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Re: Restoration Part 15 The End

Postby mollyig » Mon Sep 16, 2002 12:46 am

Our poor Willow, fighting the call of the magic. Her mantra was so touching. Wonderful that they defeated Myra, and best of all, did it together.



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Re: Restoration Part 15 The End

Postby spazz07 » Mon Sep 16, 2002 12:56 am

:clap Great story Wendy, i loved how insightful and supportinve Tara was with Willow when the cravings became intense. They both realise that there is still a lot of work to get their relationship back on the up but as long as they do it together, they can accomplish anything they set their minds to. It was great to see Tara get a perspective of what the power that Willow felt whilst she was addicted was like. A better understanding will help her fight with Willow against her addiciton.



I was a little sad for Tracey at the end, she had it tough all the way through and she did it all for her daughter and in the end she isnt even going to get to see her again. Though she did what any self respecting parent would do and in the end gave her life for her little girl. It was a pretty sad moment in anotherwise happy ending.



Overall it was a wonderful effot Wendy, loved it from start to finish and would love to see you write something else, its been an absolute pleasure reading :)



Cheers

Nath

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Re: Restoration Part 15 The End

Postby snuggle79 » Mon Sep 16, 2002 6:35 am

aw, i'm so sad that your story has ended that soon!

I could go on forever reading it! :)

You did a great job here and i loved your story and the ending!

I'm glad, that everything went fine for everyone and that Myra got what she deserved. But i felt sorry for Tracey, that was a hard ending for her.

I hope wer are going to see another story from you soon!

Once again: great story! :D :clap :clap



Tara:"Maybe we dreamed it."

Willow:"Right. Right. Wrong! (points at her head ) Different Brains." Tara:"Oh yeah."



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Edited by: snuggle79 at: 9/16/02 6:36:56 am
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Re: New Fic: Restoration

Postby Miss1234Kitty » Mon Sep 16, 2002 7:40 am

I've just read this fic from beginning to end and it's fantastic! I have a question, though. Did both Glory and Tracy die, or just Glory? If they both did, what's happening to Jenny?



Hey, W/T could adopt her! Plans for a sequel are in your mind, right? Please?



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Tara: There's just so much to work through... and can you just be kissing me now?

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Re: New Fic: Restoration

Postby Tulipp » Mon Sep 16, 2002 9:31 am

What's not to love in an ending like that? Oh, your ideas are great, really great.



I loved the way that Tara's "I" in the "I'm scared for you" scene became a "we"; that felt so important to me, partly because Tara was actively linking herself with the other Scoobies in relation to Willow and partly because she was trying to get Willow to see that they all do love her, fear for her, want to keep her safe. I think those paragraphs were my favorite part of this whole story, so thanks for them.



I also really liked the image of Willow pulled toward the magic, and of Tara finally understanding--voluntarily, no less--what that pull of magic must feel like to Willow. That brought them closer, in understanding and in experience, than they've ever been in some ways, and again, that felt very important.



And I loved the very end.



I've enjoyed this story from the beginning; thanks so much for sharing it.

Tulipp
 


Re: New Fic: Restoration

Postby Puff » Mon Sep 16, 2002 10:18 am

That was a great ending Wendy. I really enjoyed this story. I loved the talk that Willow and Tara had in the magic box and the way that Tara assured Willow that all the scoobies are there for her. It was a very intense ending and a lot happened, I'm glad Myra was dealt with although I'm kind of sad that Tracy died. Although that's balanced off by the fact that Glory couldn't come back again so all is good.



Anyway thank you for this wonderful story it really was a joy to read and I hope you write more in the future.

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Re: Restoration Part 15 The End

Postby xita » Mon Sep 16, 2002 1:10 pm

Oh it's finished :cry . I just got around to catching up and what a great story. Tara having faith in Willow, sigh, and Willow taking strength from that. I love this story with it's blend of action and a wonderful slow reunion. Thank you :)



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Re: Restoration Part 15 The End

Postby MadeinNZ » Mon Sep 16, 2002 1:31 pm

Great ending. Its just crying out for a sequel.



Loved the story beginning to end. Thanks for sharing it with us.

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Re: Restoration Part 15 The End

Postby Ghostwriter » Mon Sep 16, 2002 7:28 pm

Thank you all for the wonderful feedback. You all have been wonderful! Thank you so much for reading. And now with the replies.



Wendy Rae



MissQuirky: Ashley, I’m so glad you liked it. And of course Willow and Tara would fight it together! I can’t believe it’s over either, and strangely enough I think I’ll miss it as well. I know I will miss all the wonderful comments! As for another story well, I’ve got an idea kicking around about how to fix the mess that was season six, so we’ll see. Thanks again for reading and all your comments.



The Rose24: Thank you, I’m glad you liked it and thanks for reading.



areslei: Thank you very much! I’m glad you enjoyed it.



VampNo12: Thank you. Your feedback has been wonderfully insightful and has made me consider all options while writing this story. Thank you so much for your comments. As for Tara telling Willow that they were afraid for her, it seemed that they should be. The Scoobies, the core Scoobies that is have all been portrayed on the show as having a deep friendship. In my mind they would have been afraid, not of her, but for her as she fought, especially once they realized that she had a problem. Unfortunately the writers of the show didn’t explore that, but I digress. And yes, I felt it was important for Willow to admit not only to herself but also to Tara that she was afraid. To me, that admission is an important step to her recovery, because it also shows that she has really admitted to herself that she has a problem.



The action was a little hard to write I had to go back and read it constantly to make sure I was following the action correctly and everyone was doing something. It was a very enlightening experience for me. By having them join and Tara experiencing for a brief moment the pull that Willow faced I wanted to show two things. One, the difference between Willow and Tara’s personality, I wanted to show how two people with similar interests when faced with the same seductive pull made different choices on how to deal with it. The other thing I wanted address was, now Tara would have some idea what Willow faced every day, to give her even more of an understanding. I hope that worked. And yes, I’m glad too that Myra got her reward. It couldn’t have happened to a nicer person. The decision to have Tracy die was a hard one but ultimately I felt it was the best direction, what with the spell working to a small degree. This has been an amazing journey; I have learned so much from this process. Thank you again for reading and your wonderful feedback. All the great feedback I’ve gotten will make the decision to post another story that much easier! Thanks again.



Nutty Girl: Thank you so much, I’m glad you were hooked! And thanks for taking the time to comment, I appreciate it.



mollyig: Thank you. I’m glad you liked the mantra, I felt that would be so Willow! Thank you so much for reading.



spazz07: Nathan, I’m glad you liked it. And yes there is still work to do on their relationship, the addiction will not be an easy thing to live with, but together they will get through it. I’m glad you liked the scene where Tara gets to feel a little bit of what Willow felt when confronted by the pull of the dark magic, I think it will help when the pull gets a little strong. And I too was sad about Tracy’s fate, I thought long and hard about it, and yes the story could have been told with out that happening but I felt it gave the best ending. Oh my god, I just read what I typed there and it sounded like Joss! Oh my God! Anyway, it was a hard decision. As for as writing something else? Well, umm, not sure, maybe, I might. I do know though that with all this wonderful feedback I won’t be so hesitant about posting again. Thank you for your comments and I’m glad you liked it.



snuggle79: So soon! It feels like forever! Seriously though, I’m glad you liked it. I have enjoyed this process tremendously and you all have been great. Thank you for reading. And maybe there will be another story, someday. And I still love your avatar! LOL



Miss1234Kitty: Wow, from beginning to end? Wow. Thanks for reading I’m glad you liked it. As for whether or not Glory died, well, I don’t believe she can die because she’s a God and all. Her physical body can die but her essence is forever. Tracy died and in doing so Glory’s physical body died again and now she’s floating around in the nether realms. And there are plans for a sequel as such! Thanks again for reading and your comments.



Tulipp: LOL, I’m glad you liked my ideas and the ending! And you caught Tara including herself in the Scoobies? I’m glad, I felt it was time, mainly because I felt that during the breakup Tara realized that the others liked and accepted her even though she was no longer with Willow. I felt that was a big step for Tara to take. I’m glad you liked those paragraphs, I did too. As for the image of the pull of magic, well, it seems a few people liked it, I guess I got what I was trying to say across. Addiction is such a subjective thing, unless you feel it you really can’t understand it, so I was hoping I would be able to convey the pull that Willow felt. I also felt that it was necessary for Tara to understand what that pull felt like and understand what Willow faced and I think it did bring them closer. Not that it will make it any easier to face the addiction but it gives Tara a different perspective and you are right it brings them even closer than they were. I’m glad you liked the end. Thank you so much for all of your feedback and I appreciate you taking the time to comment. Thanks again.



Puff: Well, I held up my side of the bargain. Where’s the sequel to your story? Hmm? LOL, anyway, I’m glad you liked it I enjoyed writing it very much and posting it as well. I’m sorry about Tracy too, but like you said it was balanced out by the Glory situation. As for writing more, well I’m always writing something, and I do have an idea kicking around, so we’ll see. Thanks again.



Xita: Thank you so much! I’m pleased that you enjoyed it. Thank you again for giving us this place where we may post and enjoy so many wonderful stories.



MadeinNZ: Thank you, I’m glad you liked it. As for a sequel, well, hmm, that will depend on what kind of pie did this one rate? LOL. Thank you for your feedback and taking the time to comment I appreciate it.













Edited by: Ghostwriter at: 9/16/02 7:33:24 pm
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Re: Restoration Part 15 The End

Postby Puff » Mon Sep 16, 2002 7:37 pm

Well I am glad to read that you are writing something :D And well I sent the first part of the sequel off to my beta reader the other day so hopefully I'll feel happy with the story soon.

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Re: Restoration Part 15 The End

Postby Ghostwriter » Mon Sep 16, 2002 7:40 pm

Puff, that's great! I will be eagerily searching the board for your next story. And yes I am writing, actually I should be doing that now, huh? LOL

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Re: Restoration Part 15 The End

Postby jessie 85uk » Tue Sep 17, 2002 8:44 am

This fic was really fantastic, ive been away for a few weeks and have only been able to catch up with the story today.

I think everyone will agree with me when i say you have done a wonderful job.

I look forwards to reading your next fic.

CJ

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Re: Restoration Part 15 The End

Postby Scout » Tue Sep 17, 2002 6:02 pm

What a wonderful story and such an exciting ending (although I'm a little sad about Tracy). I loved that Tara got a chance to feel what Willow has been fighting - I think that would be so helpful in allowing them both to deal with her addiction in the future. And I loved Tara's line about being afraid 'for' Willow. So true and so touching.



Thanks again and I really hope you plan to do more soon! :)

Scout
 


Re: Restoration Part 15 The End

Postby Tiggrscorpio » Wed Sep 18, 2002 3:48 pm

Ghostwriter, just catching up on the last two updates. The tension among the Scoobies over Willow's magick addiction really rang true. I loved how Tara explained it to her. The whole spell was exhilarating throughout. I really liked how Tara helped Willow with the dark magick and could finally really understand what Willow has been dealing with.



I really enjoyed the very end. Tracy had to die, but it doesn't mean you couldn't bring her back for more. An excellent story all the way through. I'll look forward to reading your future endeavors.

*****

She's my everything!

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Re: Restoration Part 15 The End

Postby Ghostwriter » Thu Sep 19, 2002 8:21 pm

More replies, and another thank you to all that have read this story!



Wendy Rae



jessie 85uk: Thank you so much for reading. I’m glad you enjoyed it. As for my next story, well, it’s in the works! Thanks again.



Scout: Thank you for your wonderful feedback. I was a little sad about Tracy too. And Tara finding out how Tara felt was important to me since I felt that she would need that knowledge in helping Willow fight her addiction. Thank you so much for reading I really appreciate it.



Tiggrscorpio: Thank you for reading. I’m glad the tension rang true for you, I really wanted that to work as I felt it was an honest reaction. And the spell was hard to write, I’m glad though that it worked! As for bringing Tracy back, well that’s an interesting thought; I’ll have to ponder that. Anyway, thank you so much for reading and for your wonderful comments throughout this whole endeavor



Ghostwriter
 


Re: Restoration Part 15 The End

Postby xita » Sun Oct 27, 2002 4:32 pm

new to the archive :) And you can still leave feedback!



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Re: Restoration Part 15 The End

Postby ladydameon » Sun Aug 29, 2004 7:01 pm

Hey, really cool story. Nice plot development. Nice play of emotions. I will say this is one of my favorite stories. I've read it several times and still enjoy it.

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Re: Restoration Part 15 The End

Postby behindhereyes » Tue Sep 28, 2004 8:50 pm

Wow... girl you have so got it :clap You write beautifully. I started off reading... next thing I know I'm immersed in the world you created.

I :bow to you



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Re: Restoration Part 15 The End

Postby Ghostwriter » Sat Nov 27, 2004 8:37 pm

Ladydameon and Behindhereyes,



Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and to post your thoughts. I appreciate it so much. I've been struggling with a new story since I finished Restoration and seeing your remarks has made me strangely motivated again. Thank you again for your kind words, I appreciate it.



Wendy Rae

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Re: New Fic: Restoration

Postby willow_tara_always » Thu Dec 22, 2005 9:49 am

WOW!! just fancied abit of light reading, stumbled onto this fic and i was hooked! its awesome! congratxxx
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Re: New Fic: Restoration

Postby Renatecs » Thu Dec 31, 2009 5:48 am

wonderful story,i really enjoyed reading this. You wrote all the charachters,their thoughts and feelings amazingly well. The plot was also a thrill. You had me hooked from the start. Keep on writing great stories like these.
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