Fic: 1st Kiss

[screeminguitar]

Bravo!! Good kitty!! You deserve lots of snuggles and hugs!

Sorry we made you cry! We promise to be nicer. It's just the emotions were reving pretty high there, gee, wonder who got us all worked up??! hmmmmm



Thanks for the beutiful update!



Marie

[halfsmile]

I'm sorry we make u cry, like screeminguitar sayed we try to be nicer, is just that the cliffhanger .



But any way, the wait definitively worthed, I hope they, well ya know....cofcof sex cofcof....



That was great, update soon...



byebye kisses

-Halfsmile-

[hot monkey luv 66]

hiya! this is great! im so glad & got with the 's!! :-) yay them!! more please, possibly willow not being so lucky, and forgetting to lol!... ok more !



~~**Monkey Luv**~~

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Willow:"I'm a breast gal myself...(quieter, to Tara), but then again, you knew that..."

Tara:"Until I realized that was her yummy face"

Willow: "There's something between us. It-it wasn't something I was looking for. It's just powerful."

[The Rose24]

Lovely kiss. Love Willow's thoughts on if she should go any further.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.

[Tempest Duer]

Mmm... about time they got on with the smoochies. That was a wonderfully written kiss.

Choosing not to decide is still a choice.

[Sappho]

Oh, wow. That was beautiful and very hot. I'm really looking forward to more.

~Sappho

Willow: Yeah, that’s me. Reliable dog geyser person.

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Anya: Give me a beer. Bartender: I.D. Anya: [Looks at him w/ disbelief] Bartender: I.D.

Anya: I’m 1,120 years old!!! Just give me a friggin’ beer! Bartender: I.D. Anya: [Sigh] Give me a Coke.

[snuggle79]

Awesome kiss!

snuggle79

This is how everyday should end and start ..and all the stuff in the middle

The greatest thing you'll learn, is just to love and be loved in return.

[Aine]

now see...i'm gonna be true to my word...mucho praise...wonderful... tho i must apologize for my earlier not so good feedback...b/c i probably would've done the same thing, as far as cliff hangers go...well if i could actually write half as good as you do...but i definitely enjoy reading this fic...please write more!! *sheepy smile* sorry 'gain bout my previous feedback...you are an awesome writer...and part of being an awesome writer is keeping the audience hooked...and i'm definitely hooked...



Aine

[intricate mirage]

Yay! It's about time they kissed! Great update!

~ Cassie

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My fountain of strength that never runs dry

You are the shooting star across the midnight sky

[kindagay]

Yay! You don't hate me any more

You're all so lovely when you're not ing me.



I'm afraid this is the last part of 1st Kiss & there is no smut. Sorry to dissapoint, but it is only their first kiss, it's all still very sweet & innocent between them.



Some of you might be interested to know that I've already nearly finished a follow up to this fic, it's entitled 1st Date & should be up in a week or so.



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PART 5 - The Aftermath



Surprisingly, it was Tara who broke the silence. Reluctantly releasing the petite wiccan she lifted her head to stare directly into almost scared green eyes.



“I, couldn’t have, s-said it better, myself.” This statement was accompanied by a timid, lop-sided grin.

“Really?” Although calmed by the words and accompanying smile, Willow still needed reassurance.

“Really. I’ve been r-rehearsing a million different speeches, not one of them came close to expressing what that kiss did.” Tara caressed Willow’s cheek as she spoke; hoping it would ease the redhead’s concerns.

“Oh.” A pause as Willow took in the words. “Oooh.” As she realised exactly what it was that Tara was saying. “You mean you…? That’s what you wanted to…? Ahh, I see.”

“You see?” As yet neither had spoken the words that the kiss had so easily expressed, Tara was desperate to ensure they were both on the same page before she actually took the plunge and revealed the full extent of her feelings.

“Yeah.” Willow frowned at the timid wiccans question; suddenly she was not entirely certain about what was going on. “I think? Do you know what I think?” It was a rhetorical question and no pause was left even if an answer had been required. “I think we should probably talk now. You know? Now that there’s less tension, and anticipation, and nerves, and fear of rejection.”

“I agree. Shall I go first?” The kiss had erased most of Tara’s fears and she now had enough confidence to say what she’d been planning on saying all along.

“Do you want to?”

“Well, last time you went first, we, erm, we didn’t do much talking.”



Willow couldn’t disagree with that, so she nodded for Tara to proceed.



“Well, I think that, that it’s pretty o-obvious that I, uhm, h-have feelings for you. And clearly, y-you’re not f-freaked by the, me being a w-woman, and stuff.”

“Right, but, erm, what does it mean? No, I don’t mean that. What does it make us? Are, are we, girlfriends now? ‘Cos I’d like to be, if, if that’s what you’d like? And, and if we are girlfriends, is it, would it be too early on in the relationship to tell you, to tell you that I love you?”



Lost in a mini-babble Willow almost didn’t realise what she’d just revealed. When realisation did set in she winced as her stomach tied itself into a huge knot and her cheeks turned a shade of red to rival her hair. There was a silence, to Willow it seemed to last forever, in reality it lasted a few seconds. Just long enough for Tara to process Willow’s last three words and think ‘Oh my god, oh my god, I’m dreaming. I must be dreaming.’



“R-really?”



Willow swallowed hard and forced herself to look into Tara’s warm blue eyes before answering.



“Yeah.” Her voice was barely above a whisper and if Tara hadn’t been listening so intently she would have missed it completely.

“Oh Willow.” She grinned. She honestly could not remember ever feeling as happy as she did at that moment. “I love you too. That’s what I w-wanted to tell you.”

“Really?” It was Willow’s turn to doubt her own ears now.

“Really.” The truth of the blonde’s words was confirmed and amplified in not only her voice, but also her whole face.



And now, it was Willow’s turn to grin from ear to ear.



‘Geez Will, could you look any more like a goof? What are you twelve? Or are you trying to repel her? Stop grinning or she’ll decide she doesn’t love you any more. Oh my god! She loves me! She actually said it, she loves me. Wow! Oh, okay, so I am a big goof. Say something dufus. Anything. Ask her out.’



“So, erm, do you wanna go out somewhere, you know, on a, a date?”

“Sure, sounds fun.”

“Cool.”

“Willow?”

“Yeah?”

“C-can I… I mean, w-would it be okay if, if we, kiss again?”

“Of course it’s okay. That’s what girlfriends do.” Willow assured the blonde, her mouth forming another goofy grin.



The End



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Thank you all for reading & a for everyone who left feedback.







PS. For those of you who requested smut, I am working on a smut fic at the moment, so that might make it's way onto the board at some point.

If anyone would be interested in reading it?

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Posh flowers make me feel groovy - My niece

[FIRESIGN]

Very nice! Can't wait to read more!



About the smut fic...sure - we'll read it!



Keep on writing! We'll keep reading!



-CZ aka FIRESIGN

[Spot]

Thanx for a great fic! I cant believe i missed updates for this long! I'd hit my head on the desk, but, kinda already did that earlier, and... ow. Anyway, thanx again, great fic, cant wait for first date!

[Tempest Duer]

Awwww! That was so cute! I love it... and will definitely check out your smutfic once you post it.

Choosing not to decide is still a choice.

[snuggle79]

Very cute ending! Can't wait for your other fics!

snuggle79

This is how everyday should end and start ..and all the stuff in the middle

The greatest thing you'll learn, is just to love and be loved in return.

[intricate mirage]

Awww the ending was just so cute! Keep on writing, would love to read your other fics too!

~ Cassie

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My fountain of strength that never runs dry

You are the shooting star across the midnight sky

[sam darls]

Ahh..yeah, that was so evil and really great at the same time Love sammi xx

[shuyaku]

Great ending I can't wait for 1st Date



You're on my list of must read's

-shuyaku

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"Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

[Arwen276]

Beautiful!

and so cute!!!!



I'm glad there's a follow up!





~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

[kindagay]

Hi all,



I'm so glad you all enjoyed this little creation of mine. I just wanted to say one last thank you so much for all the amazing feedback!



& also, to Shuyaku: YAY! I made someone's must read list! You have no idea how much that means to me.



As I said before, 1st Date should be up some time next week & my smut fic will make it's way on to the board shortly too!



Thanks again for reading



Hugs

Jeanne

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Posh flowers make me feel groovy - My niece

[Incitatua 8]

very sweet story. I totally enjoyed it and I really don't need smut...warm loving sensitive feelings like those in this story are what I crave! I don't really see W/T as being smutty. That's just how I view the two characters.

[maudmac]

New to the archive. You can leave feedback!

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life in plastic / it's fantastic

[CEsgirl13]

great fic! you deserve kissies for tht one!

~Jamie

"I only hunt what wants to be hunted"-CE