The Kitten, the Witches and the Bad Wardrobe Willow & Tara Forever

by **hondos** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 12:31 am

MsKittyB

Yeah for dibs

Sweet...mother...of...all...things...holy!

Whoo-hoo! Way to end a story!

I have to tell you I don't think I have ever laughed as hard in my life as when I wrote this.I don't know why, but I did,

JujuDeRoussie

raises her hand... both her hands!*

*tries to look innocent*

*keeps her hands up... Adds her feet in case it would count*

*falls on her bottom*

*exits the thread all blushing, but hoping to have a wedding night soon*

LOL You must be like me. I really enjoy the :wtkiss

I hope you didnt hurt yourself. Enjoy.

by **Zampsa1975** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 3:30 am

Thanks for the naughty update-y goodness... :wtkiss

by **JujuDeRoussie** » Fri Jan 11, 2008 3:34 am

There it is!

You did it.

See? That the way every story should end! Or almost every story... The one rated NC 17 héhéhé.

mmmm number 7? Whipped cream?

*exits the room looking innocent*

by **nothingtosay** » Mon Jan 14, 2008 9:16 pm

"Well Tara , I think that you should just be honest with her .Tell the truth. Tell her what happened.It's something you'd have to explain to her eventually anyway right. I'm mean it's part of life.It part of nature."

"Me? Me? What about you? It's your fault.This never would have happened if you'd have just closed the damn door."
....
"Are you joking here ? I never said that. I say sweetie. You're the one that says baby. You know it."

"Ohh baby, baby, that's it , right there, right there. Is that very good? Spooky get treat?"

"NO."Willow and Tara yelled at Spooky simultaneously.

that was damn funny! they could have just gone off the hook if they said that spooky heard one of em giving massages to the other. just to omit that part on what kind of massage it was...

holy. flaming. shit.

thats one kinky list hondos...and reallllli.............y hot...

i enjoyed your fic, truly.

by **Guest** » Mon Jan 14, 2008 11:16 pm

The marked difference in the style of AU presented in your fiction was magnetising from the start itself...

I especially liked how you decided to portray Tara's personality and coping mechanisms - her negative undertones camouflaging an intense potential for kindness were what touched me the most.

As for the last humorous instance added...the way these two were going on, I actually thought Spooky had died but thankfully no. The truth turned out to be so so funny :applause

.

And in reference to your last update – way to go for a great writing style :peace

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Vi'

by **lilkitty1389** » Thu Jan 17, 2008 7:54 am

I've just finished reading this story and all i can say is wow. Great group of characters and great storyline. I liked how even though all the stuff Donnie put Tara through she still showed him some compassion. Also little abby is cute. Also horray for spike being the good guy!

Congrats on a really good story!

by **hondos** » Thu Jan 17, 2008 3:42 pm

Hi. Just a little feedback responces here. Wow . It's all so possitive. Thanks so much. I have to tell you I didn't expect it but it sure is flattering.
I had so much fun writing this story, I can't even tell you. But to see people actually liked it , well that's really touching.

Zampsa1975

Thanks for the naughty update-y goodness...

Silly naughty update-y goodness. SMUT A RAMA. Designed to tickle the funny bone and other area's. :paranoid

Ohhhh , smut goood...very good. :thud

JujuDeRoussie

See? That the way every story should end! Or almost every story... The one rated NC 17 héhéhé.

mmmm number 7? Whipped cream?

*exits the room looking innocent*

Yes whipped cream and smut. Two great tastes that go great together. :blush

To late with the innocence thing. We were on to you when you feel out of your chair. ;-)

nothingtosay

that was damn funny! they could have just gone off the hook if they said that spooky heard one of em giving massages to the other. just to omit that part on what kind of massage it was...

I never thought of that. That would work wouldn't it? :blush

holy. flaming. shit.

thats one kinky list hondos...and reallllli.............y hot...

LOL Thanks . Im glad you liked it. Like I said , it's just so strange to me cause I would never in my wildest dreams imaganed that I had that kind of smut in me. :blush

Im so glad you enjoyed it though. Thanks for the feedback.

nimloth

The marked difference in the style of AU presented in your fiction was magnetising from the start itself...

Gosh. That is so nice. I can't believe it. Really, im flattered. Im so glad you liked it.

I especially liked how you decided to portray Tara's personality and coping mechanisms - her negative undertones camouflaging an intense potential for kindness were what touched me the most.

Again with the wow. Thank you.
I really enjoyed writing her charecter and of course having Tara as foundation it was sort of easy. I also was very happy with the way it came out in the end considering the final chapter, not the silly smut chapter , but the Wedding chapter was something I sort of just added at the end in about twenty minutes.LOL
Needless to say, it really brought it around to tie up at the end which was what I had been hoping for, to show how Willow learned from Tara how to forgive.
I was also trying to get a point across , which I think might have been missed , that no matter what , Donny was still a person to her not just a monster. He was her brother. It must be incredably difficult for people with family members in this situation and it has always been something I thought about.

As for the last humorous instance added...the way these two were going on, I actually thought Spooky had died but thankfully no. The truth turned out to be so so funny .

Yes, im glad you enjoyed that. I was hoping to set it up that way. I could never kill Spooky off. He is far to dear to me. I love him to peices.
I just had to have him in my fic. So anyway credit for my baby with the Is that very good, Spooky get treat which is something I hear on a daily basis.Hehe. He's a chunky little guy, to many treats.

Thanks again for your feedback.
Rosemary
lilkitty1389

I've just finished reading this story and all i can say is wow. Great group of characters and great storyline. I liked how even though all the stuff Donnie put Tara through she still showed him some compassion. Also little abby is cute. Also horray for spike being the good guy!

Well thank you very, very much. Im so glad you enjoyed it. I had much fun writing it. The feedback is inspiring . It was possitive si I decided to continue writing other stories and I would never have realized it was this much fun. :party

Thanks so much.
Rosemary

by **maudmac** » Sun Jan 20, 2008 10:59 pm

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by **Willowtree252** » Thu May 01, 2008 11:57 pm

I am wicked sorry for the late feed back. I just finished the whole thing in one evening and I was captivated by your tale. I could relate on so many levels to Tara and her walls. The fact that Willow would not give up until they were torn down in the end just a pile of rubble brought me to the edge of despair and gave me joy at the same time. Despair owing to not knowing if Tara will help her and joy for the pure love they share in such a short time,. I could feel the connection the two had from the start one can only pray for that kind of love. But here you capture it and bring it to life in dance of harmony and passion. you put so much of your self into your story that I can see the interwoven strands of you through out the story. You as a writer is beyond words for me but if I am forced to put it into word I would choose just this one phenomenal bravo My dear friend. :clap