alex and Barrel before its tentacles had slumped lifeless into the darkness, a victim of whatever magic Tara had wrought within the heart of the alien ship. Faith had barely paused to grieve before going to look for her remaining friends.

Faith ran full tilt across the chasm, refusing to accept that the platforms could give way and send her and Buffy plummeting. She reached the other side safely and passed Alex’s lifeless, headless body. A tentacle had wrapped itself around the young man’s neck and ripped it off in one brutal movement. Faith’s eyes stung with unshed tears but she couldn’t stop.

There was light up ahead, Faith stumbled towards it just as the ceiling behind her came crashing down amongst flames and tortured metal. The destruction was right at her heels. Heedless of what lay just outside, Faith dived for the tear in the ship’s hull and rolled mid-air so she would act as a cushion for Buffy. As she did, a plume of flame reached out for her, stretching its deadly fingers in one last attempt to claim her life.

Faith hit the earth hard and all the wind was knocked out of her. She struggled to her feet, not wanting to rest until she was at a safe distance from the exploding ship. Together with Buffy, she stumbled, crawled and dragged herself another fifty meters before collapsing in the shelter of a garden wall, surrounded by a few hedges still gamely clinging to life.

Faith gently lay Buffy down, and stood, seeing instantly that there was no chance of Willow and Tara escaping the way she had just come. She watched in horror as the entire bulkhead of the ship began to collapse and completely destroy the exit. The entire structure was ablaze, sounds of fire and tortured metal filled the air. Every few moments a huge section would breakaway from the exterior and fall crashing to the earth, or collapse inwards upon itself. The ship was in ruins.

Faith slumped forward to her knees; unable to take her eyes away from watching the huge vessel go through its death throes. There seemed to be no hope of Willow and Tara finding a way out. Angrily she slammed her fist against the earth in front of her, damning herself for leaving the pair of them inside so she could flee to safety.

It was at that point that she saw two tiny figures stumbling away from the wreckage at another point and she scrambled to her feet. Narrowing her eyes slightly, she saw it was indeed Willow and Tara. Raising her arms wearily above her head she waved and received a tiny wave back from Willow in return.

With a relieved smile, Faith went back to Buffy’s side. The blonde’s eyes were open slightly and she too smiled when she saw Faith approach and sit down beside her. Faith quickly withdrew what few medical supplies she had with her, mostly bandages and set about ascertaining how badly Buffy was wounded.

“Hey,” Buffy whispered, “What are all the bright lights? Have we ended up on Broadway?”

“You wish, the LGF mothership has gone up in flames,” Faith replied as she peeled back the layers of Buffy’s clothing to expose her wound, “Good riddance to bad rubbish I say…and I don’t know what Tara did, but every last one of those bastards is dead.”

“Good for us,” Buffy tried to sit up but groaned in pain, a slight trickle of blood came from the corner of her mouth, “”Guess I won’t be jumping back into the cockpit for a while.”

Faith had gently peeled the layers of fabric away from Buffy’s wound and had to grit her teeth in order to keep from groaning with despair. It was a serious wound, cutting deep through flesh and muscle and god knew what else…

“How’s it look?” Buffy asked as her head slumped back against the ground.

“Real good, Buffy,” Faith lied through her teeth, not knowing what to do in the slightest other than make her friend as comfortable as possible.

There was a scuffle behind her and Faith turned to see Willow and Tara stumbling over to them, each looking like death warmed up and a little scorched around the edges. As soon as the pair saw Buffy they scrambled to be at her side. Faith ever so gently picked up Buffy’s head and cradled it on her lap, stroking her sweat soaked hair out of her eyes. Buffy smiled as she saw Willow and Tara, reaching out her hand to rest on Willow’s knee.

“Will.”

“Hey Buff,” willow whispered, fighting back tears as she saw the wound which Faith was now gently covering with a layer of bandages.

Buffy had ceased feeling anything and she did not gasp in pain as the dressings were applied. She patted Willow’s knee weakly.

“I’m sorry I wasted so much time blaming you for Dawn’s death…I always knew it was an accident but for some reason I needed my hate to keep me going. I regret losing all those years we could’ve spent flying together,” Buffy closed her eyes.

“Forget about it, we’ll have a lot more to come,” Willow laid a hand over Buffy’s stroking it gently.

“Stick to flying because you are one god awful liar Willow Rosenberg,” Buffy whispered.

The rise and fall of her chest gradually slowed and her eyes did not open again. Only then did the three women realise that their friend was truly dying. After all the ordeals they had been through, all three of them were unable to contain their emotion any longer. Tara was too exhausted to do anything but let the tears roll unchecked down her face, creating paths through the green muck dried on her skin. Faith dashed her arm across her eyes, angrily trying to wipe the tears away but more fell. Willow had no strength to cry either, but she did. Great sobs racked her body even as she tried to remain stoic for her friend.

A small smile crossed Buffy’s face and she spoke, her lips barely moving, “Stop crying…I don’t wanna die surrounded by sissies.”

Several coughs racked her body as she struggled to breathe, blood bubbling out of her mouth. The coughs eventually subsided and the blonde gave one last shuddering breath, dying as she lay surrounded by her closest friends. The war had claimed one last casualty.

******

As he wandered around the ruins of the battlefield in a daze, Cherry almost stumbled over the body of yet another alien. All of them, including the one that had been about to kill him, had dropped dead seemingly of their own accord. He quickly moved away from the huge fallen giant which repulsed him and renewed the fear coursing through his body.

The battlefield was a nightmare. Aliens and dead people lay where they had fallen, many of the people so terribly mutilated after combat that Cherry could not bear to look. Everywhere there was death. He could not see one living soul and for a bleak moment he wondered if he was the only one left.

Cherry then looked up at the sky which had once been black with alien aircraft…now it was a surreal expanse of thick, comforting grey clouds. Maybe Tara was out there somewhere and she would come back to fly him away.

“Hey kid!” a rough voice interrupted his sky gazing.

Cherry looked back down to see a man wearing a tattered uniform running towards him. He studied the man’s exhausted but jubilant face.

“Are you okay?” he asked.

Cherry thought it was rather daft question given the circumstances but he simply nodded in reply.

“Well, we’re gathering everyone back towards the hospital tent to see just how many there are,” he jabbed his thumb over his shoulder in a vague direction, “you’ll be safe there and there should be something to eat.”

Cherry nodded, he wasn’t hungry, “I have to find my cat first.”

“Well, don’t take too long, there might be some of the bastards left hiding somewhere,” he slapped Cherry heartily on the shoulder and continued on his mission to round up more survivors.

Cherry just nodded and continued plodding his way around the rubble, always staying fairly close to his hiding place where he had last seen Mrs Chippy before she darted away.

“Mrs Chippy!” he called, beginning to fear that she had either run away for good, or been killed in the chaos.

Cherry wandered calling her name for another half an hour until his voice was hoarse but with absolutely no luck. His shoulders slumped dejectedly and he wondered about the point of living in the world without his beloved cat. He returned to the concrete beam and scrambled up on top of it. He perched there, swinging his legs down over the side and putting his elbows on his knees in a weary posture. He reflected on the rather terrifying but oddly funny situation in which he now found himself, quite alone in a ruined world. It was a far cry from his rather pampered existence before the war.

Just as he was deciding whether his situation warranted a good cry or not, there was a small plaintive sound from behind him. Cherry spun around enthusiastically, he knew he would recognise that meow anywhere.

Mrs Chippy padded up onto the beam beside him as though she had been out for a Sunday jaunt but was now rather glad to be home and looking for something to eat. She regarded him calmly for a few moments before coming closer and allowing herself to be stroked. She yelped indignantly as she was swept up off her feet into the relieved boys’ arms. However, following her initial disapproval she allowed him to continue to hold her, even if he was a little over-enthusiastic.

Cherry pressed his face against Mrs Chippy’s warm fur and listened to her purr contentedly. He knew he wasn’t the only one happy to be back together again. As he snuggled his cat, he gazed out over the landscape around him. He saw three figures walking in the distance. This in itself was hardly a surprise as here and there people had begun to emerge from their places of concealment. It was only when they drew closer that he realised how familiar two of them were.

He instantly recognised the blonde haired figure as Tara and his heart leapt again. She had survived! Then he knew the red-haired woman beside her must be Willow, the young lady he had met briefly in the hospital tent who had gone to search for Tara. Cherry found himself smiling secure in the knowledge that he wasn’t alone anymore.

Still clutching Mrs Chippy tightly against his chest, he jumped from the beam and ran to meet them.


Epilogue – “A Changed World.”

The flatbed truck had virtually no suspension and Willow shifted for the tenth time in the past minute trying to ease the pain in her rear. She wriggled, jostling Tara who she held in her arms in front of her. Tara looked back over her shoulder at Willow with a rather annoyed expression on her face.

“Are you going to stop fidgeting? I’m getting chucked around enough by this truck let alone having you wriggle around beneath me like you’ve got ants in your pants,” Tara snapped playfully.

“Well, lets just say this hasn’t been the most comfortable ride across country ever,” Willow sat forward, moving Tara with her.

The blonde eased herself up from her position lying against Willow and sat up as well. She swung her legs over the side of the truck, letting them jostle as the truck bounced along the road.

The two of them, along with Cherry who was miraculously sleeping on a pile of blankets, and Faith, were riding on the flatbed of a rather dilapidated truck. They were all heading west from New York, the truck loaded heavily with supplies for survivors they encountered along the way. The four of them were perched unceremoniously amongst sacks of flour, crates of canned food and tins of tea, coffee, sugar and other essentials which were all roped down tightly beneath canvas.

Willow glanced to the rear of the truck where Faith was perched, eyes staring out over the horizon. The once talkative brunette had barely said a word since they began their journey over a month earlier. Although she had been the first off the truck, helping to unload supplies and assist survivors they found in any way she could. She had worked with such ferocity that Willow and Tara thought that she would burn out quickly. A month later however, and she was still burning with the same intensity. When either of them had attempted to speak to her about Tad, she very quickly brushed them off, refusing to divulge any of her feelings.

Willow and Tara had a hidden agenda within their work with the relief effort, they were heading for Tara’s family farm. No doubt it had long fallen into disrepair but Tara was ready to deal with her ghosts and start from scratch once more. Cherry was of course was coming with them…and Mrs Chippy too.

The sun was high in the sky of the farmland around them when they stopped for a much needed break. Here and there scorched earth testified that there had once been a war here, but otherwise it was peaceful.

Willow swung herself down from the truck, wincing slightly as her shoulder gave a twinge of protest. The nasty wound would continue to give her trouble for some time yet. She turned and helped Tara down with her good arm. The blonde was still on the thin and pale side but there was colour returning to her cheeks and strength as she pitched in to help survivors rebuild.

The truck stopping had woken Cherry from his slumber and he scrambled down from the truck. With a grin, he set Mrs Chippy down and went charging off towards a grassy field dotted with trees.

“Don’t go too far you little rascal!” Willow scolded as Cherry’s feet went flying over the grass, Mrs Chippy bounding along just behind him.

Tara laughed loudly and Willow rounded on the blond, retaining the stern expression on her face.

“What?” Willow placed her hands on her hips for added effect.

“You…you sound like a mother already.”

“A mother?” the stern look melted away to be replaced by one of confusion, “Tara…I’m not a mother, I never will be…”

“Well, you could’ve fooled me. And Cherry…he certainly seems to think you’ve got the makings of a good one.”

“This really is a changed world isn’t it?” Willow remarked ruefully.

“Who would’ve thought,” Faith had joined them, showing plenty of her tanned skin beneath the light vest she wore, “You guys are going to make one cosy little family up there in Oregon.”

“You know, you’re more than welcome to stay there with us,” Tara offered honestly.

“I know,” Faith replied quietly, her eyes becoming veiled for a few moments, “but there’s a lot to be done out there before I settle down anywhere. I might take you up on that offer one day though.”

“You’d better,” Willow growled, the thought of losing touch with the other remaining member of her flying group made her feel sick to the stomach.

“Yeah well, I’ll just wait until you guys have done all the hard yards. Besides, I thought Giles was coming to visit as well?”

“Yeah, he can’t wait to get off that frozen rock…although Oregon in winter isn’t much better,” Tara smiled, she couldn’t wait to see the scientist.

As Faith moved off to have a few moments of rest beneath a roadside tree, Tara scanned their surroundings and saw a playful river winding its way along through the countryside. She turned to Willow and wrinkled her nose.

“What?” the redhead asked, seeing the look on Tara’s face.

“You’re beginning to smell a bit ripe,” Tara grinned.

Before an indignant Willow could clobber her, she began running towards the river. Willow quickly gave chase. The whole affair was like watching two snails have a race, neither could move very fast. Tara stripped off her jumper before easing herself into the cool water. Willow followed a few seconds later, pausing to strip down to her underwear. Both women were mindful of the fact that they were not particularly alone.

“Brrrr, it’s chilly!” Willow protested as she waded in and sank up to her neck.

“Chicken!” Tara splashed a little water in Willow’s direction.

Willow winced and moved a little way away from Tara whom she thought was feeling a little too mischievous for her own good. She kicked off from the rocky bottom and floated onto her back.

Silence reigned as her ears sank beneath the water. Her hair floated out in a halo surrounding her head. As she floated Willow gazed up at the sky to see it filled with puffy white clouds. In the days since the war had ended and the Juthungi had been wiped out, Willow had not given much thought to it. Now, it all came back to her. She remembered the sense of freedom and peace that she had felt when at the controls of an aircraft, the agility of her Draken and the fierce speed of her Guardian.

Willow slowly shut her eyes and found herself back in the cockpit. It was a simple Tiger Moth with an open cockpit where the air rushed past her goggled face. She kicked it into a steep turn and a lazy grin spread across her face.

“What are you grinning about?” Tara asked quietly in her ear, the blonde had floated over to her.

“I’m flying,” Willow replied simply.

“Willow, you’re floating in a river,” Tara replied dryly.

An even broader grin spread across Willow’s face, “I know.”

She opened her eyes once more which brought her back down to earth. Out the corner of her eye she studied her beautiful blonde girlfriend and a thought came unbidden into her mind. When she dwelt on it, she realised that her new idea made complete sense.

“Tara…will you marry me?” Willow thoroughly enjoyed the sound of those words leaving her lips.

She let her feet touch the bottom once more and stood up, her eyes searching Tara’s face for a hint of an answer. For an awful moment she thought that perhaps it had been an entirely inappropriate question and she had made a couple fool of herself.

“With all my heart yes,” Tara could scarcely utter the words as she stared at Willow.

The redhead’s face was slightly pinched and withdrawn with all the hardships they had been through. The wound on her shoulder was ragged and torn but her green eyes sparkled warmly in response.

“C’mere you devil you!” Tara laughed, stretching out her arms.

Willow went willingly to Tara, letting herself be enfolded in both her arms and drawn close. She gently bumped her nose against Tara’s, rubbing it with her own teasingly.

“Do you think there ever was a war?” Willow asked quietly.

Tara looked back up the road at the military truck loaded high with supplies, then to the wound in Willow’s shoulder and her own pale reflection in the waters surface, as well as the ghosts concealed by her gaze. All of them were signs that answered Willow’s question.

“I think there was…a lifetime ago,” Tara replied quietly.

“And our friends…the Slayers, the Devils, Alex, Tad and Buffy…they’re really dead?”

“Will, we won’t ever forget them…” Tara began quietly.

“I know,” Willow whispered, moving forward to deposit a lavish kiss on Tara’s lips, hungrily tasting her as though it were their last kiss.

“Are you getting saucy on me Mrs Maclay?” Tara teased, trying to banish all morbid thoughts from Willow’s mind for that moment of togetherness.

Willow didn’t take the bait, her pale brow wrinkled with concern, “Tara, will we be able to adjust to living peacefully, I mean, we’ve spent so much of our time together in the middle of a war…I’m worried that the intensity will be missing…what if I make a boring housewife?”

Tara growled, genuinely angry, she wrapped her arms fiercely around her lover as though reassuring her that the passion they had felt for one another was still very much present.

“Will, stop worrying about how you’re going to live and just live!”

At that point in time Willow realised just how whiney she came across and smiled apologetically, “I’m a bit of a dunce aren’t I?” she mumbled.

“The worst…and who said anything about being a housewife? You’re going to be out on a horse rounding up all those cattle that are bound to be running wild!” Tara said it with glee but Willow’s face fell instantly.

“Horses? We are going to ride horses? Tara…no, I hate horses…” Willow spluttered.

The truck’s horn blared insistently and both Willow and Tara looked up to see Cherry waving at them. It was already time to get back on the road. With Tara at her heels Willow waded reluctantly out of the river and gathered up the clothes she had strewn about the place. Tara picked up her hand and gripped it tightly as they began the walk back to the road.

“You can ride with me…at least until you get the hang of it and then you’ll be on your own,” Tara reassured her, “Just in case you were in doubt about how much I love you.”

“Great,” Willow muttered, although her voice was playful, “I guess I love you too…meanie.”

They walked back to the truck hand in hand to continue the journey which was going to herald the start of their new life together. In the shadow of a ruined world and the wake of so much death and destruction, Willow and Tara were starting their new life together.

Captain Red had finally got her girl, and she’d already proved that they could walk through the fires of hell…now horses were a different matter altogether…


TBC in…errrrr, there are no more TBCs! That’s all folks!
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby GayNow » Sun Mar 26, 2006 10:32 pm

AAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

Must...write...Coming Back...Chapter 13...can't...read...yet...must...finish...own...chapter...Must...read...from...beginning... Want...to...read...now.

AAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby SithLordWiccan » Sun Mar 26, 2006 10:36 pm

GayNow wrote:AAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

Must...write...Coming Back...Chapter 13...can't...read...yet...must...finish...own...chapter...Must...read...from...beginning... Want...to...read...now.

AAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!


Wow. Someone's conflicted.

Anyways, nice to see the story completed. Hopefully this part will get up on Chris' site tomorrow, and I'll print it off, read it and give my very long feedbacky goodness.
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby caz » Mon Mar 27, 2006 12:32 pm

I can't believe that it's over (sob), I mean the story - I know that our girls will go on for ever!

LFG's - what a pack of bastards, using a copy of Tara's mother to try and trick Tara. Willow's love definitely got her through this ordeal!

Buffy dying was sad as was the rest of the group but I really felt sorry for Faith - she had really fallen in love with Tad. I hope she takes up Willow & Tara's offer and goes to live with them.

As for our girls, they are getting married - WOO HOO! I'm sure that Cherry couldn't wish for better parents!

Thanks for this story Alcy, it was wonderful! I can't wait to read more of your work. :pinky

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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Useful_Oxymoron » Mon Mar 27, 2006 12:48 pm

Bravo! Bravo! :peace :bounce A superb ending to a superb story. It had everyone. Action, adventure, drama, plenty of tear-jerky moments.

We lost Buffy, we lost Xander... :cry So many dead. But among the dead, we count the bloody alien bastards. Well done there. :)

Yay, Faith to the rescue! Can't keep a good slayer down, that's for sure. The moment when Willow finds Tara, while Tara isn't ready to go yet is so wonderfully handled too.

So sweet that Willow and Tara'll be getting married. After all that, they've earned it.

Just as you've earned congratulations. :balloons Give yourself a pat on the shoulder for finishing this wonderful story. Looking forward to this mysterious new story you've been mentioning.
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby spells42 » Mon Mar 27, 2006 5:13 pm

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What a great finish - Willow reaching Tara in her confused state in the clutches of that machine, Tara realising the trap the LGFs had set and her furious destruction of their WOMD. The heroism of their friends and crew was well done, real up against the wall, last ditch, teeth gritting determination to fight for as long as possible to save Tara and the world.

You did a good job of portraying the terror and the almost overwhelming nature of the situation. The contrast of the epilogue where Willow had so little to worry about that she could complain of a sore rear end, and the happy vision of their future conveyed through the thoughts and words of W&T, heightened the appreciation of the previous horrors and the current peace and hope.

I see you intended to convey a visual of this story as similar to the many WWII flicks, despite the futuristic nature of the storyline, 'cos that's how I saw it in my head, even down to the colours being muted, and the clothing/ combat wear belonging more to that era than now or some future space travelling world. It made for an interesting sort of schism which, to me, gave the characters and the emotions in this story more realism.

Anyway, thanks for a great story, and I'll be looking out for more with your name in the author's box.

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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Willowtree252 » Mon Mar 27, 2006 7:04 pm

:pinky This story had alittle of everything I love that about a story. now I want to go reread all of it becase it is that good!!!! Are you sure there might not be a part 2 :kdevil
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Artemis » Tue Mar 28, 2006 4:52 am

Crafty aliens, they had me fooled with the Diana-thing... poor Diana (wherever she is), struck dead by an alien spacecraft, and then faux-resurrected in an effort to trick her beloved daughter into doing the same for the rest of the human race. I like to think she gave Tara a cheer from the great beyond ;-)

That said, I did get serious ooky vibes from the big red sphere. There's only three instances where red is good: Willow's hair, Optimus Prime, and laser cannons in Star Wars. Anything else, red = evil. (Okay, so that may not be a definitive statement... but I got ooky vibes from the red sphere anyway.)

I was pleased to see Faith make it, though not necessarily surprised - she's a hell of a survivor, and even when it seemed she'd be tentacle-bait, I was half-expecting her to show up later after personally knifing to death every tentacle thingy on the mothership. Poor Buffy though, the last casualty to give her life to save Earth. At least, thanks to Faith's help, she got to hang around long enough to unburden her soul, so to speak, and forgive Willow for what happened to Dawn. But still, between that, and Tad's death, Faith's got a big battle ahead of her, coming to terms with living when so many others, loved ones included, didn't make it. But she's a survivor.

I really liked the epilogue - it was such a small-scale coda to the story, but it seemed to convey the feel of the massive changes wrought on the whole world by the LGF invasion. Everyone's lost a lot of what they loved, and now they're putting their lives back together again from what's left. Willow, Tara, Cherry and Mrs Chippy - probably they never would have met otherwise, and now they're each other's family. And Willow asking Tara to marry her, so sweet :blush There's a real sense of hope for the future, and that, even though the old world can't be rebuilt, a new world can be put together to take its place - and maybe a world where people are a bit more aware of what's really important. Describing the worldwide consequences of the invasion would have taken pages and pages, and probably wouldn't have been very emotionally engaging - but you managed to do it with just Willow and Tara and their new family.

So... the end, huh? I feel all melancholy. But in a good way, it was a satisfying end to a great story. Bravo :bow
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby watty » Tue Mar 28, 2006 7:43 am

I've been looking forward to this chapter very much, thank you. What a climax, with both Willow and Tara needing to draw on the very last drop of their courage and love. The action is exciting and tense, even though (it being a W/T fic afterall) I knew they'd be together at the end, it almost seemed like they couldn't make it. What with Willow injured and Tara having to overcome Fake!Diana's trickery.

Poor Buffy, another victim in the good fight. I salute her bravery, and I'm glad she and Willow made their peace.

Lovely to end with hope for the future. And a life together.
Captain Red had finally got her girl, and she’d already proved that they could walk through the fires of hell…now horses were a different matter altogether…

There is such a simple quality about this last sentence. The world as they knew it is mostly gone now, but there is so much to look forward to, it wraps up this mighty tale neatly.

Thank you. It's been a great ride. Now please start posting your other fic. :smug
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