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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 27 May 2008)

Postby taraslove » Sat May 31, 2008 4:55 pm

PS.

Just dropping in to wish you a very happy birthday, a few days late. Sorry I missed it! I hope it was the best birthday for you yet.

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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 27 May 2008)

Postby JustSkipIt » Sat May 31, 2008 7:49 pm

She comes over every night just to say good night and writes lesbian erotica? She's criminally negligent to making any attempt. I mean seriously, there comes a time when not making a move makes you a person who basically doesn't deserve to get the girl. Willow should send Tara along to someone who will appreciate her.

... or maybe they'll get busy now.
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 27 May 2008)

Postby masterjendu » Sat May 31, 2008 10:41 pm

Fan-frickin-tastic update, Kat! Evey is such a brilliant original character that she would have fit very comfortably in the Scoob pantheon, methinks! Anyone who can coo to a cookie is pretty wicked in my book.

And I am very glad that Tara’s serenity now has run its course! You write her very well and it really is wonderful to get her side of things. She even says fuck twice in this update! If there was anyone who ever needed to be schooled, it is our adorable burnt by Tracy, porn writing Willow. Here’s hoping the wall sees some action! I believe that Bull. Horns. Pussy. has the makings of a pretty stellar t-shirt on my cafepress site!

Can’t wait for the next update, Kat. Thank you!

And happy birthday, eh!!!
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 27 May 2008)

Postby Paint the Sky » Sun Jun 01, 2008 4:05 am

masterjendu wrote:I believe that Bull. Horns. Pussy. has the makings of a pretty stellar t-shirt on my cafepress site!


Excellent idea!

Belated Happy Birthday to you!
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 27 May 2008)

Postby Willowtree252 » Tue Jun 10, 2008 3:54 pm

:pray pleeeeze with suger on top or Willow with Tara on top you chose just please.
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 27 May 2008)

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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 27 May 2008)

Postby Zooeys_Bridge » Tue Jun 10, 2008 8:49 pm

taraslove I'm voting Willow with Tara on top.

Just my 2¢.


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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 27 May 2008)

Postby masterjendu » Tue Jun 10, 2008 8:56 pm

Oh, I'll see your dollar, Rach, and raise you... I don't know... how does a bajillion sound?
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby katjetson » Thu Jun 12, 2008 2:43 pm

Alrighty, Kittens... Let's have at it.

First, I've been, uh, toying around with the idea of moving this short story to its own thread and continuing on with the fun-loving adventures of Willow & Tara. My reasoning for this is quite simple--even though this is all really super difficult to write (you wouldn't think, would ya?) it's out-of-control rewarding and besides... I've kinda fallen in love with Evey. haha! And while there won't be whole updates on Evey or Buffy, per se, I'd still really like the opportunity to give these ladies some more voice. Not to mention it'd might be kinda neat for Tara to see the inside of Willow's apartment. And maybe for Myles and Jetson to have a play date while their respective mommies have a few of their own? So yeah... there's that.

Enough of my yapping, let's boogie! (Anyone know the quote?)

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taraslove: Damn! Your dibs “roared” for me. Like a big ole mountain lion, you circle your prey (in this instance, a silly little fic) and pounce. You’re like, the king of the Kitten Board; Jude the Lion!

Ohgod, the list-it scene… I can’t tell you how many heated discussions I’ve had with friends about this very topic. There are so many fun ones and I really only got to touch on a few. Besides, I’m always curious what makes another person’s gaydar zing off the map. It’s fun. Especially when Oreos, Doritos and… I guess carrots, are involved.

Bull.Horns.Pussy. : Don’t leave home without it.

Rach: I’d like to say with the creation of Evey I was pushing myself as a Kitten fic-er, but honestly, she was a breeze to create. (The Weird Science them is totally playing in my head.) She’s an amalgamation of two very specific people in my life.

It’s totally peachy-keen that I’m, uh… touching on all your fantasies, Rach, but I think you share ‘em with a lot of other people, too. Like, uhm, half the people here, apparently.

BTW, I wondered if anyone picked up on why I named Willow’s ratchet set, Rosie. Anyone, anyone?

And yep, they live down the hall from each other. In the first update Tara said something to the effect of “I live right down the hall.” Someone mentioned to me that it was kinda strange that they never “bumped” (read: crashed into and spilled coffee on) into each other before, but in my mind, Tara and Evey moved in only recently.

Zampas: There’s gonna be pa-lenty of research material. Coming. Right. Up. (Down?)

Paint the Sky: PTS, you’re always so generous (and sweet) with your feedback. I feel super special when you detail-it up for me. I don’t know an author here that doesn’t love the ego boost of feedback. I won’t lie; it fucking RULES!

You know, I actually didn’t intend for the “licked its vanilla, sugarbomb center” part to be filthy. I’m actually amazed myself! But, I love that YOU went “there.” Ga, it’s fun to go “there,” innit?

I’ve lost track of our little coincidences, but if in your next update you have a line about “the boobie prize,” I’m checking my home for hidden cameras. ;)

Willowtree: T’hee. I laughed heartily at your feedback. And heaven knows I love to leave ‘em sizzlin’ and meltin’. Hope this update does you good.

dlline: I cherish my little pats on the head from you. I’m a proud padawan! Thanks for always saving me from the plethora of possible pitfalls that come with this whole writing thig-a-ma-jig. Always striving to be “tight.” Wait, no I’m not. I mean, yes I… (Shut up, Kathleen!)

One of a Kind: You pointed out one of my personal favorite lines, too. See me puff my chest out with pride. (As if it needed ANYmore attention.)

Good God, woman! Get to reading Van Rosenberg; it’s a magical wonderland and full of white hot, well… hotness.

wimpy: I feel your nudge and raise you an NC-17. Girl, in mere moments yer gonna be swimmin’ in our fave rave body part: titties.

Also so geeked that Evey came off so well. She a total crack up and totally makes me swoon.

QUADbug: Not enough people use the word “beverage.” Nowhere near as popular as the “and,” and definitely not as trendy as the “whatevs,” but I like the idea of digging up a classic from the days of 1952. (Ah, good ole ’52!) Seriously, now, I have no idea what I’m talking about. This feedback to feedback’s gone off the track. Better get my caboose back in place.



There.

Oooh, I’m a “honey drooper?” REALLY! My. Job. Is. Done. Super lost in my super prowess. Hee.

chance: Ah, to be in a world with Tara not wearing a bra, huh? Everything’s just gone a bit hazy up in my noggin’. The only thing reeling me back is I’ve got an update to post, then I’m going straight back to this thought. : )

So, all-around thumbs up for Evey and Tara. I love that. It’s really just so nifty to do a “job” well. Thanks for your high praise. Coming from the writer of one of my fave’s here, that means a lot.

SJ: Biff! Bang! Pow! Thanks!

JustSkipIt: I dunno, I kinda adore Willow’s apprehension. Come on, now… It makes for romantic moondust sprinklage and the fun-ness that comes along with the release of massive amounts of pent up desire. (See below.)

JenTheMasta: Seeing as I’m planning on continuing on with this fic, I can’t wait to show some real interaction between Evey and Willow. Ga, I have ideas and it’s gonna be so fun to watch Willow squirm under her bluntness. Maybe they can all lick the center of an Oreo in bed together? And… Kittens, we have our next update. Haha!

Willowtree, Jude, Rach and Jen: I’m voting for Willow on top, too. Ohgod, am I voting for it.

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Disclaimers: Same as before.
Rating: Flirty and dirty.
Note: Big ups to Lady Di and my special A1 sauce, Jude.

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After Evey had left, Willow and Tara sat and talked for hours. Their conversation was never really about anything in particular, but Willow was always entranced and lulled by Tara’s voice, and hung onto her every word. Especially when she was talking about her work.

(The librarian hot factor benefits greatly from having this woman steeped in Dewey Decimal System knowledge.

Work. Tara! Ohgod, what time is it?)


Willow looked down at her watch with wide eyes and then took one last swig of beer before setting the empty bottle of Corona on the table. “Well, I guess I’m gonna take the long walk home.” She gazed into Tara’s eyes hoping the blonde would persist otherwise, but when Tara made no real move to stop her, Willow reluctantly got up from the couch and made her way to the door. She felt a sadness almost immediately—not wanting to leave the comfort of simply being in Tara’s presence.

Willow tentatively reached for the handle, and before she could twist the knob felt the blonde behind her. Tara’s arms were part-way around her and both hands were pushed against the door, essentially rendering her pinned. She stood frozen as Tara’s tits pressed tighter against her small frame, and the blonde’s lips hotly tickled her ear. “Willow, please wait. Don’t you… Don’t you want me?”

Willow couldn’t believe what was happening—her heart was beating wildly, and a whimpering gasp fell from her lips that very nearly sounded like a cry. She was unable to look Tara in the eyes just yet; terrified of the desire that was unraveling inside her. Her own hands were now on the door and she turned her head to the side—catching a glimpse of Tara’s lips that were now so close to her own. She was shivering with the sheer eroticism of it all, and when she was finally able to form words, they were spoken in a whisper. “I do, Tara. So much. You have no idea…”

Tara moved her hands away from the wall and placed them gently on Willow’s shoulders. “Then what is it, baby?” she whispered. “What’s holding you back?”

(She just called me ‘baby.’ Amazing how one word from her lips can sound like a symphony.)

Even though Willow now had the option to move, she mostly didn’t—choosing instead to continue her safe sideways glance at Tara while she let loose the secrets in her heart. She felt a spark at her toes, and the fire that had just been lit there was towering up her body and licking at her insides. “You’re just so beautiful and perfect and I’m afraid I’ll wake up to realize this is all just a dream and that scares the hell out of me. And… God, Tara, I’m completely falling in love with you.” Willow didn’t know how to explain it further; the desire she felt was simply too big to define.

Tara rested her cheek on Willow’s back for a moment and sighed deeply. She peppered the soft blue t-shirt with kisses while her fingertips trailed down Willow’s side before reaching her waist and wrapping her arms completely around Willow’s shivering body. One hand then moved down the front of her left thigh while the other slipped under her shirt and danced over her flat tummy. “I’m real, Willow. And I’m here; falling in love with you, too.”

“Ohgod, Tara… Please... I don’t want to leave.”

And then she felt it, Tara’s hot hands slid completely underneath her shirt and cupped her breasts fully. “Take me,” she commanded. It was at that moment that Willow wondered if she had ever heard anything quite as sexy as take-charge Tara.

Willow cried out in pleasure and her legs nearly buckled. They were both feeling woozy and wobbly as they slid to their knees. Tara leaned in close and tight to Willow’s back, and kept her hands firmly in place on the redhead’s perfectly-sized tits. She began to move her hands a little, gently massaging them with her palms and Willow placed her own hands over Tara’s; silently urging her to pinch her nipples. It was Tara’s turn to gasp, and she bit down and moaned loudly into Willow’s back.

Of their own accord, Willow’s hips began to rock and her ass was grinding against Tara’s pussy. Weeks of pent up desire flooded her, and in a rush she turned quickly into Tara’s arms before pushing her to the ground. Tara fell onto the hardwood floors with a thud and giggled before Willow captured her blossoming lips that were wet with anticipation. Every ounce of desire and desperation was poured into that kiss, and once they found their rhythm, Willow delighted in the feel of the blonde’s heart beating against hers. Tara captured her tongue and began to suck on it greedily; making the most amazing noises that Willow could ever possibly imagine. That was all the incentive she needed, and in a flash she moved her knee in between Tara’s legs and was tugging at her shirt. She pulled up the green tank and looked deeply into blue eyes before hungrily sucking a nipple into her mouth. “Tara. Mmm…They’re amazing!”

A pleased, almost smug look played over Tara’s face, and she pushed Willow’s knee tighter into her center; urging her to grind harder against her leg. “Willow, ungh… I need you. I need you to fuck me. Please, baby.”

(Okay, she’s blowing my mind right now. The dam is bursting, volcanoes are erupting, tiny earthquakes are quivering all along my fault line and… no way am I making love to Tara for the first time on the floor.)

Tara was frantically pulling at the waistband of Willow’s jeans and latched her mouth just below her ear before sucking deeply on her neck.

(Ohgodohgodohgod. Maybe yes-way I can.)

“Fuck, Tara! That feels so fucking good. And, ungh… I don’t wanna stop, but can we…”

“Anything, baby.” She sucked harder, no doubt leaving a rainbow of black and blue on skin so creamy white. “Anything for you, Willow.”

(Does that offer come in a coupon book? And if so, please let there be no expiration date.)

“Can we do anything…in bed?”

Tara pulled away from the redhead and lovingly held her face in her hands; rubbing her flushed cheeks with her thumbs. “Sometimes I wonder, Willow, could you be any more adorable?”

“I can certainly try. I mean, do I get points for adorableness somehow? And if so, how many Tara-points would I need for…” Willow was pleasantly interrupted by the feel of Tara’s lips pressed firmly against hers; kissing her roughly, playfully biting and then soothing the bruised flesh with her tongue.

Tara rolled over Willow and then they both scrambled to their feet. She pulled Willow in close and tight by the hem of her shirt, and wasted no time in lifting it up and off before doing the same with her own.

(Looks like someone just won the boobie prize!)

The tips of Willow’s ears burned bright as she watched Tara’s eyes drift down and take in her tits for the first time. She trembled with desire under her girl’s appreciative stare and took the hand offered to her. “Come with me.”

(This is really happening, and you’re the luckiest woman in the world, Rosenberg!)

Their feet slapped against the floor as they hurried down the hall hand in hand. Once they reached Tara’s room, the blonde enveloped Willow in a warm embrace and whispered in her ear, “I’m gonna make you feel so good. Just… give me a minute, okay?” She shimmied out of her boxers and Willow could see her pearly whites smiling back at her in the near blackness of the room.

She could barely make out Tara fumbling with a few items on her dresser before she saw and heard the spark of a match. The smell of sulfur wafted through the air, and she watched Tara light candles all around the room. Little by little the blonde’s skin became illuminated by the warm glow, and Willow ravenously took in the swell of Tara’s ass as she bent over to fire up a smattering of tea lights on her nightstand. She licked her lips and shook her head in amazement. “Tara, you’re… a dream.”

The blonde looked over her shoulder to face Willow and tossed the book of matches aside. She took a few steps towards the redhead, jiggling a little with each move towards Willow. “I thought we went over this already. No dream, remember? I’m here and I’m yours.” She seductively bit her bottom lip as she slid a finger down in between her breasts, and with the palm of her hand moved over Willow’s tight abs and inside the front of her jeans.

(Tara’s in my pants. I repeat, Tara. Is. In. My. Pants! Someone might want to call the fire department now, because when she gets to my...)

Tara began playing with the soft hairs of her pussy; seemingly surprised to find Willow not wearing underwear. “You mine, my little commando?”

Willow gasped at the question and her eyes bore into Tara with lust and need. She let them fall shut as her head lolled back and she groaned, “God, yes. Pleeeeease. Let me be yours.” Tara’s hand dipped further down Willow’s jeans, and she teasingly slipped a finger through her wetness. When she opened her eyes, Tara was sucking the digit in her mouth and Willow nearly came from the sight.

“You’re delicious. But now that I have a taste,” she purred as she tore open the button-flys, “I want more.”

Buzzers, alarms, bells and whistles of all kinds went off in Willow’s head and she leapt into action quickly; pulling off her jeans and kicking them aside with the skill and grace of a goofy, but loveable cartoon character. They stood there for a moment, simply soaking in the rise and fall of each other’s chests. Willow could take it no longer and needed to feel Tara’s tits against hers. She wrapped the blonde in her arms and shivered with delight as their hearts buzzed with the hum of love. Of their own accord, Willow’s hips began to pump and thrust as she sought more flesh-friction. She squeaked out an excited ‘eep’ when she felt Tara’s hands slide down and roughly squeezed her ass. “Fuck, Will, you feel so good.”

On their backwards-walk way to the bed, Tara stole hot and heavy kisses from Willow before pushing her down onto the bed. The redhead had barely made herself comfortable when she felt Tara’s hot breath blazing a lust-filled trail down her body. She propped herself on her elbows; determined to watch the show, but could barely manage to keep her eyes from hazing over when Tara pushed her lips open with her thumbs and sucked Willow’s clit hard into her mouth. When it came to letting the blonde know how she felt, a spirited “holy shit” was about as descriptive as she got.

“Mmmm…,” Tara groaned into her pussy. “You like that?”

A needy river of ‘yes’’ tumbled from Willow’s lips, and she bucked wildly onto Tara’s tongue. Somewhere in the back of her mind she considered that this uncontrollable display of carnal desire might hurt her girl, and with little ease attempted to reel in the mother lode of emotions threatening to explode inside her body.

Tara must’ve felt Willow back off because when she slowed down her frantic hip thrusts, Tara stopped and looked up at her. “Let yourself go, Will,” she pleaded, and then pushed two fingers deep inside her. “I’ve got you, and I want you to come hard into my mouth.”

Willow howled, and could only hope that the occupants of their entire apartment complex were either out, sound sleepers or perhaps dead because she was about to have the atom bomb of orgasms. Not only was Tara working her with one very talented right hand, but her tongue had returned to the party in Willow’s pussy and was laving all along her folds.

Willow wound one of her hands in Tara’s hair and wrapped small, yet strong legs tightly around her body; digging her heels into her back. She felt the beginnings of her orgasm rumbling deep within her belly, and the muscles there flexed in preparation for their lust-induced workout. Willow closed her eyes shut, in an effort to keep from getting distracted. She was nearly there, and with Tara’s talented everything being everywhere at once, the love train was rolling smoothly along its tracks. “Ohgod,” she gasped. “Baby. Tara... You’re fucking me. So. Fucking. Good. I’m so close. Don’tstopdon’tstopdon’tstop…” The warm heat of her release coated Tara, and Willow trembled with pleasure and satisfaction as happy tears spilled from her eyes.

Tara smoothly made her way up Willow’s body and enveloped her in a tight embrace. “Hey,” she pulled away after a few moments and wiped a tear away with her thumb. “You okay?”

Willow reached for Tara’s hand and softly kissed each fingertip. Shining green eyes smiled up at her as she placed the hand on her heart. “Yeah. Just… It’s been awhile. And, well… You’re just that good.”

“Is that right?”

“Mmmhmm…,” Willow cooed into the crook of Tara’s neck. “That’s right.”

“So,” Tara treaded lightly. “You going to write about this, ‘Little Ms. Lesbian Erotic Story Writer?’”

Willow couldn’t help but chuckle. It always amazed her how much of real life would find its way into her writing, and these moments with Tara were by far some of the most truly incredible times she’s ever experienced. It would almost be a disservice not to secretly share a bit of their love adventures with the world.

“Well, I’m definitely feeling…” she purposely drew out the next word as she massaged a full and luscious tit in her hand, “inspired.” She climbed on top of Tara and straddled her hips. “But I need to do a bit more research,” she flirted. “It’s the details that really make the story… come together.”

Before completely ravishing her girl, Willow smirked as she was reminded of the title she had just come up with for her latest story – And Away We Go, indeed!
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby Willowtree252 » Thu Jun 12, 2008 2:44 pm

Dibs There is a godess and she has seen fit to give me wet dreams tonight. I love the fact that you did not make Willow into super stud also I love take charge Tara ;-) I saw this ran got some pop corn and away i went. ;-)
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby Zooeys_Bridge » Thu Jun 12, 2008 2:47 pm

mine

okay, since that happened literallysimultaneously, I vote we should share the Dibs.
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby Zampsa1975 » Thu Jun 12, 2008 3:27 pm

Yay for excellent update-y goodness... I hope Tara's room has good soundproofing... I hope Willow finds enjoyable details for her stories...
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby Paint the Sky » Thu Jun 12, 2008 4:57 pm

You broke my brain. Its turned into a big wet gooey mess and it's leaking out from the strangest place ;-)

Oh my, that was hot, dirty and sweet all at the same time, not to mention salty and very possibly sweaty.

She stood frozen as Tara’s tits pressed tighter against her small frame, and the blonde’s lips hotly tickled her ear. “Willow, please wait. Don’t you… Don’t you want me?”


Is there anything more sexy than having Tara take the lead, but to couple it with just that hint of doubt and shyness gave me shivers. :sigh

And then when Will says "And… God, Tara, I’m completely falling in love with you.” I swear I lost it. I teared up, it was just so completely and utterly the right thing to say, and Tara telling her she felt the same, well this kitty was smiling like she'd won the lottery. Ok, so I'm full of girly weepy hormones just now, but it doesn't make any less valid, my little heart just pitter-pattered right along with them.

“Take me,” she commanded


Anytime, any place, any where and in any way, jesus, who could resist that, you would have to to be made of stone or something.

“Willow, ungh… I need you. I need you to fuck me. Please, baby.”


I love it when Tara says 'fuck me'. There's just something deliciously corrupting about taking the sugary sweet character JW created and giving her real human responses to real human situations. This Tara is flesh and blood and a seething timebomb of lust and sex. I fucking love her, and I love how you write her. She's in better hands here than she ever was in his :pride


“Tara, you’re… a dream.”


She sure is, a big dirty wet one, and i hope she's in mine tonight :blush

party in Willow’s pussy


Damn, why didn't get an invite? lol

“It’s the details that really make the story…


Never a truer word Kat, and you had them all there!

If this is the end of this part of their story then it was the perfect finish, but I'm more than happy to see you expand their world, I think theres plenty of milage in it yet.

Thanks for sending me to bed horny...sorry that should say happy!!
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby JustSkipIt » Thu Jun 12, 2008 6:18 pm

Yay for Tara. I think it was never going to get done with Willow so good for Tara making the move. And what a move it was. It seemed fast but so nice and fun for them.
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby dlline » Thu Jun 12, 2008 6:32 pm

Kat!

My friend, this was a wonderful way to close this out. Although, I'm thrilled to know that the story will continue. That's great news. I really liked Evey and I'm eager to get to know her a little better.

I really liked the way this update slowed everything down. It was a pretty significant tempo change, but it was a nice way to extend the (pardon the expression) climax. Literary-wise that is. You know what I mean.

I know of your struggles with this part of the story, but the results speak for themselves. Good smut, to me, is the hardest thing to write, but you hit it right on the nose this time.

Big congrats, KJ! Pat yourself on the back for me, okay?

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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby wimpy0729 » Fri Jun 13, 2008 8:16 am

Holy Shit The Bed! Finally, some hot, steamy, dripping wet sex for these two. And you did an amazing job getting them to this point. Thank God for take-charge Tara. She's so hot. Up against the door (OMG), then on the floor, which would've been totally fine by me (maybe next time), but I agree that their first time is definitely bed worthy. And the "I love you's" and candles, so perfectly sweet, and I love how you combined it with the "fuck me's". So many things just kept melting me over and over again til I'm nothing but a very happy puddle.

And of course, TITS, TITS, TITS.

She pulled up the green tank and looked deeply into blue eyes before hungrily sucking a nipple into her mouth. “Tara. Mmm…They’re amazing!”


Oh, yes, yes they are, aren't they? ;-)

Oh, Kat, thank you for sharing this. And did you say there will be more? I'm wiggling in my seat with anticipation, and um, other things.


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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby Zooeys_Bridge » Fri Jun 13, 2008 2:21 pm

Hey-hoe Katamaran! You finally delivered. See? Told you we could wait. And that no one one would care once they started reading. Straight up G, numbers don't lie. (Anyone know that one? S'good.)

Anywho, yowza what an update. They really did take things up a notch.



The librarian hot factor benefits greatly from having this woman steeped in Dewey Decimal System knowledge
consider my lips licked. the upstairs ones.

She felt a sadness almost immediately—not wanting to leave the comfort of simply being in Tara’s presence.
aaah, the pre-goodbye blues. yup.

a whimpering gasp fell from her lips that very nearly sounded like a cry.
guh. where'd my brain cells go?

She felt a spark at her toes, and the fire that had just been lit there was towering up her body and licking at her insides.
I loved that, that...sensation that overwhelmed the body with sheer impossibility. What a great feeling.

And I’m here; falling in love with you, too.”
best. lines. ever. spoken.

“Tara. Mmm…They’re amazing!”
aren't they?

I loved these last bits of Willowbabble before neurons fled her coherent thought brain area:

(Ohgodohgodohgod. Maybe yes-way I can.)
and

(Looks like someone just won the boobie prize!)


So yeah, mighty fine job, F2, you nailed it. Or them, rather. Well done! I'm glad to see the 'Continuing Tales of Willow and Tara'. Friggen sweet.
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby Moonbug » Fri Jun 13, 2008 9:13 pm

Hi Kat!! Can’t stop long but know that I read, loved and was reduced to a senseless buggy puddle by your update. I’ll be back to tell you in a thousand words or less all the ways I loved it.

Despite the best efforts of my computer I’m back!

Wow Kat, this update puts a tick in every box for me with the sexy of Tara pinning Willow up against the door, the sweetness of the I love yous, the adorableness of , well, everything that comes out of Willow’s mouth and the fucking hot as hell which is here in spades!!!

Take-charge Tara is one veeery foxy piece indeed! After her initial heart-achingly sweet self-doubt her smooth self-assurance thereafter is just. so. sexy!!

Tara was frantically pulling at the waistband of Willow’s jeans and latched her mouth just below her ear before sucking deeply on her neck.

I want a Tara hickey!! I’m sure you knew I would love that but I just couldn’t help quoting it.

Does that offer come in a coupon book? And if so, please let there be no expiration date.

in the midst of all that hot, Willow-adorableness!! {{sight}} I can never get enough!

I’m here and I’m yours.” She seductively bit her bottom lip as she slid a finger down in between her breasts, and with the palm of her hand moved over Willow’s tight abs and inside the front of her jeans.

(Tara’s in my pants. I repeat, Tara. Is. In. My. Pants! Someone might want to call the fire department now, because when she gets to my...)

Tara began playing with the soft hairs of her pussy; seemingly surprised to find Willow not wearing underwear. “You mine, my little commando?”

It’s greedy I know but I just HAD to quote the lot cos it was so damn sexy not least of which is Willow going commando. Oh. My. God!!! That does crazy wonderful things to me!!

Tara’s hand dipped further down Willow’s jeans, and she teasingly slipped a finger through her wetness. When she opened her eyes, Tara was sucking the digit in her mouth and Willow nearly came from the sight.

Holy freakin muffins! Willow’s not the only one!!!!! Assuming we’ve slipped into the bizarro world for one crazy second and I wasn’t already there, that blew my brain into a million nonsensical but fucking horny pieces. Just when I think the hot can’t get any hotter you take it up a notch. I can’t even begin to tell you how much I love that but I will show you...which isn’t even remotely as naughty as it sounds.

God, I could go on forever but I won’t. Okay, one more cos it does my head in every time I read it.
“Let yourself go, Will,” she pleaded, and then pushed two fingers deep inside her. “I’ve got you, and I want you to come hard into my mouth.”

It cannot be said enough, take-charge Tara is hot, hot, HOT!!!

See, all the tragic pedestalling is totally deserved, the update was as awesome I knew it would be! You rock and I couldn’t be happier that we’ll be seeing more of your Willow and Tara. I think I may well have jumped on a plane and thrown myself at your feet begging you not to stop if you hadn’t decided to continue so thanks for saving me the expense!

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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby SJ » Sat Jun 14, 2008 3:10 am

Glad Tara took charge,great update :read
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby masterjendu » Mon Jun 16, 2008 11:37 am

Party in Willow’s pussy and everyone’s invited!

My Guinness did you deliver, my friend! The longing in both of them was almost a physical presence itself as Willow got up to leave; hoping Tara would stop her, all of us knowing Tara wanted to. And then she did! And what a way to stop a girl: the booby pin! What I really love is that after such an aggressive move, Tara is hesitant as she beseeches Willow. Even though we’re in Will’s pov, you could still feel the desperation in Tara as she launched herself at her. And with the declarations of love all hesitancy melts (as do all the Kittens!).

And seriously, can you write a more adorable Willow? Working for Tara points, actually looking at Tara’s pearly whites when she has just taken off her boxers, going commando (does she do that often or just when she goes to sprinkle moon dust in Tara’s hair?), her goofy grace, the needy river of ‘yes’, the fact that she feels the need to tell Tara that Tara is fucking her, and of course the tears. This was simultaneously lovely and mind-blowing, Kat.

The dam is bursting, volcanoes are erupting, tiny earthquakes are quivering all along my fault line
Man-o man, I don’t think I can fully express to you what science metaphors do to my fault line!

Thank you so, Kat!

ETA: I totally forgot to try my hand at all the trivia questions embedded here:
1. "Enough of my yapping..." Spinal Tap?
2. Rosie the ratchet set. All I can think of is the Norman Rockwell painting of some WWII 'woman in the workforce campaign'. Big American flag and I think the iconic gal was Rosie. Way off? Or is it Rosie from The Jetsons?
3. "Straight up G, numbers don't lie." Sorry, Rach but I've got nuthin! It sounds like Faith talking to Giles, but I tend to have Buffy on the mind!!!
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby One of a Kind » Mon Jun 16, 2008 3:55 pm

I'll just go with the Whooo hooo for you. :party A really great story, as i said before. And because I'm late again, everything i wanted to tell was already in the feedback. So, i'll not repeat everything, but i have to quote this line:
(Tara’s in my pants. I repeat, Tara. Is. In. My. Pants! Someone might want to call the fire department now, because when she gets to my...)


I fucking love your Willow! And your Tara. I can't decide which one i like more. Maybe, with a few more updates i'll make up my mind. ;-)

And: I promise to read Van Rosenberg, but i will do when i've got the time because it's such a long one. Seems to me that i've got something to look forward to in September. ;-)
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby Artemis » Wed Jun 25, 2008 9:36 am

I see it's been quoted already more than once, but I just have to quote it again: "Tara’s in my pants. I repeat, Tara. Is. In. My. Pants!" That hit the spot for so many reasons - it's funny and Willowy and powerful and sexy and just plain ol' good fun.

I'd definitely love to see a lot more of this Willow and Tara and their wacky little world - there's so much that we got a glimpse of that I'd love to revisit, like (as you say) Evey and Buffy and the pets and Willow's apartment, and... well, everything. Including the scooter. Seriously, I feel like you could go anywhere with this setting and it'd be a hoot. All the weird little quirks and twists and turns you took on the path to getting the two of them together were so much fun in their own right, there just has to be a fully exploration of all of them.
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby Willowtree252 » Mon Jul 07, 2008 8:05 am

:pray :pray :pray :pray :pray please more soon I love this story!!!!! :kgeek
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby Zooeys_Bridge » Mon Dec 01, 2008 5:25 pm

mm'kay this is still really good and things are so freaking quiet here I could scream. (oh, what's that, a desert dust weed blowing in the distance next to a cow skull? and a lone harmonica in the background?)

Just bumping this to a) say hi and b) encourage your writing muse, if she's around at all. I'll name her Clarissa. Maybe she'll explain it all to you.
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby katjetson » Tue Dec 02, 2008 11:44 am

You're super sweet. I'll tell Clarissa you're stopping by to give her a swift kick in the ass.

You know, I had a good chunk of an update written and lost it. I was crushed. That was like, six months ago. Apparently, I was more crushed than I thought. Or, maybe I'm simply being creatively lazy? Still, I always have some ideas kicking around for this version of Will and Tare. Maybe I'll get to that after I finish the fluff consuming me that is Twilight.
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby sadie » Tue Dec 02, 2008 2:26 pm

the blonde enveloped Willow in a warm embrace and whispered in her ear, “I’m gonna make you feel so good.



If I hadn't fainted by then, that definitely would've done it. That was hot! Geeeez!! :D
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby Willowtree252 » Tue Dec 02, 2008 2:36 pm

More , More, More :pinky :pinky :pinky
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 12 Jun 2008)

Postby amazon » Sat Jan 10, 2009 9:29 pm

I still go back to read this wonderful mind-blowing fic every now and than, and it never fails to amaze me. It's just that good! Please update soon :pray
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