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Re: A Kiss of Love (NC-17) - New Story Post.8/23

Postby Willow Watcher » Mon Aug 28, 2006 8:04 pm

YAY!!! Lots of :wtkiss and hopefully soon something more ;-). Great story! I totally loved the part where Willow went into the Book Store. :lmao...well, I loved all the parts. Update soon please!
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Re: A Kiss of Love (NC-17) - New Story Post.8/23

Postby Willowlover » Tue Aug 29, 2006 11:27 am

THis story is unbelievably awsome I cant wait to read the next update. by the way how is willow gonna break it to the rest of the group that shes dating Tara
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Re: A Kiss of Love (NC-17) - New Story Post.8/23

Postby ruggerchica » Thu Aug 31, 2006 5:25 pm

:party First of I want to thank all the wonderful kittens that have left me much cherished reviews! :party Now more specifically:

Kimmy_s – First of all I can’t begin to express how exited I was for my story to be called “dibs” on. Second of all thank you + thank you + (thank you)^2 for the way you quoted parts of my story and in detail picked out and praised the sections you liked, you have no idea what it means to me to have you, not only like it, but take the time to point out “what” you liked in specific *tear of joy*. I hope you continue to enjoy.

Bluebird – I’m happy you liked the update. What’s better than Willow and Tara sharing a venturous underwater kiss? Sleeping cuddled up in a hammock! If you’ve never tried it I recommend investing in one, and while you’re at it, a house on the beach goes nice with it too ;). Also, I really like Anya in canon, sometimes she get’s a little exaggerated in fanfics, which often is quite funny, but I try to give her character some respect.

Dianneswillowtree – As always, thank you so very much for your consistent support. More kissage on the way – always.

Guppy – Thank you for your encouragement, as I said before doing justice to the characters was a priority when I started writing. As I mentioned in my reply to bluebird I really like Anya’s character and like you said she is still amusing but Anyas are people too. I love the beach, I think it’s so romantic. Hope you keep liking what you read.

Willow Watcher - Muchas gracias! (Spanish for thank you so much). With the trip to the “store” I was trying to accomplish the feeling of timid newness and curiosity. Thanks again for supporting the story.

Willlowlover – Thank you so much. I’ll try hard not to disappoint. How is the gang going to find out? *smiles* keep reading and you’ll find out.

Thanks again for everyone that has taken the time to read and or comment on this story.
You guys rock!

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Update - Chapter 9 & 10

Postby ruggerchica » Thu Aug 31, 2006 5:29 pm

Chapter 9

Willow sat at her computer Thursday afternoon basking in the memories of the previous weekend getaway. The short beach house retreat had given Willow and Tara much craved time to get to know each other better. The stunning blond had turned out to be not only attractive but also intriguing and intelligent.

Willow had agreed to phone Tara earlier that week but had since gotten caught up in her schoolwork. After pondering for several minutes Willow picked up the phone and dialed Tara’s room. An unfamiliar cheery female voice answered, “Tara’s room, how can I help you?”

Willow froze with the set to her ear for a moment. Thoughts of another woman in Tara’s life rushed thru her head and she thought 'I was just assuming, how could I have been so silly, she’s free to do whatever, I never asked her if she was seeing anyone else. I just assumed…'her babbling mind interrupted by the girl’s voice again “Hello?” Willow could hear Tara talking in the background.

“C-could I please speak to Tara, tell her it’s Willow”

Willow could hear the girl handing the phone to Tara and a shy sexy voice emerged from the speaker “Hi W-Willow”

“Tara Hi, How are you? Hope your day is going well…”Willow said, the slightest hint of nerves in her voice.

“I’m doing great, an old girl friend of mine from high school came down to see me” Tara said not noticing immediately what she had said sounded like.

Willow was silent and started feeling anxious about having to compete for the lovely blonde's attention. Tara felt Willow's awkward tension and realized what she had said. “By the way I mean girl friend as in a friend that’s a girl, not a actual girlfriend”

Willow let out a sigh of relief which Tara responded to by saying “I don’t know if you feel the same way, but I’m not interested in seeing anyone else but you Willow Rosenberg” she had managed to get out without a stutter.

Tara could swear she could hear Willow smiling thru the phone. “I feel the same way Tara!” Willow was starting to realize all the new and strange sensation, where those of a love sick puppy. Now that Tara had confirmed that they were indeed dating, several of Willows fears melted away and a few new one surfaced.

“Do you have any plans for Saturday?” Willow hopefully asked Tara.

“I don’t think so… why?” Tara answered.

“Well, I was thinking that maybe you and I could go out on a date. Unless you don’t want to call it a date, or you don’t want to go out, cause we can stay in instead….”Willow babbled.

“I would love to Willow” Tara responded smiling at Willows nervous babblings.

“Great, I’ll take care of it, and pick you up at 10:00 in the morning, or is that to early, cause if its to early we can make it later, like noon or even later...” Willow said cheerily.

"10:00 if fine Willow" Tara interrupted smiling at the redhead's incessant babble.

The girls said their goodbyes on the phone and hung up. Tara jumped onto her bed with excitement, a beaming smile across her face, wondering what the unpredictable Willow would come up with for their date.

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Willow stood in front of Tara's room at 9:45 am Saturday morning. Willow hesitated to knock realizing she was 15 minutes early and not wanting to look overly eager, she head music coming from Tara's room, she could hear Tara singing along and her heart swelled with more desire for the woman with the sweet voice.

Finally, after eavesdropping on the ear candy for an entire song she knocked. The blonde opened the door almost immediately and gave Willow a shy smile. " I-I wasn't quite sure what to wear, is this ok?" Tara asked. Tara was wearing a teal peasant top and some quite nice fitting jeans.

"Your perfect, I mean what your wearing is... good" Willow replied with a faint blush at her Freudian slip.

Both girls headed down to the parking lot of the dorm's where Willow guided Tara to a white neon." I didn't know you had a car Willow" Tara commented curiously.

"My parent loaned me their spare car." Willow informed Tara as she opened the passenger door for Tara. Willow courteously closed the door of the car and walked around to get it. "And the say chivalry is dead" Tara said with a sweet smile in gratitude. Willow smiled, blushed and at Tara in return.

After driving for a while down endless back highways Tara asked "So where are you taking me? Or is that a secret?"

"Well, My grandparent's old house and farm is out here somewhere, if I can find it. My parents still own it, and I'd thought that would be a nice place for a private picnic" She replied nodding her head toward the back seat were a basket and a cooler lay beside a quilted blanket.

Tara sat and admired the driving Willow. Regarding her soft features and sweet lips, amazed at the redhead's thoughtfulness and ability to make Tara's heart race with a simple look.

Willow finally turned onto a dirt road that lead down to a large white farmhouse. The house looked uninhabited but the yard and the land around it seemed kept up. A look of slight sadness crept over Willows face for a second as they entered the driveway. She parked the car and got out to unload the food and blanket.

"Where you close to your grandparents?" Tara asked

Willow answers without making eye contact "When I was a kid I would come out here every summer, I made a lot of memories out here, playing, learning how to hit a ball, swim, you know, kid stuff, and then my grandparents died my parents refused to come out here anymore. Sometimes I come out here to think, or to write..." she trailed off.

"This way" Willow indicated to Tara as they made their way up a footpath toward a wooded area. They walked for nearly half a mile until they were well inside the woods. They reached a sparsely wooded spot when Willow spotted what she was looking for.

"Over here" Willow said with a tone of anticipated excitement. They walked several more feet to find a quite stream of water and a patch of solid light. There where no trees near the stream for at least 20 yards, the entire sky was open letting the glorious Californian sun in. Willow walked over to an log that laid in the middle of the patch of sun and put down what she was carrying examining the log purposefully.

"Yep, this is it" She grinned at Tara and pointed at the log where Tara could make out the initials W.R. engraved in it. "I must have been like twelve when I did that," she added quite fondly.

Tara helped Willow spread the quilt near the log and they both sprawled out on it basking in the reviving sun.

By now, it was close to noon and Willow started to feel hungry. "You hungry yet Tara?" Willow asked. "S-sure, y-yeah, I could eat now" Tara replied absentmindedly, relaxed by murmurs of the nearby stream.

The both ate in relative silence, enjoying the fresh fruits and tranquility of nature. Once they had both had enough to eat Tara sat up with her legs crossed and smiled sweetly down at, Willow who was lying on her stomach with her eyes closed, peacefully listening to the stream.

Tara opened her mouth to speak but chose not to. Her smile broadened and she leaned in to plat a feather soft fill on the redhead's lips. Willow kissed her back immediately losing her breath at the blonde woman's touch. Willow looked up at Tara's smiling blue eyes and asked, "How do you do that?"
"D-do what?" Tara asked innocently.

"Take my breath away, every time" Willow responded sitting up to meet the piecing blue eyes.

"I-I-I d-do-don't...I" Tara attempted a response. Willow noticed the blonde's frustration and came in to save her; she planted a firm wet kiss on those strawberry lips and softly sucked on the blonde's lower lip.

Tara reached her hand up and cupped the back of Willows head, drawing Willow deeper into the kiss. The kissed each other tenderly at first, Willow started gently flicking Tara's lower lip with her tongue. Tara though she was going to scream as she felt, for the first time, the tip of Willow soft tongue slip into her mouth and connect with hers. Tara let out a soft deep moan and Willow quivered at the sound and the vibrations she was getting out of the blonde. They could both feel the wetness start to accumulate as their bodies asked for more.

Just as Willow was reaching up the back of Tara's loose fitting peasant top her pager started vibrating violently. They pulled apart they lips and Willow gave Tara an apologetic look.

Willow took the pager out of her pocket and looked at it. She scowled intensely at the message she read and looked up at the flushed blonde how was pulling the hair out of her face.

"No good? It is serious?" I'm well its a code 6, ten being another apocalypse, but for a six their on their own" Willow said as she discarded the pager and eagerly advanced to resume what they were doing.

"C-Code six could be serious, n-n-No one more than me wants to be out here with you right now, b-but we should probably go and see if they need our.. your help" Tara interrupted the wanted advance.

Willow gave Tara a large genuine smile and pounded on the blonde landing the redhead directly on top of her. She lowered her head and gave Tara a brief yet passionate kiss. Willow broke the kiss and looked down at Tara, her long blonde hair sprawled elegantly all over the quit, her pupils dilated, and her fair skin flushed. Willow remanded on top of Tara for several moments until she realized she was practically panting and the urge to devour the incredible woman were becoming urgent. She kissed Tara's nose lightly before saying "Rain check then?" and only removed herself when she got a 'yes' from a very aroused Tara.

They reluctantly packed up the supplies and headed back to the car hand-in-hand. Both woman wearing large smiles, content to be together and exited for the future.

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Chapter 10

Willow and Tara arrived at The Magic Box to find the rest of the gang knee deep in ancient manuscripts.

"Now, What was so important it constitutes a code six on a lovely ... Saturday afternoon?" Willow asked the gang.

"Giles got a big lead from the counsel on the new big bad in town" Xander answered.

Giles cleared his throat and started to explain "The counsel believes that an ancient order, originated somewhere in Egypt, has re-converged, they also believe that the purpose of this order is to create an dead world on earth"

"A dead world on earth?" Tara asked.

Giles took his glasses of to clean them and continued "They will resurrect all the vampires ever removed from this world"

"Oh" Willow and Tara both responded in unison.

"That would be a lot of vampires" Anya casually interrupted.

"Yeah, and I alone could never handle that..." Buffy added in a pessimistic tone.

"Also, we have reason to believe that it's already started" Giles added.

"Yeah, I swear I killed the same vamp twice yesterday!" Buffy joined in.

"We are in dire need of the reversing spell in case the order is successful in their quest" Giles said addressed Willow. "Could you help us look?"

Willow nodded in agreement and started on the tedious task of searching the interned for further sources of information concerning the newfound evil.

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After endless hours searching the internet and coming up empty handed, combined with the tenderly sleepy look on Tara’s face, Willow opted to go home and call it a night.

It was nearly midnight when they pulled into the parking lot at the dooms. Willow walked Tara up to her room.

“I’m sorry they day turned out like it did Tara, I really was looking forward to some quality time with you, but when your best friend is the Slayer, daily life is just well… this stuff happens, often, lets put it that way… but I promise to make it up to you. And next time I'll not-so-accidentally forget to take my pager with me” she said in babble as she gave Tara a sweet yet sleepy smile.

“I-I , it’s o-ok, I like your friends and what they do is d-different, b-but I’m glad I can be a p-art of it” Tara responded smiling back at Willow from behind a curtain of long blonde hair.

Willow took both of Tara’s hands into hers and pulled her into a hug, resting her head on the blonde's shoulder and inhaling the slightly taller woman’s scent. Tara wrapped her arms around Willow's waist and gave her a squeeze while placing a kiss on the petite woman’s forehead.

“See you tomorrow then?” Willow asked as she broke the much-cherished contact.

“Yeah” Tara answered, contemplating another unspoken question.

Tara raked her brain as Willow turned around to leave to go to her own room. “W-w-willow” Tara called out to the redhead who was just a few feet down the hall.

“Would you l-like t-o s-s-stay, maybe put a movie in?” Tara said, surprising herself with such courage.

Willow had secretly been wishing for this moment. She turned to face those deep blue eyes she had recently gotten so lost in. It was obvious to both girls that neither one of them would make it thru a movie but Willow jumped at the opportunity to spend more time with Tara and felt reassured by Tara’s initiative.

“Actually sure, I had two mochas tonight, I probably won’t be able to get to sleep for a while” Willow fibbed, knowing well that she would fall asleep as soon as she was horizontal. She walked back over and followed Tara into her room, grateful not to have to go home to an empty room, again.

Tara proceeded to light several candles and rummaged thru her limited collection of movies, she named off several movies until they found one they both agreed on. Tara then quickly arranged some pillows at the end of the bed and sat down giving Willow an inviting look, which Willow gladly accepted.

'Field of Dreams' was playing on the small television across the room, but Willow couldn’t focus, all she could think about is getting closer to the breathtaking blonde that was so near. She felt the need to wrap Tara up in her arms, and felling a little bolder she asked Tara if she would like to sit in between her legs using her as a backrest. Tara complied with no hesitation and comfortably nestled herself into the redhead's arms that were securely wrapped around her belly.

The smell of Tara’s hair, resting on her chest, was awakening Willow's senses. Soon the movie was just a background to Willow's attention, she sat entranced watching the blonde's profile in the candlelight. Willow gently moved the blondes golden locks to one side of her face reveling the perfect silky white skin of her neck and shoulder.

Willow, unable to resist the urge any longer, lowered her head allowing her lips to hover over the beautifully exposed skin of her lover. She inhaled the sweet smell of Tara, noticing the slight change in the blonde's breathing pattern. She placed a rose petal kiss on the back Tara’s neck, Tara inhaled sharply and closed her eyes, leaving the movie in the background, and focusing on the gentle lips now her skin.

Willow's craving for more grew with each second. She leaded down further and kissed the irresistible skin this time sucking on it lightly, Tara let out a hardly audible moan and arched her back. Willow felt the vibrations of Tara’s moan in her mouth causing her to suck harder, feeling a nearly animal need for the woman she held.

Willow continued her exploration of Tara, making a trail up to her ear with kisses, she nibbled at the blonde’s ear before taking it into her mouth. Tara was nearly panting by now, the reaction from the blonde fueling the passion that Willow was feeling, shooting pleasure down her spine to her core.

Tara’s senses were overloading her brain she needed to kiss Willow. She turned around in the redhead’s arms and kissed her. The kiss was not urgent at first, it was a slow dance of their mouths, as each moment passed the kiss became deeper and more passionate. They parted their lips for a moment and were locked in to each other’s eyes. The hazel eyes shown bright green with fervor and crystal blue eyes showing deep-rooted passion. Both women trying hard to breathe, while looking at each other with tender desire.

Willow slowly laid Tara down on her back and held herself up, hovering above the blonde admiring the beauty the lay so trustingly before her. She lowered herself onto Tara, her mouth so close to the blonde's that she could feel her sweet breath on her lips. “I love you Tara” Willow whispered and she leaned in to kiss her again.

Tara could feel her heart melt at the same time as her body begged for more. She, with a newfound boldness and urgency slipped her hand up the back of Willow shirt, memorizing the feeling of her soft skin against her hand, she started running her hands up and down each curve of the petite woman’s back. Willow involuntarily arched her back into the contact, Tara’s touch left trails of passion on her skin that burned with desire.

Willow longed for more, more contact, she set herself down to one side of the blonde and proceeded to follow every curve on Tara’s body with her free hand. She explored the woman beside her with a gentle touch, tracing her feminine silhouette with her skillful hands while still not breaking the kiss.

Willow's hand softly caressed Tara’s ribs, working her way slowly up to her wonderfully full breasts. As Willow graced the tip of one of Tara's still concealed nipples Tara let out a deep and audible moan, arching her back, seeking more contact and sending Willow over the edge with desire for the gorgeous blonde.
Willow sat up on her knees and reached for the TV remote, she turned it off, leaving the room solely illuminated by several dim candles. She locked her eyes on the blonde who was intently watching her every move. She slowly pulled her shirt of exposing her perfectly flat stomach and white lacy bra. Tara devoured the redhead with her eyes, examining the woman above, visually tracing every line of her body.

Willow, slightly hesitantly, reached back and unhooked her bra, slowly removing it reveling her small yet supple breast. Tara was beside herself with lust for this woman, she was more beautiful and more perfect that she ever imagined, she felt herself start to sweat at just the young witched appearance.

Willow looked down at Tara with a mixture of love and desire. Tara slowly sat up to meet the redhead. She was hesitant at first, having never been see by anyone, but Willow’s presence was comforting and soon her fears dissolved into those loving hazel eyes.

Tara slowly removed her top and discarded it on the floor next to Willow's. Encouraged by the redhead’s reaction she proceeded to remove her bra reveling perfect full breast that awakened something, previously unknown, in Willow.

Willow, abandoning all process of though, got out of bed and extended a hand to Tara. The blonde took the offered hand and got out of bed standing directly in front of Willow. “I have to know that this is what you want?” Willow whispered, trying hard not to break the mood, but needing to hear confirmation.

Tara looked up at her sweet lover and smiled. “Yes Willow” the redhead's name rolling seductively of her tongue.

Willow, satisfied with the response, closed the gap between their bodies, allowing their breast to touch. Both woman reacted at the touch, their breathing became labored, Willow moaned into Tara’s mouth nearly causing her knees to buckle.

While still submerged in the kiss, Willow reached down and skillfully unbuttoned Tara’s jeans carefully pulling them off. Willow pried herself from the blonde’s sweet lips to look at her. The redhead was awestruck, her eyes widened as she took in sight before her, the blonde’s curves captivated her and made her feel a primal urge to make love to the beautiful woman before her.

Willows jeans joined Tara shortly after. Tara at the sight of the slim yet toned body of her lover felt a rush of braveness come over her as she gently yet assertively led the redhead back onto the bed where she laid her down on her back and straddled her.

Willow had started to sweat, the sight of the usually shy and timid blonde on her made her body scream for more. Tara leaned down kissing Willow passionately, their bodies firmly pressed together. Tara pressed her thigh into Willows wet panties getting a laud moan from the redhead, encouraged by Willow's reaction Tara continued stroking her sensitive groin with her leg.

Willow's moans became louder as she craved the unrestricted contact more and more. She completely let go of any self control that she had left and in a smooth gentle motion rolled Tara over on her back and started feverishly kissing the blonde’s exposed skin, tasting every delightful morsel of Tara’s salty-sweet skin. She laid herself down next to Tara as to give herself a free hand to explore her new love. She gently ran her skillful hands up and down Tara’s damp skin, mentally mapping her lover's body.

The redhead timidly teased Tara’s inner thigh with her thumb causing Tara to inhale sharply. She slipped the tip of her fingers under the lightly damp material pulling it away from Tara’s warm center. Tara could feel the air cool her overheated groin causing her to moan loudly into Willow's nearby ear. Willow carefully and skillfully removed the last barrier between her and her lover. Willow couldn’t help but look down at her lover’s naked body, her eyes wandering over the light curls between her legs.

Willow locked eyes with Tara once more as her hand continues its loving exploration. The redhead’s hand gently stroking the blonde’s stomach until it reached the trail of soft blonde hair leading straight down to her core. She reached the patch curls and stopped, hesitant, she leaned down and kissed Tara, it was a different kiss than before, it was not a kiss of desire or lust, it was a kiss a love. The sensation traveled deep down Willow's soul and harnessed new emotions never felt before.

The redhead’s hand glided further down, she could barely feel the sweet dampness of her lover arousal. She slipped one finger between her lover's swollen lips and felt Tara’s body tense up at the contact. Willow's skillful finger found the blonde’s swollen bud and lightly pressed into her. Tara let out a yelp in pressure as her breathing became erratic.

Encouraged by her love’s reaction she continued stroking her softly, with every stroke Tara’s noises became louder and more intense. Willows hand ventured further down, parting Tara’s tender lips with gentleness. She continued a soft rhythmic stroking as she explored further the most intimate places of her lover, with each moan from Tara, Willow felt her own desire growing. Her tender touch hovered over her lover's most private center.

Willow broke the kiss for one last reassuring look from her lover. In those blue eyes she found nothing but oceans of love and trust. With her eyes fixed on her lover's she slowly entered her, the reaction from Tara almost caused Willow to become overwhelmed with pleasure. The blonde arched her back and closed her eyes, her cheeks fiercely flushed, her arms holding tight to Willow, as she felt the redhead inside of her. The redhead had stopped all movement, almost immobilized by the intense feelings. She pulled out and re-entered her love, this time deeper causing Tara to scream in pure pleasure. She started stocking her lover with long gentle movements, with each second she could feel her body tighten more, she would like to make this feeling to last for ever, but realizing Tara was near she increased the intensity.

The redhead kissed Tara deeply trying, with all she could, to show the stunning blonde how much she really cared about her. The, usually shy, blonde tried to muffle her screams by biting down on Willow's shoulder, but to no success, her body had the reigns. Tara tried hard not to scream, but the feeling of Willow inside of her was overpowering, she felt a burning pressure in her groin build up like nothing she had ever felt.

Willow quickened her pace absolutely engorged in her lover’s reaction. She lowered her head down to Tara’s ear and said in a panted whisper “I love you baby”. Tara immediately felt the pressure overflow and fireworks of pleasure enveloped her body. Willow hung to her lover as she shook and screamed out in bliss. Willow didn’t move for a moment after Tara had stopped and looked down at those baby blue eyes, she was meet with a Tara glowing in joy and adoration. Tara reached up and pulled Willow close to her “I love you Willow” she whispered in a coarse voice.

Willow looked down at her lover and smiled, Tara looked exhausted and beautiful. Her hair was wet with sweat and her cheeks rosy with overexertion. Although Willow did feel a considerable ache in her own groin, she was contented to just lay and hold Tara. She pulled the sheet over them and enveloped Tara tightly in her arms.

Tara exhausted by her lover dozed of to sleep as Willow lay in bed thinking to herself 'I promise no one will hurt you, I’m protect you'. Extremely satisfied with the days events Willow joined Tara in, what now could be called, a early morning nap and smiled at getting to wake up next to, a butt-naked, Tara.
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Re: A Kiss of Love - (Updated 8-31)

Postby taralicious » Thu Aug 31, 2006 8:30 pm

I've just read all you've written so far and wow, that was fantastic.
You have conveyed the essence of all we love and adore about Willow and Tara in such elegant and poetic scenes.
They display such compassion, trust, and respect for each other that tears of joy were welling up in my eyes as I read of their first time.
Hope to read more soon.
Vicarious Willow/Tara smoochies and smut is a welcome security in these troubled times.
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Re: A Kiss of Love - (Updated 8-31)

Postby Amberslover » Thu Aug 31, 2006 10:46 pm

wow...I'm just joining in on this fic and I have to say, I've been missing out! :clap Your writing style is definitely an attention keeper and the story line is fantastic in it's development.

I am a closet romantic and I have to say, this fills my quota for a while... great job and I'll be looking for another awesome update! :pray

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Re: Update - Chapter 9 & 10

Postby kimmy_s » Fri Sep 01, 2006 2:20 pm

ok i'm back and may i say AGAIN what a fantastic update! you never cease to amaze me with your wonderful writing skills. im always thinking after an update that you cant possibly write anything more sweet and captivating but then BAM! comes the next update which gets more captivating and sweet and sensual! i hope you don't mind me quoting my fave bits again i just feel like i should tell you which parts moved me the most.
"Your perfect, I mean what your wearing is... good" Willow replied with a faint blush at her Freudian slip.

awww willow called Tara perfect!! *gush*

Willow informed Tara as she opened the passenger door for Tara. Willow courteously closed the door of the car and walked around to get it. "And the say chivalry is dead" Tara said with a sweet smile in gratitude. Willow smiled, blushed and at Tara in return.

again i gushed at this part. shes a hopeless romantic our willow isnt she?


Willow gave Tara a large genuine smile and pounded on the blonde landing the redhead directly on top of her. She lowered her head and gave Tara a brief yet passionate kiss. Willow broke the kiss and looked down at Tara, her long blonde hair sprawled elegantly all over the quit, her pupils dilated, and her fair skin flushed. Willow remanded on top of Tara for several moments until she realized she was practically panting and the urge to devour the incredible woman were becoming urgent. She kissed Tara's nose lightly before saying "Rain check then?" and only removed herself when she got a 'yes' from a very aroused Tara.

noooooooooooo rain check?? how did Tara say yes to that! i certainly wouldnt!! lol

“I have to know that this is what you want?” Willow whispered, trying hard not to break the mood, but needing to hear confirmation.

that was so sweet of Willow to check Tara wanted to carry on. we all knew the answer though didnt we?

for the next bit: :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud *dashes off for a cold shower*.....
i'm back! this bit is of course my fave bit of all!!! surprising huh? lol!!

Tara exhausted by her lover dozed of to sleep as Willow lay in bed thinking to herself 'I promise no one will hurt you, I’m protect you'. Extremely satisfied with the days events Willow joined Tara in, what now could be called, a early morning nap and smiled at getting to wake up next to, a butt-naked, Tara.
again a lovely paragraph to end the update. you always leave us with an amazing ending paragraph that brings a tear to my eye. also ending on the image of butt-naked Tara kinda helped too! :drool
thank you for this amazing update. you are truly a talented writer. thank you also for the regular updates. i visit the site every day and always get excited when i see this at the top!
ok i think thats enough rambling from me!! *patiently waits for next update* :whistle :impatient
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Re: A Kiss of Love - (Updated 8-31)

Postby kivrin » Sat Sep 02, 2006 7:21 am

OoOoOh amazingly sweet. I just loved this update. you've wrote a perfect 'sex-love' scene, so beautiful and sweet!!!
congratulations!
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Re: A Kiss of Love - (Updated 8-31)

Postby bluebird » Sat Sep 02, 2006 7:35 am

:wave

Sorry not to give feedback on this sooner, but my 'puter was sickly and had to be taken to the computer doc's to get some shots. Alls well now she's as good as new!


but I get to come back to an update so :pinky :pinky :pinky

aww Will's such a romantic to take Tara out for a picnic - very cute - though I kinda thought Tara was gonna take out a knife to add

WR
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TM

and thier first time was written very well but I'm soooo jealous of Willow cause she gets to wake up with butt-naked Tara.

Why aren't there enough butt-naked Taras to go around, or Willow should learn to share..... hmmm maybe that's not very likely don't wanna get on the wrong side of Red now do I? :seesaw

great update!!!
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Re: A Kiss of Love - (Updated 8-31)

Postby sam » Sat Sep 02, 2006 1:22 pm

This is beautiful so far.
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Re: A Kiss of Love - (Updated 8-31)

Postby Guppy » Sat Sep 02, 2006 1:51 pm

Such a sweet date. Too bad the pager had to interupt it. Obviously it still worked out well for our girls. That was a beautiful love scene.
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Re: A Kiss of Love - (Updated 8-31)

Postby willohand » Sat Sep 02, 2006 5:19 pm

Yup this is just as sweet as it was the first time I read it aon the other site.
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Replies and thanks to all the wonderful kittens!

Postby ruggerchica » Wed Sep 06, 2006 9:10 pm

Thanks once again to all the kind kittens that have taken the time to review the story, it means a great deal to me to get feedback!

Now more specifically:

taralicious - Thank you soooo much! I never imagined that anyone would ever call my writing "fantastic" and for that I'm very grateful. I tried my best at conveying the true love and connection, in this way bringing justice to the characters. I'm joyful that you have enjoyed it so far, and I'll do my best to not disappoint. Thanks again!

Amberslover - Thanks so much! I have to admit that I am somewhat of a hopeless romantic (if you couldn't already tell). I'm delighted that you think my writing style is good, as my first attempt to write, I was concerned that the writing would be sup-par, and it offers me great deal of hope that you enjoy it.

Kimmy_s - Thank you ever so much! I thoroughly enjoy your reviews every time! I'm so very happy that you like my writing style. Did I mention I am an engineering student? and am just now letting my artistic side surface. In addition, I especially like it when you quote! Your feedback is ever so constructive! Thank you!

kivrin - You're too kind! Thanks! In the love scene, I tried to convey a "tastefully explicit" representation of what it is like to "make love" I'm so glad you liked it!

bluebird - Hi! Sick computers bad, glad it's all better now! Good thinking on the trunk carving (WR+TM), maybe they will get a un-interrupted chance later on. You probably don't want to be getting on the Red's bad side, but we should all me so lucky to wake up to butt-naked Tara's. Thanks for the support!

sam - Thanks! + + + +

Guppy - Thanks! Pagers a never a good thing to bring on a date, specially when your with a exceptionally gorgeous blonde, but in the end everything works out for the best. I'm glad you enjoyed the scene.

Willowhand - It's amazing to me that your reading it twice, I'm very flattered! Thanks!

Thanks, again to everyone that has left reviews. You are all to kind. I welcome with much excitement all comments, and feel free to be critical if there is something lacking (or if i plain have to many spelling/grammar errors).

You are all great kittens, feel free to drop me an email (jfayem@gmail.com) or add me on msn (jessi_2000@hotmail.com), if you ever just want to chat.

In addition, I want to thank my wonderful beta reader:
May my writing not reflect poorly on how much I love you.

Thanks again to all!
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Update - Chapter 11

Postby ruggerchica » Wed Sep 06, 2006 9:11 pm

Chapter 11

Tara woke to find a small puddle of drool on the redhead's shoulder. Willow was still fast asleep. The blonde looked up at her alarm clock to see it was nearly noon. She slipped out of bed, careful not to wake the sleeping beauty that had held her all thru the night and threw some clothes on.

Tara glanced back at the peacefully sleeping redhead in her bed one last time, and smiled, before leaving to acquire some food from the cafeteria.

Willow woke shortly after Tara had left to notice the absence of her lover. She sat up in a drowsy panic 'I hope I did not do anything wrong' she worried. She anxiously got up and put on her clothes, wondering if the events of last night had in some way been less meaningful to the blonde has they had been to her.

Willow was tying her shoelaces and getting ready to leave when Tara walked in through the door with two cups of fresh coffee and a bag of bagels. "G-Good morning, honey," Tara said sweetly, enjoying the way the words sounded.

Willow smiled and all sense of alarm left her as she looked up at the beaming blonde.

"Hungry?" Tara inquired.

"Starved," Willow responded, a shy smile creeping up her face.

The girls ate in a slightly awkward silence, occasionally exchanging looks that told them all was ok in the world because the other girl was there too.

"I'd like to go back to my hall and take a shower...you could come over later, if you'd like, and we could do some more research, unless you have stuff to do, in which case I totally understand..." Willow babbled.

"S-sure. I'll come over later," Tara replied giving Willow a look of adoration.

"Great!" blurted Willow, who was in no way trying to conceal her delight.

***

Willow had showered and was now destroying her closet in the process of looking for something to wear. She finally decided on a pair of loose fitting jeans and a green low-cut blouse.

She had just seated herself at her computer when she heard a soft tap that signaled someone was outside her room. She rushed to the door and opened it to find Tara, who was dressed in a flattering blue peasant top and a long flowing skirt.

"Tara, you look really... beautiful," Willow complimented her new lover as she led her into the room.

Tara blushed, not used to receiving greetings of that sort, and found herself a seat on Willow’s bed. Willow walked over to Tara and knelt down beside her. Looking up at the set of baby blue eyes she added, "You do know you’re beautiful, don’t you?"

Tara, slightly uncomfortable at the newfound attention, looked down at her hands as her blush deepened. “A-are you sure you don't need glasses, Willow?" she asked jokingly.

Willow got up and lightheartedly smacked the blonde woman on the shoulder as she bent down to give her a sweet kiss. "No," she whispered as their lips parted.

Willow walked over to her desk and sat down at her computer. "Ok, let’s see if I have any better luck today," she said as she started typing.

Tara stood up and walked over to the desk, curiously looking over Willow's shoulder at the screen. "Considering how little we really know about the 'cult' I don't see how Giles expects you to find anything useful," Tara commented.

"Yeah, but you know Giles, he always thinks the end of the world is around the corner..." Willow added, looking frustrated, yet amused.

Tara rested her hands on the redhead's shoulders and started to slowly massage the tense muscles she found there. Willow's attention was soon diverted from the computer screen to the skillful hands of her lover. She leaned back to look up at Tara, the blonde looked down at her lover with a sweetly mischievous grin and lowered her head, giving Willow a gentle kiss on the lips. The kiss reignited the intense feelings from the night before.

Tara, with uncharacteristic and newfound boldness slid her hands down the front of Willows body, sending pleasure signals to many of the redhead’s nerve endings. Willow quivered with delight, her body reminding her of the tension it still had stored up.

The blonde, in one swift motion, turned the armless office chair around. She carefully hiked up her skirt and lowered herself onto a pleased Willow. 'What goddess did I please?' was all Willow could think as Tara wrapped her long legs around her waist and sat up tall.

Willow, mesmerized by the blonde's daring move, wrapped her arms around the woman who was positioned seductively on top of her. She arched her neck to meet those perfectly supple lips that hovered inches above. Tara held the back of Willow’s head as she started to kiss her softly with restraint. The kiss soon became more passionate, they held each other closer and the dorm room and all its contents blurred into the background.

Suddenly they heard the sound of a key in the door. Tara was so startled that she leaned back and fell on the floor just in time to see Buffy enter the room. "Hi, Will... Oh, hi Tara," Buffy said as she observed the blonde lying on the floor near a flushed Willow.

"Um... are…you ok, Tara?" Buffy asked, confused.

"Y-Yeah, I'm fine, j-just fell off the bed. I'm really clumsy like t-that," Tara responded, trying her best to sound casual and repress the fierce blush that was creeping up her face.

Willow found the look on her lover’s face so endearing she could not help but smile.

"What are you looking so happy about, Willow?" Buffy asked, noticing the extra-chirpy mood her friend was in.

"I'm…something...I'll tell you later..." Willow replied cryptically, trying to stifle a giggle.

"Ok" Buffy said giving the girls a suspicious look. "I'm going over to see Riley, he said we need to ‘talk’. I hate it when they said that..."

The girls nodded in agreement, as Buffy grabbed her jacket and headed back out door.

After Buffy had left, Willow looked at Tara, who had picked herself up off the floor and was now sitting on the bed trying not to laugh. "Now, where were we?" Willow asked with a playful grin before pouncing on an unsuspecting Tara, laying her down on the bed and coming to rest on top of the accommodating blonde.

Tara looked up at Willow with crystal blue eyes. "Miss Rosenberg, what has gotten into you?"

Willow placed a tiny kiss on her lover's nose and responded, "You."

A huge smile crept over Tara’s face as she thought to herself 'Not yet,' and rolled the unexpecting redhead over on her back. The desire to make love to the woman below her was becoming too great to ignore much longer. Although she still had some inhibition from her lack of experience, the chemistry between them was overpowering her. She started to unbutton the redhead's blouse, while not breaking eye contact from her trusting lover.

Willow felt slightly self-conscious in the brightly lit room. She looked up at the magnificent blonde above her. The blue eyes spoke only of love and desire, making all of Willow’s fear melt away.

Tara finished unbuttoning Willow’s blouse and opened it up, exposing the lacy pink bra underneath. She leaned down and started a trail of kisses over the redhead's abdomen and ribs, carefully poking her tongue under the edge of the bra. Willow’s breathing became labored as she felt the blonde's hair cascade over her midsection.

Tara, noticing that the petite woman's bra was front clasping, relieved the redhead's breasts from their material restrictions and proceeded to kiss every inch the soft skin exposed. She took one of Willow’s nipples in her mouth and lightly sucked on it, causing her to arch her back and whimper with enjoyment, bolts of pleasure coursing up and down her spine. Tara reached over with her free hand and started gently teasing Willow's unattended breast.

The blonde, while still gently sucking on Willow’s nipple, reached down with a skilled hand and started undoing her jeans. She managed to remove the offending clothing and started her slow decent, placing feather soft kisses down the redhead’s body. When she reached her lover’s panty line she stopped and noted the sweet sent of her arousal. Tara hesitantly nibbled at the soft fabric and looked up at her lover who was now sweating and breathing hard.

Willow felt the irresistible urge to kiss the stunning blonde that was causing her such unparalleled excitement. She pulled Tara up and kissed her. The kiss deepened as their tongues danced, running the gamut of emotions from lust and desire back to a kiss of love. Tara finally tore herself away from the redhead's lips, eager to continue her recently interrupted exploration.

Tara slid her hand down her lover's torso. She traced the outline of Willow’s hips with her hand and slid it under the soft material, pulling it carefully down. She then lowered herself to the patch of curls. Willow panted with anticipation as she felt her lover’s breath on her inner thighs.

The blonde moved her head further, letting the tip of her tongue rest on the crest of her lover's sex. She slowly slipped her tongue in between the sweet folds, nervously gauging the redhead's response. Willow immediately reacted with an audible moan, which she was tried in vain to muffle with a nearby pillow. Tara, encouraged by her lover’s response, began a slow and gentle exploration of Willow’s sex. Finding Willow’s swollen clit and pressing her tongue firmly into her. Willow held her breath and let out a primal groan. She had never imagined so much pleasure in her life. The feeling of Tara's soft mouth on her was overwhelming her, so much so that she could not control the noises she was making.

Tara felt an urgent need to be inside the now quite vocal Willow. She skillfully brought her hand up near her chin and started teasing the redhead's most intimate place. Her mouth sped up its gentle stroking as her hand inched closer to penetration. Willow's hips bucked, Tara could feel the tension in her lover building close to the point of release.

Tara reached up with her free hand and took Willow’s hand into her own. Willow grasped Tara's hand firmly as shrieks of ecstasy escaped her lungs. Tara entered her lover with two fingers, the redhead let out of a cry of pleasure and her breathing became shallower and labored. The blonde started rhythmically stroking Willow’s g-spot and clit in synch. Willow no longer had control over her body as she felt a sharp explosion of pleasure overwhelm her and screamed into the nearby pillow, "T-Tara!"

Tara went deep into her lover as she came. She held her hand and looked up at Willow from behind a sweaty cascade of hair. Once Willow stilled, Tara moved up to envelope the redhead with her arms. Willow looked up at Tara with pure adoration. "Wow," she said and she tried hiding an embarrassed smile, "You…you’re something else Tara Maclay."

Tara blushed as she bent down to whisper into Willow's ear, "I love you, Willow." Now speechless with feeling, Willow looked at Tara and let her eyes do the talking.

The blonde, propped up on her side next to Willow, reached down with her free hand and started gently tracing the redhead’s jaw line. She looked into two hazel eyes and opened her mouth to speak. “Y-you have no idea what you do to me, Willow,” and she leaned down to give her an Eskimo kiss.

“I think even the neighbors know what you do to me,” Willow responded, her cheeks flushing a flattering shade of pink. Tara gave Willow a grin and pried herself away from her love.

“If we keep this up, we’ll never get anything done. Not that I’d complain,” Tara reminded Willow as she gave her an adoring look.

“I guess…If I have to…I’ll let go of you, once in a while, like for going to the bathroom or class, or maybe to go to your room,” Willow said jokingly as she wrapped her whole body around the blonde woman.

They lay there relaxed and cuddled up on Willow’s tiny bed for few more minutes. Only when Willow’s VCR suddenly whirred to life across the room, startling them, did either of the women consider moving.

“Oh, hey,” Willow began, “must be seven already. I set it up to tape the new episodes of 24.”

“Really,” Tara said, surprised, “I never would have figured you for a Jack Bauer fan.”

“Well, it’s not so much Jack as Chloe that I li…” Willow trailed off. “Not that she’s got anything on you. It’s just one of those things on my geeker enjoyment list that’s still got me hooked.”

She smiled and beckoned her lover for a kiss before they untangled themselves from the mass of limbs in which they had become intertwined. Willow stood and stretched and Tara followed suit as she remembered her academic obligations. “I really need to get some schoolwork done…Call me later?” Tara said as she gathered her things.

“Absolutely, gorgeous…” Willow replied with a wink.

Tara gave Willow a kiss goodbye and left the room. As soon as Tara had shut the door behind her, Willow broke out into a goofy dance to no music and lay back down on her bed, a huge smile plastered on her face. ‘I’ll just close my eyes for a few…’ she thought as she drifted off into a peaceful sleep.
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Re: A Kiss of Love - Updated 9/6/06

Postby Guppy » Wed Sep 06, 2006 11:51 pm

DIBS! I'm took drunk to leave feedback.. I'll be back tomorow
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Re: A Kiss of Love - Updated 9/6/06

Postby Amberslover » Thu Sep 07, 2006 4:42 am

While I don't share Guppy's comment (believe me, right now I wish I did) I can leave feedback, so I am...This story rocks! I love that you made the characters similar to the canon but changed them just enough that we get a feel for the relationship, not just little glimpses of the sweet moments. Does that make any sense? I don't know, it's early here and I have class in like, twenty minutes. Good job and I'll be eagerly awaiting an update! :clap :flower

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Re: A Kiss of Love - Updated 9/6/06

Postby Willowlover » Thu Sep 07, 2006 5:24 pm

I loved this update. I agree with everything Amberslover said and i dont think i could have stated it any better.
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Re: A Kiss of Love - Updated 9/6/06

Postby taralicious » Thu Sep 07, 2006 5:35 pm

RC,
Is it just a fetish of mine or would you lap up that puddle of drool on Willow's shoulder because even the minutest trace of Willow fluid would taste like strawberries from a patch in heaven.
But I digress...
Like the mark of a true wordsmith, these are a Willow and Tara we can identify with as they have their various neuroses and hang-ups much in evidence.
Tara leaves Willow's warm embrace to play hunter/gatherer after their lengthy love-making session the night before has left them famished and in need of hydration.
Upon awakening to find a Tara-shaped dent in the bed where her physical form once laid, Willow takes more than a small step and finds the conclusion that she must have been less than arousing in the lovemaking department or why would Tara have left.
The natural reaction for those lacking in self-confidence is always to ask oneself "Is it me?"

The girls ate in a slightly awkward silence, occasionally exchanging looks that told them all was ok in the world because the other girl was there too.


This line speaks volumes in a way that only non-verbal communication can, a stolen glance, a shy smile, their actions speaking far louder than any words could convey.
In the next scene where Tara goes to Willow's dorm room, we see Tara's lack of self-worth on display as she does the hang her head and let her hair cover up her striking features defense mechanism of swhich she is so adept.
Willow pries her hair apart like peering at a lost city through thick brush and reassures Tara that she is beautiful and unique like a snowflake.
You write scenes of love and passion with such tenderness and urgency that I feel voyeuristic both reading and commenting upon them.
Please don't stop with the Willow/Tara smut however. I need my vicarious lovin.'
Back to another fetish of mine but I love your descriptions of what they're wearing and passages of them undressing each other i.e, the color of their bras and panties and front-clasping goodness.
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Re: A Kiss of Love - Updated 9/6/06

Postby Brianna » Sat Sep 09, 2006 6:13 am

I really like this update!!!! Here's an anxious reader waiting for more!!!
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Re: Update - Chapter 11

Postby kimmy_s » Sun Sep 10, 2006 2:02 pm

hey ruggerchica! sorry for the lateness of the feedback you may punish me how you see fit ;-) lol! i've added you to my msn list so message me sometime and we can chat. engineering student huh? i'm guessing civil engineering because you mentioned designing. if it is then damn! cos i was picturing over alls and dirty cars :drool *shakes images out of head* anywayon to the update:
Tara woke to find a small puddle of drool on the redhead's shoulder.

yummy Tara drool! (i know its weird but i find it sexy)

Willow woke shortly after Tara had left to notice the absence of her lover. She sat up in a drowsy panic 'I hope I did not do anything wrong' she worried. She anxiously got up and put on her clothes, wondering if the events of last night had in some way been less meaningful to the blonde has they had been to her.

aww Willow got all nervous cos Tara wasn't there when she woke up. its soooo sweet.

Willow was tying her shoelaces and getting ready to leave when Tara walked in through the door with two cups of fresh coffee and a bag of bagels. "G-Good morning, honey," Tara said sweetly, enjoying the way the words sounded.

Willow smiled and all sense of alarm left her as she looked up at the beaming blonde.

again aww firstly at how Tara called Willow honey and secondly at how Tara can make Willow feel calm just by smiling at her.

The blonde, in one swift motion, turned the armless office chair around. She carefully hiked up her skirt and lowered herself onto a pleased Willow. 'What goddess did I please?' was all Willow could think as Tara wrapped her long legs around her waist and sat up tall.

:thud :drool mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Suddenly they heard the sound of a key in the door. Tara was so startled that she leaned back and fell on the floor just in time to see Buffy enter the room. "Hi, Will... Oh, hi Tara," Buffy said as she observed the blonde lying on the floor near a flushed Willow.

phew that was close! i would have loved to have seen Buffy's face if she had caught thm though.

"Y-Yeah, I'm fine, j-just fell off the bed. I'm really clumsy like t-that," Tara responded, trying her best to sound casual and repress the fierce blush that was creeping up her face.

very believable excuse. trust me it happens if you're as clumsy as me! :blush

“I think even the neighbors know what you do to me,” Willow responded, her cheeks flushing a flattering shade of pink. Tara gave Willow a grin and pried herself away from her love.

lol! this made me laugh profusely.

Tara gave Willow a kiss goodbye and left the room. As soon as Tara had shut the door behind her, Willow broke out into a goofy dance to no music and lay back down on her bed, a huge smile plastered on her face. ‘I’ll just close my eyes for a few…’ she thought as she drifted off into a peaceful sleep.

again a lovely ending to this update. :lmao for the goofy dance.
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Re: A Kiss of Love - Updated 9/6/06

Postby UnlikelyEngineer » Sun Sep 10, 2006 6:07 pm

Yay for this awesome story!!

ruggerchica, if you ever find yourself passing through Toronto, would you give me the pleasure of your hand in marriage???

Cheers,

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Re: A Kiss of Love - Updated 9/6/06

Postby bluebird » Tue Sep 12, 2006 1:48 am

Hey ruggerchica that was an excellent update :wtkiss

Aww but doesn't Buffy just have the worst timing ever, bad Buffy :smash


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Thanks

Postby ruggerchica » Wed Sep 13, 2006 5:27 pm

Hi! Glad y’all enjoying the story, thanks for all the positive reviews.

More specifically:
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Guppy : Get home drunk and check for updates on the board? You rock! :party
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Amberslover :
This story rocks! I love that you made the characters similar to the canon but changed them just enough that we get a feel for the relationship, not just little glimpses of the sweet moments. Does that make any sense?

You rock for thinking so! Glad to hear that the characters coming across well. You positive feedback means so much to me. :peace
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Willowlover – Gracias! Your approval does not fall on deaf ears.
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Taralicious – Your review in it self is a work of art. I can imagine it as in a “special features” commentary voice over of the “episode”. I highly applaud your play-by-play analysis of the story, giving me a unique insight at how you perceive things to happen, which I am happy to say is how I intended them to. Your review alone makes me want to read some of your work, I can tell you’re a talented writer and I’m truly touched by your compliments. ;-)
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Brianna - Thanks! And more you will have! Hope you like it!
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Kimmy_s : You crack me up every time Ms. Kimmy_s. Actually I’m a mechanical engineering student, so your not too far off on the “over-alls and dirty cars”. I added you to messenger also, hope to see you online sometime. Again, I absolutely love the way you point out the quotes you like, some of which are my favorites

“I think even the neighbors know what you do to me,” Willow responded, her cheeks flushing a flattering shade of pink. Tara gave Willow a grin and pried herself away from her love.


Ever lived in the dorms? Those walls are paper thin, no kidding.
Again, thanks for the awesome reply.
ruggerchica does a goofy dance :party
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UnlikelyEngineer – Perhaps, How is next may for you? :blush
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Bluebird – Thanks. Buffy (and roommates in general) always seems to either have really good t or really bad timing, in this instance bad. Ever had a roommate?

Thanks again to all.
Hope you keep liking what you read!

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Chapter 12

Postby ruggerchica » Wed Sep 13, 2006 5:29 pm

Chapter 12

Willow woke up at the sound of the phone ringing. She sat up and noticed that the sun had already gone down. 'Was I that tired?,' she asked herself as he got up to answer the phone.

"Hello, Willow and Buffy's room," Willow answered, trying to repress a yawn.

"Willow, you need to get over to the Magic Box NOW!" Xander's voice emerged from the receiver with an alarming tone.

"What? What's going on, Xander?" Willow asked, suddenly feeling much more awake.

"We'll explain when you get here... just be very careful getting here.. and hurry... and you might want to get Tara too," Xander finished in one breath, the urgency escalating in his voice.

"Ok, ok, I'm coming," Willow said as she hung up the phone, grabbed her jacked and headed out the door to find Tara.

Willow ran to Tara's dorm room, finding an unpleasant note on the dry erase board that hung on the blonde's door:
Painting in art studio -
Basement of Cooper Hall room 201 until 10pm.
-Tara

Willow headed for the building, which, if she remembered correctly, was all the way on the other side of campus. She left the dorm building to find the air outside to be unusually cold, she could see her breath as she walked briskly in the direction of the art building.

The redhead crossed the desolate courtyard in the middle of campus. She looked around at the empty benches, noticing the absence of people. There was an uneasy feeling in the air that cause her to jog the rest of the way.

She reached the basement art laboratories out of breath. Willow swung the heavy door open, relieved to find Tara standing in front of canvas with paint splattered overalls and a white t-shirt. Tara looked up, startled, with concern in her eyes.

"W-Willow, what's wrong? Is everything ok?" Tara asked as she approached the still panting redhead.

"Doom... lots of doom.. must go...now," was all Willow could say in-between shallow breaths.

As they left the art building Tara wrapped her bare arms around herself. "When did it get so cold? And where is everybody?" she asked as they both looked around the unusually empty campus.

Willow quickly took off her jacket and put it on Tara. "I don't know, but we better get to the Magic Box soon. Something just doesn't feel right..." Willow whispered, as not to be heard by some invisible enemy.

The girls walked hastily, their breaths mingling in the air above them on this queer, cold night. They finally reached the dorm’s parking lot where they quickly got into Willow's borrowed car, which she had gladly ‘forgotten’ to give back, and took off toward the Magic Box.

The streetlights suddenly flickered, then turned off completely, leaving the girls driving in the dark empty street with only their head lights shining on the road ahead. As quickly and as the lights shut off they turned back on, revealing a dreadful sight: vampires, more than Willow had ever seen combined. The vampires, drawn by the light, started chasing the car, trying their worst to break in.

Willow quickly hit the gas and started to swerve, trying to shake of the multitude of unwanted passengers off of her parents’ car. "You put one scratch on this car and my parents will make you wish you were vanished!" Willow screamed at them.

Tara could not help but giggle a little, even in the face of danger Willow could always keep her sense of humor.

"What? You think I'm joking?" Willow grinned at Tara while trying to run over all the demons on the road. Tara's smile soon vanished as she realized they were near the Magic Box and Willow was showing no signs of slowing down.

"Hold on," Willow warned as she slammed on the brakes and swerved the car into the building, pinning several unfriendly demon bodies in the process. Willow reached into her jacket, now on Tara and pulled out to wooden crosses.

"Ok, on the count of three we run to the door and hope they are still in there to let us in," Willow said, her breathing becoming harder as the adrenaline pumped through her veins.

Tara nodded in understanding while looking at the cross in her hand. She was scared and Willow could sense it, as if the fear was her own.

"It'll be ok. I won't let anything happen to you...” Willow said trying to sound strong and reassuring.

"I'm not worried about me Willow, I'm afraid for you... I..." Tara's words were interrupted by a set of soft sweet lips over her own. Willow pulled back and looked at her lover. Tara nodded and started to count. "One...Two…"
"Three." Willow finished the count as she opened her door and helped Tara out of the car. They made a quick dash to the door and pounded on it. The door immediately opened and they both fell inside just in time. Giles and Xander fought to close the door behind them, finally shutting the door after much effort and some help from Buffy.

"What took you so long, Willow?" Xander asked with his usual grin.

"Oh, not much, the usual... storm of Vampires everywhere... you know how it goes," Willow answered, relieved that they were both safe for the time being.

"Yeah, I hear vampires are bad this time of year," Xander continued with a playful tone.

Giles, looking very displeased and worried, interrupted their lighthearted conversation. "I don't know if you realize the severity of the situation. Try to imagine every vampire that ever was, located all at once in Sunnydale."

The gang sat in silence, absorbing the size of the problem with which they were dealing.

"OK," Buffy stood up to break the somber silence, "Ok, we know the problem, so now we find the solution and send the pack of demons back to demon bedy-by-land..."

"Well, Buffy, that's just it, it's not that easy," Giles said in a somber voice as he took is glasses off to clean them, once again.

"The resurrections are being made by dark and strong magic, they have only just begun, and by the time we find a witch or a sorcerer strong enough to cast the counter-spell, it could well be too late," Giles continued, carefully placing his glasses back on.

Anya suddenly stood up in realization, "What do you mean, this is just the beginning? Are you trying to tell us that there will be more and they will come in and trash my perfectly organized store?"

"I wish the store was the only thing we had to worry about, Anya," Giles responded, raking his brain for a solution.

"Giles, have you found a counter-spell that would work?" Tara said shyly as all eyes in the room reverted to her.

"Well, yes, but it’s more like 'maybe'. I have found a counter-spell that might work, but like I said it would take an incredible powerful witch or..."

"Could I look at it, please?" Tara interrupted.

"Yes, of course..." Giles replied to the unexpected request.

Tara took the heavy bound book and sat down at the table. Willow looked at her lover from across the room, marveling at her long flowing hair neatly tucked behind her ears.

"Willow," Xander interrupted.

"W-What?" Willow answered absentmindedly.

"Are you ok? You seemed kind of... out there," Xander asked with some concern in his voice.

"I'm ok... Just thinking..." Willow replied as she walked to investigate what it was her lover was so engorged in.

Tara looked up at Willow with a stern look on her face. "I want to try it."

Giles, overhearing the blonde, said, "You can't Tara, the powers invoked by this spell are far too strong, it would he hard for the most powerful of witches and would most likely kill you."

"The way I see it, we have no other choice," Tara coolly replied as she looked out the shop window at the hordes of hungry vampires.

Anya too looked out the window and quickly got to her feet. "Tara, give me a list,” she commanded, “I'll let you pay me later."

"Good, then it's settled," Tara replied, "I saw one of the ingredients in the basement, I'll go get it," Tara said as she slipped her hand into Willow's and tugged. Willow followed the blonde down into the dusty cold basement.

"Baby, please don't do this, I just found you, and now your asking me to risk losing you," Willow tried to reason with her lover, "We'll find another way... please don't do this."

Tara could see a lone tear running down the side of Willow's face in the dim light of the basement. She leaned in and kissed the salty drop.

"You know there is no other way," Tara whispered into the nearby ear.

Willow reached out and hugged Tara. "I love you, and I'll totally kill you if something happens to you."

Tara pulled back and smiled at the redhead, the door to the basement opened and a panicked Anya yelled down, "Come on, before we're all dead and my shop is destroyed!!!."

Tara leaned in and gave Willow a firm yet gentle kiss before ascending up the stair in a forced hurry.

Tara created a circle of charms and salts on the shop floor. She looked one last time at the spell and entered the circle. The entire gang stood around her in silence holding their breaths. The vampires were close to breaking down the door, and seem unbothered by the large amounts of crosses surrounding the windows and entryway.

Tara held out her hands and began a silent chant. Willow could hardly bear to look, as Tara's face started to become flushed in strenuous meditation.

Tara's chant was becoming progressively louder, but the blonde started to look pail and sway. Large beads of sweat were accumulating on the blonde witch's face. Willow could look no longer.

Without thinking, Willow instinctively entered the circle and took hold of Tara's hands, much like they had done several weeks before. She instantly felt a jolt of magic enter her body. She looked up to see Tara's eyes barely opened and a remnant of a smile at the edge of her lips.

Willow, with her last oz. of strength leaned into Tara and whispered, "I love you" before bringing her lips less than and inch from Tara's. Tara looked at Willow and closed her eyes in concentration while leaning into the redhead's lips.

The gang held their breath as a pulse of light eradiated from the couple.

Sunnydale was suddenly silent. Anya looked out the window and was extremely relieved to see that the demons where nowhere to be seen, she walked over to her cash register, "We are going to be ok pretty ones."

The rest of the gang stood with their jaws to the floor, looking at the girls who still had their lips locked. Giles nervously paced while scratching his head for an answer.

The women finally broke the kiss and looked at each other. Tara looked at Willow with tired eyes "We did it Honey" she said softly.

"Yeah…we did," Willow echoed her lover. She led Tara to a nearby large fluffy chair and sat herself down, then carefully placed her exhausted blonde in her loving arms.

"I know, that must be it..." Giles finally said "It is said that thru a true kiss of love, the power of the beings is magnified beyond all evil, or something of that sort, I was never quite sure exactly was a 'kiss of love' exactly was... but I guess it was meant literally."

"Wow... hold on there, you’re trying to telling me that..." Xander's eye widened in understanding.

Xander looked over at the girls who appeared to have passed out from overexertion. His devilish grin fading into a loving smile for his friend.

"We should keep an eye on those two for awhile, we don't know what side effects that spell could have" Giles said uncomfortably trying not to look at the slumbering couple.

Buffy walked to the front door of the shop and opened it. She cautiously peered out onto the seemingly empty streets. Dust scattered over the streets eerily in the pale streetlights. Something frightening caught Buffy's eye, in large letters, painted on the street in what appeared to be blood, she read 'No one on earth can stop us... we shall return'

Buffy walked in and closed the door behind her, not wishing to admit what she had seen. She looked up at her friends with slight sadness in her eyes and volunteered, "I'll watch them, who can sleep after all that?”

That night not one of the gang dared to venture out, they sleep in turns close to the couple of young witches, who has so surprisingly managed to save the day.
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Re: A Kiss of Love - (Updated Sept. 13)

Postby Guppy » Wed Sep 13, 2006 8:07 pm

Ok, this time I am leaving feedback. Sorry about last time. I totally forgot coming online. LOL. Tonight I am sober.

Loved both of the previous 2 chapters!!! I loved Tara "falling off the bed" and the hotness that ensued after Buffy left again. This chapter was good too. That is quite the way to come out to your friends. I loved the little moment between them in the basement. So cute. Xander's reaction was typical Xander too. Hehe. Thanks for a couple great updates!
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Re: A Kiss of Love - (Updated Sept. 13)

Postby MochaVamp » Wed Sep 13, 2006 11:14 pm

I like the way you mix action, humor, and romance!
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Re: A Kiss of Love - (Updated Sept. 13)

Postby kimmy_s » Sat Sep 16, 2006 1:57 am

hey Ruggerchica! just to let you know i have read the update and its awesome as usual! havent got time to leave feedback just yet but hopefully i'll get time Sunday or Monday because i'm going to see Lily Allen tonight. i'll see you soon for some feedback.
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Re: A Kiss of Love - (Updated Sept. 13)

Postby bluebird » Sat Sep 16, 2006 4:21 am

okay the way you write Willow is just amazing!!

isn't she just the cutest :luv

"You put one scratch on this car and my parents will make you wish you were vanished!" Willow screamed at them.

Tara could not help but giggle a little, even in the face of danger Willow could always keep her sense of humor.

"What? You think I'm joking?"


that was too funny, and the interaction with Xander was good 'cause I really think that's how they would act.

And awww all the vamps went poof with 'a kiss of love' - nice to see where the title comes from. hmmm and by the way Xander looked at Will and Tara afterwards the whole 'she's my girlfriend' conversation will work out fine with the gang. :pride

Great update as always Ruggerchica - oh and tho I've never done the dorm thing I do have 4 brothers who always had the worst timing when I was younger :blush
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Re: A Kiss of Love - (Updated Sept. 13)

Postby taralicious » Sat Sep 16, 2006 1:43 pm

RC,
Through the fog of awakening from a deep slumber is perhaps the best way of receiving such cryptically foreboding news like that whihc Xander imparts to Willow.
That way the mind doesn't have the reasoning abilities to fully obsess about what this latest apocalypse portends.
It also gives Willow an opportunity to go and find Tara which is standard procedure number one on anyone's to-do list, but only Willow has the approval of Miss Maclay herself.
Ordinarily a brisk walk across campus to find Tara in her art sudio would be a thing of great antici...pation but now that the cobwebs have cleared out of her mind, the reasoning facilities have kicked in and she feels the palpable dread in the air in a 'there's no way this can end well" sort of way.
In inimitable Tara fashion, her first concern is Willow's lack of breath and only then, as they leave the building, does she become in tune with her surroundings and start to ask questions.
Willow, gallant and chivalrous, places her jacket because a cold goosepimply Tara is an unhappy Tara.

The girls walked hastily, their breaths mingling in the air above them on this queer, cold night.


As a short linguistic digression, isn't it interesting/sad that a fair number of the words whose meanings have changed over the years have all come to be associated with homosexuality and used as disparaging epithets?

As they raced towrds the Magic Shop, amdist vampirepalooza, did the vampires really think think they could bar their entry to the security inside in the face of Willow and Tara's union?
Yay, Take Charge Tara has entered the scene, realizing that she can lay the cosmic smackdown upon the vampire assemblage.

Willow reached out and hugged Tara. "I love you, and I'll totally kill you if something happens to you."


I love this line as it is the goofy illogic of the completely smitten.
As for the spell itself, it really does mirror the scene in the laundry room only the positions have reversed.
Tara isn't strong-willed enougfh on her own to complete the spell but as soon as Willow enters the circle and takes Tara's hands, their combined essence can despatch any form of pestilence.
That is so beautifully written and conveys so much of what they feel for each other and the intrinsic nature of selfless love in all its splendor.
As the rest of the gang stands around dazed and confused that Willow and Tara were able to accomplish together what the rest of them could never do collectively, Willow and Tara stay locked in their embrace, revelling in the euphoric and Elysian sensations of their union.
The rest of the gang stayed near to them as well, but not too near.
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Re: Chapter 12

Postby kimmy_s » Mon Sep 18, 2006 3:34 am

hey ruggerchica! i must have been very good in a previous life to get a goofy dance and you in overalls!! i live in the UK and am not at university yet so havent had a chance to find out how paperthin the walls are. by the sounds of it you have though!! ;-)
ok on to the update. we had a change of pace in this 1 which i loved. with the vampire attack (almost forgot about them!) it seemed to fasten the pace and get your heart racing!

Willow quickly hit the gas and started to swerve, trying to shake of the multitude of unwanted passengers off of her parents’ car. "You put one scratch on this car and my parents will make you wish you were vanished!" Willow screamed at them.

:lmao :lmao cracked me up!

Tara could not help but giggle a little, even in the face of danger Willow could always keep her sense of humor.

aww and that is why Tara is falling in love with her

"What? You think I'm joking?" Willow grinned at Tara while trying to run over all the demons on the road.

Willow still has time to grin at Tara...whilst trying to run vampires over in a car. ooo multitalented Willow are we gonna see more of her?? lol

Anya suddenly stood up in realization, "What do you mean, this is just the beginning? Are you trying to tell us that there will be more and they will come in and trash my perfectly organized store?"

:lmao (can u tell i love that smilie?) very typical of Anya!

Anya too looked out the window and quickly got to her feet. "Tara, give me a list." she commanded. "I'll let you pay me later."

again very typically Anya. i love how you've captured the essence of her in this story.

Willow, with her last oz. of strength leaned into Tara and whispered, "I love you" before bringing her lips less than and inch from Tara's. Tara looked at Willow and closed her eyes in concentration while leaning into the redhead's lips.

so you might think at this point every one of your readers are going "so thats what the title means!" well not me cos i'm a bit slow!! i was just thinking " they're gonna kiss and kil all the vampires! how romantic!" lol

"I know, that must be it..." Giles finally said "It is said that thru a true kiss of love, the power of the beings is magnified beyond all evil, or something of that sort, I was never quite sure exactly was a 'kiss of love' exactly was... but I guess it was meant literally."

ok so this bit was pretty enlightening for me! lol. i sounded like the woman off the ahh bisto adverts! (sorry to the americans who wont have a clue what im talking about!)

so overall (man i cant say that word and not get the mental image again!! lol) a very enjoyable update. sorry for late feedback again! keep it up and im loving regular updates too!
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